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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Unlike in canon, Marcy's torment begins much earlier, with King Andrias torturing her for months. If Marcy hadn't slipped away due to a careless mistake that left her cage unlocked, she would have continued to suffer at the king's hands.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: AdaptationalAngstUpgrade:
** Unlike in canon, Marcy's torment begins much earlier, with King Andrias torturing her for months. If Marcy hadn't slipped away due to a careless mistake that left her cage unlocked, she would have continued to suffer at the king's hands.
** Unlike in canon, Marcy's torment begins much earlier, with King Andrias torturing her for months. If Marcy hadn't slipped away due to a careless mistake that left her cage unlocked, she would have continued to suffer at the king's hands.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: While already a villain in the series proper, King Andrias was still reluctant to go through with the Core's order to kill Marcy, a child, immediately. In this fic, He has no hesitations in subjecting Marcy to cruel torture shortly after meeting her.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: AdaptationalVillainy:
** While already a villain in the series proper, King Andrias was still reluctant to go through with the Core's order to kill Marcy, a child, immediately. In this fic, He has no hesitations in subjecting Marcy to cruel torture shortly after meeting her.
** While already a villain in the series proper, King Andrias was still reluctant to go through with the Core's order to kill Marcy, a child, immediately. In this fic, He has no hesitations in subjecting Marcy to cruel torture shortly after meeting her.
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* AgonyOfTheFeet: Marcy receives a nasty ankle fracture after falling off a giant bird while on the run from King Andrias. This prevents her from straying far from where she landed. It also keeps her from running when Maddie approaches, forcing her to go on the defensive. Fortunately, Maddie just wanted to help her.
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* AgonyOfTheFeet: AgonyOfTheFeet:
** Marcy receives a nasty ankle fracture after falling off a giant bird while on the run from King Andrias. This prevents her from straying far from where she landed. It also keeps her from running when Maddie approaches, forcing her to go on the defensive. Fortunately, Maddie just wanted to help her.
** Marcy receives a nasty ankle fracture after falling off a giant bird while on the run from King Andrias. This prevents her from straying far from where she landed. It also keeps her from running when Maddie approaches, forcing her to go on the defensive. Fortunately, Maddie just wanted to help her.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Because of Sprig's efforts to take Anne's feelings into consideration even when he thought she was just a wild animal, Anne becomes protective of him to the point of taking on a killer wasp and later her own friend Sasha to keep him safe.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: BecauseYouWereNiceToMe:
** Because of Sprig's efforts to take Anne's feelings into consideration even when he thought she was just a wild animal, Anne becomes protective of him to the point of taking on a killer wasp and later her own friend Sasha to keep him safe.
** Because of Sprig's efforts to take Anne's feelings into consideration even when he thought she was just a wild animal, Anne becomes protective of him to the point of taking on a killer wasp and later her own friend Sasha to keep him safe.
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* BehavioralConditioning: Anne has spent so long being treated like a pet that even after the Plantars realize she's a person, she still keeps her pet-like behavior, a fact that adds to the Plantars' guilt.
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* BehavioralConditioning: BehavioralConditioning:
** Anne has spent so long being treated like a pet that even after the Plantars realize she's a person, she still keeps her pet-like behavior, a fact that adds to the Plantars' guilt.
** Anne has spent so long being treated like a pet that even after the Plantars realize she's a person, she still keeps her pet-like behavior, a fact that adds to the Plantars' guilt.
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* BigBad: King Andrias.
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* ClothingConcealedInjury: Marcy hides her many cuts, deep bruises, and unhealed burns underneath her outfit. When she removes it to show Sasha what happened, the blonde is rightfully horrified.
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* ClothingConcealedInjury: ClothingConcealedInjury:
** Marcy hides her many cuts, deep bruises, and unhealed burns underneath her outfit. When she removes it to show Sasha what happened, the blonde is rightfully horrified.
** Marcy hides her many cuts, deep bruises, and unhealed burns underneath her outfit. When she removes it to show Sasha what happened, the blonde is rightfully horrified.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: King Andrias subjects Marcy to electric shocks, burn wounds, and cruel experimentations in an attempt to force her to unleash her Calamity Powers. The fact that his efforts haven't worked isn't enough to deter him.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: ColdBloodedTorture:
** King Andrias subjects Marcy to electric shocks, burn wounds, and cruel experimentations in an attempt to force her to unleash her Calamity Powers. The fact that his efforts haven't worked isn't enough to deter him.
** King Andrias subjects Marcy to electric shocks, burn wounds, and cruel experimentations in an attempt to force her to unleash her Calamity Powers. The fact that his efforts haven't worked isn't enough to deter him.
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* ControlFreak: Sasha is unhealthfully determined to gain control over Anne. She even rants about how Anne used to do everything she said.
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* ControlFreak: ControlFreak:
** Sasha is unhealthfully determined to gain control over Anne. She even rants about how Anne used to do everything she said.
** Sasha is unhealthfully determined to gain control over Anne. She even rants about how Anne used to do everything she said.
