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* MustMakeAmends: On his first day of superheroics, Ren can't bring himself to accost a young girl stealing to survive, to the displeasure of the food stall owner she just stole him. Rather than walk away, he goes to the shopkeeper and pays for everything she stole with interest to keep everyone out of trouble.

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* MustMakeAmends: On his first day of superheroics, Ren can't bring himself to accost a young girl stealing to survive, to the displeasure of the food stall owner she just stole him.from. Rather than walk away, he goes to the shopkeeper and pays for everything she stole with interest to keep everyone out of trouble.

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* AfraidOfTheirOwnStrength: After seeing how easily Soul-Crushing Strike can break a man's arm, Ren is terrified of doing anything worse to someone. That's what he keeps Thou Shalt Not Kill, lest he accidentally kill someone by mistake.



* EveryManHasHisPrice: On his first day of superheroics, Ren can't bring himself to accost a young girl stealing to survive. Rather than walk away, he goes to the shopkeeper and pays for everything she stole with interest to keep everyone out of trouble.


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* MustMakeAmends: On his first day of superheroics, Ren can't bring himself to accost a young girl stealing to survive, to the displeasure of the food stall owner she just stole him. Rather than walk away, he goes to the shopkeeper and pays for everything she stole with interest to keep everyone out of trouble.
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That's what Ren Song is thinking when he accepts a sponsorship to enter the shady VIP room in the back of one of Gotham's casino's. As a kid with little to his name but a knack for gambling (and cheating), the chance to come away with the jackpot to support his parents is [[TooDesperateToBePicky too good to refuse]].

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That's what Ren Song is thinking when he accepts a sponsorship to enter the shady VIP room in the back of one of Gotham's casino's.illegal casinos. As a kid with little to his name but a knack for gambling (and cheating), the chance to come away with the jackpot to support his parents is [[TooDesperateToBePicky too good to refuse]].



* EveryManHasHisPrice: On his first day of superheroing, Ren can't bring himself to accost a young girl stealing to survive. Rather than walk away, he goes to the shopkeeper and pays for everything she stole with interest to keep everyone out of trouble.

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* EveryManHasHisPrice: On his first day of superheroing, superheroics, Ren can't bring himself to accost a young girl stealing to survive. Rather than walk away, he goes to the shopkeeper and pays for everything she stole with interest to keep everyone out of trouble.

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* BulletproofVest: The super suit Ren purchases from his prestige point shop is a spandex bodysuit with armor plates fitted over it to protect him from bullets.



** After a Triad shoots a mob crook he'd been fighting dead, Ren's super identity quickly garners infamy as a killer. The crippling effects of Soul-Crushing Strike only worsen his reputation, much to Ren's dismay. He wonders how Batman deals with bad press like this. At the least, his new viral presence on the internet gives him a lot of prestige points.

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** After a Triad shoots a mob crook he'd been fighting dead, Ren's super identity quickly garners infamy as a killer. The crippling effects of [[ArmorPiercingAttack Soul-Crushing Strike Strike]] only worsen his reputation, reputation as "the Breaker" who leaves his opponents with crippling injuries, much to Ren's dismay. He wonders how Batman deals with bad press like this. At the least, his new viral presence on the internet [[PopularityPower gives him a lot of prestige points.points to work with]].


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* SerialEscalation: According to the author, the variety and general effectiveness of Ren's new skills will go up as his fame grows. Ren might go from SupernaturalMartialArts to more impressive abilities like [[BlowYouAway airbending]]. In addition, Ren can invest prestige points into skills that he already has to make them more useful.

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* AdamSmithHatesYourGuts: Ren is frustrated to find that his prestige point shop charges high for products he needs like body armor. To make matters worse, he can only sell them back for a fraction of the prestige points he paid to buy them.



* AdamSmithHatesYourGuts: Ren is frustrated to find that his prestige point shop charges high for products he needs like body armor. To make matters worse, he can only sell them back for a fraction of the prestige points he paid to buy them.



* ComesGreatResponsibility: Following the second attempt on his life, Ren resolves to use his powers to defend his parents from Black Mask rather than any kind of self-benefit. His sense of morality soon motivates him to go on patrol in Gotham's Chinatown and Koreatown, knowing that he would hate himself if he let something happen when he could do something about it.
-->'''Ren:''' If there was a rape or a murder? If it happened nearby? Right when I decided to shrug my shoulders and go home? [[ItsAllMyFault I would hate myself.]]



* EveryManHasHisPrice: On his first day of superheroing, Ren can't bring himself to accost a young girl stealing to survive, so rather than simply walk away, he goes to the shopkeeper and pays for everything she stole with interest to keep everyone out of trouble.

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* EveryManHasHisPrice: On his first day of superheroing, Ren can't bring himself to accost a young girl stealing to survive, so rather survive. Rather than simply walk away, he goes to the shopkeeper and pays for everything she stole with interest to keep everyone out of trouble.



* {{Foreshadowing}}: Ren's parents are extremely uncomfortable about talking about his uncle, to the point of pretending he didn't exist until he paid for Ren's medical bills. Ren is baffled by this, but doesn't think too hard about it because of how much of a conversational landmine it clearly is. [[spoiler:This is because Ren's uncle is a Triad, a criminal and a murderer.]]

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Ren's parents are extremely uncomfortable about when talking about his uncle, to the point of pretending he didn't exist until he paid for Ren's medical bills. Ren is baffled by this, but doesn't think too hard about it because of how much of a conversational landmine it clearly is. [[spoiler:This is because Ren's uncle is a Triad, a criminal and a murderer.]]
** The Snake-Flower Triads are also unusually cooperative with Ren, with the stranger Lei paying for Ren's entry into Black Mask's VIP room. Then in his first large fight, Ren is "helped" by a Triad member who shoots a man Ren was fighting dead before giving him an affirmative nod, which is odd given that Ren is acting as a vigilante superhero and could have easily gone for him next. [[spoiler:This is another hint to Ren's uncle being a member of the Triads.
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* GoodWithNumbers: Downplayed. According to Ren, his grades are nothing to be impressed by. But he's clearly studied up on probability and statistics to the point of calculating the likelihood of what the next card is in a game of Blackjack. Due to his own streak of bad luck, he relies much more on math than good fortune when gambling.



* LegitimateBusinessmensSocialClub: Ren learns that a 24-hour diner is a front for the Snake-Flower Triads, making it a target for Black Mask's mafia. But it also means that there are ordinary people inside, springing Ren into action before Black Mask can light the place up with bullets.



* NaiveNewcomer: Despite living in Gotham, Ren has a certain idealistic streak that hopes everything will turn out alright. This idealism is what got him tangled up in the MobWar in the first place, as his dream of winning big and taking his earnings home brings him face-to-face with Black Mask. After getting superpowers, he starts his crusade with the hope that he'll be able to stop Black Mask despite being woefully inexperienced and largely outgunned. This part of him is quickly challenged by the realities of superhero work. He lets himself get mugged after seeing a gun again triggers his PTSD. He watches a man he tried to incapacitate non-lethally get shot in the middle of a MobWar. Then said war escalates as a result of his actions and he's branded a villain by the internet due to multiple cases of NotWhatItLooksLike. He chastises himself multiple times for his naivete, but continues to stubbornly stick to ThouShaltNotKill and minimizes collateral damage whenever he can.

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* NaiveNewcomer: Despite living in Gotham, [[WretchedHive Gotham]], Ren has a certain idealistic streak that hopes everything will turn out alright. This idealism is what got him tangled up in the MobWar in the first place, as his dream of winning big and taking his earnings home brings him face-to-face with Black Mask. After getting superpowers, he starts his crusade with the hope that he'll be able to stop Black Mask despite being woefully inexperienced and largely outgunned. This part of him is quickly challenged by the realities of superhero work. He lets himself get mugged after seeing a gun again triggers his PTSD. He watches a man he tried to incapacitate non-lethally get shot in the middle of a MobWar. Then said war escalates as a result of his actions and he's branded a villain by the internet due to multiple cases of NotWhatItLooksLike. He chastises himself multiple times for his naivete, but continues to stubbornly stick to ThouShaltNotKill and minimizes collateral damage whenever he can.



* PopularityPower: Ren's abilities run off how well-known he is. The more fame (or infamy) he gains, the more "prestige points" he has to spend to gain new skills, buy equipment, and improve his stats. Because of this, he has to engineer situations where he can get a drone to record his actions to upload to the internet to improve his powers and gain new ones while trying to keep his SecretIdentity safe.

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* PopularityPower: Ren's abilities run off how well-known he is. The more fame (or infamy) he gains, the more "prestige points" he has to spend to gain new skills, buy equipment, and improve his stats. Because of this, he has to engineer situations where he can get make a drone name for himself to record improve his actions to upload powers, whether it's filming himself with some remote drones and uploading those videos to the internet to improve his powers and gain new ones while trying to keep his SecretIdentity safe.or getting famous passively from whatever news people make about him.



* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: After being nearly shot dead by Black Mask and seeing Alice get shot to death by an assassin aiming for him, Ren has an understandable fear of guns. The mere sight of one makes him freeze up and meekly fork over cash despite having superpowers, and it's only his frustration at being helpless before one that gets him over this fear. Even then, his fear isn't completely gone, as he still grumbles over how many guns there are in Gotham, he's just not completely paralyzed by the sight of them anymore.

