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* BlackMarket: One of these is being run in Camp 001 by [[spoiler:Nagato, Yahiko and Konan; they bring Sasuke in on it too after he saves Nagato from a beating, or possibly even summary execution, from a sadistic guard.]]
* TheBlacksmith: Itachi and Sasuke run their parents' blacksmiths together. [[spoiler:In 001, Sasuke is able to use his skills to leverage better working conditions for himself, Nagato and Yahiko.]]

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** [[spoiler:Averted; Itachi ''is'' alive. Yahiko is [[KilledOffForReal still dead]], though.]]
* BlackMarket: One of these is being run in Camp 001 002 by [[spoiler:Nagato, Yahiko and Konan; they bring Sasuke in on it too after he saves Nagato from a beating, or possibly even summary execution, from a sadistic guard.]]
* TheBlacksmith: Itachi and Sasuke run their parents' blacksmiths together. [[spoiler:In 001, 002, Sasuke is able to use his skills to leverage better working conditions for himself, Nagato and Yahiko.]]



* ChildrenForcedToKill: When Naruto is bringing Sasuke to hide [[spoiler:in Shikamaru's house]] on Crystal Night, they get caught by a Fang guard. What happens is vague, but it is clear that [[spoiler:Naruto stabbed him to protect Sasuke, possibly fatally.]]

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* ChildhoodFriends: Surprisingly, Hinata and Shikamaru. Naruto and Sakura have also been friends since they were 10 or 11 years old.
* ChildrenForcedToKill: When Naruto is bringing Sasuke to hide [[spoiler:in Shikamaru's house]] on Crystal Night, they get caught by a Fang ''Fang'' guard. What happens is vague, but it is clear that [[spoiler:Naruto stabbed him to protect Sasuke, possibly fatally.]]
* {{Conscription}}: First [[spoiler:Kakashi]] is called up, then later [[spoiler:Naruto, Shikamaru and several members of FOX, leading Naruto to suspect they've been compromised.
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* {{Determinator}}: Sasuke; his strength of will and determination to survive is ''incredible.''



* FourthWallObserver: The narrator, an attribute shared with the vulture when it gets a guest spot in the position. It even acknowledges that the reader will be reading this fanfiction on a computer screen, not a printed page.
-->Welcome back, friends! Time here, trying a new approach to reach out to you through the glass screen you're staring at. I figure it's hard for us to connect, considering that I'm just a vulture and all, and the most I can really do is peck at the inside of your monitor until the words fidget through the cracks in the hardware. I can flap my wings but you'll probably just think it's the fan inside your computer.



-->The team was the tunnel, and Hinata was the support, holding each of them up with arms that looked weak but were strong and unwavering.
* HopeSpot: [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]], as ever, by the narrator:
-->Too good to last, right?
-->Sorry, you with the eager eyes at the screen, begging for them to [[spoiler:drag our dear Sasuke through the tunnel into the bright morning light of freedom]].
-->I'm just not that kind.



* RedHerring: [[spoiler:When Neji makes his first appearance the scene just ''[[{{Foreshadowing}} screams]]'' that he's going to be either TheMole or a SixthRangerTraitor- but not only is he as good as his word at helping FOX rob his father's mansion to help them buy supplies to give to the reds, in chapter 19 he is arrested by ''Fang'' for his actions.]]



* TheReveal: Followers of ''{{Naruto}}'' may wonder why the Fourth Hokage is ordering such evil things, until chapter 6 when his name is first used by Sakura: [[spoiler:"Lord Orochimaru"]].
* ShoutOut: In the chapter 4, '[[TitleDrop Howl]]', the book Sakura finds herself reading [[spoiler:and eventually has no choice but to burn]] at the book burning is Jewish poet Allen Ginsberg's famous work 'Howl'.

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* TheReveal: Followers of ''{{Naruto}}'' may wonder why the Fourth Hokage is ordering such evil things, until chapter 6 when his name is first used by Sakura: [[spoiler:"Lord Orochimaru"]].
''[[spoiler:"Lord Orochimaru"]]''.
* ShoutOut: In the chapter 4, '[[TitleDrop Howl]]', the book Sakura finds herself reading [[spoiler:and eventually has no choice but to burn]] at the book burning is Jewish poet Allen Ginsberg's famous poetic work 'Howl'.