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* CrushBlush: Happens to Marcy when Anne cuddles with her on the couch.
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* CrushBlush: CrushBlush:
** Happens to Marcy when Anne cuddles with her on the couch.
** Happens to Marcy when Anne cuddles with her on the couch.
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* CuddleBug: Anne. Especially with Sprig, Marcy, and Sasha.
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* DeerInTheHeadlights: Due to her trauma involving King Andrias constantly burning her, the sight of any fire makes Marcy freeze in terror. Multiple unscrupulous characters use this to assert control over Marcy.
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* DeerInTheHeadlights: DeerInTheHeadlights:
** Due to her trauma involving King Andrias constantly burning her, the sight of any fire makes Marcy freeze in terror. Multiple unscrupulous characters use this to assert control over Marcy.
** Due to her trauma involving King Andrias constantly burning her, the sight of any fire makes Marcy freeze in terror. Multiple unscrupulous characters use this to assert control over Marcy.
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** The end of chapter 25 has Sasha finally begin to trust Sprig.
** Unfortunately the end of chapter 28 strongly implies Sasha lost whatever trust she had with the Plantars.
** Chapter 33 confirms that Sasha no longer regards the Plantars as a threat.
** Chapter 34 goes further, with Sasha not only confessing her original plans to kill the Plantars to Ivy, but also admitting she feels no pride in what she almost did.
** In chapter 43, Sasha gives Sprig a grateful hug after he frees her of her binds. Later she lets him ride her shoulders.
* {{Determinator}}: Despite her fears of being captured herself, Sasha is relentless in her pursuit to rescue Anne.
** Unfortunately the end of chapter 28 strongly implies Sasha lost whatever trust she had with the Plantars.
** Chapter 33 confirms that Sasha no longer regards the Plantars as a threat.
** Chapter 34 goes further, with Sasha not only confessing her original plans to kill the Plantars to Ivy, but also admitting she feels no pride in what she almost did.
** In chapter 43, Sasha gives Sprig a grateful hug after he frees her of her binds. Later she lets him ride her shoulders.
* {{Determinator}}: Despite her fears of being captured herself, Sasha is relentless in her pursuit to rescue Anne.
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* {{Determinator}}:
**The end of chapter 25 has Sasha finally begin to trust Sprig.
** Unfortunately the end of chapter 28 strongly implies Sasha lost whatever trust she had with the Plantars.
** Chapter 33 confirms that Sasha no longer regards the Plantars as a threat.
** Chapter 34 goes further, with Sasha not only confessing her original plans to kill the Plantars to Ivy, but also admitting she feels no pride in what she almost did.
** In chapter 43, Sasha gives Sprig a grateful hug after he frees her of her binds. Later she lets him ride her shoulders.
* {{Determinator}}:Despite her fears of being captured herself, Sasha is relentless in her pursuit to rescue Anne.
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** Unfortunately the end of chapter 28 strongly implies Sasha lost whatever trust she had with the Plantars.
** Chapter 33 confirms that Sasha no longer regards the Plantars as a threat.
** Chapter 34 goes further, with Sasha not only confessing her original plans to kill the Plantars to Ivy, but also admitting she feels no pride in what she almost did.
** In chapter 43, Sasha gives Sprig a grateful hug after he frees her of her binds. Later she lets him ride her shoulders.
* {{Determinator}}:
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* ElectricTorture: One of the ways Andrias tortured Marcy.
* EveryoneHasStandards: General Yunan hunts down Marcy, intending on returning her to Andrias in exchange for the reward money. But after finding out that the king has been abusing the child, Yunan can't find it in herself to go through with it.
* EveryoneHasStandards: General Yunan hunts down Marcy, intending on returning her to Andrias in exchange for the reward money. But after finding out that the king has been abusing the child, Yunan can't find it in herself to go through with it.
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** General Yunan hunts down Marcy, intending on returning her to Andrias in exchange for the reward money. But after finding out that the king has been abusing the child, Yunan can't find it in herself to go through with it.
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* FatalFlaw: Anne-Wrath. Whenever Sprig's life is in danger, Anne goes ballistic and attacks with killing intent. During this state, her desire to protect Sprig blocks out her rational thoughts. During one of her outbursts, she nearly kills Sasha.
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* FatalFlaw: FatalFlaw:
** Anne-Wrath. Whenever Sprig's life is in danger, Anne goes ballistic and attacks with killing intent. During this state, her desire to protect Sprig blocks out her rational thoughts. During one of her outbursts, she nearly kills Sasha.
** Anne-Wrath. Whenever Sprig's life is in danger, Anne goes ballistic and attacks with killing intent. During this state, her desire to protect Sprig blocks out her rational thoughts. During one of her outbursts, she nearly kills Sasha.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: The pain caused by killer wasp venom is so severe that its victims will lash out at their own bodies just to escape the agony.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: FateWorseThanDeath:
** The pain caused by killer wasp venom is so severe that its victims will lash out at their own bodies just to escape the agony.
** The pain caused by killer wasp venom is so severe that its victims will lash out at their own bodies just to escape the agony.
