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* During the first meeting of Ken and Ren, Ken notices Morgana and asks why Ren has Morgana in his school bag at school. Ren ends up claiming that [[BlatantLies Morgana is his therapy cat]]. Ends up being a BrickJoke, with Ken pointing out Ren's excuse after the Phantom Thieves confront Ken for being in Kaneshiro's Palace.
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* During the first meeting of Ken and Ren, Ken notices Morgana and asks why Ren has Morgana in his school bag a cat with him at school. Ren ends up claiming that [[BlatantLies Morgana is his therapy cat]]. Ends up being a BrickJoke, with Ken pointing out Ren's excuse after the Phantom Thieves confront Ken for being in Kaneshiro's Palace.
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-->'''Ken's narration:''' It was… the cat. The cat was… talking. Why was it talking? How was that even possible? Was this a delayed symptom from hitting his head yesterday? Was he hallucinating? Okay, Teddie-san usually walked around as a plush bear, but he had a human form. Somewhat. He was pretty sure that a human would not be popping out of the cat.
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-->'''Ken's narration:''' It was… was...the cat. The cat was… was...talking. Why was it talking? How was that even possible? Was this a delayed symptom from hitting his head yesterday? Was he hallucinating? Okay, Teddie-san usually walked around as a plush bear, but he had a human form. Somewhat. He was pretty sure that a human would not be popping out of the cat.
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* After Kaneshiro's defeat, the Palace starts collapsing and Ken has to jump on car-Morgana to get out... leading to him returning to the real world in the same spot as the Phantom Thieves and them learning his identity. After they have a meeting the next day to clear things up a little... Ryuji then asks if Ken is CompensatingForSomething by wielding a spear, who Immediately shoots it down having heard similar jokes from Junpei.
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* After Kaneshiro's defeat, the Palace starts collapsing and Ken has to jump on car-Morgana to get out... leading to him returning to the real world in the same spot as the Phantom Thieves and them learning his identity. After they have a meeting the next day to clear things up a little... Ryuji then asks if Ken is CompensatingForSomething by wielding a spear, who Immediately something Ken immediately shoots it down having heard similar jokes from Junpei.down.
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-->'''Ryuji:''' Let's do… Tux Boy.\\
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-->'''Ryuji:''' Let's do… do...Tux Boy.\\
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'''Ken's narration:''' Kamen… that was like Kamen Rider… Wait, what was he thinking?! Yusuke was thinking about Tuxedo Mask and… that was just embarrassing to think about.\\
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'''Ken's narration:''' Kamen… Kamen...that was like Kamen Rider… Rider...Wait, what was he thinking?! Yusuke was thinking about Tuxedo Mask and… and...that was just embarrassing to think about.\\
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-->'''Ren:''' Uh… It was Morgana's idea?\\
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-->'''Ren:''' Uh… Uh...It was Morgana's idea?\\
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** In a chapter after, Sae and Shinjiro meet and she proceeds to question him on Ken. Shinjiro just brushes her off, just walking away at one point.
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** In a chapter after, Sae and Shinjiro meet and she proceeds to question him on Ken. Shinjiro just brushes her off, just even walking away at one point.
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'''Makoto:''' …What? Wait, Ann, we're not… this is just a misunderstanding!\\
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'''Ann's narration:''' Did Makoto know how lucky she was…?\\
'''Ken:''' This… is why I told you to ask Ann out already. Do you need any more proof now?!\\
'''Ken:''' This… is why I told you to ask Ann out already. Do you need any more proof now?!\\
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'''Ann's narration:''' Did Makoto know how lucky she was…?\\
was...?\\
'''Ken:'''This… This...is why I told you to ask Ann out already. Do you need any more proof now?!\\
'''Ken:'''
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* Ken calls Shinjiro and Fuuka for Shinjiro's birthday. He carefully alludes to his birthday gift, but when Fuuka questions asks what the gift was, Shinjiro panics and claims it was a Korean cookbook. Fuuka buys the lie, but then blithely tells Shinjiro that they should pick a recipe and cook something.
