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* AmazonChaser: Lincoln's parkour instructor is a pretty, buff woman who he can't deny he finds attractive.
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* AmazonChaser: Lincoln's parkour instructor is a pretty, buff woman who he can't deny he finds attractive. In general, Lincoln and Lynn Sr. both have a thing for tough women.
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* ButtMonkey: Lincoln's status as the series's punching bag is noticeably [[DownplayedTrope downplayed]], and allows more of his positive qualities to be noticed but not so much that he becomes perfect.
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* BigBrotherInstinct:
** The Louds siblings deeply care for their brother. When Cristina shows her face, they make it clear that they want her ''gone''.
** Rita herself understands their protectiveness, having been defensive of her own younger cousin when she was around their age.
* ButtMonkey: Lincoln's status as the series's punching bag is noticeably [[DownplayedTrope downplayed]], and allows more of his positive qualities to be noticed but not so much that he becomes perfect. Gradually, he begins tough enough to fight back against the torments he faces.
** The Louds siblings deeply care for their brother. When Cristina shows her face, they make it clear that they want her ''gone''.
** Rita herself understands their protectiveness, having been defensive of her own younger cousin when she was around their age.
* ButtMonkey: Lincoln's status as the series's punching bag is noticeably [[DownplayedTrope downplayed]], and allows more of his positive qualities to be noticed but not so much that he becomes perfect. Gradually, he begins tough enough to fight back against the torments he faces.
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* DudeMagnet: Cristina's cousin Belle, a.k.a. [[FanNickname the range dress-wearing background character, fan-named "Thicc QT"]], is attractive enough that she provokes the same sort of reaction [[HotTeacher Ms. DiMartino]] does from the boys.
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* DudeMagnet: DudeMagnet:
** Cristina's cousin Belle, a.k.a. [[FanNickname the range dress-wearing background character, fan-named "Thicc QT"]], is attractive enough that she provokes the same sort of reaction [[HotTeacher Ms. DiMartino]] does from the boys.
** Cristina's cousin Belle, a.k.a. [[FanNickname the range dress-wearing background character, fan-named "Thicc QT"]], is attractive enough that she provokes the same sort of reaction [[HotTeacher Ms. DiMartino]] does from the boys.
* DumbIsGood: Leni is the only sister who doesn't want to force her own idea of a romantic partner on Lincoln, knowing that whoever Lincoln dates has to make ''him'' happy.
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* GrewASpine: Lincoln stood up to Lori and Lola after learning martial arts from Adora and Albert
* HeelRealization: Cristina realizes she might have been too hard on Lincoln by blanking him after the video problem.
** His sisters realize when discussing what kind of girlfriend Lincoln should have now that Ronnie has moved that they're just discussing what ''they'' want them to be rather than what would be best for Lincoln.
* HeelRealization: Cristina realizes she might have been too hard on Lincoln by blanking him after the video problem.
** His sisters realize when discussing what kind of girlfriend Lincoln should have now that Ronnie has moved that they're just discussing what ''they'' want them to be rather than what would be best for Lincoln.
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* GrewASpine: Lincoln stood up to Lori and Lola after learning martial arts from Adora and Albert
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*HeelRealization: HasAType: Both Lincoln and his father have a thing for strong, assertive, and tough women.
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** Cristina realizes she might have been too hard on Lincoln by blanking him after the video problem.
**His After Leni calls them out, his sisters realize when discussing what kind of girlfriend Lincoln should have now that Ronnie has moved that they're just discussing what ''they'' want them to be rather than what would be best for Lincoln.
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* ShipperOnDeck: Lucy is a MASSIVE Lincoln x Haiku shipper. She even has a scrapbook dedicated to it and taking any chance to document any moment
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* ShipperWithAnAgenda: The Loud sisters want to force on Lincoln a partner who they think would make the kid they want him to be. Only Leni avoids this, and [[WhatTheHellHero calls the others out for trying to use Lincoln's romance for their own gain]].
* ShipperWithAnAgenda: The Loud sisters want to force on Lincoln a partner who they think would make the kid they want him to be. Only Leni avoids this, and [[WhatTheHellHero calls the others out for trying to use Lincoln's romance for their own gain]].
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* DumbassHasAPoint: [[TheDitz Leni]] is the one who points out to her sisters that they can't force a girl ''they'' would like onto Lincoln, and they can't make Lincoln be what they want them to be. Lynn lampshades this, thinking Leni actually saying something astute is the sign of the apocalypse.
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* SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan: Lincoln's fangirls genuinely find him to be a good, loving, and generous kid.
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* CrazyPrepared: Lincoln has a resume of him and his family when meeting Stella's family. Along with several walkie-talkies and grappling hooks. Lisa too with her bunker. [[spoiler: Even a room prepared for Lincoln when he wants to escape from his family]]
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* IcyBlueEyes: A recurring motif for Lincoln when he's serious or intimidating. Also, it's [[CreepyBlueEyes disturbing]] to his family
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* LeParkour: One of Lincoln's main skills that he kept after his parents tried to make him and his sisters more 'well-rounded'. It came in handy numerous times.
