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* {{Gendercide}}: The jackal village [[spoiler:Anahi relocated to]] is entirely female, because a mysterious disease swept up the village in the past and made the males insane, fighting each other to death.
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* DeathByChildbirth: [[spoiler:Because the wolf baby is too big for her body, Keelie eventually dies rather graphically. [[TragicStillbirth The baby does too.]]]]
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** "Let's forget about it now, just let me love you," says Jay. He then takes Tempest [[ShowerOfLove to their bathroom]].
** Jay and Tempest "get lost in each other". She becomes pregnant
** "Let's forget about it now, just let me love you," says Jay. He then takes Tempest [[ShowerOfLove to their bathroom]].
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* WombHorror: [[spoiler:Keelie's pregnancy with a wolf pup is hellish. The fact her body is rejecting the pup is nightmarish to think of, not to mention blood spilling out from the womb at childbirth, [[DeathByChildbith whom Keelie and the pup die from]].]]
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* LetsHaveAnotherBaby: [[spoiler:Gadget and Keelie decide to have another biological baby of their own after losing their only one. Keelie then suffers from this one because it's full wolf rather than a hybrid, and [[DeathByChildbirth dies]].]]
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* SexyDiscretionShot: Jay and Tempest "get lost in each other". She becomes pregnant later.
* SexyDiscretionShot: Jay and Tempest "get lost in each other". She becomes pregnant later.
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* LetsHaveAnotherBaby: [[spoiler:Gadget and Keelie decide to have another biological baby of their own after losing their only one. Keelie then suffers from this one.one because it's full wolf rather than a hybrid, and [[DeathByChildbirth dies]].]]
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Axel and his daughters don't live long after their introduction...
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* InterspeciesRomance: Gaia the wolf has feelings for Finn the jackal and even kisses him, but cannot be with him because of the jackal bloodline needing to be pure. [[spoiler:Keelie, Finn's half-sister, soon after fleeing the village, falls in love with, marries, and has a wolf-jackal hybrid with Gadget.]]
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* InterspeciesRomance: Gaia the wolf has feelings for Finn the jackal and even kisses him, but cannot be with him because of the tradition of keeping the jackal bloodline needing to be pure. [[spoiler:Keelie, Finn's half-sister, soon after fleeing the village, later as part of her integration into civilization, falls in love with, marries, and has a wolf-jackal hybrid with Gadget.]]
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* AdaptationOriginConnection: In this fic, Gadget (the Avatar) and Infinite first met each other '''years''' before the events of ''Forces''.
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* UnusualEuphenism: "The packaging to their prevention" (read: condom)
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* UnusualEuphenism: UnusualEuphemism: "The packaging to their prevention" (read: condom)
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** Not to mention the scene in which Kinley drunkenly strips Britney to her "red" (read: lingerie).
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** Not to mention the scene in which Kinley drunkenly strips Britney to her "red" (read: lingerie).
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* HotterAndSexier: There are more {{Sexy Discretion Shot}}s than in ''Suffer'', given we're dealing with more adults this time.
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* GrayRainOfDepression: {{Lampshaded}} at the burial of [[spoiler:Bella and her two stillborn daughters]]:
--> Usually rain was refreshing in their village. [[HappyRain It brought happiness to many]], as it was a sign of life. But ironically, today it brought gloom and sadness.
--> Usually rain was refreshing in their village. [[HappyRain It brought happiness to many]], as it was a sign of life. But ironically, today it brought gloom and sadness.
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* MercyKill: [[spoiler:While wandering in the desert in exile, Finn is forced to kill Jay and Tempest's pup dying from starvation. [[TheseHandsHaveKilled He doesn't take it well.]]]]
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* DeathByChildbirth: Bella's body is too small to support pups, which is why she was exiled. [[spoiler:When her and Finn conceive pups, her body slowly suffers, and she dies minutes after giving birth.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Finn's reaction upon realizing he massacred Keelie's children and millions more as Infinite. He hits the DespairEventHorizon full notch.]]
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** After accepting to be his mate, Tempest drags Jay "behind some rocks".
** After killing off Butch and becoming the new Alpha, Finn drags his new mate Bella "off to a private place".
** After accepting to be his mate, Tempest drags Jay "behind some rocks".
** After killing off Butch and becoming the new Alpha, Finn drags his new mate Bella "off to a private place".
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* LetsHaveAnotherBaby: [[spoiler:Gadget and Keelie decide to have another biological baby of their own after losing their only one. Keelie then suffers from this one.]]
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* NotWantingKidsIsWeird: In the jackal culture where baby pups are the most valuable asset, a female jackal would be considered worthless if she did not produce any pups, whether by nature or choice. Bella was exiled from her village simply because her body wasn't fit for carrying pups. WordOfGod implies in ''Trauma'''s notes that this applies to homosexuals as well.