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* Ken calls Shinjiro and Fuuka for Shinjiro's birthday. He carefully alludes to his birthday gift, but when Fuuka questions asks what the gift was, Shinjiro panics and claims it was a Korean cookbook. Fuuka buys the lie, but then blithely tells Shinjiro that they should pick a recipe and cook something.
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-->'''Sugimura:''' You're… you're one of Kirijo's dogs.\\
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-->'''Sugimura:''' You're… You're...you're one of Kirijo's dogs.\\
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** Additionally, Yusuke being his usual self, accuses Sugimura of using his family name to {{compensat|ingForSomething}}e, oblivious to the underlying insults.
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** Additionally, Yusuke Yusuke, being his usual self, accuses Sugimura of using his family name to {{compensat|ingForSomething}}e, oblivious to the underlying insults.
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-->'''[Junpei]:''' So Ken's a dork running around in a tux and cape or is a furry?
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-->'''[Junpei]:''' So Ken's either a dork running around in a tux and cape or is a furry?
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'''Makoto:''' …What? Wait, Anne, we're not… this is just a misunderstanding!\\
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'''Makoto:''' …What? Wait, Anne, Ann, we're not… this is just a misunderstanding!\\
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'''Ken:''' This… is why I told you to ask Anne out already. Do you need any more proof now?!\\
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'''Ken:''' This… is why I told you to ask Anne Ann out already. Do you need any more proof now?!\\
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* A RunningGag in both the main story and the spin-off is Kaito and Miyuki Arisato [[KickTheSonOfABitch constantly grilling Akechi about how he constantly talks about how great of a detective he is, but never actually seems to solve anything.]]
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* A RunningGag in both the main story and the spin-off is Kaito and Miyuki Arisato [[KickTheSonOfABitch [[KarmicButtMonkey constantly grilling Akechi about how he constantly talks about how great of a detective he is, but never actually seems to solve anything.]]
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* Ken hears Ryuji's nickname for Ren, much to his surprise. Ren then teases Ken that the nickname happens to work for him as well. Ken very firmly rejects the idea.
* The discussion of Ken's codename. Ryuji proceeds to stare at Ken, before declaring that Ken looks like Tuxedo Mask, much to his embarrassment. Ann declares his look to be princely, which embarrasses him even more. But there's also the names that the Phantom Thieves throw out before they settle on Ace.
-->'''Ryuji:''' Let's do… Tux Boy.\\
'''Ken:''' Uh, ''no''. Not in a billion years and not even if you paid me ten million yen.\\
'''Yusuke:''' Kamen? Your costume does inspire it.\\
'''Ken's narration:''' Kamen… that was like Kamen Rider… Wait, what was he thinking?! Yusuke was thinking about Tuxedo Mask and… that was just embarrassing to think about.\\
'''Ken:''' No.\\
'''Morgana:''' Jeez, you're a picky one.\\
'''Ken:''' I'm not going to be called something ridiculous.
* Yusuke asks if Ren has an idea for Ken's codename, remarking that Ren suggested both Fox and Queen. Ann just grumbles that they weren't there for picking out her name, and Ren reveals that he suggested Sexy Cat for Ann. Ken gets even more concerned at learning this.
* Ken asks Ren why the Phantom Thieves operate in the day. Ren is confused, and Ken asks him what other phantom thieves do. Ren starts talking about how they leave a calling card, steal something of value... And then Ken asks when exactly they strike. Ren then sheepishly points the blame at Morgana.
-->'''Ren:''' Uh… It was Morgana's idea?\\
'''Morgana:''' HEY! You can really ruin your health by staying up too late! Don't tell me that you stay up late to study or something!\\
'''Ken:''' Okay, I won't tell you then.
* The discussion of Ken's codename. Ryuji proceeds to stare at Ken, before declaring that Ken looks like Tuxedo Mask, much to his embarrassment. Ann declares his look to be princely, which embarrasses him even more. But there's also the names that the Phantom Thieves throw out before they settle on Ace.