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* AngerBornOfWorry: Renee thought Lincoln was harmed or worse he pushed her out of the way of a speeding car hugging him then punching him in the shoulder.
**Ronnie ripped him a new one as he casually mentioned when he returned home
**Ronnie ripped him a new one as he casually mentioned when he returned home
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* ShesNotMyGirlfriend: Lincoln and Ronnie's relationship is ... strange. Both established that they're better off as friends. However, the two aren't against the idea of dating. Ronnie repeatedly says this while with her friends in Great Lake City but they don't believe it
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*MySisterIsOffLimits: Lynn Jr. is rather ''protective'' of Lincoln as she often threatens or warns her friends particularly Margo if they even think of it
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* SoProudOfYou: Lynn challenged Lincoln to boxing match. His skills and training paid off as he lasted six round with round and got the winning punch if he didn't held back. She lost but she couldn't be happier.
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* AgeLift: Haiku is attending the 5th grade with Lincoln in this fic; [[OutdatedByCanon canon would later revealed that she (and the rest of the Morticians Club) attend the 3rd grade with Lucy.]]
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* AgeLift: Haiku is attending the 5th grade with Lincoln in this fic; [[OutdatedByCanon canon would later revealed that she (and the rest of the Morticians Club) attend the 3rd grade with Lucy.]]
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* AgeLift: Haiku is attending the 5th grade with Lincoln in this fic; [[OutdatedByCanon canon would later revealed that she (and the rest of the Morticians Club) attend the 3rd grade with Lucy.
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* AgeLift: Haiku is attending the 5th grade with Lincoln in this fic; [[OutdatedByCanon canon would later revealed that she (and the rest of the Morticians Club) attend the 3rd grade with Lucy.]]
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* AgeLift[=/=]OutdatedByCanon: Haiku is attending the 5th grade with Lincoln in this fic; canon later revealed that she (and the rest of the Morticians Club) attends the 3rd grade with Lucy.
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* AgeLift[=/=]OutdatedByCanon: AgeLift: Haiku is attending the 5th grade with Lincoln in this fic; [[OutdatedByCanon canon would later revealed that she (and the rest of the Morticians Club) attends attend the 3rd grade with Lucy.
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* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Does anyone care about Lord Tetherby's fate? He attempted to kill his cousin, violated and demeaned his employees. A pompous, entitled, selfish man who lost all of fortunate, title and status. Lincoln kicked his ass, got thrown in jail with nothing to name]]
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Lisa, Lynn & Chandler are noticeably nicer to Lincoln
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* AdaptationalNameChange: Downplayed, in the show, Lincoln's middle name is Albert, but here, it's Leonidas.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Lisa, Lynn & Chandler are noticeably nicer toLincolnLincoln.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Lisa, Lynn & Chandler are noticeably nicer to
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* ACupAngst: Lynn took it hard when she found out Maggie was actually a little younger than her despite having the physique of someone Luna's age. When she Alexandria and finds out the girl is brother's age despite also having the build of someone older, Lynn has a small mental breakdown.
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* ACupAngst: Lynn took it hard when she found out Maggie was actually a little younger than her despite having the physique of someone Luna's age. When she Alexandria and finds out the girl is her brother's age despite also having the build of someone older, Lynn has a small mental breakdown.
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** Lincoln accidentally pushed it when asking about female Space Marines. The entire store almost attacked at him but Hugh replied that Lincoln was new to the franchise.
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** Hugh is a fantasy lover where an entire store knew him by name.
** Lincoln has knowledge about native Michigan flowers
** Lincoln has knowledge about native Michigan flowers
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* FBIAgent: Rita’s cousin Alex mentioned from chapter 8 finally made his appearance in chapter 24 during an interrogation
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* MaleGaze: Several lovely ladies caught Lincoln's eyes. Annabelle, Carlotta, Maggie, Adora, and Mrs. Yates.
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* SleepCute: A double dose for Lincoln. First with Lynn under the advice of Margo in an attempt to apologize for the NSL incident. All with an ‘I love you’ and kiss on the cheek much to his confusion.
** Then with Leni later that night after Lincoln was attacked by Tetherby. She sneaked into his room while he’s sleeping. His instincts detected her presence and opened a spot for her that she happily obliged before saying I love you to each other
** Then with Leni later that night after Lincoln was attacked by Tetherby. She sneaked into his room while he’s sleeping. His instincts detected her presence and opened a spot for her that she happily obliged before saying I love you to each other
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* TheFellowshipEnds: The QTs disbanded. Somewhat subverted as they continue to remain as friends
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* WrenchWench: Stella has shown hints of this with her desire, knowledge about technology especially robotics. She even has a mini-tool kit on hand.