* TimeSkip: Occasionally the story will skip periods of time where no major events happen, most notably at the start of chapter 17.
-->It is all moving so fast now. Eight months have passed in the blink of an eye.
-->You didn't feel it. Did you?



** Chapter 18, 'Battle Scars'. [[spoiler:Naruto and Hinata finally reunite with Sasuke, only for them to be discovered by guards. Sasuke is shot, Yahiko is killed.]]

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** Chapter 18, 'Battle Scars'. [[spoiler:Naruto and Hinata finally reunite with Sasuke, only for them to be discovered by guards. Sasuke is shot, Yahiko is killed.]]]]
* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler:Chapter 18]] is basically this and the narrator even [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] it.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Naruto and Sasuke, as in canon. Also to an extent, Sakura and Hinata; in chapter 12 Naruto explicitly describes Sakura as a woman of the daylight and Hinata as being one who would flourish in the night.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction which is a collaboration between authors [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/368692/Oil_Pastel Oil Pastel]] that crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of ''The Book Thief''. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and [[spoiler:Orochimaru replaces AdolfHitler]]. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of ''The Book Thief''), as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction which is began as a collaboration between authors [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/368692/Oil_Pastel Oil Pastel]] that but seems to have been continued singularly by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]], which crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of ''The Book Thief''. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and [[spoiler:Orochimaru replaces AdolfHitler]]. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of ''The Book Thief''), as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.
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* CutApart: In a [[ContinuityNod possible nod to a similar scene in]] ''Naruto'', the scene where Naruto is taking Sasuke to safety on Crystal Night and a Red comes to Kakashi's door at the same time seems to be suggesting that Naruto is bringing Sasuke to shelter at Kakashi's house, before revealing [[spoiler:he's actually taking Sasuke to shelter at Shikamaru's and the Red at Kakashi's door is Itachi come to ask Kakashi to look after Sasuke for him]]. The dialogue even matches up to make it seem like a single scene.

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* CutApart: In a [[ContinuityNod possible fairly blatant nod to a similar scene in]] ''Naruto'', the scene where Naruto is taking Sasuke to safety on Crystal Night and a Red comes to Kakashi's door at the same time seems to be suggesting that Naruto is bringing Sasuke to shelter at Kakashi's house, before revealing [[spoiler:he's actually taking Sasuke to shelter at Shikamaru's and the Red at Kakashi's door is Itachi come to ask Kakashi to look after Sasuke for him]]. The dialogue even matches up to make it seem like a single scene.

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-->Anko needed no encouragement to do the right thing.



* MismatchedEyes: In one of the more obvious [[ContinuityNod nods]] to ''{{Naruto}}'' canon, [[spoiler:Kakashi has the red left eye he received from Obito]]. Unlike in the manga, though, it doesn't have any special powers.

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* MismatchedEyes: In one of the more obvious [[ContinuityNod nods]] to ''{{Naruto}}'' canon, [[spoiler:Kakashi has the red left eye he received from Obito]]. Unlike in the manga, though, it doesn't have any special powers.powers; although the narration ''claims'' it allows him to see the future, this seems to be a metaphor.
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* HealingFactor: In the story's only real nod to non-metaphorical fantasy, Red's have special "superior" blood- it's compatible with any other blood type and has vaguely-defined regenerative properties- apparently it "heals well" and clots more consistantly than other blood groups. Although [[InformedAttribute this attribute hasn't been displayed in the series yet]] [[spoiler:Sasuke may be about to put it to the test after being shot and badly wounded in chapter 18]].

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* ContinuityNod: Despite being a completely seperate story from ''Naruto'' there are a number of these, such as Naruto being an only child orphan of unknown parentage (where Rudy in the original book was one of a large and poor family), the girls who trained as medic-nin in the series (or Sakura and Ino at least) training as nurses and [[spoiler:Kakashi receiving Obito's left eye after Obito dies saving him]].

