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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:Zero sheds a tear after defeating and [[{{Patricide}} slaying his father]], as he was so heartbroken by his wife's death.]]

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* AlasPoorVillain: At the beginning, Infinite is defeated by the Resistance only to rip the Phantom Ruby away and be thrown into the dump by Eggman.
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[[spoiler:Zero sheds a tear after defeating and [[{{Patricide}} slaying his father]], as he was [[FreudianExcuse so heartbroken by his wife's death.death]].]]



* CryForTheDevil: The main point of this fanfic.



* HowWeGotHere: More so, how Infinite joined the Jackal Squad and became the leader.



* {{Jerkass}}: Claire acts rude and insulting to Zero at first, often teasing him, but she [[TookALevelInKindess Takes a Level in Kindness]].

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* {{Jerkass}}: Claire acts rude and insulting to Zero at first, often teasing him, but she [[TookALevelInKindess [[TookALevelInKindness Takes a Level in Kindness]].
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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:Zero sheds a tear after defeating and [[{{Patricide}} slaying his father]], as he was so heartbroken by his wife's death.]]
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* EyeScream: Stryker lost his eye during training at MIAGG.

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* EyeScream: Stryker lost his eye during training TrainingFromHell at MIAGG.


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* VeteranInstructor: Stryker is this to his fellow Jackal Squad, especially Zero, training them to execute the best heists.
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* {{Blackmail}}: Clyde threatens the Silvertown mayor with files detailing his corrupt actions to raise the reward money to 10 million dollars, or else he will release the information to the public. He also requests that if he does capture the Jackal Squad, he will be labeled as innocent.

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* ArtShift: The part in which Zero tells his fake backstory is stated to be presented in a {{Picture Book|s}}-esque slideshow.



* BadassInANiceSuit: Clyde's organized crime members wear tuxedos.

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* BadassInANiceSuit: In Zero's fictional backstory, the coyote and his friends, in which Zero and his partner stole from, wear tuxedos and are armed with guns.
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* AnimalJingoism: The Jackal Squad is made up of black-backed jackals and Clyde's crime organization of side-striped jackals. Quite interesting to know.
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* {{Patricide}}: [[spoiler:Near the end of TheClimax, Zero defeats and kills his own father, Axel.]]

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Because of his [[DeathByChildbirth mother's death at his birth]], Infinite's, back known as Zero, father, Axel, [[MaternalDeathBlameTheChild blamed his son for all of the incident]] and [[AbusiveParents emotionally abused him]]. Zero robbed and stole just to impress Axel, a retired professional thief, yet Axel cared little. When Axel [[FreudianExcuse ultimately revealed why he hated him]], Zero ran away into the desert and is found by the Jackal Squad. After being accepted into the squad and inspired by other members' backstories, Zero embarks on a journey to become the Ultimate Mercenary of the Jackal Squad, training heavily and helping his comrades carry out heists. Meanwhile, a criminal leader is plotting to defeat and kill the Jackal Squad...

The fanfic's writing used to be very horrible and cringey, with blatant grammar errors over the place. Currently, the author is rewriting the story to fix the grammar errors and reformat the written-as-prose script.

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Because of his [[DeathByChildbirth mother's death at his birth]], Infinite's, back known as Zero, father, Axel, [[MaternalDeathBlameTheChild blamed his son for all of the incident]] and [[AbusiveParents emotionally abused him]]. Zero robbed and stole just to impress Axel, a retired professional thief, yet Axel cared little. When Axel [[FreudianExcuse ultimately revealed why he hated him]], Zero ran away into the desert and is found by the Jackal Squad. After being accepted into the squad and inspired by other members' backstories, Zero embarks on a journey to become the Ultimate Mercenary of the Jackal Squad, training heavily and helping his comrades carry out heists. Meanwhile, Clyde, TheDon of a criminal leader crime organization, is plotting to defeat and kill the Jackal Squad...