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* ForWantOfANail: Wally's panicked cries results in hunters going after Anne and nearly killing her, causing her to lose her voice.
** King Andrias reveals his true colors to Marcy much earlier, resulting in a broken Marcy wanting to go home immediately instead of going on adventures.
* FromBadToWorse: As if Marcy being mentally traumatized at the Bizarre Bazaar and Sasha being ripped open and left nearly dead at the jaws of a ferret weren't bad enough, Sprig receives the horrifying news from Maddie that the whole town knows Anne is alive and is out for her head. And with Yunan being pressured by the locals to set up traps, Sprig decides that hiding all three girls in the basement is the safest course of action.
** King Andrias reveals his true colors to Marcy much earlier, resulting in a broken Marcy wanting to go home immediately instead of going on adventures.
* FromBadToWorse: As if Marcy being mentally traumatized at the Bizarre Bazaar and Sasha being ripped open and left nearly dead at the jaws of a ferret weren't bad enough, Sprig receives the horrifying news from Maddie that the whole town knows Anne is alive and is out for her head. And with Yunan being pressured by the locals to set up traps, Sprig decides that hiding all three girls in the basement is the safest course of action.
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* ForWantOfANail: Wally's panicked cries results in hunters going after Anne and nearly killing her, causing her to lose her voice.
FromBadToWorse:
**King Andrias reveals his true colors to Marcy much earlier, resulting in a broken Marcy wanting to go home immediately instead of going on adventures.
* FromBadToWorse:As if Marcy being mentally traumatized at the Bizarre Bazaar and Sasha being ripped open and left nearly dead at the jaws of a ferret weren't bad enough, Sprig receives the horrifying news from Maddie that the whole town knows Anne is alive and is out for her head. And with Yunan being pressured by the locals to set up traps, Sprig decides that hiding all three girls in the basement is the safest course of action.
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* FromBadToWorse:
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* FoundFamily: Anne has come to see the Plantars as an extension of her family, especially Sprig. During her short period of being able to talk, Anne pours out her heart to Sprig about how much she cares about him and how she appreciates all he's done for her.
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* FoundFamily: FoundFamily:
** Anne has come to see the Plantars as an extension of her family, especially Sprig. During her short period of being able to talk, Anne pours out her heart to Sprig about how much she cares about him and how she appreciates all he's done for her.
** Anne has come to see the Plantars as an extension of her family, especially Sprig. During her short period of being able to talk, Anne pours out her heart to Sprig about how much she cares about him and how she appreciates all he's done for her.
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* GoodSamaritan: Ivy saves Anne and Marcy from the hunters. She later tracks them down and helps get them out of the net and removes Anne's muzzle. When she finds out Sprig is her owner, she immediately rushes to inform him of what happened.
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* GoodSamaritan: GoodSamaritan:
** Ivy saves Anne and Marcy from the hunters. She later tracks them down and helps get them out of the net and removes Anne's muzzle. When she finds out Sprig is her owner, she immediately rushes to inform him of what happened.
** Ivy saves Anne and Marcy from the hunters. She later tracks them down and helps get them out of the net and removes Anne's muzzle. When she finds out Sprig is her owner, she immediately rushes to inform him of what happened.
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* GoodScarsEvilScars: Thanks to the hunters, Anne bears a scar across her throat.
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* GoodScarsEvilScars: GoodScarsEvilScars:
** Thanks to the hunters, Anne bears a scar across her throat.
** Thanks to the hunters, Anne bears a scar across her throat.
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* HeroicSacrifice: Sasha stops the ferret from killing Anne by shoving a stick in its mouth and repeatedly hitting it with another stick. While this saves Anne's life, it unfortunately drew the ferret's attention onto Sasha and the poor girl gets her side ripped clean open. Even Hop Pop isn't sure if she'll survive the injury.
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* HeroicSacrifice: HeroicSacrifice:
** Sasha stops the ferret from killing Anne by shoving a stick in its mouth and repeatedly hitting it with another stick. While this saves Anne's life, it unfortunately drew the ferret's attention onto Sasha and the poor girl gets her side ripped clean open. Even Hop Pop isn't sure if she'll survive the injury.
** Sasha stops the ferret from killing Anne by shoving a stick in its mouth and repeatedly hitting it with another stick. While this saves Anne's life, it unfortunately drew the ferret's attention onto Sasha and the poor girl gets her side ripped clean open. Even Hop Pop isn't sure if she'll survive the injury.
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* IChooseToStay: In chapter 19, Anne puts her collar back on and destroys the key, making it very clear to Sasha that Anne would rather remain a pet than join her.
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* IChooseToStay: IChooseToStay:
** In chapter 19, Anne puts her collar back on and destroys the key, making it very clear to Sasha that Anne would rather remain a pet than join her.
** In chapter 19, Anne puts her collar back on and destroys the key, making it very clear to Sasha that Anne would rather remain a pet than join her.
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* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: Yunan is so smitten by how adorable Marcy is that she ends up wanting to keep her.