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* ContinuityNod: Despite being a completely seperate story from ''Naruto'' there are a number of these, such as Naruto being an only child orphan of unknown parentage (where these to these original manga:
** Where
Rudy in the original book was one of a large and poor family), family, Naruto is an orphaned only child whose father was apparently someone of significance in the previous government (reflecting how in the manga he is [[spoiler:the son of the 4th Hokage]]).
** The CutApart scene in chapter 3 is a direct homage to a similar sequence in chapter 144 of the manga/episode 83 of the anime.
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girls who all train as nurses in the fanfic, reflecting how Sakura and Ino trained as medic-nin in the series (or Sakura manga (although Hinata never did, even though she also trains as a nurse here).
** [[spoiler:The resistance group Naruto, Hinata
and Ino at least) training as nurses and Shikamaru join is called FOX.]]
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[[spoiler:Kakashi receiving has Obito's red left eye after under his eyepatch, a memento from when Obito dies died saving him]].him in the last war.]]


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* ShoutOut: In the chapter 4, '[[TitleDrop Howl]]', the book Sakura finds herself reading [[spoiler:and eventually has no choice but to burn]] at the book burning is Jewish poet Allen Ginsberg's famous work 'Howl'.
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* HappilyAdopted: Although most of Liesel's story about being adopted by the Hubermanns has been stripped out, a single line from Sakura about the Fourth having taken her "first Mother" away from her reveals that she is still, indeed, fostered. She loves both her parents unconditionally despite that.

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* HappilyAdopted: Although most of Liesel's story about being adopted by the Hubermanns has been stripped out, a single line from it still mentions that Sakura about was fostered (and apparently the Fourth having taken 4th Hokage was responsible for her losing her "first Mother" away from her reveals that she is still, indeed, fostered.Mother"). She loves both her parents unconditionally despite that.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction by author [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] that crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of ''The Book Thief''. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and [[spoiler:Orochimaru replaces AdolfHitler]]. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of ''The Book Thief''), as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.

While the story initially seems like a CookieCutterFic, retelling the plot of ''The Book Thief'' with the names of ''Naruto'' characters and places plastered over the original story, it takes on a life of its own and deviates wildly from the original source material into unpredictable territory. Sakura, Naruto and Sasuke may have taken the roles of Liesel, Rudy and Max, but they make these roles their own and fill them out with their own personalities. The resulting story is gripping and emotional, not to mention a fascinating read as Sherbert Mayhem replicates the unique writing style of Markus Zusak, with the story narrated by a nihilistic, [[FourthWallObserver fourth wall-observing]] and somewhat LemonyNarrator who occasionally gives a guest spot to [[TheGrimReaper Death in the form of a vulture.]]

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction by author which is a collaboration between authors [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/368692/Oil_Pastel Oil Pastel]] that crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of ''The Book Thief''. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and [[spoiler:Orochimaru replaces AdolfHitler]]. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of ''The Book Thief''), as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.

While the story initially seems like a CookieCutterFic, retelling the plot of ''The Book Thief'' with the names of ''Naruto'' characters and places plastered over the original story, it takes on a life of its own and deviates wildly from the original source material into unpredictable territory. Sakura, Naruto and Sasuke may have taken the roles of Liesel, Rudy and Max, but they make these roles their own and fill them out with their own personalities. The resulting story is gripping and emotional, not to mention a fascinating read as Sherbert Mayhem replicates the unique writing style of Markus Zusak, with the story narrated by a nihilistic, [[FourthWallObserver fourth wall-observing]] and somewhat LemonyNarrator who occasionally gives a guest spot to [[TheGrimReaper Death Death/Time in the form of a vulture.]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: Not that any of the major characters HAVE yet, but the narrator repeatedly assures us that things will not end well and [[spoiler:despite Sasuke finding Itachi's hat in the camp, the last time we saw Itachi he was [[CliffHanger staring down the barrel of the same gun that had just murdered his lover with no apparent possibility of escape]].]]

