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* Belos collects Palismen to keep him alive and from turning into a monster, while All For One collects Quirks to increase the length of his life and power.
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* Emperor Belos collects Palismen to keep him alive and from turning into a monster, while All For One collects Quirks to increase the length of his life and power.
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* Luz loves the Boiling Isles, moreso than she loved Earth, and forges strong relationships with some of the witches and demons living there, even coming to regard Eda and King as her surrogate family. Belos, by contrast, [[spoiler:hates the Boiling Isles and its residents so much that he killed his own brother for falling in love with a witch, and his goal is to facilitate the genocide of all witches]].
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* Luz loves the Boiling Isles, moreso than she loved Earth, and forges strong relationships with some of the witches and demons living there, even coming to regard Eda and King as her surrogate family. Emperor Belos, by contrast, [[spoiler:hates the Boiling Isles and its residents so much that he killed his own brother for falling in love with a witch, and his goal is to facilitate the genocide of all witches]].
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* Belos is a PoliticallyIncorrectVillain towards the denizens of the Demon Realm, Tyler has expanded is bigotry towards the [[HeteronormativeCrusader lgbt community]] and [[AngryWhiteMan non-white people]] having equal rights. [[spoiler:This is especially ironic as Tyler has been born into era much more progressive than Philip's.]]
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* Emperor Belos is a PoliticallyIncorrectVillain towards the denizens of the Demon Realm, Tyler has expanded is bigotry towards the [[HeteronormativeCrusader lgbt community]] and [[AngryWhiteMan non-white people]] having equal rights. [[spoiler:This is especially ironic as Tyler has been born into era much more progressive than Philip's.]]
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* Luz and Riley are both cousins with close-range Quirks.
* Luz has killed in the name of self-defense and avenging her loved ones. Riley as an assassin as killed in the name of money.
* Luz has killed in the name of self-defense and avenging her loved ones. Riley as an assassin as killed in the name of money.
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* Luz and Riley are both cousins ClashingCousins with close-range Quirks.
* Luz has killed in the name of self-defense and avenging her loved ones. Riley as an assassinas who killed in the name of money.
* Luz has killed in the name of self-defense and avenging her loved ones. Riley as an assassin
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[[folder:To Belos]]
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[[folder:To Emperor Belos]]
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* Both changed their names to escape their pasts when they ended up in the Boiling Isles.
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* Both changed their names to escape their dark pasts when they ended up in the Boiling Isles.
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* Both have had a ThouShallNotKill policy, something they couldn't uphold.
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* Both have had a ThouShallNotKill policy, something they couldn't uphold. They also have a good relationship with their mother.
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[[folder:To Belos]]
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[[folder:To Emperor Belos]]
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In ''Fanfic/AllForLuz'', there are plenty of characters that are foils to each other else in some shape or form.
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In ''Fanfic/AllForLuz'', there are plenty of characters that are foils [[{{Foil}} foils]] to each other else in some shape or form.
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* Luz has killed in the name of self-defense and avenging her loved ones. Riley as an assassin as killed in the name of money.
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* Julia is a fellow superhuman that meets Luz in the Human Realm, while Willow is a Witch that meets her in the Demon Realm.
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* Julia is a fellow superhuman that meets Luz in the Human Realm, Realm on good terms, while Willow is a Witch that meets her in the Demon Realm.Realm in less than ideal circumstances.
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* Belos misses the Human Realm. Luz, on the other hand, has no desire to go back due to her HeroWithBadPublicity status.
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* Emperor Belos misses the Human Realm. Luz, on the other hand, has no desire to go back due to her HeroWithBadPublicity status.
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* Both ended up in the Demon Realm with a purpose. Phillip went there to "rescue" Caleb, while Luz did so to start a new life for herself.
* Belos misses the Human Realm. Luz, on the other hand, has no desire to go back due to her HeroWithBadPublicity status.
* Luz loves the Boiling Isles, moreso than she loved Earth, and forges strong relationships with some of the witches and demons living there, even coming to regard Eda and King as her surrogate family. Belos, by contrast, [[spoiler:hates the Boiling Isles and its residents so much that he killed his own brother for falling in love with a witch, and his goal is to facilitate the genocide of all witches]].
* Belos misses the Human Realm. Luz, on the other hand, has no desire to go back due to her HeroWithBadPublicity status.
* Luz loves the Boiling Isles, moreso than she loved Earth, and forges strong relationships with some of the witches and demons living there, even coming to regard Eda and King as her surrogate family. Belos, by contrast, [[spoiler:hates the Boiling Isles and its residents so much that he killed his own brother for falling in love with a witch, and his goal is to facilitate the genocide of all witches]].
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* Amity has a ThouShallNotKill policy, something Luz has long since abandoned.
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* Amity has Both have had a ThouShallNotKill policy, something Luz has long since abandoned.they couldn't uphold.
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* Luz Noceda and Kennedy Jennkins are 2 superhuman teenagers who were among the kidnapped children heading to Reality Check Summer Camp.
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* Luz Noceda and Kennedy Jennkins are 2 two superhuman teenagers who were among the kidnapped children heading to Reality Check Summer Camp.
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* Moreover, they have awful relationships with their brothers due to the fact that they had, in their eyes, betrayed them (Belos' brother fell in love with a witch and Yoichi had joined the resistance against him.
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* Moreover, they have awful relationships with their brothers due to the fact that they had, in their eyes, betrayed them (Belos' brother fell in love with a witch and Yoichi had joined the resistance fighting against him.