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* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: ImTakingHerHomeWithMe:
** Yunan is so smitten by how adorable Marcy is that she ends up wanting to keep her.
** Yunan is so smitten by how adorable Marcy is that she ends up wanting to keep her.
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* IntoxicationEnsues: Hop Pop gives Anne some mushroom tea to help her stay awake to guard his crops. But with Anne being human and not frog, the tea ends up messing with her system and by the next day, she's so loopy she mistakes Hop Pop for a tea kettle and attempts to eat an "ice cream cone" Sprig. Hop Pop is forced to tranquilize her until the tea leaves her system.
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* IntoxicationEnsues: IntoxicationEnsues:
** Hop Pop gives Anne some mushroom tea to help her stay awake to guard his crops. But with Anne being human and not frog, the tea ends up messing with her system and by the next day, she's so loopy she mistakes Hop Pop for a tea kettle and attempts to eat an "ice cream cone" Sprig. Hop Pop is forced to tranquilize her until the tea leaves her system.
** Hop Pop gives Anne some mushroom tea to help her stay awake to guard his crops. But with Anne being human and not frog, the tea ends up messing with her system and by the next day, she's so loopy she mistakes Hop Pop for a tea kettle and attempts to eat an "ice cream cone" Sprig. Hop Pop is forced to tranquilize her until the tea leaves her system.
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* JerkassWithAHeartOfGold: Sasha is very abrasive and is hostile towards the Plantars. She made an attempt on Sprig's life more than once, including throwing him from a high ledge despite his pleading. But she still genuinely loves Anne and Marcy and is fiercely protective of them, and her trying to kill Sprig mainly came about because she was convinced he was abusing Anne.
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* JerkassWithAHeartOfGold: JerkassWithAHeartOfGold:
** Sasha is very abrasive and is hostile towards the Plantars. She made an attempt on Sprig's life more than once, including throwing him from a high ledge despite his pleading. But she still genuinely loves Anne and Marcy and is fiercely protective of them, and her trying to kill Sprig mainly came about because she was convinced he was abusing Anne.
** Sasha is very abrasive and is hostile towards the Plantars. She made an attempt on Sprig's life more than once, including throwing him from a high ledge despite his pleading. But she still genuinely loves Anne and Marcy and is fiercely protective of them, and her trying to kill Sprig mainly came about because she was convinced he was abusing Anne.
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* ManipulativeBastard: King Andrias charmed Marcy with various aspects of Newtopia in order to lower her guard so he could trap her. Other amphibians have also attempted to do the same to get to Marcy.
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* ManipulativeBastard: ManipulativeBastard:
** King Andrias charmed Marcy with various aspects of Newtopia in order to lower her guard so he could trap her. Other amphibians have also attempted to do the same to get to Marcy.
** King Andrias charmed Marcy with various aspects of Newtopia in order to lower her guard so he could trap her. Other amphibians have also attempted to do the same to get to Marcy.
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* MercyKill: Prior to the start of the story, Sprig attempted this to put Anne out of her misery. He can't bring himself to do it.
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* MercyKill: MercyKill:
** Prior to the start of the story, Sprig attempted this to put Anne out of her misery. He can't bring himself to do it.
** Prior to the start of the story, Sprig attempted this to put Anne out of her misery. He can't bring himself to do it.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Sprig is horrified when it finally dawns on him that he was treating Anne, a person like him, as a pet. It's so bad that when Anne still shows him kindness, Sprig is convinced that she's just pretending to be nice to him.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: MyGodWhatHaveIDone:
** Sprig is horrified when it finally dawns on him that he was treating Anne, a person like him, as a pet. It's so bad that when Anne still shows him kindness, Sprig is convinced that she's just pretending to be nice to him.
** Sprig is horrified when it finally dawns on him that he was treating Anne, a person like him, as a pet. It's so bad that when Anne still shows him kindness, Sprig is convinced that she's just pretending to be nice to him.
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: Given that humans are not native to Amphibia, Anne and Marcy's innocent cuddling winds up looking like much more to Hop Pop, who forces them to separate out of fear of them producing a litter of human babies.
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: NotWhatItLooksLike:
** Given that humans are not native to Amphibia, Anne and Marcy's innocent cuddling winds up looking like much more to Hop Pop, who forces them to separate out of fear of them producing a litter of human babies.
** Given that humans are not native to Amphibia, Anne and Marcy's innocent cuddling winds up looking like much more to Hop Pop, who forces them to separate out of fear of them producing a litter of human babies.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: The normally loud and confident Sasha devolves into a sobbing whimpering mess when Sprig tries to tame her and she pleads with him to let her go.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: OOCIsSeriousBusiness:
** The normally loud and confident Sasha devolves into a sobbing whimpering mess when Sprig tries to tame her and she pleads with him to let her go.
** The normally loud and confident Sasha devolves into a sobbing whimpering mess when Sprig tries to tame her and she pleads with him to let her go.
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* PapaWolf: Seeing Sasha in such a bad state after her run-in with Sprig leaves Grime feeling vengeful.