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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: After being nearly shot dead by Black Mask and seeing Alice get shot to death by an assassin aiming for him, Ren has an understandable fear of guns. The mere sight of one makes him freeze up and meekly fork over cash to a mugger despite having superpowers, and it's only his frustration at being helpless before one that gets him over this fear. Even then, his fear isn't completely gone, as he still grumbles over how many guns there are in Gotham, he's just not completely paralyzed by the sight of them anymore.


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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatResponsibility: Following the second attempt on his life, Ren resolves to use his powers to defend his parents from Black Mask rather than any kind of self-benefit. His sense of morality soon motivates him to go on patrol in Gotham's Chinatown and Koreatown, knowing that he would hate himself if he let something happen when he could do something about it.
-->'''Ren:''' If there was a rape or a murder? If it happened nearby? Right when I decided to shrug my shoulders and go home? [[ItsAllMyFault I would hate myself.]]
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* MusclesAreMeaningful: Ren's muscles grow in accordance with his strength stat. His six-month coma caused his strength to dwindle to a mere 2, but putting points in strength helped him stand again in a few days rather than months. Getting his strength to 20 gives him freedom of mobility and below-average, while dumping 30 more points into it causes him to gain twenty pounds of muscle overnight, leaving him looking and feeling better than he had before he was shot. With the help of his powers, he's soon performing complex acrobatics and knocking common crooks to the floor with a single hit.

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* MusclesAreMeaningful: Ren's muscles grow in accordance with his strength stat. His six-month coma caused his strength to dwindle to a mere 2, but putting points in strength helped him stand again in a few days rather than months. Getting his strength to 20 gives him freedom of mobility and below-average, a below-average physique, while dumping 30 more points into it causes him to gain twenty pounds of muscle overnight, leaving him looking and feeling better than he had before he was shot. With the help of his powers, he's soon performing complex acrobatics and knocking common crooks to the floor with a single hit.



* WrongContextMagic: The source of Ren's powers is a mystery. He's never had any kind of empowering accidents except for being shot in the head, and he's tests negative for the metagene. He also has no knowledge or relationship with magic or the supernatural prior to obtaining his powers.

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* WrongContextMagic: The source of Ren's powers is a mystery. He's never had any kind of empowering accidents except for being shot in the head, head and he's tests negative for the metagene. He also has no knowledge or relationship with magic or the supernatural prior to obtaining his powers.

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* TooDesperateToBePicky: Although he knows that common sense should tell him to say no, the potential payout from winning in the exclusive VIP room is too much for Ren to ignore.
* TheTriadsAndTheTongs: The Snake-Flower Triads compete with Black Mask's mafia for control of Gotham City's Chinatown. While they're still ruthless crooks that Ren has little sympathy for, they come across as ALighterShadeOfBlack, given how one Triad seems to shoot a guy Ren had incapacitated to help him, nodding at him in affirmation. [[spoiler:Then it's revealed that Ren's uncle is a member and a loaded one at that, having paid for all of Ren's medical bills.]]



* TooDesperateToBePicky: Ren ''knows'' that entering the shady VIP room in an illegal casino is a bad idea, especially when he knows he's BornUnlucky. But the hope of coming home with a sack of cash large enough to solve all of his family's money problems is too much for him to pass up.

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* TooDesperateToBePicky: Ren ''knows'' that entering the shady VIP room in an illegal casino is a bad idea, especially when he knows he's BornUnlucky. But the hope of coming home with a sack of cash large enough to solve all of his family's money problems is too much for him to pass up.up, so he agrees to go in in violation of his own common sense.


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* TheTriadsAndTheTongs: The Snake-Flower Triads compete with Black Mask's mafia for control of Gotham City's Chinatown. While they're still ruthless crooks that Ren has little sympathy for, they come across as ALighterShadeOfBlack, given how one Triad seems to shoot a guy Ren had incapacitated to help him, nodding at him in affirmation. [[spoiler:Then it's revealed that Ren's uncle is a member and a loaded one at that, having paid for all of Ren's medical bills.]]
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-->'''Ren:''' I should just take my money and leave. I’ve made enough. I tried to convince myself. Twenty thousand with a five thousand bet, thanks to winning the split. It wasn’t enough. Nowhere near enough. Not even close.


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* TooDesperateToBePicky: Ren ''knows'' that entering the shady VIP room in an illegal casino is a bad idea, especially when he knows he's BornUnlucky. But the hope of coming home with a sack of cash large enough to solve all of his family's money problems is too much for him to pass up.
-->'''Ren:''' I knew, deep down, that I was making a mistake as stepped through the doors, but it was a mistake I couldn’t afford to pass up. If there was even the slightest possibility that it was real… In one afternoon, I could make every penny that I needed. I just needed the chance and this could be it.

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That's what Ren Song is thinking when he accepts a sponsorship to enter the shady VIP room in the back of one of Gotham's casino's. As a kid with little to his name but a knack for gambling (and cheating), the chance to come away with the jackpot to support his parents is [[AnOfferYouCantRefuse too good to refuse]].

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That's what Ren Song is thinking when he accepts a sponsorship to enter the shady VIP room in the back of one of Gotham's casino's. As a kid with little to his name but a knack for gambling (and cheating), the chance to come away with the jackpot to support his parents is [[AnOfferYouCantRefuse [[TooDesperateToBePicky too good to refuse]].



* BookDumb: Although his grades are middle-of-the-pack at best, Ren demonstrates a keen understanding of probability and can quickly crunch the numbers to weigh the risk vs. reward in casino games as well as the randomness of the skills and powers he gains.

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* BookDumb: Although his grades are middle-of-the-pack at best, Ren demonstrates a keen understanding of probability and can statistics, quickly crunch crunching the numbers to weigh the risk vs. reward in casino games as well as the randomness of the skills and powers he gains.



* BornUnlucky: Ren has always had poor luck. Between growing up in Gotham, getting shot by Black Mask, his repeated humiliating bouts of NotWhatItLooksLike tarnishing his reputation, it's hard to argue with him. But at the same time, he's thankful for having "all the luck in the world" for surviving two gunshot wounds to the head.
-->'''Ren:''' I always had rotten luck. If anything could go wrong around me, then it would. That was just a fact of life -- water was wet, fire was hot, and I had shit luck.



* NaiveNewcomer: Despite living in Gotham, Ren has a certain idealistic streak that hopes everything will turn out alright with his new powers to aid him. This part of him is quickly challenged by the realities of superhero work. He lets himself get mugged after seeing a gun again triggers his PTSD. He watches a man he tried to incapacitate non-lethally get shot in the middle of a MobWar. Then said war escalates as a result of his actions and he's branded a villain by the internet due to multiple cases of NotWhatItLooksLike. He chastises himself multiple times for his naivete, but continues to stubbornly stick to ThouShaltNotKill and minimizes collateral damage whenever he can.

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* NaiveNewcomer: Despite living in Gotham, Ren has a certain idealistic streak that hopes everything will turn out alright alright. This idealism is what got him tangled up in the MobWar in the first place, as his dream of winning big and taking his earnings home brings him face-to-face with Black Mask. After getting superpowers, he starts his new powers crusade with the hope that he'll be able to aid him.stop Black Mask despite being woefully inexperienced and largely outgunned. This part of him is quickly challenged by the realities of superhero work. He lets himself get mugged after seeing a gun again triggers his PTSD. He watches a man he tried to incapacitate non-lethally get shot in the middle of a MobWar. Then said war escalates as a result of his actions and he's branded a villain by the internet due to multiple cases of NotWhatItLooksLike. He chastises himself multiple times for his naivete, but continues to stubbornly stick to ThouShaltNotKill and minimizes collateral damage whenever he can.


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* ScarsAreForever: Ren gains two distinctive scars on his forehead where Black Mask shoots him, one near his ear and another that drags along his hairline. He covers this with a hood while out as a vigilante because they're unique enough to give away his SecretIdentity.


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* TooDesperateToBePicky: Although he knows that common sense should tell him to say no, the potential payout from winning in the exclusive VIP room is too much for Ren to ignore.

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** Subverted with Ren's FlashStep. While it gives him a burst of speed that lets him cross short distances nigh-instantly, he doesn't have the reaction speed to respond during this time and has to way until he slows down to properly throw a punch. His inability to turn means that he can't use this if someone is in the way, lest he crash into them.

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** Subverted with Ren's FlashStep. While it gives him a burst of speed that lets him cross short distances nigh-instantly, he doesn't have the reaction speed to respond during this time and has to way wait until he slows down to properly throw a punch. His inability to turn means that he can't use this if someone is in the way, lest he crash into them.



* SacrificialLamb: Alice is portrayed as a kind, devoted, and compassionate physical therapist who cheerfully encourages Ren as he tries to get his life back. It makes it all the more tragic when she's shot to death by an assassin sent to kill him, motivating him to take on Black Mask with his new superpowers.



* WithGreatPowerComesGreatHotness: Ren notices that he gets noticeably more muscular while increasing his Strength stat. This is most noticeable after he decides to dump 30 points in Strength all at once, resulting in him packing on twenty pounds of muscle all at once. Upping his Charisma also makes him look better in general, removing pimples, giving him a more pronounced jawline, and making his hair shinier following his six-month coma.
* WouldHurtAChild: Black Mask thinks nothing of shooting Ren, a sixteen-year-old who had no idea Black Mask owned the casino, out of the belief that Ren was a Triad.