-->'''Ryuji:''' Let's do… Tux Boy.\\
'''Ken:''' Uh, ''no''. Not in a billion years and not even if you paid me ten million yen.\\
'''Yusuke:''' Kamen? Your costume does inspire it.\\
'''Ken's narration:''' Kamen… that was like Kamen Rider… Wait, what was he thinking?! Yusuke was thinking about Tuxedo Mask and… that was just embarrassing to think about.\\
'''Ken:''' No.\\
'''Morgana:''' Jeez, you're a picky one.\\
'''Ken:''' I'm not going to be called something ridiculous.
* Yusuke asks if Ren has an idea for Ken's codename, remarking that Ren suggested both Fox and Queen. Ann just grumbles that they weren't there for picking out her name, and Ren reveals that he suggested Sexy Cat for Ann. Ken gets even more concerned at learning this.
* Ken asks Ren why the Phantom Thieves operate in the day. Ren is confused, and Ken asks him what other phantom thieves do. Ren starts talking about how they leave a calling card, steal something of value... And then Ken asks when exactly they strike. Ren then sheepishly points the blame at Morgana.
-->'''Ren:''' Uh… It was Morgana's idea?\\
'''Morgana:''' HEY! You can really ruin your health by staying up too late! Don't tell me that you stay up late to study or something!\\
'''Ken:''' Okay, I won't tell you then.
* In Hawaii, Ken and Makoto catch Ren and Ann leaving Ren's hotel room together. Makoto automatically jumps to conclusions and demands an explanation. After Ann sheepishly explains, Ken points out that Ann could've gone to the front desk or one of the chaperones for help. But afterwards... Ken has a little chat with Ren. He states that he doesn't care if Ren and Ann sleep together, just that they use protection. Ken then hints that [[NoodleIncident he walked in on]] either Minato and Yukari or Akihiko and Minako being intimate back in SEES.
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* Ken hears Ryuji's nickname for Ren, much to his surprise. Ren then teases Ken that the nickname happens to work for him as well. Ken very firmly rejects the idea.
* The discussion of Ken's codename. Ryuji proceeds to stare at Ken, before declaring that Ken looks like Tuxedo Mask, much to his embarrassment. Ann declares his look to be princely, which embarrasses him even more. But there's also the names that the Phantom Thieves throw out before they settle on Ace.
-->'''Ryuji:''' Let's do… Tux Boy.\\
'''Ken:''' Uh, ''no''. Not in a billion years and not even if you paid me ten million yen.\\
'''Yusuke:''' Kamen? Your costume does inspire it.\\
'''Ken's narration:''' Kamen… that was like Kamen Rider… Wait, what was he thinking?! Yusuke was thinking about Tuxedo Mask and… that was just embarrassing to think about.\\
'''Ken:''' No.\\
'''Morgana:''' Jeez, you're a picky one.\\
'''Ken:''' I'm not going to be called something ridiculous.
* Yusuke asks if Ren has an idea for Ken's codename, remarking that Ren suggested both Fox and Queen. Ann just grumbles that they weren't there for picking out her name, and Ren reveals that he suggested Sexy Cat for Ann. Ken gets even more concerned at learning this.
* Ken asks Ren why the Phantom Thieves operate in the day. Ren is confused, and Ken asks him what other phantom thieves do. Ren starts talking about how they leave a calling card, steal something of value... And then Ken asks when exactly they strike. Ren then sheepishly points the blame at Morgana.
-->'''Ren:''' Uh… It was Morgana's idea?\\
'''Morgana:''' HEY! You can really ruin your health by staying up too late! Don't tell me that you stay up late to study or something!\\
'''Ken:''' Okay, I won't tell you then.