The fanfic's writing used to be very horrible and cringey, with blatant grammar errors over the place. Currently, the The author is rewriting has rewrote the story to fix the grammar errors and errors, reformat the written-as-prose script.
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* EyepatchOfPower: Stryker wears one.
--> '''Young Radar''': That isn't what I'm worried about. It's those guys. They look to be pretty strong and also scary. Especially, the one with the eye patch.
* EyeScream: Stryker lost his eye during training at MIAGG.
** [[spoiler:During a swordfight, Axel scratches his son's right eye.]]
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Read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12837137/1/Memories-of-infinite-s-past here]]. Compare [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12755614/1/Forced-AU-The-Backstories-The-Rewrite Forced AU: The Backstories & Rewrite]], which also provides a backstory for Infinite, but is BloodierAndGorier than the source material.

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Read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12837137/1/Memories-of-infinite-s-past here]]. Compare [[https://www.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12755614/1/Forced-AU-The-Backstories-The-Rewrite Forced AU: The Backstories & Rewrite]], Rewrite]]'', which also provides a backstory for Infinite, but is BloodierAndGorier than the source material.

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* DarkerAndEdgier: While still PG-level and dark as ''VideoGame/ShadowTheHedgehog'', thus not edgy enough to be a DarkFic, ''Memories of infinite's past'' gives {{Dark and Troubled Past}}s to members of the Jackal Squad, throws in swordfights and bombs, averts NeverSayDie, has TheBigBad wanting to murder the Jackal Squad, and uses [[AbusiveParents child abuse]] as the driving trope behind Infinite's backstory.

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* DarkerAndEdgier: While still PG-level and dark as ''VideoGame/ShadowTheHedgehog'', thus not edgy enough to be a DarkFic, ''Memories of infinite's past'' gives {{Dark and Troubled Past}}s to members of the Jackal Squad, throws in swordfights and bombs, averts NeverSayDie, has TheBigBad being a CompleteMonster and wanting to murder the Jackal Squad, and uses [[AbusiveParents child abuse]] as the driving trope behind Infinite's backstory.



* SuperSoldier: Brawn was chosen as a guinea pig for HAM's experiment, Project Alpha, which was supposed to increase a soldier's speed, strength, and invulnerability. He went through it and it worked. Unfortunately, it later resulted in a FailsafeFailure (see Brawn's {{Backstory}} example).

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* SuperSoldier: Brawn was chosen as a guinea pig for HAM's experiment, Project Alpha, which was supposed to increase a soldier's speed, strength, and invulnerability. He went through it and it worked. Unfortunately, it later resulted in a FailsafeFailure (see Brawn's {{Backstory}} example).example).
* TragicVillain: [[spoiler:Zero fused himself with the Phantom Ruby and became Infinite, simply to avenge Shadow for killing off the Jackal Squad.]]
* YouHaveFailedMe: After one of Clyde's Henchmen fails to capture Stryker, [[KilledMidSentence just before he reveals who sent him]], Clyde [[HighVoltageDeath fatally electrocutes him]] through his headset.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: While still PG-level and dark as ''VideoGame/ShadowTheHedgehog'', thus not edgy enough to be a DarkFic, ''Memories of infinite's past'' gives {{Dark and Troubled Past}}s to members of the Jackal Squad, throws in swordfights and bombs, averts NeverSayDie, has TheBigBad wanting to murder the Jackal Squad, and uses [[AbusiveParents child abuse]] as the driving trope behind Infinite's backstory.
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Read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12837137/1/Memories-of-infinite-s-past here]].

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Read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12837137/1/Memories-of-infinite-s-past here]].
here]]. Compare [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12755614/1/Forced-AU-The-Backstories-The-Rewrite Forced AU: The Backstories & Rewrite]], which also provides a backstory for Infinite, but is BloodierAndGorier than the source material.
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* MyHeroZero: Zero is [[EmbarassingFirstName ashamed of his name]], until he hears Stryker's remark about it.

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* MyHeroZero: Zero is [[EmbarassingFirstName [[EmbarrassingFirstName ashamed of his name]], name that his father gaven him]], until he hears Stryker's remark about it.
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* MyHeroZero: Zero is [[EmbarassingFirstName ashamed of his name]], until he hears Stryker's remark about it.
--> '''Stryker''': What is your name?
--> '''Zero''': Um…. Well, I don't have a name.
--> '''Stryker''': Don't lie to me! Every living being on this planet was born with a name. Now I'll ask you again, what is your name?
--> '''Zero''': ''(thinking'') Darn it, this guy is good! ''(speaking)'' Fine. My name is…. Zero. My name is Zero the jackal.
--> ''Ace and Scar looks at Zero funny after knowing that he lied to them about not having a name.''
--> '''Stryker''': Zero, huh? Hmph… not a bad name.
--> ''Zero is highly surprised from that comment. He was expecting Stryker and the rest of the Jackal Squad to laugh at him.''
--> '''Zero''': What? You really think so?
--> '''Stryker''': Yeah, [[InvokedTrope it's a decent name for a mercenary.]]
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* {{Jerkass}}: Claire acts rude and insulting to Zero at first, often teasing him, but she later becomes gentle to him.