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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: After being nearly shot dead by Black Mask and seeing Alice get shot to death by an assassin aiming for him, Ren has an understandable fear of guns. The mere sight of one makes him freeze up and meekly fork over cash despite having superpowers, and it's only his frustration at being helpless before one that gets him over this fear. Even then, his fear isn't completely gone, as he still grumbles over how many guns there are in Gotham, he's just not completely paralyzed by the sight of them anymore.
-->'''Ren:''' I just… really, really, really wish that it was harder for people to get their hands on guns.
* WithGreatPowerComesGreatHotness: Ren notices that he gets noticeably more muscular while increasing his Strength stat. This is most noticeable after he decides to dump 30 points in Strength all at once, resulting in him packing on twenty pounds of muscle all at once.once overnight. Upping his Charisma also makes him look better in general, removing pimples, giving him a more pronounced jawline, and making his hair shinier following his six-month coma.
* WouldHurtAChild: Black Mask thinks nothing of shooting Ren, a sixteen-year-old who had no idea Black Mask owned the casino, out of the belief that Ren was a Triad. The callousness with which he does it implies that he wouldn't care either way.

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* ClarkKenting: Inverted. Ren is by his own admission a nobody, but he goes the extra mile to disguise himself as a vigilante, hiding his hair InTheHood, wearing a face mask, and putting on contacts to change the color of his eyes. He also wears baggy clothes to avoid drawing attention to his rapid recovery from his six-month coma. Despite all this, [[spoiler:his uncle, a Triad he never met, deduces his identity fairly easily.]]

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* ClarkKenting: Inverted. Ren is by his own admission a nobody, but he goes the extra mile to disguise himself as a vigilante, hiding his hair InTheHood, wearing a face mask, and putting on contacts to change the color of his eyes. He also wears baggy clothes to avoid drawing attention to his rapid recovery from his six-month coma. Despite all this, [[spoiler:his uncle, a Triad he he's never met, deduces his identity fairly easily.]]



* ComesGreatResponsibility: Following the second attempt on his life, Ren resolves to use his powers to defend his parents from Black Mask rather than any kind of self-benefit.

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* ComesGreatResponsibility: Following the second attempt on his life, Ren resolves to use his powers to defend his parents from Black Mask rather than any kind of self-benefit. His sense of morality soon motivates him to go on patrol in Gotham's Chinatown and Koreatown, knowing that he would hate himself if he let something happen when he could do something about it.
-->'''Ren:''' If there was a rape or a murder? If it happened nearby? Right when I decided to shrug my shoulders and go home? [[ItsAllMyFault I would hate myself.]]



* CowardlyLion: While Ren has been in his fair share of scuffles before, he's initially terrified of entering real firefights, to the point that the sight of a gun is enough to stop him in his tracks. Superpowers or not, he's no Superman and he certainly isn't ImmuneToBullets. Despite this, his desire to change his own life and protect others wins out, and he soon throws himself into the thick of it to disrupt Black Mask's plans. He then proves himself surprisingly capable and crafty with his new powers and does surprisingly well against armed mobsters despite his own fear of getting shot again.



* EveryManHasHisPrice: On his first day of superheroing, Ren can't bring himself to accost a young girl stealing to survive, so rather than simply walk away, he goes to the shopkeeper and pays for everything she stole with interest to keep everyone out of trouble.



* GoodIsNotSoft: Zigzagged. Ren is a fundamentally nice person and squeamish at the thought of leaving someone with crippling injuries. But his Soul-Crushing Strike is the best attack in his arsenal in his early days as a vigilante, and he's more than willing to use it if it means people won't end up dead.
* HarmfulToMinors: As if getting shot in the head wasn't bad enough, he witnesses Alice getting shot to death by an assassin sent by Black Mask and later watches another man die to a gunshot after trying to defeat him non-lethally. He's also mugged at gunpoint, triggering his lingering PTSD from his first two encounters with guns, and later enters multiple firefights while trying to stop the gang war he unintentionally helped cause.



* MagikarpPower: Due to the way his power works, Ren wonders if he could make himself as strong as ComicBook/{{Superman}} one day as he keeps acquiring new abilities and upping his stats. But in the present, he's only about as strong as reasonably fit teenager and is very much lacking in NighInvulnerability. In addition, several of his powers are useless in direct combat, such as Multilingual and Driving.

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* MagikarpPower: Due to the way his power works, Ren wonders if he could make himself as strong as ComicBook/{{Superman}} one day as he keeps acquiring new abilities and upping his stats. But in the present, he's only about as strong as reasonably fit teenager and is very much lacking in NighInvulnerability. In addition, several of his powers are useless in direct combat, such as Multilingual and Driving.Driving.
-->'''Ren:''' Currently, I was below average in every physical stat, but how high could I raise them? Did I top out at ten times stronger than a normal human? A hundred? A thousand? Did I have a limit at all? Could I be as strong as Superman? I didn't know, and I couldn't know until I hit some kind of stat cap, if I ever did. All of which was fantastic, but it didn't help me with my current situation. It didn't matter if I could be as strong as Superman in the future if I died today for being a weakling. Potential didn't matter unless it was realized.



* NaiveNewcomer: Despite living in Gotham, Ren has a certain idealistic streak that hopes everything will turn out alright with his new powers to aid him. This part of him is quickly challenged by the realities of superhero work. He lets himself get mugged after seeing a gun again triggers his PTSD. He watches a man he tried to incapacitate non-lethally get shot in the middle of a MobWar. Then said war escalates as a result of his actions and he's branded a villain by the internet due to multiple cases of NotWhatItLooksLike. He chastises himself multiple times for his naivete, but continues to stubbornly stick to ThouShaltNotKill and minimizes collateral damage whenever he can.



* NothingButSkinAndBones: A six-month coma leaves Ren emaciated and so weak that he has to relearn how to walk and stand. Luckily, his ability helps him build muscle quickly by dumping his prestige points into strength, letting him recover and return home within a month of waking up.

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* NothingButSkinAndBones: A six-month coma leaves Ren so emaciated and so weak that he has to relearn how to walk and stand. Luckily, his ability helps him build muscle quickly by dumping his prestige points into strength, letting him recover and return home within a month of waking up.



-->'''Ren:''' God, it totally looks like I'm mugging this guy.

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-->'''Ren:''' [[LampshadeHanging God, it totally looks like I'm mugging this guy.]]



* ThouShaltNotKill: Enforced by the skill of the same name. "Thou Shalt Not Kill" prevents Ren from ever killing his opponents so long as their brains are intact. This means that attacks that would otherwise lead to massive internal bleeding and death will "merely" cripple his opponent. He initially considers selling this, but after seeing the results of Soul-Crushing Strike firsthand, he opts not to, as he simply isn't mentally or emotionally prepared to end someone's life.

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* ThouShaltNotKill: Enforced by the skill of the same name. "Thou Thou Shalt Not Kill" Kill prevents Ren from ever killing his opponents so long as their brains are intact. This means that attacks that would otherwise lead to massive internal bleeding and death will "merely" cripple his opponent. He initially considers selling this, but after seeing the results of Soul-Crushing Strike firsthand, he opts not to, as he simply isn't mentally or emotionally prepared to end someone's life.


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* WretchedHive: Gotham City, natch. As Ren says, Gotham is infamous for its crime rate and you'd be forgiven for thinking you would be mugged a dozen times over while walking down the street. The air is full of smog and the light pollution is so prevalent that Ren has never seen the stars with his own eyes before. That's not even taking into account the supervillains and gangs rampaging every other day.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Ren becomes known as "the Breaker" on the internet for leaving his opponents with broken bones that will never heal properly. The threatening label along with accusations of him being a villain stings when he's risking his life trying to stop an evil mobster and his gang.

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* BadPowersGoodPeople: Soul-Crushing Strike is guaranteed to smash bone is such a way that it will never heal properly. It can't be blocked properly through martial arts and is delivered with a simple punch. Ren only ever uses it to incapacitate mobsters who don't think twice about murdering others. Even then, he purposefully avoids hitting the legs, chest, and head to avoid turning them into vegetables or preventing them from walking.



* InSeriesNickname: Due to his tendency to leave his opponents with broken bones that won't ever heal correctly, Ren's super identity becomes known s "the Breaker" on the internet.

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* ClassicalAntiHero: Ren starts the story as a nebbish guy with no friends and no money. He's not particularly confident in himself and agonizes over his own mistakes. He isn't especially brave even with his powers, but his desire to help [[CowardlyLion overcomes his fear of being hurt.]]



* ItsAllMyFault: Ren blames himself for Alice's death, as she was caught in the middle of an attempt on his life.

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* ItsAllMyFault: Ren blames himself for Alice's death, as she was caught in the middle of an attempt on his life. He also blames himself for the renewed gang war between Black Mask's mafia and the Snake-Flower Triads, motivating him to dive into the fray to stop Black Mask from shooting up a diner filled with innocent people.



* PlayingTheVictimCard: After Ren breaks the arm of the guy who mugged him, the mugger declares that ''he's'' the one getting mugged while coming up with a sob story about how Ren is taking his niece's birthday money. Ren tries to point out the issues with this guy's story, namely that he's holding a gun in plain sight, but his words fall on deaf ears. Ren is then forced to flee, discovering that footage of the incident is filled with comments about what a loser he is for mugging a guy.

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* PlayingTheVictimCard: After Ren breaks the arm of the guy who mugged him, the mugger declares that ''he's'' the one getting mugged while coming up with a sob story about how Ren is taking his niece's birthday money. Ren tries to point out the issues with this guy's story, namely that he's the mugger is holding a gun in plain sight, but his words fall on deaf ears. Ren is then forced to flee, discovering later learning that footage of the incident is filled with comments about what a loser he is for mugging a guy.
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* TheTriadsAndTheTongs: The Snake-Flower Triads compete with Black Mask's mafia for control of Gotham City's Chinatown. While they're still ruthless crooks that Ren has little sympathy for, they come across as a LighterShadeOfBlack, given how one Triad seems to shoot a guy Ren had incapacitated to help him, nodding at him in affirmation. [[spoiler:Then it's revealed that Ren's uncle is a member and a loaded one at that.]]