* In Hawaii, Ken and Makoto catch Ren and Ann leaving Ren's hotel room together. Makoto automatically jumps to conclusions and demands an explanation. After Ann sheepishly explains, Ken points out that Ann could've gone to the front desk or one of the chaperones for help. But afterwards... Ken has a little chat with Ren. He states that he doesn't care if Ren and Ann sleep together, just that they use protection. Ken then hints that [[NoodleIncident he walked in on]] either Minato and Yukari or Akihiko and Minako being intimate back in SEES.
* The discussion of Ken's codename. Ryuji proceeds to stare at Ken, before declaring that Ken looks like Tuxedo Mask, much to his embarrassment. Ann declares his look to be princely, which embarrasses him even more. But there's also the names that the Phantom Thieves throw out before they settle on Ace.
-->'''Ryuji:''' Let's do… Tux Boy.\\
'''Ken:''' Uh, ''no''. Not in a billion years and not even if you paid me ten million yen.\\
'''Yusuke:''' Kamen? Your costume does inspire it.\\
'''Ken's narration:''' Kamen… that was like Kamen Rider… Wait, what was he thinking?! Yusuke was thinking about Tuxedo Mask and… that was just embarrassing to think about.\\
'''Ken:''' No.\\
'''Morgana:''' Jeez, you're a picky one.\\
'''Ken:''' I'm not going to be called something ridiculous.
* Yusuke asks if Ren has an idea for Ken's codename, remarking that Ren suggested both Fox and Queen. Ann just grumbles that they weren't there for picking out her name, and Ren reveals that he suggested Sexy Cat for Ann. Ken gets even more concerned at learning this.
* Ken asks Ren why the Phantom Thieves operate in the day. Ren is confused, and Ken asks him what other phantom thieves do. Ren starts talking about how they leave a calling card, steal something of value... And then Ken asks when exactly they strike. Ren then sheepishly points the blame at Morgana.
-->'''Ren:''' Uh… It was Morgana's idea?\\
'''Morgana:''' HEY! You can really ruin your health by staying up too late! Don't tell me that you stay up late to study or something!\\
'''Ken:''' Okay, I won't tell you then.
* In Hawaii, Ken and Makoto catch Ren and Ann leaving Ren's hotel room together. Makoto automatically jumps to conclusions and demands an explanation. After Ann sheepishly explains, Ken points out that Ann could've gone to the front desk or one of the chaperones for help. But afterwards... Ken has a little chat with Ren. He states that he doesn't care if Ren and Ann sleep together, just that they use protection. Ken then hints that [[NoodleIncident he walked in on]] either Minato and Yukari or Akihiko and Minako being intimate back in SEES.
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* After Kaneshiro's defeat, the Palace starts collapsing and Ken has to jump on car-Morgana to get out... leading to him returning to the real world in the same spot as the Phantom Thieves and them learning his identity. After they have a meeting the next day to clear things up a little... Ryuji then asks if Ken is CompensatingForSomething with his WeaponOfChoice, who Immediately shoots it down having heard similar jokes from Junpei.
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* After Kaneshiro's defeat, the Palace starts collapsing and Ken has to jump on car-Morgana to get out... leading to him returning to the real world in the same spot as the Phantom Thieves and them learning his identity. After they have a meeting the next day to clear things up a little... Ryuji then asks if Ken is CompensatingForSomething with his WeaponOfChoice, by wielding a spear, who Immediately shoots it down having heard similar jokes from Junpei.
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* The Phantom Thieves' encounter with Sugimura's shadow form which happens to be [[GagPenis Mara]]. Ken has a YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe reaction while Futaba is laughing much to Makoto's disturbance. She asked how Futaba takes this so calmly. Futaba responds by saying she has seen worse on the internet.
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* The Phantom Thieves' encounter with Sugimura's shadow form which happens to be [[GagPenis Mara]]. Ken has a YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe reaction while Futaba is laughing much to Makoto's disturbance. She asked how Futaba takes this so calmly. Futaba responds by saying she has
-->'''Futaba:''' “Uh, Queen, I hate to break it to ya, but I've seen things wayyy worse on theinternet.internet. Once you dive into the depths of the internet, you don't come out clean.”