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* PapaWolf: PapaWolf:
** Seeing Sasha in such a bad state after her run-in with Sprig leaves Grime feeling vengeful.
** Seeing Sasha in such a bad state after her run-in with Sprig leaves Grime feeling vengeful.
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* PlaguedByNightmares: Chapter 26 reveals that Marcy has been suffering from night terrors about her ordeal back at the Bizarre Bazaar. It's led to her suffering from a lack of sleep. Her sleep-deprived state is so obvious that not even being hidden under a hood disguises the fact.
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* PlaguedByNightmares: PlaguedByNightmares:
** Chapter 26 reveals that Marcy has been suffering from night terrors about her ordeal back at the Bizarre Bazaar. It's led to her suffering from a lack of sleep. Her sleep-deprived state is so obvious that not even being hidden under a hood disguises the fact.
** Chapter 26 reveals that Marcy has been suffering from night terrors about her ordeal back at the Bizarre Bazaar. It's led to her suffering from a lack of sleep. Her sleep-deprived state is so obvious that not even being hidden under a hood disguises the fact.
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* {{Polyamory}}: Chapter 32 has the girls realize they all have feelings for each other. Sasha and Marcy get together and fully intend on including Anne with them.
** Starting with the end of chapter 34, the three girls are officially dating.
** Starting with the end of chapter 34, the three girls are officially dating.
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* {{Polyamory}}: Chapter 32 has the girls realize they all have feelings for each other. Sasha and Marcy get together and fully intend on including Anne with them.
**them. Starting with the end of chapter 34, the three girls are officially dating.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Sasha delivers one to Sprig after finding Anne in a pet crate.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: TheReasonYouSuckSpeech:
** Sasha delivers one to Sprig after finding Anne in a pet crate.
** Sasha delivers one to Sprig after finding Anne in a pet crate.
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* TheReveal: Chapter 29 ended with Anne and Marcy being saved by an unknown frog. Chapter 30 confirms the frog's identity as Ivy.
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* TheReveal: TheReveal:
** Chapter 29 ended with Anne and Marcy being saved by an unknown frog. Chapter 30 confirms the frog's identity as Ivy.
** Chapter 29 ended with Anne and Marcy being saved by an unknown frog. Chapter 30 confirms the frog's identity as Ivy.
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* RightForTheWrongReasons: Sasha is right in her assumption that Anne was deliberately injured, which cost the girl her voice. But her belief that the Plantars did it is way off the mark.
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* RightForTheWrongReasons: RightForTheWrongReasons:
** Sasha is right in her assumption that Anne was deliberately injured, which cost the girl her voice. But her belief that the Plantars did it is way off the mark.
** Sasha is right in her assumption that Anne was deliberately injured, which cost the girl her voice. But her belief that the Plantars did it is way off the mark.
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* RoaringRampageOfRescue: Sasha attempts this to save Anne. It fails and she ends up temporarily imprisoned by Sprig. The encounter leaves Sasha so rattled that it takes her days to get back to Grime and by that point, she's fallen ill and weak due to lack of food. After seeing Sasha's condition, Grime promises to join her in her quest to rescue Anne.
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* RoaringRampageOfRescue: RoaringRampageOfRescue:
** Sasha attempts this to save Anne. It fails and she ends up temporarily imprisoned by Sprig. The encounter leaves Sasha so rattled that it takes her days to get back to Grime and by that point, she's fallen ill and weak due to lack of food. After seeing Sasha's condition, Grime promises to join her in her quest to rescue Anne.
** Sasha attempts this to save Anne. It fails and she ends up temporarily imprisoned by Sprig. The encounter leaves Sasha so rattled that it takes her days to get back to Grime and by that point, she's fallen ill and weak due to lack of food. After seeing Sasha's condition, Grime promises to join her in her quest to rescue Anne.
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* SapientPet: Robbed of her voice and having no affective way to communicate, Anne is forced into this role for months. It isn't until Sasha explains it that Sprig realizes that Anne isn't a pet.
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* SapientPet: SapientPet:
** Robbed of her voice and having no affective way to communicate, Anne is forced into this role for months. It isn't until Sasha explains it that Sprig realizes that Anne isn't a pet.
** Robbed of her voice and having no affective way to communicate, Anne is forced into this role for months. It isn't until Sasha explains it that Sprig realizes that Anne isn't a pet.
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* ShipperOnDeck: Hop Pop wants Anne, Sasha, and Marcy to become official because it would make them happy. Just as long as they don't procreate, that is.
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* ShipperOnDeck: ShipperOnDeck:
** Hop Pop wants Anne, Sasha, and Marcy to become official because it would make them happy. Just as long as they don't procreate, that is.
** Hop Pop wants Anne, Sasha, and Marcy to become official because it would make them happy. Just as long as they don't procreate, that is.
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* TheSpeechless: Anne's vocal cords are ripped out by an arrow. Even after months of healing, she remains unable to speak and is forced to rely on animal-like noises to express her feelings.
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* TheSpeechless: TheSpeechless:
** Anne's vocal cords are ripped out by an arrow. Even after months of healing, she remains unable to speak and is forced to rely on animal-like noises to express her feelings.