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* AnyoneCanDie: Not that any of the major characters HAVE yet, but the narrator repeatedly assures us that things will not end well and [[spoiler:despite Sasuke finding Itachi's hat in the camp, the last time we saw Itachi he was [[CliffHanger staring down the barrel of the same gun that had just murdered his lover with no apparent possibility of escape]]. Also, Chapter 18 ended with Yahiko being shot dead by a camp guard.]]
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* HappilyAdopted: Although most of Liesel's story about being adopted by the Hubermanbn's has been stripped out, a single line from Sakura about the Fourth having taken her "first Mother" away from her reveals that she is still, indeed, fostered. She loves both her parents unconditionally despite that.

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* HappilyAdopted: Although most of Liesel's story about being adopted by the Hubermanbn's Hubermanns has been stripped out, a single line from Sakura about the Fourth having taken her "first Mother" away from her reveals that she is still, indeed, fostered. She loves both her parents unconditionally despite that.
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* Happiy Adopted: Although most of Liesel's story about being adopted by the Hubermanbn's has been stripped out, a single line from Sakura about the Fourth having taken her "first Mother" away from her reveals that she is still, indeed, fostered. She loves both her parents unconditionally despite that.

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* Happiy Adopted: HappilyAdopted: Although most of Liesel's story about being adopted by the Hubermanbn's has been stripped out, a single line from Sakura about the Fourth having taken her "first Mother" away from her reveals that she is still, indeed, fostered. She loves both her parents unconditionally despite that.
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* Happiy Adopted: Although most of Liesel's story about being adopted by the Hubermanbn's has been stripped out, a single line from Sakura about the Fourth having taken her "first Mother" away from her reveals that she is still, indeed, fostered. She loves both her parents unconditionally despite that.
* HappilyMarried: Kakashi and Anko, despite what it may look like.

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OK, so Neji hasn\'t betrayed them \'\'yet\'\'. That kind of speculation is probably a mistake.


* AnyoneCanDie: Not that any of the major characters HAVE yet, but the narrator repeatedly assures us that things will not end well and [[spoiler:despite Sasuke finding Itachi's hat in the camp, the last time we saw Itachi he was [[CliffHanger staring down the barrel of the same gun that had just murdered his lover with no apparent possibility of escape]].]]



* JerkAss: Hidan.



* LaResistance: [[spoiler:Naruto joins a movement dedicated to helping the Reds and brings Hinata into it too. She eventually brings in Neji, which [[SixthRangerTraitor may end up being a mistake.]]]]

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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Yahiko]], possibly intentionally mirroring his fate in ''Naruto'' canon.
* LaResistance: [[spoiler:Naruto joins a movement dedicated to helping the Reds and brings Hinata into it too. She eventually brings in Neji, which [[SixthRangerTraitor may end up being a mistake.]]]]Neji.]]

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* TheMessiah: Hinata; chapter 11 revolves around her and is called 'The Dark-Haired Angel'.

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* TheMessiah: Hinata; chapter 11 10 revolves around her and is called 'The Dark-Haired Angel'.



* VitriolicBestBuds: Naruto and Sasuke.

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* VitriolicBestBuds: Naruto and Sasuke.Sasuke.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 15, 'The Things We Love'. [[spoiler:Sasuke is discovered and dragged away to the concentration camp.]]
** Chapter 18, 'Battle Scars'. [[spoiler:Naruto and Hinata finally reunite with Sasuke, only for them to be discovered by guards. Sasuke is shot, Yahiko is killed.]]
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* MismatchedEyes: In one of the few remaining nods to ''{{Naruto}}'' canon, [[spoiler:Kakashi has the red left eye he received from Obito]]. Unlike in the manga, though, it doesn't have any special powers.

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* MismatchedEyes: In one of the few remaining nods more obvious [[ContinuityNod nods]] to ''{{Naruto}}'' canon, [[spoiler:Kakashi has the red left eye he received from Obito]]. Unlike in the manga, though, it doesn't have any special powers.
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* ChildrenForcedToKill: When Naruto is bringing Sasuke to hide in Shikamaru's house on Crystal Night, they get caught by a Fang guard. What happens is vague, but it is clear that [[spoiler:Naruto stabbed him to protect Sasuke, possibly fatally.]]