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* {{Jerkass}}: Claire acts rude and insulting to Zero at first, often teasing him, but she later becomes gentle to him.[[TookALevelInKindess Takes a Level in Kindness]].

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** MaternalDeathBlameTheChild: Oh boy, this is the number one reason Axel [[AbusiveParents abuses his son]]. [[spoiler:He later tries to [[YouShouldHaveDiedInstead kill Zero in order to avenge Ellie's death.]]]]

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** MaternalDeathBlameTheChild: Oh boy, this is the number one reason Axel [[AbusiveParents abuses his son]]. [[spoiler:He later tries to [[YouShouldHaveDiedInstead kill Zero in order to avenge Ellie's death.]]]]



** Heck, [[spoiler:he later tries to [[YouShouldHaveDiedInstead kill Zero in order to avenge Ellie's death.]]]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Axel''']]: [[spoiler:The boy who killed my wife is still alive and well while I'm still grieving over her death. Now I'm going to do what I should have done in the first place. I'm going to avenge 'ellie' by taking your life.]]



* FlashbackNightmare[=/=]RecurringDreams: Stryker, as a ShellShockedVeteran, has recurring nightmares of his ChildSoldier life.
--> '''Stryker''': Those dreams, again?



* ShellShockedVeteran: Stryker has frequent sudden memories of his life as a terrorist soldier, implying that he has Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder.

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* ShellShockedVeteran: Stryker has [[RecurringDreams frequent sudden memories of his life as a terrorist soldier, soldier]], implying that he has Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder.
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->''"Weak…Pathetic…..Worthless. [[ArcWords Those were the three words that I have always hated.]] Ever since those days."''

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->''"Weak…Pathetic…..->''"Weak….. Pathetic….. Worthless. [[ArcWords Those were the three words that I have always hated.]] Ever since those days."''



The fanfic's writing is very horrible, with the blatant grammar errors and the fact that it's a ScriptFic written in pose, but if one manages to get pass that, [[SugarWiki/BetterThanItSounds the story turns out to be quite good.]]

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The fanfic's writing is used to be very horrible, horrible and cringey, with the blatant grammar errors and over the fact that it's a ScriptFic written in pose, but if one manages to get pass that, [[SugarWiki/BetterThanItSounds place. Currently, the author is rewriting the story turns out to be quite good.]]
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* ScriptFic: The fic was originally written in pure screenplay script format. Later, due to Fanfiction.Net's rule against such {{Script Fic}}s, it was rewritten to prose, but still keeps its screenplay terminology.

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* ScriptFic: The fic was originally written in pure screenplay script format. Later, due to Fanfiction.Net's rule against such {{Script Fic}}s, it was rewritten to prose, but still keeps kept its screenplay terminology.terminology. The third rewrite returns some of screenplay terminology and font to pure format, but keeps most of the sentences prose.
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* RivalTurnedEvil: [[spoiler:Clyde was Stryker's rival in MIAGG. Now, when he discovers Stryker as a rich crime leader, he sets off to kill him. Stryker realizes this when he wonders how Clyde's henchmen know about him.]]
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* FaceDeathWithDignity[=/=]ObiWanMoment: [[spoiler:Stryker is happy to die, for that [[ItHadBeenAHonor he had done his job to raise a mercenary squad]] and having a certain someone look up to him.]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Stryker''']]: [[spoiler:Wow…..what a life I had. What a life I had.]]

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* BiggerBad: [[spoiler:Axel, who reappears and attempts to kill Zero]]



* ChildSoldier: Stryker was one in a terrorist organization. He was even sent out to battle in foreign countries at the age of '''10'''.

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* ChildSoldier: Stryker was one in a terrorist organization. He was even sent out to battle in foreign countries at the age of '''10'''. [[spoiler:Clyde was also a child soldier in the same organization.]]