** Anne's vocal cords are ripped out by an arrow. Even after months of healing, she remains unable to speak and is forced to rely on animal-like noises to express her feelings.
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* TearsOfJoy: Anne and Marcy spent months not knowing where the other was, with Marcy coming to believe Anne was killed after stumbling upon her belongings by a patch of dried blood. When the pair are finally reunited, they are understandably moved to tears as they desperately cling to each other.
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* TearsOfJoy: TearsOfJoy:
** Anne and Marcy spent months not knowing where the other was, with Marcy coming to believe Anne was killed after stumbling upon her belongings by a patch of dried blood. When the pair are finally reunited, they are understandably moved to tears as they desperately cling to each other.
** Anne and Marcy spent months not knowing where the other was, with Marcy coming to believe Anne was killed after stumbling upon her belongings by a patch of dried blood. When the pair are finally reunited, they are understandably moved to tears as they desperately cling to each other.
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* ThisExplainsSoMuch: Upon learning that Anne was a teenager, Hop Pop is quick to say it explains her rebellious attitude.
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* ThisExplainsSoMuch: ThisExplainsSoMuch:
** Upon learning that Anne was a teenager, Hop Pop is quick to say it explains her rebellious attitude.
** Upon learning that Anne was a teenager, Hop Pop is quick to say it explains her rebellious attitude.
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** After the incident with Sasha, more and more of Wartwood citizens are convinced the girls are harmless. When Ivy accidentally reveals she knows the "beast" personally, many citizens jump at the chance to officially meet her safely. When Anne's story is explained by Sprig, some of the citizens are noticeably sympathetic.
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** All three of the girls have had their own encounters with tranquilizer darts. Some were used with more benevolent purposes such as Hop Pop using one to calm a high as heck Anne down. Others had more nefarious purposes, such as the hunters trying to sedate the girls for transport.
** All three of the girls have had their own encounters with tranquilizer darts. Some were used with more benevolent purposes such as Hop Pop using one to calm a high as heck Anne down. Others had more nefarious purposes, such as the hunters trying to sedate the girls for transport.
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** Marcy goes into a catatonic state when she's forced to be near fire by her kidnappers.
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** For all her faults, Sasha remains determined to save Anne.
** Yunan develops this for Marcy after taking her in as her own.
* UnexpectedKindness: A kid frog comes to Anne and Marcy's rescue before they could get dragged off to the king. What makes this significant is that said kid comes from the same village trying to kill Anne and her friends.
** Marcy and Maddie.
** For all her faults, Sasha remains determined to save Anne.
** Yunan develops this for Marcy after taking her in as her own.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: After being repeatedly burned by King Andrias, Marcy develops a crippling phobia of fire. It is Marcy's reluctance to go near the fire despite being obviously cold that alerts Yunan that something is very wrong.
* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: After being repeatedly burned by King Andrias, Marcy develops a crippling phobia of fire. It is Marcy's reluctance to go near the fire despite being obviously cold that alerts Yunan that something is very wrong.
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** This fic explores what would have happened if Anne had been attacked not long after she arrived in Amphibia.
** King Andrias reveals his true colors to Marcy much earlier, resulting in a broken Marcy wanting to go home immediately instead of going on adventures.
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** After being repeatedly burned by King Andrias, Marcy develops a crippling phobia of fire. It is Marcy's reluctance to go near the fire despite being obviously cold that alerts Yunan that something is very wrong.
** This fic explores what would have happened if Anne had been attacked not long after she arrived in Amphibia.
** King Andrias reveals his true colors to Marcy much earlier, resulting in a broken Marcy wanting to go home immediately instead of going on adventures.
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** Sprig has been dealing with guilt and self-loathing ever since he found out Anne was a person. He's convinced that Anne only sticks by him because he forced her into believing she needed to and truly believes that Anne would leave him the first chance she got. When Maddie asks him if Anne tried to leave when he attempted to release her, Sprig says no. Maddie goes on to explain to Sprig that he isn't to blame for what happened, that he had done his best with what he knew at the time, and that his actions still saved Anne's life. She also tells him that Anne stayed because she loves him and sees him as a friend.
** Sprig has been dealing with guilt and self-loathing ever since he found out Anne was a person. He's convinced that Anne only sticks by him because he forced her into believing she needed to and truly believes that Anne would leave him the first chance she got. When Maddie asks him if Anne tried to leave when he attempted to release her, Sprig says no. Maddie goes on to explain to Sprig that he isn't to blame for what happened, that he had done his best with what he knew at the time, and that his actions still saved Anne's life. She also tells him that Anne stayed because she loves him and sees him as a friend.
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** Sasha very nearly becomes victim to this.
** Anne could not survive without Sprig's help as one of the hunters' arrows slashed her throat. This incident causes her to lose the ability to speak permanently.
** Sasha very nearly becomes victim to this.
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* * ProperlyParanoid: When finding out Yunan was taken to the king, Marcy is terrified that she was being followed. Yunan insists that she wasn't. Unfortunately Marcy's fears end up being correct.