-->'''Futaba:''' “Uh, Queen, I hate to break it to ya, but I've seen things wayyy worse on the
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** Ken had to explain to the Phantom Thieves that Mara was a persona that [[NoodleIncident Minako used to use as a joke. And apparently, Mitsuru put her foot down and banned Minako (and presumably Minato) from using Mara again.]]
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** After the fight, Ken had to explain explains to the Phantom Thieves that Mara was a persona that [[NoodleIncident Minako used to use as a joke. And apparently, that eventually Mitsuru put her foot down and banned Minako (and presumably Minato) from using Mara again.]]
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* Makoto reveal that Minako sent her pcitures of Ken from when he was younger, much to his chagrin. Ryuji doesn't see the big deal, but when Ken reveals that Ryuji tried to stop his mother from showing him and Shinjiro a photo album when they came to visit, he insists that there's a difference between photos of you when you're eleven and baby pictures. Ren's comment about wanting to see both does NOT help.
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* Makoto reveal reveals that Minako sent her pcitures pictures of Ken from when he was younger, much to his chagrin. Ryuji doesn't see the big deal, but when Ken reveals that Ryuji tried to stop his mother from showing him and Shinjiro a photo album when they came to visit, he insists that there's a difference between photos of you when you're eleven and baby pictures. Ren's comment about wanting to see both does NOT help.
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* Makoto reveal that Minako sent her pcitures of Ken from when he was younger, much to his chagrin. Ryuji doesn't see the big deal, but when Ken reveals that Ryuji tried to stop his mother from showing him and Shinjiro a photo album when they came to visit, he insists that there's a difference between photos of you when you're eleven and baby pictures. Ren's comment about wanting to see both does NOT help.
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* After the Thieves the calling card to Shido, the SEES groupchat are discussing it, and the topic veers towards which Thief was Ken. They were able to pick out Ryuji and Ren easily enough, but have trouble telling which of the two remaining boys are Ken. Junpei's two cents causes the conversation to deteriorate.
-->'''[Junpei]:''' So Ken's a dork running around in a tux and cape or is a furry?
-->'''[Junpei]:''' So Ken's a dork running around in a tux and cape or is a furry?
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* Ren’s constant bemoaning about how Ken is going to kill him, and the gang’s constant suggestion to throw Makoto at him to distract/appease him
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* Futaba's fangirling over Yukari. After Yukari signs her DVD set, Ren describes Futaba holding it like it was the Holy Grail itself. It's made all the more funnier when one remembers who, or rather, what, the GreaterScopeVillain of ''Persona 5'' turns out to be.
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* Futaba's fangirling over Yukari. After Yukari signs her DVD set, Ren describes Futaba holding it like it was the Holy Grail itself. It's made all the more funnier when one remembers who, or rather, what, the GreaterScopeVillain of ''Persona 5'' turns out to be.
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* The Phantom Thieves' encounter with Sugimura's shadow form which happens to be Mara. Ken has a YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe reaction while Futaba is laughing much to Makoto's disturbance. She asked how Futaba takes this so calmly. Futaba responses by saying she has seen worse on the internet.
** Ken had to explain the Phantom Thieves that Mara was a persona that [[NoodleIncident Minako used to use as a joke. And apparently Mitsuru put her foot down and banned Minako (and presumably Minato) from using Mara again.]]
** Ken had to explain the Phantom Thieves that Mara was a persona that [[NoodleIncident Minako used to use as a joke. And apparently Mitsuru put her foot down and banned Minako (and presumably Minato) from using Mara again.]]
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* The Phantom Thieves' encounter with Sugimura's shadow form which happens to be Mara.[[GagPenis Mara]]. Ken has a YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe reaction while Futaba is laughing much to Makoto's disturbance. She asked how Futaba takes this so calmly. Futaba responses responds by saying she has seen worse on the internet.
