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* PirateEpisode: The ''Beyond'' two-parter "A Pirate's Life for Me" is this.
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* TheOathbreaker: [[spoiler:Breaking an Everlasting Oath makes a witch one of these and cripples their magic severely. Odalia becomes one when she injures Edric, violating her deal with Amity to never lay a finger on her siblings.]]
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* TheOathbreaker: TheOathBreaker: [[spoiler:Breaking an Everlasting Oath makes a witch one of these and cripples their magic severely. Odalia becomes one when she injures Edric, violating her deal with Amity to never lay a finger on her siblings.]]
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: In the penultimate chapter of the story, Edric gives one to [[spoiler:Lilith regarding her relationship with Eda as Lilith still sees her as Edalyn, the rowdy teenager she used to know.]]
-->[[spoiler:Her name is Eda! Eda the Owl Lady. The most powerful witch on the Boiling Isles and the Wild Witch of Bonesborough. She’s someone who has never been anything short of amazing to us exactly as she is. I get the feeling that you knew your sister Edalyn a long time ago… but do you actually know who Eda is?]]
-->[[spoiler:Her name is Eda! Eda the Owl Lady. The most powerful witch on the Boiling Isles and the Wild Witch of Bonesborough. She’s someone who has never been anything short of amazing to us exactly as she is. I get the feeling that you knew your sister Edalyn a long time ago… but do you actually know who Eda is?]]
* BeachEpisode: The first chapter of the ''Beyond'' series has Emira, the troublemakers, Luz and Amity going to the beach on the first day of summer vacation.
* ChekhovsSkill: In the last chapter of Act 2, Luz discovers that she can use light glyphs to take control of abominations. [[spoiler:Near the end of the story, she uses this knowledge to stop one of the Abomatrons the Blight parents are using before they overwhelm her and her friends.]]
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: [[spoiler:Lilith wasn't aware of Amity being inducted into the Emperor's Coven as Odalia made the deal with Kikimora.]]
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler:After years of having to endure Odalia's abuse and threats, the Blight siblings cut themselves off from their parents and are free to date their respective partners while living on their own in a home in the woods. Edric and Amity become multi-trackers and the latter is now genuine friends with Boscha.Boscha, who's happily dating Skara.]]
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: RoaringRampageOfRescue: [[spoiler:Upon learning about the deal Amity made with Odalia to keep her siblings, their partners and her girlfriend safe, Emira blasts through the library and storms through town with the intent of confronting their mother.mother to save her little sister.]]
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* TalkToTheFist: Viney ends up being the lucky one to [[spoiler:punch Odalia in the face and wipe off her smug smirk in the fi al confrontation against the Blight parents.]]
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The story has been completed. The author has stated they might come up with side A set of short stories set in titled ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38615058/chapters/96532533 Outsiders: Beyond]]'' take place a few months after the same universe as the main story.
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*** [[spoiler:she [[spoiler:She was so excited to get the approval of the Emperor's Coven to mass produce abomitrons that she realized too late that she and Alador can ''only'' make abomitrons for the Emperor. As a result, she has to deny orders from longtime clients who're cutting ties with them and tries to find a way out of it so the coven doesn't become their only connection left.]]
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Edric and Emira have always had each other's backs; that remains true even after they both [[ComingOutStory come out as gay]] and their parents disown them but allow them to continue to let them live at Blight Manor until they're old enough to join a coven. Years later, they both take respective interests in multi-trackers Jerbo and Viney and upon learning their sister Amity is crushing on the human Luz Noceda, they must find a way to keep all of their budding relationships safe and secret or face their parents' wrath.
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*** [[spoiler:she was so excited to get the approval of the Emperor's Coven to mass produce abomitrons that she realized too late that she and Alador can ''only'' make abomitrons for the Emperor. As a result, she has to deny orders from longtime clients who're cutting ties with them and tries to find a way out of it so the coven doesn't become their only connection left.]]]]
*** [[spoiler:In an act of desperation, she grabbed Edric's bad arm and pulled him to the ground. This violates her deal with Amity about laying a hand on the twins, and she becomes an oathbreaker, severely crippling her body and magic.]]
*** [[spoiler:During the final battle, she advertises the capabilities of the abomitron 3.0 during the kids' livestream. This violates her contract with the Emperor and he claims all assets and rights regarding the abomitron from Blight Industries.]]
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** Intentionally [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] near the end. [[spoiler:Odalia tells Amity not to move from the spot she's in until the final battle's over. When Odalia tells her to jump in, Amity reminds her of what she said and happily stays put.]]
** Emira challenges Eda to a duel. Eda immediately assumes a witch’s duel, but Emira points out she never specified what kind of duel and instead wants a duel in Hexes Hold
** Intentionally [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] near the end. [[spoiler:Odalia tells Amity not to move from the spot she's in until the final battle's over. When Odalia tells her to jump in, Amity reminds her of what she said and happily stays put.]]
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