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* SacrificialLion: King Andrias drives his flaming sword through Marcy's chest and presumably kills her, right in front of her girlfriends.
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* BigDamnReunion: Chapter 44 has Anne finally reunite with her parents. Unfortunately the reunion is soured due to her horrible condition and her parents rushing her to the hospital.
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* ChekhovsGun: In the earlier chapters of the story, Anne is stung by a killer wasp and goes feral due to the agonizing pain the venom causes. The venom makes a return in chapter 42 where King Andrias uses it to deliberately enrage Anne and Sasha into attacking each other.
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** In chapter 43, Sasha gives Sprig a grateful hug after he frees her of her binds. Later she lets him ride her shoulders.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Because of Sprig's efforts to take Anne's feelings into consideration even when he thought she was just a wild animal, Anne becomes protective of him to the point of taking on a hybeena and later her own friend Sasha to keep him safe.
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** Chapter 7 ends with Anne being stabbed by a hybeena stinger and passing out in the forest while Sprig goes to get help.
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* FromBadToWorse: As if Marcy being mentally traumatized at the Bizarre Bazaar and Sasha being ripped open and left nearly dead at the jaws of a ferret weren't bad enough, Sprig recieves the horrifying news from Maddie that the whole town knows Anne is alive and is out for her head. And with Yunan being pressured by the locals to set up traps, Sprig decides that hiding all three girls in the basement is the safest course of action.
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* FromBadToWorse: As if Marcy being mentally traumatized at the Bizarre Bazaar and Sasha being ripped open and left nearly dead at the jaws of a ferret weren't bad enough, Sprig recieves receives the horrifying news from Maddie that the whole town knows Anne is alive and is out for her head. And with Yunan being pressured by the locals to set up traps, Sprig decides that hiding all three girls in the basement is the safest course of action.
** After being reunited with her daughter and seeing her dreadful condition, Oum vows to find whoever hurt Anne and kill them.
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** While under the effects of the hybeena venom, the extreme pain causes Anne to bite Sprig more than once. Despite Sprig understanding she didn't mean to do it, Anne still feels horrible.
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** Anne and Sasha are both shaken after King Andrias forced them to nearly fight to the death.
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** Oum finds the Plantars' collar around Anne and jumps to the conclusion that they're the ones who took and abused her daughter.
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** Due to being stubborn and determined to protect her friends, the hunters are forced to shoot Anne with so many darts that she ends up incapacitated for a long time.
** Due to being stubborn and determined to protect her friends, the hunters are forced to shoot Anne with so many darts that she ends up incapacitated for a long time.
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* AndThisIsFor: After King Andrias screams at Sasha for making him lose the box, she outright states she doesn't care what happens to her and that she made the sacrifice for Marcy, who is presumed dead.
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** Chapter 38 ends with the girls captured by the king's followers.
** Chapter 39 ends with King Andrias preparing to have Anne and Sasha killed.
** Chapter 42 ends with Anne nearly killing Sasha while under the effects of a gas.
** Chapter 43 ends with Marcy supposedly dead and Yunan getting knocked out.
** Chapter 39 ends with King Andrias preparing to have Anne and Sasha killed.
** Chapter 42 ends with Anne nearly killing Sasha while under the effects of a gas.
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** In order to force information from Marcy, King Andrias squeezes Sasha's jaws shut and threatens to crush her head if Marcy doesn't comply or tells a fib. Marcy reluctantly hands over the information he wants to keep Sasha safe.
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** After arriving on earth and getting hit by a car, a bunch of worried people attempt to help Anne get to the hospital.
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** After watching Marcy getting stabbed, a shaken Sasha takes the box and throws it through the portal, preventing King Andrias from using it. This ends up stranding her in Amphibia and remains a prisoner of the enraged king.
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* KillTheCutie: Supposedly. King Andrias impales Marcy after she attempts to flee from his capture. Everyone who witnessed it assumes Marcy is dead.
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** King Andrias initially wanted to kill Anne and Sasha. He ends up changing his mind and decides to keep them as pets instead. This ends up being a worse fate.
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* TookALevelInKindness: After the incident with Sasha, more and more of Wartwood citizens are convinced the girls are harmless. When Ivy accidentally reveals she knows the "beast" personally, many citizens jump at the chance to officially meet her safely. When Anne's story is explained by Sprig, some of the citizens are noticeably sympathetic.
** By the end of chapter 36, Anne is accepted by the citizens of Wartwood after she saves them from a scorpaleo attack.
** By the end of chapter 36, Anne is accepted by the citizens of Wartwood after she saves them from a scorpaleo attack.
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* BloodierAndGorier: While not to an extreme extent, the fic still includes scenes more violent than in canon, including Sasha having her side torn out and Anne being impaled by a giant stinger.
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* IsThatCuteKidYours: Yunan suspects Grime adopted Sasha. He adamantly denies it.
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* MistakenAge: For a while, the Plantars assumed Anne was a baby. When she tries to write out her age, she's stopped early, resulting in Sprig announcing she's 1.