** MaternalDeathBlameTheChild: Oh boy, this is the number one reason Axel [[AbusiveParents abuses his son]]. [[spoiler: He later tries to kill Zero in order to avenge Ellie's death.]]

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** MaternalDeathBlameTheChild: Oh boy, this is the number one reason Axel [[AbusiveParents abuses his son]]. [[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He later tries to [[YouShouldHaveDiedInstead kill Zero in order to avenge Ellie's death.]]]]]]


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* TheSocialDarwinist: Stryker believes in this, as a result of his {{Backstory}}, and passes this belief to Zero.
--> '''Stryker''': You see zero [[TheCynic the world Is not all about peace, kindness, and all of that utter nonsense]]. Its about struggle and fighting for personal goals that you desire to want to achieve. It is a world where you can't live a blissful life as you want it if you are weak. It is about survival and only the strong survives. And live there lives as they deserved to live. While the weak gets trampled by the strong
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** MaternalDeathBlameTheChild: Oh boy, this is the number one reason Axel [[AbusiveParents abuses his son]].

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** MaternalDeathBlameTheChild: Oh boy, this is the number one reason Axel [[AbusiveParents abuses his son]]. [[spoiler: He later tries to kill Zero in order to avenge Ellie's death.]]

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For failing to defeat the Resistance, Infinite learns that Eggman was using him only just to beat Sonic and then is trashed. The Rookie later finds Infinite in the dump and, after being uncertain for a while, rescues him, just when he falls asleep and tells his backstory.

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For failing to defeat the Resistance, Infinite learns that Eggman was using him only just to beat Sonic and then is trashed. The Rookie later finds Infinite in the dump and, after being uncertain for a while, sympathies with and rescues him, just when he falls asleep and tells his backstory.



** '''Radar, Ace, and Scar''': Radar, Ace, and Scar were brought to an orphanage in Greycity. The orphanage was so poor that the staff were too lazy to [[NoNameGiven name the nameless three.]] The three jackals escaped by tying bed sheets together to make a rope and climbing out of the window. They sneaked into Stryker's truck and threatened Stryker to drive them away from the city. Stryker offered to accept the three into the Jackal Squad and they accepted.
** '''Stryker''': Stryker's mother, a prisoner of war, died shortly after his birth in the hands of a terrorist organization, Men in Arms and Glory (MIAAG). The terrorist leader decided to raise him as a ChildSoldier. He lived a harsh and unpleasant life, fighting weak countries. One day, the terrorist leader [[VillainBall stupidly]] called an attack on a country known as Metropolis. With most of his squad wiped out, Stryker had no choice but to surrender and escape to the base by sewer. The leader was very furious at his decision and exiled him to a faraway desert. While he was waiting to die, a villager found, rescued, and nursed Stryker back to health. Four years later, Stryker left to start his dream.
** '''Clyde''':
** '''Axel''':

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** '''Radar, Ace, and Scar''': Radar, Ace, and Scar were brought to an orphanage in Greycity. The orphanage was so poor that the staff were too lazy to [[NoNameGiven name the nameless three.]] three. The three jackals escaped by tying bed sheets together to make a rope and climbing out of the window. They sneaked into Stryker's truck and threatened Stryker to drive them away from the city. Stryker offered to accept the three into the Jackal Squad and they accepted.
** '''Stryker''': Stryker's mother, a prisoner of war, died shortly after his birth in the hands of a terrorist organization, Men in Arms and Glory (MIAAG). The terrorist leader decided to raise him as a ChildSoldier. He lived a harsh and unpleasant life, fighting weak countries. One day, the terrorist leader [[VillainBall stupidly]] called an attack on a country known as Metropolis. With most of his squad wiped out, Stryker had no choice but to surrender and escape to the base by sewer. The leader was very furious at his decision and exiled him to a faraway desert. While he was waiting to die, a villager found, rescued, and nursed Stryker back to health. Four years later, Stryker left to start follow his dream.
** '''Clyde''':
'''Clyde''': [[spoiler:Clyde was also raised and trained by the MIAGG leader, often performing better than Stryker. Egoistical and bloodthirsty, he mocked anyone below his level and even dreamed to kill the leader and take over the organization. At that war in Metropolis, Stryker retreated to a school building and Clyde was there, attempting to fight him to death. The building collapsed, presumably perishing Clyde, and Stryker fortunately escaped. Clyde was found by the Metropolis soldiers alive and sentenced for life in prison, while MIAGG collapsed. [[GreatEscape He and his inmate friends escaped]], left Metropolis, settled in Silvertown, and begin building his crime organization, making a living off selling illegal weapons and assassinations.]]
** '''Axel''':'''Axel''': [[spoiler:Axel was a homeless child living on the street, stealing food to survive. Clyde adopted him and taught him to rob and be a great bandit. Axel served as Clyde's {{Lancer}}, until Clyde started his organization and kicked him out. Axel met a woman at a bar and they fell in love.]]