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* TheTriadsAndTheTongs: The Snake-Flower Triads compete with Black Mask's mafia for control of Gotham City's Chinatown. While they're still ruthless crooks that Ren has little sympathy for, they come across as a LighterShadeOfBlack, ALighterShadeOfBlack, given how one Triad seems to shoot a guy Ren had incapacitated to help him, nodding at him in affirmation. [[spoiler:Then it's revealed that Ren's uncle is a member and a loaded one at that.that, having paid for all of Ren's medical bills.]]

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* DoubleJump: This is one of the abilities Ren rolls after going viral from his first video.

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* DoubleJump: This is one of the abilities Ren rolls after going viral from his first video. He first uses this to land an axe kick on a mobster.



* MagikarpPower: Due to the way his power works, Ren wonders if he could make himself as strong as ComicBook/{{Superman}} one day as he keeps acquiring new abilities and upping his stats. But in the present, he's only about as strong as reasonably fit teenager and is very much lacking in NighInvulnerability. In addition, several of his powers are useless in direct combat, such as Multilingual and Driving.



* SimpleYetAwesome: Soul-Crushing Strike is a simple punch that strikes with bone-breaking force and Ren's most-used combat skill. It's a no-frills attack powerful enough to incapacitate any non-superpowered mobster by crushing their bones and can't be blocked through martial arts. There's no apparent cost or requirement to use it, and the only noticeable downsides are the loud bang it makes upon use and Ren's own squeamishness over potentially crippling someone for life.

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* SimpleYetAwesome: Soul-Crushing Strike is a simple punch that strikes with bone-breaking force and Ren's most-used combat skill. It's a no-frills attack powerful enough to incapacitate any non-superpowered mobster by crushing their bones and can't be blocked through martial arts. There's no apparent cost or requirement to use it, and the The only noticeable downsides are the loud bang it makes upon use and Ren's own squeamishness over potentially crippling someone for life.

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* ButHeSoundsHandsome: After his super identity becomes known as "the Breaker" on the internet, Ren feels the need to defend himself to his dad, who had referred to him as a "dangerous metahuman". Try as he might, Ren can't really say anything good about leaving several men with crippling injuries.



* CastFromStamina: Ren's powers seem to be taken from his own energy reserves. Using FlashStep and Soul-Crushing Strike in rapid succession over the course of a 40-second firefight leaves him winded and gasping for air despite not taking any hits.



* {{Foreshadowing}}: Ren's parents are extremely uncomfortable about talking about his uncle, to the point of pretending he didn't exist until he paid for Ren's medical bills. Ren is baffled by this, but doesn't think too hard about it because of how much of a conversational landmine it clearly is. [[spoiler:This is because Ren's uncle is a Triad, a criminal and a murderer.]]



* HeroicRROD: Using FlashStep in rapid succession makes Ren's ankles ache. In addition, using his skills in rapid succession wears him out. A 40-second firefight where he uses Flash Step and Soul-Crushing Strike repeatedly leaves him winded and gulping for air.

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* HeroicRROD: Using FlashStep in rapid succession makes Ren's ankles ache. In addition, using his skills in rapid succession [[CastFromStamina wears him out.out]]. A 40-second firefight where he uses Flash Step and Soul-Crushing Strike repeatedly leaves him winded and gulping for air.



** After a Triad shoots a mob crook he'd been fighting dead, Ren's super identity quickly garners infamy as a killer, much to Ren's dismay. He wonders how Batman deals with bad press like this. At the least, his new viral presence on the internet gives him a lot of prestige points.

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** After a Triad shoots a mob crook he'd been fighting dead, Ren's super identity quickly garners infamy as a killer, killer. The crippling effects of Soul-Crushing Strike only worsen his reputation, much to Ren's dismay. He wonders how Batman deals with bad press like this. At the least, his new viral presence on the internet gives him a lot of prestige points.



* InSeriesNickname: Due to his tendency to leave his opponents with broken bones that won't ever heal correctly, Ren's super identity becomes known s "the Breaker" on the internet.



* PerpetualFrowner: As an UnluckyEveryman, Ren has a permanent scowl on his face by default. It makes him look older than he actually is, allowing him to enter casinos despite being underage at sixteen.

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* PerpetualFrowner: As an UnluckyEveryman, UnluckyEverydude, Ren has a permanent scowl on his face by default. It makes him look older than he actually is, allowing him to enter casinos despite being underage at sixteen.



* ProfessionalHitman: Subverted. Ren is nearly killed by a homeless man with a gun, who Ren lampshades as looking nothing like the assassins he expected. According to the GCPD, this is Black Mask's standard MO for getting rid of loose ends, as the desperate are easily convinced to kill others for a thousand bucks. The fact that the assailant is a random hobo means that it's impossible to prove decisively that Black Mask is responsible as the payment was made in cash.

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* ProfessionalHitman: ProfessionalKiller: Subverted. Ren is nearly killed by a homeless man with a gun, who Ren lampshades as looking nothing like the assassins he expected. According to the GCPD, this is Black Mask's standard MO for getting rid of loose ends, as the desperate are easily convinced to kill others for a thousand bucks. The fact that the assailant is a random hobo means that it's impossible to prove decisively that Black Mask is responsible as the payment was made in cash.



* WhamLine: Ren is stopped in his tracks when he meets his uncle, who warmly greets him [[spoiler:as a member of the Triads.]]

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* WhamLine: Ren is stopped in his tracks when he meets his estranged uncle, who warmly greets him [[spoiler:as a member of the Triads.]]

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* HeroicRROD: Using FlashStep in rapid succession makes Ren's ankles ache.

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* HeroicRROD: Using FlashStep in rapid succession makes Ren's ankles ache. In addition, using his skills in rapid succession wears him out. A 40-second firefight where he uses Flash Step and Soul-Crushing Strike repeatedly leaves him winded and gulping for air.



* MusclesAreMeaningful: Ren's muscles grow in accordance with his strength stat. His six-month coma caused his strength to dwindle to a mere 2, but putting points in strength helped him stand again in a few days rather than months. Getting his strength to 20 gives him freedom of mobility and a healthy, if thin build, while dumping 30 more points into it causes him to gain twenty pounds of muscle overnight, leaving him looking and feeling better than he had before he was shot. With the help of his powers, he's soon performing complex acrobatics and knocking common crooks to the floor with a single hit.

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* MusclesAreMeaningful: Ren's muscles grow in accordance with his strength stat. His six-month coma caused his strength to dwindle to a mere 2, but putting points in strength helped him stand again in a few days rather than months. Getting his strength to 20 gives him freedom of mobility and a healthy, if thin build, below-average, while dumping 30 more points into it causes him to gain twenty pounds of muscle overnight, leaving him looking and feeling better than he had before he was shot. With the help of his powers, he's soon performing complex acrobatics and knocking common crooks to the floor with a single hit.



* PlayingTheVictimCard: After Ren breaks the arm of the guy who mugged him, the mugger declares that ''he's'' the one getting mugged while coming up with a sob story about how Ren is taking his niece's birthday money. Ren tries to point out the issues with this guy's story, namely that he's holding a gun in plain sight, but his words fall on deaf ears. Ren is then forced to flee, discovering that footage of the incident is filled with comments about what a loser he is for mugging a guy.



* RequiredSecondaryPowers: Discussed. While mulling over the weirdness of his gamer powers, Ren notes that abilities like Thou Shalt Not Kill aren't ''too'' weird to wrap his head around, given that Superman must clearly have some kind of tactile telekinesis to avoid ripping every plane he catches in half.

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Discussed. While mulling over the weirdness of his gamer powers, Ren notes that abilities like Thou Shalt Not Kill aren't ''too'' weird to wrap his head around, given that Superman must clearly have some kind of tactile telekinesis to avoid ripping every plane he catches in half.half.
** Subverted with Ren's FlashStep. While it gives him a burst of speed that lets him cross short distances nigh-instantly, he doesn't have the reaction speed to respond during this time and has to way until he slows down to properly throw a punch. His inability to turn means that he can't use this if someone is in the way, lest he crash into them.


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* SickeningCrunch: Ren hears this whenever he breaks someone's bones via Soul-Crushing Strike.


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* TheTriadsAndTheTongs: The Snake-Flower Triads compete with Black Mask's mafia for control of Gotham City's Chinatown. While they're still ruthless crooks that Ren has little sympathy for, they come across as a LighterShadeOfBlack, given how one Triad seems to shoot a guy Ren had incapacitated to help him, nodding at him in affirmation. [[spoiler:Then it's revealed that Ren's uncle is a member and a loaded one at that.]]


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* WouldHurtAChild: Black Mask thinks nothing of shooting Ren, a sixteen-year-old who had no idea Black Mask owned the casino, out of the belief that Ren was a Triad.

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* ClarkKenting: Averted. Ren is by his own admission a nobody, but he goes the extra mile to disguise himself as a vigilante, doing everything from going InTheHood, to wearing a face mask, to putting on contacts to change the color of his eyes. Despite all this, [[spoiler:his uncle deduces his identity fairly easily.]]