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler:Whenever someone fuses with the Phantom Ruby, they commit murders and atrocious acts, [[AndIMustScream while being blackened out and unaware of what they're doing]]. And that was Finn's fate.]]
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* TraumaCongaLine: The whole fanfic is this for Finn. He is blamed for TheBully's death, has his father and sister murdered as the result, [[spoiler:loses his mate to DeathByChildbirth, has his only surviving child killed by a jackal invader, is exiled by the invader,]]
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* TraumaCongaLine: The whole fanfic is this for Finn. He is blamed for TheBully's death, has his father and sister murdered as the result, [[spoiler:loses his mate to DeathByChildbirth, has his only surviving child killed by a jackal invader, is exiled by the invader,]]invader, and ends up murdering Keelie's son and daughter and a thousand more innocents [[BrainwashedAndCrazy under the influence of the Phantom Ruby]].]]
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: [[spoiler: The Jackal Squad's assassination of the Prince isn't heard of again, and the Squad [[KarmaHoudini doesn't receive any payback for this somehow]].]]
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After the War to Take Back the Planet is over with, not only Infinite has to recover from the trauma accumulated over his life, his family and their friends have to heal from the trauma from the War and related events also. The fanfic focuses on different stories of different characters and their lives and usually depressing experiences.
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After the War to Take Back the Planet is over with, not only Infinite has to recover from the trauma accumulated over his life, his family and their friends have to heal from the trauma from the War and related events also. The fanfic focuses on different stories of different characters and their lives and usually depressing experiences, mostly Keelie's sons and their ComingOfAge experiences.
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* AgeLift: In ''Sonic Forces'', the Avatar is implied to be a young child. Here, Gadget, the Avatar stand-in, is apparently an adult who's old enough [[spoiler:to marry and have kids with Keelie]] before the events of ''Forces''.
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* HateSink: While characters like Butch have committed atrocious actions yet still are sympathetic, [[spoiler:the jackal invader has no sympathetic traits at all. He [[WouldHurtAChild kills Kylo]], [[MoralEventHorizon Finn's only son]], without qualms, exiles Finn and his family, and proceeds to [[DomesticAbuse abuse]] and [[RapeAsDrama implicitly rape]] his forced mate Keelie.]]
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* HateSink: While characters like Butch have committed atrocious actions yet still are sympathetic, [[spoiler:the jackal invader has no sympathetic traits at all. He [[WouldHurtAChild kills Kylo]], [[MoralEventHorizon Finn's only son]], without qualms, exiles Finn and his family, and proceeds to [[DomesticAbuse abuse]] and [[RapeAsDrama implicitly rape]] his forced mate Keelie. Keelie kills him off and [[AssholeVictim no sorrow is drawn at all]].]]
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* HateSink: While characters like Butch have committed atrocious actions yet still are sympathetic, [[spoiler:the jackal invader has no sympathetic traits at all. He [[WouldHurtAChild kills Kylo]], [[MoralEventHorizon Finn's only son]], without qualms, exiles Finn and his family, and proceeds to [[DomesticAbuse abuse]] and [[RapeAsDrama implicitly rape]] his forced mate Keelie.]]
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* TraumaCongaLine: The whole fanfic is this for Finn. He is blamed for TheBully's death, has his father and sister murdered as the result, [[spoiler:loses his mate to DeathByChildbirth, has his only surviving child killed by a jackal invader, is exiled by the invader,invader,]]
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Then comes the humongous TraumaCongaLine, both for Finn and his family, all starting with when Finn [[FailureToSaveMurder is blamed for the death]] of [[TheBully Butch]]'s brother, Hutch. It's gonna be a depressing ride.
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* TraumaCongaLine: The whole fanfic is this for Finn. He is blamed for TheBully's death, has his father and sister murdered as the result, [[spoiler:loses his mate to DeathByChildbirth, has his only surviving child killed by a jackal invader, is exiled by the invader,
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* KlingonPromotion: To avenge his brother's death, Butch kills off the Alpha Axel, [[FamilyExtermination all of his daughters]], and ''nearly'' Jay and Finn, before taking the position as the new Alpha and Nia as his new mate. [[DeliberateValuesDissonance Apparently this is a very okay thing to do in jackal culture.]] Finn later kills Butch also as revenge and takes the Alpha position as well.
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* KlingonPromotion: To avenge his brother's death, Butch kills off the Alpha Axel, [[FamilyExtermination [[RulingFamilyMassacre all of his daughters]], and daughters, and]] ''nearly'' Jay and Finn, before taking the position as the new Alpha and Nia as his new mate. [[DeliberateValuesDissonance Apparently this is a very okay thing to do in jackal culture.]] Finn later kills Butch also as revenge and takes the Alpha position as well.
