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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13413805/1/Mass-Effect-Bionicle-Revolution Mass Effect: Bionicle Revolution]]'' is a crossover between ''Toys/{{Bionicle}}'' and ''Franchise/MassEffect'' where, in the Kingdom AlternateUniverse, the Kingdom managed to successfully immigrate to another planet, only to then run into the Citadel races and completely upend the galaxy, throwing a major wrench in the plans of the Reapers in the process.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13413805/1/Mass-Effect-Bionicle-Revolution Mass Effect: Bionicle Revolution]]'' is a crossover between ''Toys/{{Bionicle}}'' and ''Franchise/MassEffect'' where, in the Kingdom AlternateUniverse, the Kingdom managed to successfully immigrate to another planet, only to then run into the Citadel races and completely upend the galaxy, throwing a major wrench in the plans of the Reapers in the process. Can also be read [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mass-effect-bionicle-revolution.796365/ here.]]
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* InSpiteOfANail: [[spoiler: Jack Harper, suspicious of the Collectors' intentions behind their uplift of humanity (least of all because leaders who had been hostile to their offer [[{{Brainwashed}} suddenly changed their mind after a single meeting]]) still forms Cerberus with the same goal of protecting humanity. And just for good measure [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Anderson is revealed to be working with them too]]]].
* MissedHimByThatMuch: When Tela Vasir contacts the Shadow Broker to sell out the Toa Mahri, [[spoiler: Triglax had just taken out the Yahg broker only minutes before, and sends a team to take her into custody instead.]]
* MissedHimByThatMuch: When Tela Vasir contacts the Shadow Broker to sell out the Toa Mahri, [[spoiler: Triglax had just taken out the Yahg broker only minutes before, and sends a team to take her into custody instead.]]
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* {{Telepathy}}: A Kanohii Suletu is a handy thing to have when processing visitors to the Kingdom, since the wearer can discover spies from the likes of the STG and Shadow Broker.
* TechnologyUplift: Recognizing the technological advantage the Kingdom possesses to disrupt the Reaper's cycle, [[spoiler: the Collectors are dispatched to Earth, who hadn't even discovered the Prothean cache on Mars yet, let alone the Charon relay, to uplift them as a catspaw against the Kingdom.]]
* TechnologyUplift: Recognizing the technological advantage the Kingdom possesses to disrupt the Reaper's cycle, [[spoiler: the Collectors are dispatched to Earth, who hadn't even discovered the Prothean cache on Mars yet, let alone the Charon relay, to uplift them as a catspaw against the Kingdom.]]
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** When one of the asari matriachs brushes off the idea of the Kingdom posing a threat to the asari's standing in the galaxy as they've thought the same about younger species, another Matriarch points out that they're not dealing with a younger species.
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** When one of the asari matriachs Matriarchs brushes off the idea of the Kingdom posing a threat to the asari's standing in the galaxy as they've thought the same about younger species, another Matriarch points out that they're not dealing with a younger species.
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** When one of the asari matriachs brushes off that the Kingdom should pose no threat to the asari's standing in the galaxy as they've thought the same about younger species, another Matriarch points out that they're not dealing with a younger species.
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** When one of the asari matriachs brushes off that the idea of the Kingdom should pose no posing a threat to the asari's standing in the galaxy as they've thought the same about younger species, another Matriarch points out that they're not dealing with a younger species.
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** Botar's ability to teleport himself and whoever he wants into seemingly any location without having to know its precise coordinates is cause for concern for some of the Citadel races. Brutaka's ability to generate portals across thousands of lightyears only increases that concern further. The turians are wary at the idea of going to war with the Kingdom for basically him alone.
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** Botar's ability to teleport himself and whoever he wants into seemingly any location without having to know its precise coordinates is cause for concern for some of the Citadel races. Brutaka's ability to generate portals across thousands of lightyears light-years only increases that concern further. The turians are wary at the idea of going to war with the Kingdom for basically him Botar alone.
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** Averted with the Turian Hierarchy who note that if they went to war against the Kingdom, they could just teleport into any of their ships to cripple them or even the Hierarchy's current location to assassinate the entirety of turian leadership.
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** Averted with the Turian Hierarchy who note that if they went to war against the Kingdom, they could just teleport into any of their ships to cripple them or even the Hierarchy's current location to assassinate the entirety of the turian leadership.
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** Botar's ability to teleport himself and whoever he wants into seemingly any location without having to know its precise coordinates is cause for concern for some of the Citadel races. The turians are wary at the idea of going to war with the Kingdom for basically him alone.
* PragmaticHero: The Kingdom leadership's plans to establish connections in the ''Mass Effect'' universe include making deals with Aria and the geth or having an Order of Mata Nui agent KillAndReplace one of the Shadow Broker's operatives.
* PragmaticHero: The Kingdom leadership's plans to establish connections in the ''Mass Effect'' universe include making deals with Aria and the geth or having an Order of Mata Nui agent KillAndReplace one of the Shadow Broker's operatives.