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* ClarkKenting: Averted. Inverted. Ren is by his own admission a nobody, but he goes the extra mile to disguise himself as a vigilante, doing everything from going hiding his hair InTheHood, to wearing a face mask, to and putting on contacts to change the color of his eyes. He also wears baggy clothes to avoid drawing attention to his rapid recovery from his six-month coma. Despite all this, [[spoiler:his uncle uncle, a Triad he never met, deduces his identity fairly easily.]]



* FateWorseThanDeath: Discussed. Ren avoid using Soul-Crushing Strike on anything but people's arms. He didn't want to test the limits of Thou Shalt Not Kill, and he considers being a vegetable a fate worse than just killing them.



* HeroicRROD: Using FlashStep in rapid succession makes Ren's ankles ache.



* IHaveNoSon: Ren's father claimed to not have any siblings, leading to Ren's confusion when his father says that Ren's uncle helped pay for his hospital stay. [[spoiler:This is because said uncle is a member of the Snake-Flower Triads, recognizing Ren even in his disguise.]]

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* IHaveNoSon: Ren's father claimed to not have any siblings, leading to Ren's confusion when his father says that Ren's uncle helped pay for his hospital stay. Even the mere mention of him gets nothing but cold silence from Ren's parents. [[spoiler:This is because said uncle is a member of the Snake-Flower Triads, recognizing Ren even in his disguise.]]



* ProfessionalAssassin: Subverted. Ren is nearly killed by a homeless man with a gun, who Ren lampshades as looking nothing like the assassins he expected. According to the GCPD, this is Black Mask's standard MO for getting rid of loose ends, as the desperate are easily convinced to kill others for a thousand bucks. The fact that the assailant is a random hobo means that it's impossible to prove decisively that Black Mask is responsible as the payment was made in cash.

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* ProfessionalAssassin: ThePowerOfCreation: Due to the way his power works, Ren's ability somehow turns his fame into real objects out of thin air.
* ProfessionalHitman:
Subverted. Ren is nearly killed by a homeless man with a gun, who Ren lampshades as looking nothing like the assassins he expected. According to the GCPD, this is Black Mask's standard MO for getting rid of loose ends, as the desperate are easily convinced to kill others for a thousand bucks. The fact that the assailant is a random hobo means that it's impossible to prove decisively that Black Mask is responsible as the payment was made in cash.


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* RequiredSecondaryPowers: Discussed. While mulling over the weirdness of his gamer powers, Ren notes that abilities like Thou Shalt Not Kill aren't ''too'' weird to wrap his head around, given that Superman must clearly have some kind of tactile telekinesis to avoid ripping every plane he catches in half.


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* TiredOfRunning: Between lingering PTSD from staring down the barrel of a gun twice and being a sixteen-year-old over his head in superheroing, Ren freezes up when he's mugged in an alleyway by a guy with a gun despite having superpowers. He learns to get over it through his desire to change his circumstances and anger at himself for being so helpless, breaking the man's arm and taking his money back. From then on he's able to jump into firefights with much less hesitation, though he's still careful to not get shot.
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* CareerEndingInjury: Invoked by Ren's Soul-Crushing Strike skill, a punch with explosive force that bypasses attempts to guard against it. Its name is apparently derived from how it crushed the dreams of many a martial artist by ruining them. When going out as a vigilante, this attack leaves multiple members of the mob crippled for life, something that [[MyGodWhatHaveIDione makes Ren uncomfortable.]]

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* CareerEndingInjury: Invoked by Ren's Soul-Crushing Strike skill, a punch with explosive force that bypasses attempts to guard against it. Its name is apparently derived from how it crushed the dreams of many a martial artist by ruining them. When going out as a vigilante, this attack leaves multiple members of the mob crippled for life, something that [[MyGodWhatHaveIDione [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone makes Ren uncomfortable.]]

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* AdamSmithHatesYourGuts: Ren is frustrated to find that his prestige point shop charges high for products he needs like body armor. To make matters worse, he can only sell them back for a fraction of the prestige points he paid to buy them.



* CareerEndingInjury: Invoked by Ren's Soul-Crushing Strike skill, a punch with explosive force that bypasses attempts to guard against it. Its name is apparently derived from how it crushed the dreams of many a martial artist by ruining them. When going out as a vigilante, this attack leaves multiple members of the mob crippled for life, something that makes Ren uncomfortable.

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* TheCameo: Renee Montoya, the future Question, and Harvey Bullock, a long-time critic but ally of Batman's, show up at the hospital to question Ren about the assassin that came after him.
* CareerEndingInjury: Invoked by Ren's Soul-Crushing Strike skill, a punch with explosive force that bypasses attempts to guard against it. Its name is apparently derived from how it crushed the dreams of many a martial artist by ruining them. When going out as a vigilante, this attack leaves multiple members of the mob crippled for life, something that [[MyGodWhatHaveIDione makes Ren uncomfortable.]]



* ClarkKenting: Averted. Ren is by his own admission a nobody, but he goes the extra mile to disguise himself as a vigilante, doing everything from going InTheHood, to wearing a face mask, to putting on contacts to change the color of his eyes. Despite all this, [[spoiler:his uncle deduces his identity fairly easily.]]



* DirtyCop: Subverted. Ren expects Detectives Renee Montoya and Harvey Bullock to press gang him into talking by dangling his underage gambling over his head, but they simply leave their contact information before letting him keep his silence. But the GCPD's reputation for being corrupt still doesn't assuage Ren's fears.



* DoubleJump: This is one of the abilities Ren rolls after going viral from his first video.



* FameThroughInfamy: Ren's power does not care if his publicity is good or bad, only that he's famous. As a result, good press will give him as much prestige as bad press. In fact, his first big boost of prestige is when he's caught on video apparently mugging a man who had held him at gunpoint earlier.

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* FameThroughInfamy: Ren's power does not care if his publicity is good or bad, only that he's famous. As a result, good press will give him as much prestige as bad press. In fact, his first big boost of prestige is when he's caught on video apparently mugging a man who had held him at gunpoint earlier. He then gets a huge prestige boost when he posts a video of him fighting a mobster, only to look like a murderer when a Triad offscreen shoots the man.



* MortonsFork: Ren is put in one of these after an assassin comes for his life. When the police question him, Ren is worried that spilling the beans would put his family in danger. On the other hand, keeping his silence would not necessarily stop Black Mask from coming after Ren again while impeding the police's efforts to stop Black Mask themselves. He ultimately chooses to keep his silence while planning to use his new superpowers to stop Black Mask personally.



* MusclesAreMeaningful: Ren's muscles grow in accordance with his strength stat. His six-month coma caused his strength to dwindle to a mere 2, but putting points in strength helped him stand again in a few days rather than months. Getting his strength to 20 gives him freedom of mobility and a healthy, if thin build, while dumping 30 more points into it causes him to gain twenty pounds of muscle overnight, leaving him looking and feeling better than he had before he was shot. With the help of his powers, he's soon performing complex acrobatics and knocking people to the floor with a single hit.

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* MusclesAreMeaningful: Ren's muscles grow in accordance with his strength stat. His six-month coma caused his strength to dwindle to a mere 2, but putting points in strength helped him stand again in a few days rather than months. Getting his strength to 20 gives him freedom of mobility and a healthy, if thin build, while dumping 30 more points into it causes him to gain twenty pounds of muscle overnight, leaving him looking and feeling better than he had before he was shot. With the help of his powers, he's soon performing complex acrobatics and knocking people common crooks to the floor with a single hit.



* NiceGuy: Ren is largely portrayed as a nice, well-meaning kid who is in over his head between his gambling habit, superpowers, and getting shot by Black Mask. He can't bring himself to stop a child in Koreatown who stole food out of necessity for herself, instead paying off the shopowner with interest. His crusade to stop Black Mask is motivated largely out of a desire to prevent anyone else from getting hurt rather than revenge, and he cringes at Soul-Crushing Strike's bone-breaking power.

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* NiceGuy: Ren is largely portrayed as a nice, well-meaning kid who is in over his head between his gambling habit, superpowers, and getting shot by Black Mask. He can't bring himself to stop a child in Koreatown who stole food out of necessity for herself, instead paying off the shopowner with interest. His crusade to stop Black Mask is motivated largely out of a desire to prevent anyone else from getting hurt rather than revenge, revenge (though making Black Mask regret not killing him is a bonus), and he cringes at Soul-Crushing Strike's bone-breaking power.power even while punching mobsters out to kill him.



* PainfulTransformation: Ren's powers, particularly when boosting physical stats like Strength, tend to modify his body in relation to the points he accrued. When learning skills, this leads to a pinching feeling in his brain. But after going viral and dumping a lot of points into his stats overall, the sudden change makes him feel like he's dying and every muscle goes taut as he gasps for air. The sensation is so excruciating that he blacks out afterward, waking up the following morning.

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* PainfulTransformation: Ren's powers, particularly when boosting physical stats like Strength, tend to modify his body in relation to the points he accrued. When learning skills, this leads to a pinching feeling in his brain.brain as he becomes an InstantExpert of whatever he just learned. But after going viral and dumping a lot of points into his stats overall, the sudden change makes him feel like he's dying and every muscle goes taut as he gasps for air. The sensation is so excruciating that he blacks out afterward, waking up the following morning.



* ProfessionalAssassin: Subverted. Ren is nearly killed by a homeless man with a gun, who Ren lampshades as looking nothing like the assassins he expected. According to the GCPD, this is Black Mask's standard MO for getting rid of loose ends, as the desperate are easily convinced to kill others for a thousand bucks. The fact that the assailant is a random hobo means that it's impossible to prove decisively that Black Mask is responsible as the payment was made in cash.