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* ChildrenForcedToKill: When Naruto is bringing Sasuke to hide in [[spoiler:in Shikamaru's house house]] on Crystal Night, they get caught by a Fang guard. What happens is vague, but it is clear that [[spoiler:Naruto stabbed him to protect Sasuke, possibly fatally.]]

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction by author [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] that crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of ''The Book Thief''. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and [[spoiler:Orochimaru replaces AdolfHitler]]. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of ''The Book Thief'', as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction by author [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] that crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of ''The Book Thief''. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and [[spoiler:Orochimaru replaces AdolfHitler]]. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of ''The Book Thief'', Thief''), as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.


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* BlatantLies: When Sakura comes in contact with anti-Red propaganda being circulated by the government, describing how Reds are subhuman, immoral, malevolent, ratlike creatures, she can only roll her eyes at how blatantly ridiculous and obviously false it is, "designed to dupe only the stupidest of citizens into believing that Reds really ''were'' inferior."
* ChildrenForcedToKill: When Naruto is bringing Sasuke to hide in Shikamaru's house on Crystal Night, they get caught by a Fang guard. What happens is vague, but it is clear that [[spoiler:Naruto stabbed him to protect Sasuke, possibly fatally.]]
* ContinuityNod: Despite being a completely seperate story from ''Naruto'' there are a number of these, such as Naruto being an only child orphan of unknown parentage (where Rudy in the original book was one of a large and poor family), the girls who trained as medic-nin in the series (or Sakura and Ino at least) training as nurses and [[spoiler:Kakashi receiving Obito's left eye after Obito dies saving him]].
* CutApart: In a [[ContinuityNod possible nod to a similar scene in]] ''Naruto'', the scene where Naruto is taking Sasuke to safety on Crystal Night and a Red comes to Kakashi's door at the same time seems to be suggesting that Naruto is bringing Sasuke to shelter at Kakashi's house, before revealing [[spoiler:he's actually taking Sasuke to shelter at Shikamaru's and the Red at Kakashi's door is Itachi come to ask Kakashi to look after Sasuke for him]]. The dialogue even matches up to make it seem like a single scene.
* DemotedToExtra: Tsunade takes the place of Ilsa Hermann, one of the most important characters from ''The Book Thief'', but as the focus of the story has shifted her character has been reduced in importance so much that she never even properly appears in the story.


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* InMediasRes: The Prologue chapter describes events from the end of Chapter 7 before cutting back to start the story months earlier in Chapter 1.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Anko (who takes the place of Rosa Hubermann) is just as abrasive and foul-mouthed as her predecessor, regularly addressing Sakura as "Forehead" or "Pig", but is still a loving mother and a magnificently compassionate and caring individual when someone is in need of help.
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* KarmicDeath: [[spoiler:Hidan]] bullies Kakashi into giving him his seat in the front of their truck and Kakashi just can't be bothered fighting him over it so he lets him have it. [[spoiler:When the truck has an accident and rolls over, Hidan in the only casualty because of where he was sitting.]]

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Absolutely nothing to do with [[{{ComicBook/RED}} the comic book]] of the same name, or [[{{Film/RED}} the film]] based on said comic book.
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8 KarmicDeath: [[spoiler:Hidan]] bullies Kakashi into giving him his seat in the front of their truck and Kakashi just can't be bothered fighting him over it so he lets him have it. [[spoiler:When the truck has an accident and rolls over, Hidan in the only casualty because of where he was sitting.]]

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-->They don't care. Their hearts are pure, and their heavy souls vindicated by their desires. They will run into the abyss, together, if only to bring down the fence, the Fang, and the Fourth.
-->The vulture is laughing at them. You can hear him guffawing from where you sit.
-->He will not stop.


