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* BiTheWay: Grand Ruler Lux is mentioned to go both ways by Lightning Dawn in "We Dare Not Go A-Hunting". Titania might be this as well due to her flirtatious teasing of Rosebud in "10,000 Years" and her ShipTease with Lightning Dawn, but given her BlueAndOrangeMorality, this is difficult to tell.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Grand Ruler Lux is Lightning Dawn's father in this continuity, which WordOfGod confirms is because it not only makes more sense, but also eliminates the DeathByOriginStory Lightning had in the original, instead mitigating it to a NotQuiteDead MissingMom. Horus, by extension, is Lightning Dawn's older brother. WordOfGod further explains this is intended to create a new dynamic between the three as well.
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* ShipTease: Lightning/Titania gets quite a bit of this in "We Dare Not Go A-Hunting". To a lesser degree, Lightning/Andromeda gets this as well in the same chapter.
* ShipTease: Lightning/Titania gets quite a bit of this in "We Dare Not Go A-Hunting". To a lesser degree, Lightning/Andromeda gets this as well in the same chapter.
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* EldritchLocation: Tenebris seems to be this. On the surface it resembles a perfectly ordinary moon. Beneath that, however, is a skeleton-dotted wasteland, overcast with a PerpetualStorm and an EvilTowerOfOminousness in the form of Horus' castle.
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* EldritchLocation: Tenebris seems to be this. On the surface it resembles a perfectly ordinary moon. Beneath that, however, is a skeleton-dotted wasteland, overcast with a PerpetualStorm and an EvilTowerOfOminousness in the form of Horus' castle.castle
** The Land of Nevernever in "We Dare Not Go A-Hunting" is as well. Fitting for the homeland of TheFairFolk.
** The Land of Nevernever in "We Dare Not Go A-Hunting" is as well. Fitting for the homeland of TheFairFolk.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Several, most notably Titania, Andromeda, and Grand Ruler Lux himself. The former two were DamselsInDistress in Starfleet Magic? Here, however? Not only does Titania kick Horus' ass with no effort, but she nearly kills him as well. Andromeda goes from TheChick and FauxActionGirl Starla was in the original to both an ActionGirl and TheLeader of the team, as well as a DrillSergeantNasty towards Lightning Dawn.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Several, most notably Titania, Andromeda, and Grand Ruler Lux himself. The former two were DamselsInDistress in Starfleet Magic? Magic, for instance. Here, however? Not only does Titania kick Horus' ass with no effort, but she nearly kills him as well. Andromeda goes from TheChick and FauxActionGirl Starla was in the original to both an ActionGirl and TheLeader of the team, as well as a DrillSergeantNasty towards Lightning Dawn.
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* MythologyGag: The story's title is one, referring to the subtitle of Starfleet Magic's original incarnation My Little Unicorn.
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*MythologyGag: The story's title is one, referring to the subtitle of Starfleet Magic's original incarnation My Little Unicorn.
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*AdaptationSpeciesChange: A minor example, but unlike the Unicornicopians in the source material, the Solarans are not alicorns. Rather, in a similar vein to MLP, the only alicorns are Grand Ruler Lux and Prince Lightning Dawn. The rest are anthro earth ponies, unicorns, and pegasi.
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* AntagonisticOffspring: Horus, is the Grand Ruler's son. He, unlike his father, [[FantasticRacism looks down on races he sees as inferior]], views power as the only thing that matters, sees teammates are mere tools, [[VirtueIsWeakness and is utterly disgusted by friendship and love]].
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* AntagonisticOffspring: Horus, Horus is the Grand Ruler's son. He, unlike his father, [[FantasticRacism looks down on races he sees as inferior]], views power as the only thing that matters, sees teammates are mere tools, [[VirtueIsWeakness and is utterly disgusted by friendship and love]].
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*BadassBoast: Titania gives Horus one before she CurbStomps him.
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*MissingMom: Lightning has one. All that is known is that she's NotQuiteDead.
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*MonsterOfTheWeek: Justified; Horus, after his defeat in the Imperial Palace, sees how powerful Grand Ruler Lux has become, and decides not to take direct action again just yet.
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* {{Reconstruction}}: WordOfGod states this story is one to the [[Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic rather infamous work]] by Creator/DakariKingMykan.
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* {{Reconstruction}}: WordOfGod states this story is one to the [[Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic rather infamous work]] by Creator/DakariKingMykan.Creator/DakariKingMykan.