* RandomNumberGod: Although abilities are organized into "tiers" of general effectiveness, whatever powers Ren gets is largely up to chance, with the author stating that he rolls a die when it comes to determining what abilities Ren gets.

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* RandomNumberGod: Although abilities are organized into "tiers" of general effectiveness, whatever powers Ren gets is largely up to chance, with the author stating that he rolls a die when it comes to determining what abilities Ren gets. This means powers can be as mundane as being good at driving or speaking multiple languages, to more exciting like being able to DoubleJump, to damaging attacks like Soul-Crushing Strike.
* RedShirt: One of Ren's prestige ranks invokes this trope, being the next step up from Minor Character and just below Named Character, indicating that Ren's super identity is starting to become well-known in Gotham after his viral video of him fighting a mobster who gets shot dead.



* SimpleYetAwesome: Soul-Crushing Strike is a simple punch that strikes with bone-breaking force. It's a no-frills attack powerful enough to incapacitate any non-superpowered mobster and can't be blocked through martial arts.

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* SimpleYetAwesome: Soul-Crushing Strike is a simple punch that strikes with bone-breaking force. force and Ren's most-used combat skill. It's a no-frills attack powerful enough to incapacitate any non-superpowered mobster by crushing their bones and can't be blocked through martial arts.arts. There's no apparent cost or requirement to use it, and the only noticeable downsides are the loud bang it makes upon use and Ren's own squeamishness over potentially crippling someone for life.

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* CivvieSpandex: Ren wears a skintight bodysuit with armor plating beneath a hooded vest and cargo shorts while going out to investigate Black Mask.

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* CivvieSpandex: Ren wears a skintight bodysuit with armor plating beneath a hooded vest and cargo shorts while going out to investigate Black Mask. This is largely out of necessity, as wearing body armor under his clothes would be suspicious and wearing pants and a jacket over it would be hot and cumbersome. Meanwhile, going out in just the spandex body armor would make him conspicuous to the mobsters he's trying to stop.



* FaceOfAThug: Ren is a PerpetualFrowner whose face makes him look old enough to pass for an adult despite being only sixteen. Despite this, he's a well-meaning kid who loves his parents and tries to stop Black Mask to prevent him from hurting others rather than any sense of revenge.



* MusclesAreMeaningful: Ren's muscles grow in accordance with his strength stat. His six-month coma caused his strength to dwindle to a mere 2, but putting points in strength helped him stand again in a few days rather than months. Getting his strength to 20 gives him freedom of mobility and a healthy, if thin build, while dumping 30 more points into it causes him to gain twenty pounds of muscle overnight, leaving him looking and feeling better than he had before he was shot.

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* MusclesAreMeaningful: Ren's muscles grow in accordance with his strength stat. His six-month coma caused his strength to dwindle to a mere 2, but putting points in strength helped him stand again in a few days rather than months. Getting his strength to 20 gives him freedom of mobility and a healthy, if thin build, while dumping 30 more points into it causes him to gain twenty pounds of muscle overnight, leaving him looking and feeling better than he had before he was shot. With the help of his powers, he's soon performing complex acrobatics and knocking people to the floor with a single hit.


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* NiceGuy: Ren is largely portrayed as a nice, well-meaning kid who is in over his head between his gambling habit, superpowers, and getting shot by Black Mask. He can't bring himself to stop a child in Koreatown who stole food out of necessity for herself, instead paying off the shopowner with interest. His crusade to stop Black Mask is motivated largely out of a desire to prevent anyone else from getting hurt rather than revenge, and he cringes at Soul-Crushing Strike's bone-breaking power.

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* ConvenientComa: Rather than dying from getting two bullets to the head, Ren merely falls into a coma and wakes up with his gamer superpowers six months later, albeit, not before having to undergo physical therapy to regain his lost muscle tone.



* TheGamblingAddict: Ren falls on the more minor end of this trope. He became hooked on gambling after winning a hundred dollars from a poker game with his co-workers, joining games at back alley gambling dens before moving up to casinos in hopes of earning money for himself and his parents. Luckily, he's good enough to make a tidy profit, but all of it goes down the drain when he gets shot and put in a coma. He initially swears to give up gambling after seeing how his habit nearly killed him, but soon finds that his new superpowers revolve around it.



* NothingButSkinAndBones: A six-month coma leaves Ren emaciated and so weak that he has to relearn how to walk and stand. Luckily, his ability helps him build muscle quickly by dumping his prestige points into strength, letting him recover and return home within a month of waking up.



* PersonalityPowers: Ren's affinity for gambling matches with the gambling-based mechanics of his superpowers, namely how he has to earn his powers through mental casino games. In addition, he's always lamented how he wasn't popular, but the only way to strengthen his superpowers is to go viral and make a name for himself.



* UnexplainedRecovery: Due to his refusal to tell his parents about his new powers, Ren's rapid recovery from NothingButSkinAndBones to healthy and even fit over the span of a month comes across as weird at best and concerning at worst.

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* UnexplainedRecovery: Due to his refusal to tell his parents about his new powers, Ren's rapid recovery from NothingButSkinAndBones to healthy and even fit over the span of a month comes across as weird at best and concerning at worst. Never mind how he somehow left the hospital with no lingering effects from brain damage despite being shot in the head at point blank range twice.



* WhamLine: Ren is stopped in his tracks when he meets his uncle, who warmly greets him [[spoiler:as a member of the Triads.]]
-->“An unorthodox set of techniques, I see. I suppose I should expect nothing less from my nephew.”



* YoungerThanTheyLook: [[FaceOfAThug Ren's "Resting-Bitch-Face"]] allows him to enter an adults-only casino despite being only sixteen.

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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Ren's desire to stop Black Mask and dismantle his operations to protect himself, his family, and others is noble, but it's blatantly clear that he doesn't think through everything. He freezes up when he sees a gun again, becomes a HeroWithBadPublicity due to lacking awareness of his surroundings during his fights, and gets mistaken for a Triad, reigniting the MobWar in the process.



* MobWar: There's been long-standing friction between the Snake-Flower Triads and the mafia led by Black Mask for some time before the start of the story, as shown by how quick Black Mask is to shoot Ren. Due to being mistaken for a member of the Triads in his vigilante identity, Ren inadvertently reignites war between the two factions, starting with Black Mask's lackies trying to shoot up a diner.



* MusclesAreMeaningful: Ren's muscles grow in accordance with his strength stat.

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* MusclesAreMeaningful: Ren's muscles grow in accordance with his strength stat. His six-month coma caused his strength to dwindle to a mere 2, but putting points in strength helped him stand again in a few days rather than months. Getting his strength to 20 gives him freedom of mobility and a healthy, if thin build, while dumping 30 more points into it causes him to gain twenty pounds of muscle overnight, leaving him looking and feeling better than he had before he was shot.
* MusclesAreMeaningless: Soul-Crushing Strike is able to put out bone-crushing force no matter how strong Ren is. Even when he's NothingButSkinAndBones, it's able to knock the teeth out of the man who tried to kill him.



* UnexplainedRecovery: Due to his refusal to tell his parents about his new powers, Ren's rapid recovery from NothingButSkinAndBones to healthy and even fit over the span of a month.
* UnluckyEverydude: Ren is friendless, has middling grades, and lives in [[WretchedHive Gotham]] of all places while his parents struggle to make ends meet. To try and ease their burden, he uses his gambling talent to make money as a "part-time job", but it ends up biting him in the rear when Black Mask shoots him, leaving him in a six-month coma that forces his dad to reach out to Ren's estanged uncle for financial support.

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* UnexplainedRecovery: Due to his refusal to tell his parents about his new powers, Ren's rapid recovery from NothingButSkinAndBones to healthy and even fit over the span of a month.
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* UnluckyEverydude: Ren is friendless, has middling grades, and lives in [[WretchedHive Gotham]] of all places while his parents struggle to make ends meet. To try and ease their burden, he uses his gambling talent to make money as a "part-time job", but it ends up biting him in the rear when Black Mask shoots him, leaving him in a six-month coma that forces his dad to reach out to Ren's estanged estranged uncle for financial support.

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* ButNotTooForeign: Ren is a Chinese-American who admits to being only half-Chinese, which has him worried when he runs into members of the Triad who may not appreciate his "impure blood".

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* ButNotTooForeign: Ren is a Chinese-American who admits to being only half-Chinese, which has him worried when he runs into members of the Triad who may not appreciate his "impure blood". He also has blue eyes because of this, so he wears colored contacts to make them look more like a typical dark brown to hide his identity while acting as a vigilante.



* KidHero: Ren is only sixteen and has the maturity of one. As a result, [[DeconstructedTrope he's not mentally prepared to face danger]] on a regular basis, freezing up when faced with yet another gun after the first two attempts on his life. Even after he works up the courage to fight back, he

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* KidHero: Ren is only sixteen and has the maturity of one.someone his age. As a result, [[DeconstructedTrope he's not mentally prepared to face danger]] on a regular basis, freezing up when faced with yet another gun after the first two attempts on his life. Even after he works up the courage to fight back, he his attempts to take down Black Mask make things worse before they get better.



* MusclesAreMeaningful: Ren's muscles grow in accordance with his strength stat.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: In his attempts to wage a one-man war against Black Mask, Ren is mistaken for a member of the Triads and accidentally reignites a gang war between them and the mafia.



* SimpleYetAwesome: Soul-Crushing Strike is a simple punch that strikes with near-superhuman force. It's a no-frills attack powerful enough to incapacitate any non-superpowered mobster and can't be blocked.