** Ken had to explain to the Phantom Thieves that Mara was a persona that [[NoodleIncident Minako used to use as a joke. Andapparently apparently, Mitsuru put her foot down and banned Minako (and presumably Minato) from using Mara again.]]
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** Ken had to explain to the Phantom Thieves that Mara was a persona that [[NoodleIncident Minako used to use as a joke. And
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* Upon seeing Johanna for the first time, Ken notes that Mitsuru would be jealous. He also catches himself checking out Makoto, who is now in her skintight Metal Rider outfit.
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* Upon seeing Johanna [[CoolBike Johanna]] for the first time, Ken notes that Mitsuru would be jealous. He also catches himself checking out Makoto, who is now in her skintight Metal Rider outfit.
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-->'''Ken's narration:''' It was… the cat. The cat was… talking. Why was it talking? How was that even possible? Was this a delayed symptom from hitting his head yesterday? Was he hallucinating? Okay, Teddie-san usually walked around as a plush bear, but he had a human form. Somewhat. He was pretty sure that a human would not be popping out of the cat. Did this mean if they brought Koromaru to the Metaverse, Koromaru would start talking? Would he take on a cartoonish form? It was… weird, thinking about it.
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-->'''Ken's narration:''' It was… the cat. The cat was… talking. Why was it talking? How was that even possible? Was this a delayed symptom from hitting his head yesterday? Was he hallucinating? Okay, Teddie-san usually walked around as a plush bear, but he had a human form. Somewhat. He was pretty sure that a human would not be popping out of the cat. Did this mean if they brought Koromaru to cat.
* Upon seeing Johanna for theMetaverse, Koromaru first time, Ken notes that Mitsuru would start talking? Would he take on a cartoonish form? It was… weird, thinking about it.be jealous. He also catches himself checking out Makoto, who is now in her skintight Metal Rider outfit.
* Upon seeing Johanna for the
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** Ken had to explain the Phantom Thieves that Mara is a persona and [[NoodleIncident Minako used that persona as a joke. This result causes Mitsuru to ban Minako from using Mara again.]]
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** Ken had to explain the Phantom Thieves that Mara is was a persona and that [[NoodleIncident Minako used that persona to use as a joke. This result causes And apparently Mitsuru to ban put her foot down and banned Minako (and presumably Minato) from using Mara again.]]
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* The Phantom Thieves' encounter with Sugimura's shadow form which happens to be Mara. Ken has a YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe reaction while Futaba is laughing much to Makoto's disturbance. She asked how Futaba takes this so calmly. Futaba responses by saying she has seen worse on the internet.
** Ken had to explain the Phantom Thieves that Mara is a persona and [[NoodleIncident Minako used that persona as a joke. This result causes Mitsuru to ban Minako from using Mara again.]]
** Ken had to explain the Phantom Thieves that Mara is a persona and [[NoodleIncident Minako used that persona as a joke. This result causes Mitsuru to ban Minako from using Mara again.]]
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'''Ann:''' Don't lie to me, Makoto! I saw you two at the diner! I don't know why you're trying to deny it! You're so, so lucky, okay?! Ren will treat you like a queen. He's so kind and thoughtful and he'll probably come up with the best dates and-
-->'''Ann's narration:''' Did Makoto know how lucky she was…?\\
-->'''Ann's narration:''' Did Makoto know how lucky she was…?\\
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'''Ann:''' Don't lie to me, Makoto! I saw you two at the diner! I don't know why you're trying to deny it! You're so, so lucky, okay?! Ren will treat you like a queen. He's so kind and thoughtful and he'll probably come up with the best dates and-
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'''Ann's narration:''' Did Makoto know how lucky she was…?\\
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'''Ann's narration:''' Did Makoto know how lucky she was…?\\
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'''Morgana:''' You told Ren to do what?! Why would you—\\
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* During the first meeting of Ken and Ren, Ken notices Morgana and asks why Ren has Morgana in his schoolbag at school. Ren ends up claiming that [[BlatantLies Morgana is his therapy cat]]. Ends up being a BrickJoke, with Ken pointing out Ren's excuse after the Phantom Thieves confront Ken for being in Kaneshiro's Palace.