*RelatedInTheAdaptation: Grand Ruler Lux is Lightning Dawn's father in this continuity, which WordOfGod confirms is because it not only makes more sense, but also eliminates the DeathByOriginStory Lightning had in the original, instead mitigating it to a NotQuiteDead MissingMom. Horus, by extension, is Lightning Dawn's older brother. WordOfGod further explains this is intended to create a new dynamic between the three as well.
*RelatedInTheAdaptation: Grand Ruler Lux is Lightning Dawn's father in this continuity, which WordOfGod confirms is because it not only makes more sense, but also eliminates the DeathByOriginStory Lightning had in the original, instead mitigating it to a NotQuiteDead MissingMom. Horus, by extension, is Lightning Dawn's older brother. WordOfGod further explains this is intended to create a new dynamic between the three as well.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthwall: Horus shares numerous beliefs with Mykan.
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** Artie Bristles -----> Walter Peindre
** Rhymey -----> Bridge Cappella
** Buddy Rose -----> Rosebud Flora
** Dyno and Mite -----> Nitro and Trini
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** Artie Bristles -----> Walter Peindre
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** Starfleet becomes ----> Adeptus Spatium.
** Grand Ruler Celestobecomes ----> Grand Ruler Lux.
** Titanbecomes ----> Horus.
**Dementia becomes Cassiopeia, Rep-Stallion becomes Kratos, Dementia, Rep-Stallion, and Mysterious becomes ----> Cassiopeia, Kratos, and Erebus.
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** Artie Bristles
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Titania, being a member of TheFairFolk, has this; having cursed ponies, hurt animals, and done other unspeakable things, all without understanding exactly why those things are wrong in the eyes of mortals.
* FriendsWithBenefits: Lightning and Titania have this relationship.
* FriendsWithBenefits: Lightning and Titania have this relationship.
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*AdaptationalBadass: Several, most notably Titania, Andromeda, and Grand Ruler Lux himself. The former two were DamselsInDistress in Starfleet Magic? Here, however? Not only does Titania kick Horus' ass with no effort, but she nearly kills him as well. Andromeda goes from TheChick and FauxActionGirl Starla was in the original to both an ActionGirl and TheLeader of the team, as well as a DrillSergeantNasty towards Lightning Dawn.
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** Grand Ruler Celesto becomes Grand Ruler Lux.
** Titan becomes Horus.
** Dementia becomes Cassiopeia, Rep-Stallion becomes Kratos, and Mysterious becomes Erebus.
** Starla Shine -----> Andromeda Aquila
** Artie Bristles -----> Walter Peindre
** Rhymey -----> Bridge Cappella
** Buddy Rose -----> Rosebud Flora
** Dyno and Mite -----> Nitro and Trini
** Krysta ----> Titania
** Titan becomes Horus.
** Dementia becomes Cassiopeia, Rep-Stallion becomes Kratos, and Mysterious becomes Erebus.
** Starla Shine -----> Andromeda Aquila
** Artie Bristles -----> Walter Peindre
** Rhymey -----> Bridge Cappella
** Buddy Rose -----> Rosebud Flora
** Dyno and Mite -----> Nitro and Trini
** Krysta ----> Titania
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->''Friendship. Teamwork. Faith.''
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!!''Starfleet: [=MiB=]'' contains examples of:
* AdaptationNameChange:
** Unicornicopia becomes Solaris.
** Starfleet becomes Adeptus Spatium.
* AntagonisticOffspring: Horus, is the Grand Ruler's son. He, unlike his father, [[FantasticRacism looks down on races he sees as inferior]], views power as the only thing that matters, sees teammates are mere tools, [[VirtueIsWeakness and is utterly disgusted by friendship and love]].
* BadassCreed: “Duis amicitiae fides” is the official creed of the Adeptus Spatium, otherwise known as Starfleet.
* TheGreatOffscreenWar: The nineyear long war between Horus and Grand Ruler, which ended with Grand Ruler banishing Horus and his faction to Tenebris, a faraway moon.
* LeaningOnTheFourthwall: Horus shares numerous beliefs with Mykan.
* {{Reconstruction}}: WordOfGod states this story is one to the [[Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic rather infamous work]] by Creator/DakariKingMykan.
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Read the story [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/401394/starfleet-mib---season-1 here]]
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Read the story [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/401394/starfleet-mib---season-1 here]]here]]
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In the vast unknown of deep space, the Solaran Imperium and its soldiers in the Adeptus Spatium keep the peace, spreading tenets of friendship and harmony. When an ancient evil seeks to destroy everything they know and love, a young prince allies himself with a team of veteran heroes to protect his homeland. However, their quest will eventually lead them to a world not too different from their own...
Read the story [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/401394/starfleet-mib---season-1 here]]
Read the story [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/401394/starfleet-mib---season-1 here]]
