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** The Four Rains, for being blindly loyal to Fadei (and who tested his luck with Sonya yet again after apparently not even attempting to get stronger and more skilled with his Flames).
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted (though this may be unintentional); [[spoiler: Lisa's baby, Valerian]] ends up being called the same name as a minor Grekov thug.
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted (though this may be unintentional); Averted; [[spoiler: Lisa's baby, Valerian]] ends up being called the same name as a minor Grekov thug.
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* [[spoiler: {{Immortality}}: Cherep has this in a combination of ResurrectiveImmortality and FromASingleCell ]]
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* [[spoiler: {{Immortality}}: Cherep [[spoiler:Cherep has this in a combination of ResurrectiveImmortality and FromASingleCell ]]]]
* InnocentFanserviceGirl: Sonya is oblivious to attraction, mostly, and is perfectly willing to strip in front of Renato when she needs to change.
** Slips into ShamelessFanserviceGirl when she doesn't care that she just ran through Vonogola mansion half-naked and was ''definitely'' seen.
* InnocentFanserviceGirl: Sonya is oblivious to attraction, mostly, and is perfectly willing to strip in front of Renato when she needs to change.
** Slips into ShamelessFanserviceGirl when she doesn't care that she just ran through Vonogola mansion half-naked and was ''definitely'' seen.
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* CheerfulChild: Under Renato's guardianship and Sonya's protective eye, Shamal slowly grows into this.
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* SmallNameBigEgo: Fadei, who is rather put-out that Sonya was charged with leadership of the Zolotov Flame group.
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** [[spoiler: Galina]] seems to have weaponized her ''nail polish''.
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* NotSoDifferent: Sonya wonders how Cherep, who markedly dislikes Renato, could possibly forget his name. A few chapters later, Sonya persistently fails to name a nurse she dislikes.
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* DisguisedInDrag: Sonya and Shamal end up doing this at one point to hide from the Flame user traffickers. It doesn't really work on Renato, though.
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* PublicSecretMessage: the Zolotovs plan to disguise [[spoiler: Sonya's book on Flames]] as a self-help Hippie book, with the understanding that only those already in the known will realize the ''true'' meaning of the book.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Sonya and Renato to baby!Shamal.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Sonya and Renato to baby!Shamal. Of course, this only adds to the rampant ShipTease between the two that everyone can see. This is why Renato can't pick up any maids at the Vongola mansion anymore.
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* [[BigBrotherInstinct Little Sister Instinct]]: Despite being younger and "weaker" when it comes to flames, Sonya is extremely protective of Cherep, specially against underworld denizens. When [[spoiler: Viper mentioned s/he knew that Sonya and Cherep were both Clouds]], Sonya threatened to hunt them down, rip out their spine and beat them with it.
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* [[BigBrotherInstinct Little Sister Instinct]]: Despite being younger and "weaker" when it comes to flames, Flames, Sonya is extremely protective of Cherep, specially against underworld denizens. When [[spoiler: Viper mentioned s/he knew that Sonya and Cherep were both Clouds]], Sonya threatened to hunt them down, rip out their spine and beat them with it.
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* UriahGambit: A clerk attempts to off Sonya this way, but unfortunately for him, she not only goes above and beyond to fulfill the task, but also returns pissed off enough to smash his face into a wall.
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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: '''Cherep:''' "Why were all the other Flame types so much more interesting?"
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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: '''Cherep:''' "Why were all the other Flame types so much more interesting?"interesting?"
* YouNeedToGetLaid: Tatiana to Sonya, during the teen years. She gets a little more proactive in trying to set Sonya up during their vacation in France, but is forced to admit defeat when Sonya's natural Cloud tendencies make her unwilling to do casual.
* YouNeedToGetLaid: Tatiana to Sonya, during the teen years. She gets a little more proactive in trying to set Sonya up during their vacation in France, but is forced to admit defeat when Sonya's natural Cloud tendencies make her unwilling to do casual.
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* SheIsAllGrownUp: Renato acknowledges this about Sonya in later chapters, which Squicks him out a little because he met her when she was eleven/twelve, but he can't seem to stop EatingTheEyeCandy in his internal narration.
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* SheIsAllGrownUp: Renato acknowledges this about Sonya in later chapters, which Squicks squicks him out a little because he met her when she was eleven/twelve, but he can't seem to stop EatingTheEyeCandy in his internal narration.
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted (though this may be unintentional); [[spoiler: Lisa's baby, Valerian]] ends up being called the same name as a minor Grekov thug.
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* SheIsAllGrownUp: Renato acknowledges this about Sonya in later chapters, which Squicks him out a little because he met her when she was eleven/twelve, but he can't seem to stop EatingTheEyeCandy in his internal narration.
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* [[BigBrotherInstinct Little Sister Instinct]]: Despite being younger and "weaker" when it comes to flames, Sonya is extremely protective of Cherep, specially against underworld denizens. When [[spoiler: Viper mentioned [s/he knew that Sonya and Cherep were both Clouds]], Sonya threatened to hunt them down, rip out their spine and beat them with it.
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* [[BigBrotherInstinct Little Sister Instinct]]: Despite being younger and "weaker" when it comes to flames, Sonya is extremely protective of Cherep, specially against underworld denizens. When [[spoiler: Viper mentioned [s/he s/he knew that Sonya and Cherep were both Clouds]], Sonya threatened to hunt them down, rip out their spine and beat them with it.