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** Normally friendly and kind Anne enjoying Wally's terrified screams and seriously considering letting him die goes a long way to show how very little she thinks of him.
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* AssholeVictim: Reluctantly defied by Anne when she decides that letting Wally die was not worth letting innocent civilians get torn apart by a beast.
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** Chapter 34 goes further, with Sasha not only confessing her original plans to kill the Plantars to Ivy, but also admitting she feels no pride in what she almost did.
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** Grime can deny it all he wants, but everyone can tell he sees Sasha as his daughter.
** Marcy finds a parental figure in Yunan.
** Marcy finds a parental figure in Yunan.
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** Starting with the end of chapter 34, the three girls are officially dating.
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* * ProperlyParanoid: When finding out Yunan was taken to the king, Marcy is terrified that she was being followed. Yunan insists that she wasn't. Unfortunately Marcy's fears end up being correct.
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** Wally is called out on how damaging his shenanigans had been to Anne.
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* EasilyForgiven: Averted with Wally. Sprig makes it clear to him under no uncertain terms that Anne will not forgive him just because he apologized.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: After the consequences of Wally's little stunt is exposed, nobody wants him around anymore. The mayor forces Wally to give all his money to the Plantar family as compensation and then banishes him from town.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: The Wally of this universe is colder and holds no remorse for putting Anne through all that trouble. He initially refuses to apologize to her and even when he does, it's only after she reluctantly saves him from a scorpaleo.
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** Sasha's leg gets banged up real good after crashing into the vet's office while fleeing from her attackers.
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** The vet gives Sasha some thistle grass to calm her down when getting Hop Pop. The thistle grass ends up making Sasha crave affection from her girls so much, she wanders outside to find them.
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** Chapter 33 confirms that after the incident with Sasha, a greater chunk of the village no longer views the girls as dangerous.
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** After getting ambushed, Sasha does cause her attackers to hesitate when she speaks to them and tries to show them she means no harm. Unfortunately, some of the frogs still wanted to kill her regardless and Sasha would have been killed had it not been for Grime.
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** Chapter 33 ends with Yunan heading home, unaware that she's being followed.
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** Chapter 33 confirms that Sasha no longer regards the Plantars as a threat.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: Wally doesn't even appear directly in the story until many chapters in and he didn't directly attack any of the girls. Nonetheless, his cry wolf story led to Anne being hunted, resulting in her losing her voice and taking up residence with the Plantars.
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* HumiliationConga: Sasha gets hit with this big time. After her initial run-in with Sprig and failing to get Anne, Sasha keeps returning to make a new attempt. She ends up captured by a trap she couldn't see because she was too fixated on killing Sprig, gets locked in a crate with a muzzle on her face, and gets petted like she's an animal. She is darted a total of three times and gets high on tea which has her confessing her love for Anne. Then when she gets injured protecting Anne, Hop Pop is forced to take her to a vet just to get her help. To say Sasha is not having a good time is an understatement.
* {{Hypocrite}}: Despite screaming that Anne isn't a pet and shouldn't be treated like one, Sasha herself has no problem with trying to control Anne.
* {{Hypocrite}}: Despite screaming that Anne isn't a pet and shouldn't be treated like one, Sasha herself has no problem with trying to control Anne.
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* HumiliationConga: Sasha gets hit with this big time. After her initial run-in with Sprig and failing to get Anne, Sasha keeps returning to make a new attempt. She ends up captured by a trap she couldn't see because she was too fixated on killing Sprig, gets locked in a crate with a muzzle on her face, and gets petted like she's an animal. She is darted a total of three times and gets high on tea which has her confessing her love for Anne. Then when she gets injured protecting Anne, Hop Pop is forced to take her to a vet just to get her help. To say Sasha is not having a good time is an understatement.
* {{Hypocrite}}: Despite screaming that Anne isn't a pet and shouldn't be treated like one, Sasha herself has no problem with trying to control Anne.
* {{Hypocrite}}: Despite screaming that Anne isn't a pet and shouldn't be treated like one, Sasha herself has no problem with trying to control Anne.
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* BigDamnKiss: Marcy is so moved by Sasha's apology that she gives her a kiss on the lips. This prompts them to take their friendship to the next level.
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* TemptingFate: While trying to think of a way to ask Anne to date them, Sasha comes up with the idea to get flowers for her. Marcy tries to talk her out of it as they were all still being hunted by paranoid villagers. Sasha is confident that she'll be all right and after some back and forth gets Marcy to reluctantly back down. But just as Sasha is about to pluck a flower for Anne, she gets darted and ambushed by villagers just as Marcy had warned her. The only reason Sasha escaped was because Grime was in the area.
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** Chapter 31 ends with King Andrias sending the newt hunters to follow Yunan and capture all three girls.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Despite lingering doubts, Sasha wants to remain determined to believe that Grime cares for her and that she and Anne would be safe under his protection. When Sprig bluntly asks Sasha why Grime wasn't already at the door if he actually cared about her, Sasha isn't able to answer.