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* Futaba's fangirling over Yukari. After Yukari signs her DVD set, Ren describes Futaba holding it like it was the Holy Grail itself. [[spoiler: It's made all the more funnier when one remembers who, or rather, what, the GreaterScopeVillain of ''Persona 5'' turns out to be.]]
* Like in canon, Yusuke and Futaba argue over the lobsters he bought, only this Ken is thrust into the role of their father, much to his chagrin. [[NotSoAboveItAll Doesn't stop him from telling the bickering pair that they're both grounded, though]].
* Like in canon, Yusuke and Futaba argue over the lobsters he bought, only this Ken is thrust into the role of their father, much to his chagrin. [[NotSoAboveItAll Doesn't stop him from telling the bickering pair that they're both grounded, though]].
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* Futaba's fangirling over Yukari. After Yukari signs her DVD set, Ren describes Futaba holding it like it was the Holy Grail itself. [[spoiler: It's made all the more funnier when one remembers who, or rather, what, the GreaterScopeVillain of ''Persona 5'' turns out to be.]]
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* Like in canon, Yusuke and Futaba argue over the lobsters he bought, only this time Ken is thrust into the role of their father, much to his chagrin. [[NotSoAboveItAll Doesn't stop him from telling the bickering pair that they're both grounded, though]].
* Like in canon, Yusuke and Futaba argue over the lobsters he bought, only this time Ken is thrust into the role of their father, much to his chagrin. [[NotSoAboveItAll Doesn't stop him from telling the bickering pair that they're both grounded, though]].
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* After much griping about Ken teasing Shinjiro about his and Fuuka's PDA, [[spoiler: Shinjiro ends up walking in on Ken and Makoto's first kiss. After a moment of shock, he insists that Ken can't tease him and Fuuka anymore, and later asks Mitsuru to get her scientists to invent BrainBleach.]]
* [[spoiler: Futaba lets Ken, Makoto, and Ryuji listen to Sae interrogating Ren. Sae tries to get him to talk about Medjed but he keeps talking about Ann and how lucky he is to be dating her. Sae's annoyance quickly turns to embarrassment after Ren starts sharing intimate details.]]
* Chie on her way to rescue Ren [[spoiler: runs into Akechi. He comments negatively on the bags under her eyes, Chie naturally is not happy and tries her best to remain composed. Soon as Akechi leaves, Rise remarks basically that Akechi is lucky to not be on the receiving end of one of Chie's galactic punts.]]
* [[spoiler: Futaba lets Ken, Makoto, and Ryuji listen to Sae interrogating Ren. Sae tries to get him to talk about Medjed but he keeps talking about Ann and how lucky he is to be dating her. Sae's annoyance quickly turns to embarrassment after Ren starts sharing intimate details.]]
* Chie on her way to rescue Ren [[spoiler: runs into Akechi. He comments negatively on the bags under her eyes, Chie naturally is not happy and tries her best to remain composed. Soon as Akechi leaves, Rise remarks basically that Akechi is lucky to not be on the receiving end of one of Chie's galactic punts.]]
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* After much griping about Ken teasing Shinjiro about his and Fuuka's PDA, [[spoiler: Shinjiro ends up walking in on Ken and Makoto's first kiss. After a moment of shock, he insists that Ken can't tease him and Fuuka anymore, and later asks Mitsuru to get her scientists to invent BrainBleach.]]
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*[[spoiler: Futaba lets Ken, Makoto, and Ryuji listen to Sae interrogating Ren. Sae tries to get him to talk about Medjed but he keeps talking about Ann and how lucky he is to be dating her. Sae's annoyance quickly turns to embarrassment after Ren starts sharing intimate details.]]