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* [[BigBrotherInstinct Little Sister Instinct]]: Despite being younger and "weaker" when it comes to flames, Sonya is extremely protective of Cherep, specially against underworld denizens. When [[spoiler: Viper mentioned [s/he knew that Sonya and Cherep were both Clouds]], Sonya threatened to hunt them down, rip out their spine and beat them with it.
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* IHaveManyNames: Sonya, obviously. Rachel Elizabeth Stokes, Nikishina Sonya, Bazanova Sonya, Sonya de Mort... she's gathered a lot of them with her unique family situation.
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* IHaveManyNames: Sonya, obviously. Rachel Elizabeth Victoria Stokes, Nikishina Sonya, Bazanova Sonya, Sonya de Mort... she's gathered a lot of them with her unique family situation.
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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: '''Cherep:''' "Why were all the other Flame types so much more interesting than his?"
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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: '''Cherep:''' "Why were all the other Flame types so much more interesting than his?"interesting?"
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* AmbiguousGender: [[spoiler: Viper]], as in canon, although they decide to appear more feminine until confronted by Sonya and Cherep. This causes Cherep some PronounTrouble, although it doesn't stop him and [spoiler: Viper]] from becoming friends.
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* AmbiguousGender: [[spoiler: Viper]], as in canon, although they decide to appear more feminine until confronted by Sonya and Cherep. This causes Cherep some PronounTrouble, although it doesn't stop him and [spoiler: [[spoiler: Viper]] from becoming friends.
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* AmbiguousGender: [[spoiler: Viper]], as in canon, although they decide to appear more feminine until confronted by Sonya and Cherep. This causes Cherep some PronounTrouble, although it doesn't stop them from becoming friends.
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* AmbiguousGender: [[spoiler: Viper]], as in canon, although they decide to appear more feminine until confronted by Sonya and Cherep. This causes Cherep some PronounTrouble, although it doesn't stop them him and [spoiler: Viper]] from becoming friends.
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* WarRefugees: The Großes Volksfest sneaks some Jewish refugees out of Egypt by disguising them as performers and dockworkers.
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* WarRefugees: The Großes Volksfest sneaks some Jewish refugees out of Egypt by disguising them as performers and dockworkers.dockworkers.
* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: '''Cherep:''' "Why were all the other Flame types so much more interesting than his?"
* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: '''Cherep:''' "Why were all the other Flame types so much more interesting than his?"
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* CuddleBug: Cherep seems to have turned into this in response to his childhood growing up with the Zolotovs and Sonya's standoffish tendencies.
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* CuddleBug: Cherep seems to have turned into this in response to his childhood growing up with the Zolotovs and wanting to obliterate Sonya's standoffish tendencies.
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* CuddleBug: Cherep seems to have turned into this in response to his greatly improved childhood and Sonya's HatesBeingTouched tendencies.
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* CuddleBug: Cherep seems to have turned into this in response to his greatly improved childhood growing up with the Zolotovs and Sonya's HatesBeingTouched standoffish tendencies.
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* CuddleBug: Cherep seems to have turned into this in response to his greatly improved childhood and Sonya's HatesBeingTouched tendencies.
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* HatesBeingTouched: "She didn't even like hugs when Cherep wanted to give her some..."
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* HatesBeingTouched: "She didn't even like hugs when Cherep wanted to give her some..."" (Although she does tolerate it from him more often than anyone else, and it takes more effort to break free from his grasp, considering his advantage in strength of Cloud Flames.)
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* HiddenWeapons: Sonya disguises [[spoiler: several battle axes as bracelet charms, her Bec de Corbins as hairsticks, and a battlehammer as a pendant, which earns her incredulous stares after she finds out that she wasn't supposed to bring weapons to the Vongola ball.]]
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* HiddenWeapons: Sonya disguises [[spoiler: several battle axes battleaxes as bracelet charms, her Bec de Corbins as hairsticks, and a battlehammer as a pendant, which earns her incredulous stares after she finds out that she wasn't supposed to bring weapons to the Vongola ball.]]
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* DistractedByTheSexy: Fon, by Sonya, repeatedly. Although of course Sonya is oblivious as always.
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* ObliviousToHints: Sonya, related to NoSocialSkills above.
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* ObliviousToHints: Sonya, related to NoSocialSkills above. Fon isn't, which causes Sonya to label him a pervert.
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* SexyShirtSwitch: [[spoiler: Sonya wakes up on Christmas morning wearing Renato's shirt as a pajama. Which leads to the servants to believe that they are sleeping together. What they don't know is that Sonya stole the shirt the ''year'' ''before'', when she had to disguise herself as a male to keep Shamal out of trouble, and she simply kept it because it was too comfortable.]]
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* SexyShirtSwitch: [[spoiler: Sonya wakes up on Christmas morning wearing Renato's shirt as a pajama.sleepwear. Which leads to the servants to believe that they are sleeping together. What they don't know is that Sonya stole the shirt the ''year'' ''before'', when she had to disguise herself as a male to keep Shamal out of trouble, and she simply kept it because it was too comfortable.]]
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* AmbiguousGender: [[spoiler: Viper]], as in canon. This causes Cherep some PronounTrouble, although it doesn't stop them from becoming friends.
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* AmbiguousGender: [[spoiler: Viper]], as in canon.canon, although they decide to appear more feminine until confronted by Sonya and Cherep. This causes Cherep some PronounTrouble, although it doesn't stop them from becoming friends.