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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Zero successfully becomes stronger than Shadow, who slaughtered his Jackal Squad, by transforming into Infinite via Phantom Ruby. Thanks to the first chapter, Infinite is defeated by Sonic and trashed by Eggman. Fortunately, the Rookie [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain realizes the good humanity inside]] and rescues him.]]
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** '''Stryker''': Stryker's mother, a prisoner of war, died shortly after his birth in the hands of a terrorist organization, Men in Arms and Glory (MIAAG). The terrorist leader decided to raise him as a ChildSoldier. He lived a harsh and unpleasant life, fighting weak countries. One day, the terrorist leader [[WhatAnIdiot stupidly]] called an attack on a country known as Metropolis. With most of his squad wiped out, Stryker had no choice but to surrender and escape to the base by sewer. The leader was very furious at his decision and exiled him to a faraway desert. While he was waiting to die, a villager found, rescued, and nursed Stryker back to health. Four years later, Stryker left to start his dream.

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** '''Stryker''': Stryker's mother, a prisoner of war, died shortly after his birth in the hands of a terrorist organization, Men in Arms and Glory (MIAAG). The terrorist leader decided to raise him as a ChildSoldier. He lived a harsh and unpleasant life, fighting weak countries. One day, the terrorist leader [[WhatAnIdiot [[VillainBall stupidly]] called an attack on a country known as Metropolis. With most of his squad wiped out, Stryker had no choice but to surrender and escape to the base by sewer. The leader was very furious at his decision and exiled him to a faraway desert. While he was waiting to die, a villager found, rescued, and nursed Stryker back to health. Four years later, Stryker left to start his dream.

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* ArchEnemy[=/=]TheBigBad: Clyde, Stryker's RivalTurnedEvil and TheDon of an organized crime group, who wants to kill Stryker and the whole squad

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* ArchEnemy[=/=]TheBigBad: Clyde, [[spoiler: Stryker's RivalTurnedEvil RivalTurnedEvil]] and TheDon of an organized crime group, who wants to kill Stryker and the whole squad



** '''Stryker''':

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** '''Stryker''':'''Stryker''': Stryker's mother, a prisoner of war, died shortly after his birth in the hands of a terrorist organization, Men in Arms and Glory (MIAAG). The terrorist leader decided to raise him as a ChildSoldier. He lived a harsh and unpleasant life, fighting weak countries. One day, the terrorist leader [[WhatAnIdiot stupidly]] called an attack on a country known as Metropolis. With most of his squad wiped out, Stryker had no choice but to surrender and escape to the base by sewer. The leader was very furious at his decision and exiled him to a faraway desert. While he was waiting to die, a villager found, rescued, and nursed Stryker back to health. Four years later, Stryker left to start his dream.



* BadassInANiceSuit: Clyde's organized crime members wear tuxedos.



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* ArchEnemy[=/=]TheBigBad: Clyde, Stryker's RivalTurnedEvil and leader of a mafia-like group, who wants to kill Stryker and the whole squad

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* ArchEnemy[=/=]TheBigBad: Clyde, Stryker's RivalTurnedEvil and leader TheDon of a mafia-like an organized crime group, who wants to kill Stryker and the whole squad


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** '''Axel''':


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* DamnItFeelsGoodToBeAGangster: Clyde is a multi-millionaire [[TheDon Don]] and his organized crime group hang out in his large mansion, complete with wine and an arcade.


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* MobWar: Between the Jackal Squad and Clyde's organized crime group in TheClimax
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* AnAesop: To have your title as the strongest one, you must ''earn'' it.