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* TheReveal: Followers of ''{{Naruto}}'' may wonder why the Fourth Hokage is ordering such evil things, until chapter 6 when his name is first used by Sakura: [[spoiler:"Lord Orochimaru"]].
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* BlackMarket: One of these is being run in Camp 001 by [[spoiler:Nagato, Yahiko and Konan; they bring Sasuke in on it too after he saves Nagato from a beating by a sadistic guard.]]

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* BlackMarket: One of these is being run in Camp 001 by [[spoiler:Nagato, Yahiko and Konan; they bring Sasuke in on it too after he saves Nagato from a beating by beating, or possibly even summary execution, from a sadistic guard.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction by author [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] that crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of The Book Thief. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and [[spoiler:Orochimaru replaces AdolfHitler]]. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of The Book Thief]] as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.

While the story initially seems like a CookieCutterFic, retelling the plot of TheBookThief with the names of Naruto characters and places plastered over the original story, it takes on a life of its own and deviates wildly from the original source material into unpredictable territory. Sakura, Naruto and Sasuke may have taken the roles of Liesel, Rudy and Max, but they make these roles their own and fill them out with their own personalities. The resulting story is gripping and emotional, not to mention a fascinating read as Sherbert Mayhem replicates the unique writing style of Markus Zusak, with the story narrated by a nihilistic, [[FourthWallObserver fourth wall-observing]] and somewhat LemonyNarrator who occasionally gives a guest spot to [[TheGrimReaper Death in the form of a vulture.]]

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction by author [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] that crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of The ''The Book Thief.Thief''. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and [[spoiler:Orochimaru replaces AdolfHitler]]. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of The ''The Book Thief]] Thief'', as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.

While the story initially seems like a CookieCutterFic, retelling the plot of TheBookThief ''The Book Thief'' with the names of Naruto ''Naruto'' characters and places plastered over the original story, it takes on a life of its own and deviates wildly from the original source material into unpredictable territory. Sakura, Naruto and Sasuke may have taken the roles of Liesel, Rudy and Max, but they make these roles their own and fill them out with their own personalities. The resulting story is gripping and emotional, not to mention a fascinating read as Sherbert Mayhem replicates the unique writing style of Markus Zusak, with the story narrated by a nihilistic, [[FourthWallObserver fourth wall-observing]] and somewhat LemonyNarrator who occasionally gives a guest spot to [[TheGrimReaper Death in the form of a vulture.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}} The [[LemonryNarrator narrator]] regularly gives blatant warnings about how things are going to turn tragic for several characters (most notably [[spoiler:Naruto and Hinata]], although the Sword of Damocles has not fallen yet).

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* {{Foreshadowing}} The [[LemonryNarrator [[LemonyNarrator narrator]] regularly gives blatant warnings about how things are going to turn tragic for several characters (most notably [[spoiler:Naruto and Hinata]], although the Sword of Damocles has not fallen yet).
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* {{Foreshadowing}} The [[LemonryNarrator narrator]] regularly gives blatant warnings about how things are going to turn tragic for several characters (most notably [[spoiler:Naruto and Hinata]], although the Sword of Damocles has not fallen yet).


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* MismatchedEyes: In one of the few remaining nods to ''{{Naruto}}'' canon, [[spoiler:Kakashi has the red left eye he received from Obito]]. Unlike in the manga, though, it doesn't have any special powers.
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* TheBlacksmith: Itachi and Sasuke run their parents' blacksmiths together. [[spoiler:In 001, Sasuke is able to use his skills to leverage better working conditions for himself, Nagato and Yahiko.]]

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While the story initially seems like a CookieCutterFic, retelling the plot of TheBookThief with the names of Naruto characters and places plastered over the original story, it takes on a life of its own and deviates wildly from the original source material into unpredictable territory. Sakura, Naruto and Sasuke may have taken the roles of Liesel, Rudy and Max, but they make these roles their own and fill them out with their own personalities. The resulting story is gripping and emotional, not to mention a fascinating read as Sherbert Mayhem replicates the unique writing style of Markus Zusak, with the story narrated by a nihilistic [[FourthWallObserver fourth wall-observing]] [[TheGrimReaper Reaper in the form of a vulture.]]