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* ACupAngst: Lynn took it hard when she found out Maggie was actually a little younger than her despite having the physique of someone older, when she meets Alexandria is her brother's age despite also having the build of someone older, Lynn has a small mental breakdown.
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* ACupAngst: Lynn took it hard when she found out Maggie was actually a little younger than her despite having the physique of someone older, when Luna's age. When she meets Alexandria and finds out the girl is her brother's age despite also having the build of someone older, Lynn has a small mental breakdown.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Bumper Jr. has become rather ''unpleasant'' during and especially after the State Math losing it to Lynn Loud Jr. [[AdaptationalVillainy He starts plotting his revenge.]]
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* PowerTrio: Lincoln, Alexandria & Serena/Pandora are Adora students with their own styles
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* ButtMonkey: Lincoln's status as the series's punching bag is noticeably [[DownplayedTrope downplayed]], and allows more of his positive qualities to be noticed but not so much that he becomes [[MarySue perfect]].
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*MortonsFork: Margo and Paula approaches Drew giving him his options. He helps them takedown Bumper Jr and reduces his punishment or he can refuse, keep clean their stadium until the end of middle school with Bumper Jr. helping him. Doesn't matter which Drew choose since they have a plan for Bumper Jr. but Drew's help will make everything easier. He agrees to their demands.
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* PrisonersDilemma: The next phase of Lincoln's and Lynn's plan to deal with Bumper Jr's revenge scheme after Drew was caught. He explained to Polly, Margo, and Lynn that the two or more people are involved in a crime and are given a plea deal. They'll take it since it's the logical outcome. Not the ideal one but better than the other ones.
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* WouldHarmAChild: Yeah, Tetherby's life has gone rock bottom. He followed and attempted to attack Lincoln in the park for in his mind 'ruining his life'.
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* AmicableExes: Averted with Nikki's parents as they've been viciously arguing outside of the Bodega
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* AscendedExtra: Numerous characters such as the Qts, Maggie, Haiku, Hugh, Nikki, Stella, Albert, Myrtle, and the Yates have been given prominent roles and focus throughout the story
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* IdenticalStranger: Carol Pringey is basically Lori with longer hair. Also the Lori lookalike from 'Not a Loud'. Everyone see it except [[SelectiveObliviousness Lincoln who insists that they nothing lookalike]]
* OedipusComplex: Lincoln's classmates joked about it due to his living situation.
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* RippleEffectProofMemory: A recurring problem for Lincoln as he's the only one noticing the changes from Micheal's actions. Somewhat averted as someone assures that Lincoln doesn't recall any changes to the timeline.
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* RippleEffectProofMemory: A recurring problem for Lincoln as he's the only one noticing the changes from Micheal's actions. Somewhat averted as someone assures that Lincoln doesn't recall any changes to the timeline. [[spoiler: Even Lisa to protect Lincoln]]
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* CurbStompBattle: Albert delivered one to Lincoln when they sparred with a PunchedAcrossTheRoom. Alexandria and Serena backed out before a single punch was thrown
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* CurbStompBattle: Albert delivered one to Lincoln when they sparred with a PunchedAcrossTheRoom.[[PunchedAcrossTheRoom monstrous punch sending him flying across the room]]. Alexandria and Serena backed out before a single punch was thrown
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: This is what happened to several characters in the story. Cristina and Thicc QT are cousins. Same with Maggie and Haiku. Again Myrtle, Cheryl, Hugh, and Sweater QT. Although the relationship between Hugh and Cherly is more of an honorary aunt.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: This is what happened to several characters in the story. Cristina and Thicc QT are cousins. Same with Maggie and Haiku. Again Myrtle, Cheryl, Hugh, and Sweater QT. Although the relationship between Hugh and Cherly is more of an honorary aunt. Polly Pain's grandparents are Scoots and T-bone. Alexandria/Karate's mom is Lynn's soccer coach.
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* SecretTestOfCharacter: Of course three children with months of training weren't expected to defeat two well-trained adults. The purpose was for them to understand when it was better to know when to quit.
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*KnowWhenToFoldEm: The purpose of Lincoln, Alexandria and Serena's first real sparring match against Adora and Albert
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* ReallyGetsAround: Cherly's grandfather couldn't keep it in his pants but it allowed Myrtle to finally have some blood relatives.
*RelatedInTheAdaptation: This is what happened to several characters in the story. Cristina and Thicc QT are cousins. Same with Maggie and Haiku. Again Myrtle, Cheryl, Hugh, and Sweater QT. Although the relationship between Hugh and Cherly is more of an honorary aunt.
*RelatedInTheAdaptation: This is what happened to several characters in the story. Cristina and Thicc QT are cousins. Same with Maggie and Haiku. Again Myrtle, Cheryl, Hugh, and Sweater QT. Although the relationship between Hugh and Cherly is more of an honorary aunt.