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* PottyEmergency: One of the Silvertown Museum night guards ends up having to use a toilet from eating too much burritos. [[spoiler:It becomes a ChekhovsGun as Radar fails to spot him, allowing him to call the police.]]

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** '''Claire''':
** '''Brawn''':
** '''Radar, Ace, and Scar''':

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** '''Claire''':
'''Claire''': Claire was born to Lock-On Larry, the best gunslinger and most wanted bandit in Tombstoneville, and an average woman, Anna, who didn't care about her husband's reputation. He left his criminal life to help Anna and raise Claire, yet taught Claire how to shoot guns. They lived a happy life, until one day, the police found Larry's secret hideout. Claire and Anna were forced to flee and Larry was presumably killed. After 6 months out surviving in the desert, her mother died from illness and the Jackal Squad encountered Claire, offering to accept her. She refused at first, but gave in.
** '''Brawn''':
'''Brawn''': Brawn was abandoned in the woods as a baby and found by an orphanage. After being adopted by and given up by many parents, he was finally HappilyAdopted by Joseph, an army soldier. He, wanting to follow his adoptive father's footsteps, became a soldier in the Honor Among Men (HAM) army and led a happy life serving his country. One day, Brawn was chosen as a test subject for a HAM SuperSoldier experiment, Project Alpha. The procedure worked, however, just after the transformation, Brawn rushes to a sudden battle and later passes out. This results in him [[TheSpeechless losing his ability to talk]] and becoming weaker than he was before, since he didn't rest and allow the body get used to the SuperSoldier chemicals. With the addition of Joseph being killed, Brawn was discharged from HAM and later was found by Stryker, who was just starting the Jackal Squad.
** '''Radar, Ace, and Scar''':Scar''': Radar, Ace, and Scar were brought to an orphanage in Greycity. The orphanage was so poor that the staff were too lazy to [[NoNameGiven name the nameless three.]] The three jackals escaped by tying bed sheets together to make a rope and climbing out of the window. They sneaked into Stryker's truck and threatened Stryker to drive them away from the city. Stryker offered to accept the three into the Jackal Squad and they accepted.


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* ActionGirl: Claire, [[TheSquadette member of the Jackal Squad]] and a great gunslinger



* {{Backstory}}: The fanfic is dedicated to telling Infinite's backstory. However, other major characters' backstories are given too. Some of these examples may fall under DarkAndTroubledPast.
** '''Claire''':
** '''Brawn''':
** '''Radar, Ace, and Scar''':
** '''Stryker''':
** '''Clyde''':
* TheCaper: Last part of Chapter 5, "Zero's improvements", and Chapter 6, "The heist", follows the Jackal Squad attempting to rob the Silvertown Museum and steal its artifacts. [[spoiler:They fail, as they are forced to escape without the artifacts.]]
* CaperCrew: The Jackal Squad depicted in the fic is detailed more elaborately than in the ''VideoGame/SonicForces'' comic. Stryker is the Mastermind, Radar is the Hacker and Gadget Guy, Brawn is the Muscle, Scar, Ace, and Claire are the Burglars, and Zero is the New Kid.
* ChildSoldier: Stryker was one in a terrorist organization
* DeadpanSnarker: Brawn in Zero's first training session:
--> '''Brawn''': ''(writing)'' Yes. Because currently compared to me and the other guys [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything you have the physical strength of a women.]]
--> '''Zero''': I think I just added another person on my hate list!



* TheSpeechless: Brawn is unable to speak as a result of a FailsafeFailure SuperSoldier accident.
* TheSmurfettePrinciple: Claire is the only female member of the Jackal Squad. Furthermore, she's the only major female character.