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* SimpleYetAwesome: Soul-Crushing Strike is a simple punch that strikes with near-superhuman bone-breaking force. It's a no-frills attack powerful enough to incapacitate any non-superpowered mobster and can't be blocked.blocked through martial arts.
* SupernaturalMartialArts: Several of Ren's skills amount to this. Soul-Crushing Strike is a powerful punch that is guaranteed to penetrate attempts to guard with martial arts and smash bones. Water Stream Rock Smashing Fist also has him performing CombatParkour, which he combines with Flash Step to instantly close the distance on some mobsters to beat them down in hand-to-hand.



* UnluckyEverydude: Ren is friendless, has middling grades, and lives in [[WretchedHive Gotham]] of all places while his parents struggle to make ends meet. To try and ease their burden, he uses his gambling talent to make money as a "part-time job", but it ends up biting him in the rear when Black Mask shoots him, leaving him in a six-month coma that forces his dad to reach out to his brother for financial support.

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* UnluckyEverydude: Ren is friendless, has middling grades, and lives in [[WretchedHive Gotham]] of all places while his parents struggle to make ends meet. To try and ease their burden, he uses his gambling talent to make money as a "part-time job", but it ends up biting him in the rear when Black Mask shoots him, leaving him in a six-month coma that forces his dad to reach out to his brother Ren's estanged uncle for financial support.

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* ArchEnemy: After Black Mask two attempts on Ren's life, Ren makes it his mission to stop Black Mask to prevent him from hurting his parents or anyone else in the process of getting to him.



* BoringButPractical: Driving and Multilingual are this. Ren notes that they're basically useless in a straight fight, but they're both helpful life skills that he might need down the line.



* CareerEndingInjury: Invoked by Ren's "Soul-Crushing Strike" skill, a punch with explosive force that bypasses attempts to guard against it. Its name is apparently derived from how it crushed the dreams of many a martial artist by ruining them. When going out as a vigilante, this attack leaves multiple members of the mob crippled for life, something that makes Ren uncomfortable.

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* CareerEndingInjury: Invoked by Ren's "Soul-Crushing Strike" Soul-Crushing Strike skill, a punch with explosive force that bypasses attempts to guard against it. Its name is apparently derived from how it crushed the dreams of many a martial artist by ruining them. When going out as a vigilante, this attack leaves multiple members of the mob crippled for life, something that makes Ren uncomfortable.uncomfortable.
* CassandraTruth: Ren had no idea what he was getting into when he entered that VIP room, much less that the casino was owned by Black Mask. But when he tries to explain this to the mob boss, Ren gets brushed off as just another member of the Triads and shot in the head.



* ComboPlatterPowers: The powers that Ren gets from his gamer power are random, resulting in him getting a strange hodgepodge of skills like SupernaturalMartialArts, becoming a BadassDriver, a DoubleJump, or the abiltiy to FlashStep. To add to the randomness, his powers are largely derived from other series like ''Manga/OnePunchMan'' and ''Manga/Bleach''.

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* ComboPlatterPowers: The powers that Ren gets from his gamer power are random, resulting in him getting a strange hodgepodge of skills like SupernaturalMartialArts, becoming a BadassDriver, a DoubleJump, or the abiltiy abilty to FlashStep. To add to the randomness, his powers are largely derived from other series like ''Manga/OnePunchMan'' and ''Manga/Bleach''.''Manga/{{Bleach}}''.



* DiscardAndDraw: Ren can "sell" abilities, giving them up in exchange for prestige points that he can allocate toward his stats, rolling for new abilities, or buying equipment.
* FlashStep: Ren rolls "Flash Step" following his first video, giving him the ability to move with explosive speed over short distances, but only forward or backwards.
* HeroWithBadPublicity: Ren hoped his debut video would give him a decent reputation, but after a Triad shoots a mob crook he'd been fighting dead, Ren's super identity quickly garners infamy as a killer, much to Ren's dismay. He wonders how Batman deals with bad press like this.

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* DiscardAndDraw: Ren can "sell" sell abilities, giving them up in exchange for prestige points that he can allocate toward his stats, rolling for new abilities, or buying equipment.
* FameThroughInfamy: Ren's power does not care if his publicity is good or bad, only that he's famous. As a result, good press will give him as much prestige as bad press. In fact, his first big boost of prestige is when he's caught on video apparently mugging a man who had held him at gunpoint earlier.
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FlashStep: Ren rolls "Flash Step" Flash Step following his first video, giving him the ability to move with explosive speed over quickly cross short distances, but only forward or backwards.
backwards. This means he can't turn or go up or down stairs with this power.
* HeroWithBadPublicity: GenreSavvy: Due to growing up in a world where Batman and the Justice League exist, Ren hoped is well-acquainted with superhero tropes and goes the extra mile to preserve his SecretIdentity. He's also aware of the PhoneTraceRace and is wary of using his own computer to upload his videos, wiping the prints off a phone he took from a mobster before tossing it in the trash to avoid being traced.
* HeroWithBadPublicity:
** Ren's
debut as a vigilante involves him mugging the guy who mugged him, breaking the man's arm in the process. The video would give taken by onlookers quickly gets 10,000 views. He groans at all the comments telling him what a decent reputation, but after loser he is.
** After
a Triad shoots a mob crook he'd been fighting dead, Ren's super identity quickly garners infamy as a killer, much to Ren's dismay. He wonders how Batman deals with bad press like this. At the least, his new viral presence on the internet gives him a lot of prestige points.



* {{Omniglot}}: Following his debut video, one of the skills Ren rolls is "Multilingual", making it easier for him to learn any language, especially those that are related to each other or exist in the same region.

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* InTheHood: As part of his super identity, Ren wears a hooded vest and a headband to keep the hood in place.
* InstantExpert: Several of Ren's skills let him quickly master things he's never done before. Multilingual and Driving make it easier for him to learn languages and operate cars respectively. Meanwhile, combat techniques like Water Stream Rock Smashing Fist lets him instinctively take combat stances, perform CombatParkour, and axe kick someone hard enough to take them out of a fight.
* ItsAllMyFault: Ren blames himself for Alice's death, as she was caught in the middle of an attempt on his life.
* KidHero: Ren is only sixteen and has the maturity of one. As a result, [[DeconstructedTrope he's not mentally prepared to face danger]] on a regular basis, freezing up when faced with yet another gun after the first two attempts on his life. Even after he works up the courage to fight back, he
* KungFuSonicBoom: Soul-Crushing Strike is always accompanied by a loud bang, regardless of whether or not Ren actually punched something. This emphasizes the bone-breaking force that accompanies it.
* MuggingTheMonster: Downplayed. Ren's powers make him more than a match for the average person, but the fact that he lacks SuperToughness means that any guy with a gun can kill him. He's terrified when a man pulls a gun on him to mug him and rather than be Batman he begins meekly forking over his cash, only collecting himself after the man had started walking away. That's when he breaks the man's arm and takes his money back.
* NotWhatItLooksLike: After breaking the arm of the man who mugged him, Ren quickly realizes that it looks like ''he's'' the one doing the mugging and feebly tries to tell onlookers that the guy mugged him first. He quickly gives up, takes his money back, and runs for dear life.
-->'''Ren:''' God, it totally looks like I'm mugging this guy.
* {{Omniglot}}: Following his debut video, one of the skills Ren rolls is "Multilingual", Multilingual, making it easier for him to learn any language, especially those that are related to each other or exist in the same region.



* PopularityPower: Ren's abilities run off prestige. The more fame (or infamy) he gains, the more points he has to spend to gain new skills, buy equipment, and improve his stats. Because of this, he has to engineer situations where he can get a drone to record his actions to upload to the internet to improve his powers and gain new ones.

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* PerpetualFrowner: As an UnluckyEveryman, Ren has a permanent scowl on his face by default. It makes him look older than he actually is, allowing him to enter casinos despite being underage at sixteen.
* PopularityPower: Ren's abilities run off prestige. how well-known he is. The more fame (or infamy) he gains, the more points "prestige points" he has to spend to gain new skills, buy equipment, and improve his stats. Because of this, he has to engineer situations where he can get a drone to record his actions to upload to the internet to improve his powers and gain new ones.ones while trying to keep his SecretIdentity safe.


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* SimpleYetAwesome: Soul-Crushing Strike is a simple punch that strikes with near-superhuman force. It's a no-frills attack powerful enough to incapacitate any non-superpowered mobster and can't be blocked.
* SurveillanceDrone: Ren invests some of his prestige points into purchasing a few of these to help track down Black Mask's location. In addition to this, they're helpful as cameras to record his actions so he can safely gain some prestige without having to blow his SecretIdentity.


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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Alice, Ren's physical therapist, is introduced as a kindly and supportive doctor working to help him recover from his coma. She's unfortunately shot dead by an assassin sent after him, motivating Ren to use his new powers to stop Black Mask from hurting anyone else.

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* ButNotTooForeign: Ren is a Chinese-American who admits to being only half-Chinese, which has him worried when he runs into members of the Triad who may not appreciate his "impure blood".
* CareerEndingInjury: Invoked by Ren's "Soul-Crushing Strike" skill, a punch with explosive force that bypasses attempts to guard against it. Its name is apparently derived from how it crushed the dreams of many a martial artist by ruining them. When going out as a vigilante, this attack leaves multiple members of the mob crippled for life, something that makes Ren uncomfortable.
* CivvieSpandex: Ren wears a skintight bodysuit with armor plating beneath a hooded vest and cargo shorts while going out to investigate Black Mask.