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* Chie on her way to rescue Ren[[spoiler: runs into Akechi. He comments negatively on the bags under her eyes, Chie naturally is not happy and tries her best to remain composed. Soon as Akechi leaves, Rise remarks basically that Akechi is lucky to not be on the receiving end of one of Chie's galactic punts.]]
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* While the main story takes place in 2016, this fic throws in a shoutout to VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses. The cast is discussing why Ken's Persona is still Kala-Nemi over Nemesis (though Minako is understandably confused on why Ken's Persona is different.) However, it's portrayed as the twins' imaginations running wild instead of a blatant reference to the Fire Emblem game.
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* While the main story takes place in 2016, this fic throws in a shoutout to VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses. ''VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses''. The cast is discussing why Ken's Persona is still Kala-Nemi over Nemesis (though Minako is understandably confused on why Ken's Persona is different.) different). However, it's portrayed as the twins' imaginations running wild instead of a blatant reference to the Fire Emblem game.
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* Kaito outs Naoto by protesting that P4!Naoto can't be Naoto, because this Naoto “doesn’t have boobies” (due to her binding her chest. This understandably mortifies Naoto, and Ken ends up having to scold him for being so blunt.
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* Kaito outs Naoto by protesting that P4!Naoto can't be Naoto, because this Naoto “doesn’t have boobies” (due to her binding her chest. chest). This understandably mortifies Naoto, and Ken ends up having to scold him for being so blunt.blunt.
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* After Kaneshiro's defeat, the Palace starts collapsing and Ken has to jump on car-Morgana to get out... leading to him returning to the real world in the same spot as the Phantom Thieves and them learning his identity. After they have a meeting the next day to clear things up a little... Ryuji asks if Ken is CompensatingForSomething with his WeaponOfChoice, much to Ken's annoyance.
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* After Kaneshiro's defeat, the Palace starts collapsing and Ken has to jump on car-Morgana to get out... leading to him returning to the real world in the same spot as the Phantom Thieves and them learning his identity. After they have a meeting the next day to clear things up a little... Ryuji then asks if Ken is CompensatingForSomething with his WeaponOfChoice, much to Ken's annoyance.who Immediately shoots it down having heard similar jokes from Junpei.
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* Kaito outs Naoto by protesting that P4!Naoto can't be Naoto, because the Naoto he knows doesn't bind her chest. This understandably mortifies Naoto, and Ken ends up having to scold him for being so blunt.
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* Kaito outs Naoto by protesting that P4!Naoto can't be Naoto, because the this Naoto he knows doesn't bind “doesn’t have boobies” (due to her binding her chest. This understandably mortifies Naoto, and Ken ends up having to scold him for being so blunt.
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* After Kaneshiro's defeat, the Palace starts collapsing and Ken has to jump on car-Morgana to get out... leading to him returning to the real world in the same spot as the Phantom Thieves and them learning his identity. After they have a meeting the next day to clear things up a little... Ryuji asks if Ken is CompensatingForSomething, with his WeaponOfChoice, much to Ken's annoyance.
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* After Kaneshiro's defeat, the Palace starts collapsing and Ken has to jump on car-Morgana to get out... leading to him returning to the real world in the same spot as the Phantom Thieves and them learning his identity. After they have a meeting the next day to clear things up a little... Ryuji asks if Ken is CompensatingForSomething, CompensatingForSomething with his WeaponOfChoice, much to Ken's annoyance.
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* Ken ends up being spotted by the Phantom Thieves when he was trailing them in Kaneshiro's Palace. Ryuji becomes furious and [[LeeroyJenkins starts chasing him]]. Naturally, Ken just runs away. Poor Morgana and Ann trying to play damage control.
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* Ken ends up being spotted by the Phantom Thieves when he was trailing them in Kaneshiro's Palace. Ryuji becomes furious and [[LeeroyJenkins starts chasing him]]. Naturally, Ken just runs away. Poor Morgana and Ann are stuck trying to play damage control.