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* InitiationCeremony: Horrific example. To join the Jackal Squad, Zero must retrieve a cardboard key without making too much noise, touching the [[MechaMook robotic lions]] or the wires, or attempting to jump high over the obstacles, or else the alarm will be triggered and the robotic lions will hunt him down. Worse, the alarm will even trigger if the key is gotten. No wonder many jackals didn't survive. {{Justified}}, as the trial was designed to emulate the risky and life-threatening ways of robbing valuables.
* {{Jerkass}}: Claire acts rude and insulting to Zero at first, often teasing him, but she later becomes gentle to him.
--> '''Claire''': Hey, what's wrong? You scared or something?
--> '''Zero''': [[BigWhat WHAT?]] ME...AFRAID!? DON'T BE RIDICULOUS!
--> '''Claire''': Hey now you don't have to deny it that you're just a big baby. Hey boss, maybe we should have brought a diaper with us for [[BabyTalk poor wittle zewo.]]
--> '''Zero''': [[BigWhat WHAAAAT!?]]
--> '''Stryker''': Claire stop teasing zero!
--> '''Claire''': Aaw boss you're no fun sometimes! I was just joking with him.
--> '''Zero''': ''(thinking)'' I hate this women so much!
--> '''Ace''': Don't mind her kid, that is just her way of being friendly.
--> '''Zero''': That is one of the worst excuses I have ever heard!
* NewMeat: Zero, to the Jackal Squad.
* ProfessionalKiller: Clyde happens to be an assassin.
* TheSpeechless: Brawn is unable to speak as a result of a FailsafeFailure SuperSoldier accident.
accident. He communicates by writing down his words in his notebook and showing them.
* TheSmurfettePrinciple: TheSmurfettePrinciple[=/=]TheSquadette: Claire is the only female member of the Jackal Squad. Furthermore, she's the only major female character.character.
* SuperSoldier: Brawn was chosen as a guinea pig for HAM's experiment, Project Alpha, which was supposed to increase a soldier's speed, strength, and invulnerability. He went through it and it worked. Unfortunately, it later resulted in a FailsafeFailure (see Brawn's {{Backstory}} example).
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->''"Weak…Pathetic…..Worthless. [[ArcWords Those were the three words that I have always hated.]] Ever since those days."''
-->-- '''Infinite''', Chapter 1

'''Memories of infinite's past''' is a ''VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog'' [[ScriptFic Script]] PseudocanonicalFic that serves as (mostly) a {{Prequel}} to ''VideoGame/SonicForces'' and tells what might have been a possible {{Backstory}} for Infinite, the game's BigBad.

For failing to defeat the Resistance, Infinite learns that Eggman was using him only just to beat Sonic and then is trashed. The Rookie later finds Infinite in the dump and, after being uncertain for a while, rescues him, just when he falls asleep and tells his backstory.

Because of his [[DeathByChildbirth mother's death at his birth]], Infinite's, back known as Zero, father, Axel, [[MaternalDeathBlameTheChild blamed his son for all of the incident]] and [[AbusiveParents emotionally abused him]]. Zero robbed and stole just to impress Axel, a retired professional thief, yet Axel cared little. When Axel [[FreudianExcuse ultimately revealed why he hated him]], Zero ran away into the desert and is found by the Jackal Squad. After being accepted into the squad and inspired by other members' backstories, Zero embarks on a journey to become the Ultimate Mercenary of the Jackal Squad, training heavily and helping his comrades carry out heists. Meanwhile, a criminal leader is plotting to defeat and kill the Jackal Squad...

The fanfic's writing is very horrible, with the blatant grammar errors and the fact that it's a ScriptFic written in pose, but if one manages to get pass that, the story turns out to be quite good.

'''Note''': To prevent heavy wording, Present Infinite is referred to Infinite and Past Infinite is referred to as Zero.

Read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12837137/1/Memories-of-infinite-s-past here]].

!! This fanfic provides examples of:
* ArchEnemy[=/=]TheBigBad: Clyde, Stryker's RivalTurnedEvil and leader of a mafia-like group, who wants to kill Stryker and the whole squad
* DeathByChildbirth: His mother, Ellie, died when Zero was born.
** MaternalDeathBlameTheChild: Oh boy, this is the number one reason Axel [[AbusiveParents abuses his son]].
--> '''Axel''': Your mother is dead. She is dead because of you! I hated you ever since you were born for what you have done! Your entire birth caused my one true love to die!
* FiveManBand: The Jackal Squad
** TheLeader: Stryker
** TheLancer: Ace and Scar
** TheSmartGuy: Radar
** TheBigGuy: Brawn
** TheChick: Claire
** [[TheSixthRanger The Seventh Ranger]]: Zero
* FurryDenial: Despite the cast being FunnyAnimals, they still call each other "men".
* TheSpeechless: Brawn is unable to speak as a result of a FailsafeFailure SuperSoldier accident.
* TheSmurfettePrinciple: Claire is the only female member of the Jackal Squad. Furthermore, she's the only major female character.

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