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While the story initially seems like a CookieCutterFic, retelling the plot of TheBookThief with the names of Naruto characters and places plastered over the original story, it takes on a life of its own and deviates wildly from the original source material into unpredictable territory. Sakura, Naruto and Sasuke may have taken the roles of Liesel, Rudy and Max, but they make these roles their own and fill them out with their own personalities. The resulting story is gripping and emotional, not to mention a fascinating read as Sherbert Mayhem replicates the unique writing style of Markus Zusak, with the story narrated by a nihilistic nihilistic, [[FourthWallObserver fourth wall-observing]] and somewhat LemonyNarrator who occasionally gives a guest spot to [[TheGrimReaper Reaper Death in the form of a vulture.]]



* BlackMarket: One of these is being run in Camp 001 by [[spoiler:Nagato, Yahiko and Konan; they bring Sasuke in on it too after he saves Nagato from a beating by a sadistic guard.]]
* TheHeart: Hinata is described as this [[spoiler:to the FOX resistance movement- and to Naruto.]]
* LaResistance: [[spoiler:Naruto joins a movement dedicated to helping the Reds and brings Hinata into it too. She eventually brings in Neji, which [[SixthRangerTraitor may end up being a mistake.]]]]



--->Naruto knew that Hinata, with a soul so desperate to give, would forgive him every iniquity if she was given the chance to save a single person.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Averted, the Reds are identified by their red eyes, but are just normal people in alkl other regards. However, this is what the Konoha leadership would ''have'' people believe of them.
* StarCrossedLovers: Sakura and Sasuke.

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--->Naruto -->Naruto knew that Hinata, with a soul so desperate to give, would forgive him every iniquity if she was given the chance to save a single person.
* NeverGotToSayGoodbye: [[TearJerker Tragically]] played with; [[spoiler:when Sasuke is caught by Fang, he plays the role of an intruder who intended to rape and murder Sakura so her family won't be punished for sheltering him; Sakura manages to save his life by taking the deception one step further and insisting that he be [[FateWorseThanDeath sent to suffer in camp 001]] rather than being executed. They can't even share a final look for fear of giving the truth away.]]
-->[[spoiler:Sasuke is gone before she can look at him again. There is no desperate, romantic meeting of the eyes, no whispered last words or bitter smiles. She fails, even, to catch his scent, bloody or not, as he is deleted from her days.]]
-->[[spoiler:He is simply gone.]]
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RedEyesTakeWarning: Averted, the Reds are identified by their red eyes, but are just normal people in alkl all other regards. However, this is what the Konoha leadership would ''have'' people believe of them.
* StarCrossedLovers: Sakura and Sasuke.
* UnluckyChildhoodFriend: Naruto towards Sakura, [[spoiler:although he ends up falling in love with Hinata instead anyway.]]
* VitriolicBestBuds: Naruto and
Sasuke.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction by author [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] that crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of The Book Thief. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and [[spoiler:Orochimaru replaces AdolfHitler]]. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of The Book Thief]] as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.

While the story initially seems like a CookieCutterFic, retelling the plot of TheBookThief with the names of Naruto characters and places plastered over the original story, it takes on a life of its own and deviates wildly from the original source material into unpredictable territory. Sakura, Naruto and Sasuke may have taken the roles of Liesel, Rudy and Max, but they make these roles their own and fill them out with their own personalities. The resulting story is gripping and emotional, not to mention a fascinating read as Sherbert Mayhem replicates the unique writing style of Markus Zusak, with the story narrated by a nihilistic [[FourthWallObserver fourth wall-observing]] [[TheGrimReaper Reaper in the form of a vulture.]]

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!! This fanfic provides examples of:
* TheMessiah: Hinata; chapter 11 revolves around her and is called 'The Dark-Haired Angel'.
--->Naruto knew that Hinata, with a soul so desperate to give, would forgive him every iniquity if she was given the chance to save a single person.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Averted, the Reds are identified by their red eyes, but are just normal people in alkl other regards. However, this is what the Konoha leadership would ''have'' people believe of them.
* StarCrossedLovers: Sakura and Sasuke.

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