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* KlingonPromotion: To avenge his brother's death, Butch kills off the Alpha Axel, [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill all of his daughters]], and ''nearly'' Jay and Finn, before taking the position as the new Alpha and Nia as his new mate. [[DeliberateValuesDissonance Apparently this is a very okay thing to do in jackal culture.]] Finn later kills Butch also as revenge and takes the Alpha position as well.
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* KlingonPromotion: To avenge his brother's death, Butch kills off the Alpha Axel, [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill [[FamilyExtermination all of his daughters]], and ''nearly'' Jay and Finn, before taking the position as the new Alpha and Nia as his new mate. [[DeliberateValuesDissonance Apparently this is a very okay thing to do in jackal culture.]] Finn later kills Butch also as revenge and takes the Alpha position as well.
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* TitleDrop: In the epilogue:
--> After Eggman left he rolled over on his back. He drew deep and shaky breaths. He deserved this. He would just lay here and bleed out. After all, he'd learned what it truly means, to suffer.
* TraumaCongaLine: The whole fanfic is this for Finn.
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* TitleDrop: In the epilogue:
--> After Eggman left he rolled over on his back. He drew deep and shaky breaths. He deserved this. He would just lay here and bleed out. After all, he'd learned what it truly means, to suffer.
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->''"When you're the runt of the litter, you suffer. When you have heterochromia, you suffer. When you lose your mind, you suffer. Sometimes, life just hurts."''
--> -- The summary
'''Suffer''' (original title ''Infinite Pain'') is a ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' fanfic serving as a {{Prequel}} to ''VideoGame/SonicForces'' and what might have been Infinite's backstory, {{Dark and Troubled|Past}} especially.
In a world where jackals live in primitive villages and carry out primitive lifestyles, unlike the other and more civilized Mobians, there was a certain black jackal born to the Alpha of a certain village, the smallest of his 10-pup litter and with an oddity, blue-and-gold eyes. As a result, he is [[AllTheOtherReindeer ostracized by his sisters]], with only his BigBrotherMentor to stand up to.
Then comes the humongous TraumaCongaLine, both for Finn and his family, all starting with when Finn [[FailureToSaveMurder is blamed for the death]] of [[TheBully Butch]]'s brother, Hutch. It's gonna be a depressing ride.
Read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12897316/1/Suffer here]]. Compare to ''Fanfic/MemoriesOfInfinitesPast'', another fanfic exploring another fan interpretation of Infinite's past, but more suited for the canon.
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-> ''"War leaves scars. Suffering leaves scars. Loss leaves scars. The struggle to move on his full of challenges, and different people respond in different ways. Will Infinite ever be able to be who he once was?"''
--> -- The summary
'''Trauma''' is the {{Sequel}} to ''Suffer'' (and ''Sonic Forces'' also) with some HurtComfortFic elements.
After the War to Take Back the Planet is over with, not only Infinite has to recover from the trauma accumulated over his life, his family and their friends have to heal from the trauma from the War and related events also. The fanfic focuses on different stories of different characters and their lives and usually depressing experiences.
Read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13126158/1/Trauma here]].
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--> -- The summary
'''Suffer''' (original title ''Infinite Pain'') is a ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' fanfic serving as a {{Prequel}} to ''VideoGame/SonicForces'' and what might have been Infinite's backstory, {{Dark and Troubled|Past}} especially.
In a world where jackals live in primitive villages and carry out primitive lifestyles, unlike the other and more civilized Mobians, there was a certain black jackal born to the Alpha of a certain village, the smallest of his 10-pup litter and with an oddity, blue-and-gold eyes. As a result, he is [[AllTheOtherReindeer ostracized by his sisters]], with only his BigBrotherMentor to stand up to.
Then comes the humongous TraumaCongaLine, both for Finn and his family, all starting with when Finn [[FailureToSaveMurder is blamed for the death]] of [[TheBully Butch]]'s brother, Hutch. It's gonna be a depressing ride.
Read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12897316/1/Suffer here]]. Compare to ''Fanfic/MemoriesOfInfinitesPast'', another fanfic exploring another fan interpretation of Infinite's past, but more suited for the canon.
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-> ''"War leaves scars. Suffering leaves scars. Loss leaves scars. The struggle to move on his full of challenges, and different people respond in different ways. Will Infinite ever be able to be who he once was?"''
--> -- The summary
'''Trauma''' is the {{Sequel}} to ''Suffer'' (and ''Sonic Forces'' also) with some HurtComfortFic elements.
After the War to Take Back the Planet is over with, not only Infinite has to recover from the trauma accumulated over his life, his family and their friends have to heal from the trauma from the War and related events also. The fanfic focuses on different stories of different characters and their lives and usually depressing experiences.
Read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13126158/1/Trauma here]].
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