* ComesGreatResponsibility: Following the second attempt on his life, Ren resolves to use his powers to defend his parents from Black Mask rather than any kind of self-benefit.
* DiscardAndDraw: Ren can "sell" abilities, giving them up in exchange for prestige points that he can allocate toward his stats, rolling for new abilities, or buying equipment.



* HeroWithBadPublicity: Ren hoped his debut video would give him a decent reputation, but after a Triad shoots a mob crook he'd been fighting dead, Ren's super identity quickly garners infamy as a killer, much to Ren's dismay. He wonders how Batman deals with bad press like this.



* PopularityPower: Ren's abilities run off prestige. The more fame (or infamy) he gains, the more points he has to spend to gain new skills, buy equipment, and improve his stats.

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* PainfulTransformation: Ren's powers, particularly when boosting physical stats like Strength, tend to modify his body in relation to the points he accrued. When learning skills, this leads to a pinching feeling in his brain. But after going viral and dumping a lot of points into his stats overall, the sudden change makes him feel like he's dying and every muscle goes taut as he gasps for air. The sensation is so excruciating that he blacks out afterward, waking up the following morning.
* PopularityPower: Ren's abilities run off prestige. The more fame (or infamy) he gains, the more points he has to spend to gain new skills, buy equipment, and improve his stats. Because of this, he has to engineer situations where he can get a drone to record his actions to upload to the internet to improve his powers and gain new ones.



* RPGMechanicsVerse: Similarly to ''Webcomic/TheGamer'', Ren is the only one to interact with the world like a game, getting new powers by playing a slot machine, allocating stat points to improve himself like an MMO character, and having a personal electronic marketplace where he can spend points on equipment.



** "2-7 Offsuit" is widely regarded as one of the worst possible starting hands in Texas Hold 'Em poker. In the same chapter, one of Black Mask's assassins attempts to kill Ren, who is undergoing physical therapy. If not for his powers, Ren would have been helpless.

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** "2-7 Offsuit" is widely regarded as one of the worst possible starting hands in Texas Hold 'Em poker. In the same chapter, one of Black Mask's assassins attempts to kill Ren, who is undergoing physical therapy. If not for his powers, Ren would have been helpless. Even then, his therapist, the kindly and supportive Alice, gets shot dead.
** "Hedging Bets" refers to trying to reduce risk and secure one's winnings. This chapter covers Ren's attempts to raise his prestige without exposing his identity.
* ThouShaltNotKill: Enforced by the skill of the same name. "Thou Shalt Not Kill" prevents Ren from ever killing his opponents so long as their brains are intact. This means that attacks that would otherwise lead to massive internal bleeding and death will "merely" cripple his opponent. He initially considers selling this, but after seeing the results of Soul-Crushing Strike firsthand, he opts not to, as he simply isn't mentally or emotionally prepared to end someone's life.
* UnexplainedRecovery: Due to his refusal to tell his parents about his new powers, Ren's rapid recovery from NothingButSkinAndBones to healthy and even fit over the span of a month.


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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatHotness: Ren notices that he gets noticeably more muscular while increasing his Strength stat. This is most noticeable after he decides to dump 30 points in Strength all at once, resulting in him packing on twenty pounds of muscle all at once. Upping his Charisma also makes him look better in general, removing pimples, giving him a more pronounced jawline, and making his hair shinier following his six-month coma.
* WrongContextMagic: The source of Ren's powers is a mystery. He's never had any kind of empowering accidents except for being shot in the head, and he's tests negative for the metagene. He also has no knowledge or relationship with magic or the supernatural prior to obtaining his powers.

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* ComboPlatterPowers: The powers that Ren gets from his gamer power are random, resulting in him getting a strange hodgepodge of skills like SupernaturalMartialArts, becoming a BadassDriver, a DoubleJump, or the abiltiy to FlashStep.

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* ComboPlatterPowers: The powers that Ren gets from his gamer power are random, resulting in him getting a strange hodgepodge of skills like SupernaturalMartialArts, becoming a BadassDriver, a DoubleJump, or the abiltiy to FlashStep. To add to the randomness, his powers are largely derived from other series like ''Manga/OnePunchMan'' and ''Manga/Bleach''.



* IHaveNoSon: Ren's father claimed to not have any siblings, leading to Ren's confusion when his father says that Ren's uncle helped pay for his hospital stay.
* OlderThanTheyLook: [[FaceOfAThug Ren's "Resting-Bitch-Face"]] allows him to enter an adults-only casino despite being only sixteen.

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* IHaveNoSon: Ren's father claimed to not have any siblings, leading to Ren's confusion when his father says that Ren's uncle helped pay for his hospital stay.
* OlderThanTheyLook: [[FaceOfAThug Ren's "Resting-Bitch-Face"]] allows him to enter an adults-only casino despite being only sixteen.
stay. [[spoiler:This is because said uncle is a member of the Snake-Flower Triads, recognizing Ren even in his disguise.]]



** "2-7 Offsuit" is widely regarded as the worst possible hand in poker

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* YoungerThanTheyLook: [[FaceOfAThug Ren's "Resting-Bitch-Face"]] allows him to enter an adults-only casino despite being only sixteen.

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* FlashStep: Ren rolls "Flash Step" following his first video, giving him the ability to move with explosive speed over short distances, but only forward or backwards.



* OlderThanTheyLook: [[PerpetualFrowner Ren's "Resting-Bitch-Face"]] allows him to enter an adults-only casino despite being only sixteen.
* {{Omniglot}}: Following his debut video, one of the skills he rolls is "Multilingual", making it easier for him to learn any language, especially those that are related to each other or exist in the same region.

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* OlderThanTheyLook: [[PerpetualFrowner [[FaceOfAThug Ren's "Resting-Bitch-Face"]] allows him to enter an adults-only casino despite being only sixteen.
* {{Omniglot}}: Following his debut video, one of the skills he Ren rolls is "Multilingual", making it easier for him to learn any language, especially those that are related to each other or exist in the same region.


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* ThemeNaming: The chapter titles are all named after gambling terminology, usually in correlation with what Ren is experiencing.
** "Risk it All" means to bet everything in hopes of a huge payout, though it takes on a DoubleMeaning as Ren didn't expect to risk his life because of Black Mask.
** "2-7 Offsuit" is widely regarded as the worst possible hand in poker
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Nothing worth doing is ever easy.

That's what Ren Song is thinking when he accepts a sponsorship to enter the shady VIP room in the back of one of Gotham's casino's. As a kid with little to his name but a knack for gambling (and cheating), the chance to come away with the jackpot to support his parents is [[AnOfferYouCantRefuse too good to refuse]].

The stakes get higher than he ever could have imagined when [[TheDon the Black Mask]] barges in on the game. Mistaking Ren for a member of the Triads, the teenager gets two bullets to the head for his trouble. But the story doesn't end there, as Ren miraculously survives, waking up after a six-month coma to the bewilderment of medical experts. Weak and weary with two fresh scars on his forehead, Ren thinks he's hallucinating from brain damage when he sees a video game screen in front him asking about his prestige and if he'd like his free roll.

He soon finds that he's not hallucinating at all. This gamer screen is real, and it's giving him real superpowers... if he's willing to make a name for himself.

But he'll have to work fast, as Black Mask isn't one to leave loose ends untied...

''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/risk-it-all-young-justice-gamer.922364/ Risk it All]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/YoungJustice'' fanfic written by Ideas-Guy. It follows [[OriginalCharacter Ren]] as he explores his new [[RPGMechanicsVerse gamer-like]] superpowers, gambling his livelihood, reputation, and life against the forces conspiring against him.

!!''Risk it All'' provides examples of:
* BookDumb: Although his grades are middle-of-the-pack at best, Ren demonstrates a keen understanding of probability and can quickly crunch the numbers to weigh the risk vs. reward in casino games as well as the randomness of the skills and powers he gains.
* ComboPlatterPowers: The powers that Ren gets from his gamer power are random, resulting in him getting a strange hodgepodge of skills like SupernaturalMartialArts, becoming a BadassDriver, a DoubleJump, or the abiltiy to FlashStep.
* IHaveNoSon: Ren's father claimed to not have any siblings, leading to Ren's confusion when his father says that Ren's uncle helped pay for his hospital stay.
* OlderThanTheyLook: [[PerpetualFrowner Ren's "Resting-Bitch-Face"]] allows him to enter an adults-only casino despite being only sixteen.
* {{Omniglot}}: Following his debut video, one of the skills he rolls is "Multilingual", making it easier for him to learn any language, especially those that are related to each other or exist in the same region.
* OriginalCharacter: Ren is an original protagonist living in Gotham's Chinatown at the start of the story.
* PopularityPower: Ren's abilities run off prestige. The more fame (or infamy) he gains, the more points he has to spend to gain new skills, buy equipment, and improve his stats.
* ProfessionalGambler: Ren styles himself as this, crunching the numbers on the probability of certain things happening in casino games to make the right judgment calls and cash in. This talent of his catches the eye of Lei, a Triad member who sponsors his entry into a Gotham casino's VIP room in hopes of winning big.
* RandomNumberGod: Although abilities are organized into "tiers" of general effectiveness, whatever powers Ren gets is largely up to chance, with the author stating that he rolls a die when it comes to determining what abilities Ren gets.
* UnluckyEverydude: Ren is friendless, has middling grades, and lives in [[WretchedHive Gotham]] of all places while his parents struggle to make ends meet. To try and ease their burden, he uses his gambling talent to make money as a "part-time job", but it ends up biting him in the rear when Black Mask shoots him, leaving him in a six-month coma that forces his dad to reach out to his brother for financial support.
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