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** Botar's ability to teleport himself and whoever he wants into seemingly any location without having to know its precise coordinates is cause for concern for some of the Citadel races. Brutaka's ability to generate portals across thousands of lightyears only increases that concern further. The turians are wary at the idea of going to war with the Kingdom for basically him alone.
* PragmaticHero: The Kingdom leadership's plans to establish connections in the ''Mass Effect'' universe include making deals with Aria and the geth or havingan Order of Mata Nui agent a Dark Hunter KillAndReplace one of the Shadow Broker's operatives.
* PragmaticHero: The Kingdom leadership's plans to establish connections in the ''Mass Effect'' universe include making deals with Aria and the geth or having
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** Averted with the Turian Hierarchy who note that if they went to war against the Kingdom, Botar they could just teleport into any of their ships to cripple them or even the Hierarchy's current location to assassinate the entirety of turian leadership.
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* IAmNotLeftHanded: The Kingdom is careful to keep their full capabilities under wraps when dealing with aliens. Most notably, they're careful not to breath so much of a word about the Vahi, Ignika, or their Energized Protodermis stores.
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* IAmNotLeftHanded: The Kingdom is careful to keep their full capabilities under wraps when dealing with aliens. Most notably, they're careful not to breath breathe so much of a word about the Vahi, Ignika, or their Energized Protodermis stores.
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** A group of batarian pirates attempt to capture the Kingdom inhabitants and sell them into slavery, confident that their weapons will cow the "primitive" beings into compliance. [[ExtraOreDinary Zaria]] [[CurbStompBattle easily disarms the landing party of their weapons and lock them in place and Tahu, Kopaka, Chiara and Axonn destroy their ships.]]
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** A group of batarian pirates attempt to capture the Kingdom inhabitants and sell them into slavery, confident that their weapons will cow the "primitive" beings into compliance. [[ExtraOreDinary Zaria]] [[CurbStompBattle easily disarms the landing party of their weapons and lock locks them in place and Tahu, Kopaka, Chiara and Axonn destroy their ships.]]
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** Botar's ability to teleport into seemingly any location without having to know its precise coordinates is cause for concern for some of the Citadel races. The turians are wary at the idea of going to war with the Kingdom for basically him alone.
* PragmaticHero: The Kingdom's leadership's plans to establish connections in the ''Mass Effect'' universe include making deals with Aria and the geth or having an Order of Mata Nui agent KillAndReplace one of the Shadow Broker's operatives.
* PragmaticHero: The Kingdom's leadership's plans to establish connections in the ''Mass Effect'' universe include making deals with Aria and the geth or having an Order of Mata Nui agent KillAndReplace one of the Shadow Broker's operatives.
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** Botar's ability to teleport himself and whoever he wants into seemingly any location without having to know its precise coordinates is cause for concern for some of the Citadel races. The turians are wary at the idea of going to war with the Kingdom for basically him alone.
* PragmaticHero: TheKingdom's Kingdom leadership's plans to establish connections in the ''Mass Effect'' universe include making deals with Aria and the geth or having an Order of Mata Nui agent KillAndReplace one of the Shadow Broker's operatives.
* PragmaticHero: The
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** When one of the asari Matriachs brushes off that the Kingdom should pose no threat to the asari's standing in the galaxy as they've thought the same about younger species, another Matriarch points out that they're not dealing with a younger species.
** Averted with the turian Hierarchy who note that if they went to war against the Kingdom, Botar could just teleport into any of their ships to cripple them or even the Hierarchy's current location to assassinate the entirety of turian leadership.
** A group of batarian pirates attempt to capture the Kingdom inhabitants and sell them into slavery, confident that their weapons will cow the "primitive" beings into compliance. [[ExtraOreDinary Zaria]] easily disarms the landing party of their weapons and lock them in place and Tahu, Kopaka, Chiara and Axonn destroy their ships.
** When The Shadowed One, Ancient, Sentrakh, and Johmak go to Omega, they are greeted by a group of Blood Pack mercenaries. [[CurbStompBattle The Dark Hunters and Order of Mata Nui agent make short work of them.]]
** Averted with the turian Hierarchy who note that if they went to war against the Kingdom, Botar could just teleport into any of their ships to cripple them or even the Hierarchy's current location to assassinate the entirety of turian leadership.
** A group of batarian pirates attempt to capture the Kingdom inhabitants and sell them into slavery, confident that their weapons will cow the "primitive" beings into compliance. [[ExtraOreDinary Zaria]] easily disarms the landing party of their weapons and lock them in place and Tahu, Kopaka, Chiara and Axonn destroy their ships.
** When The Shadowed One, Ancient, Sentrakh, and Johmak go to Omega, they are greeted by a group of Blood Pack mercenaries. [[CurbStompBattle The Dark Hunters and Order of Mata Nui agent make short work of them.]]
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** When one of the asari Matriachs matriachs brushes off that the Kingdom should pose no threat to the asari's standing in the galaxy as they've thought the same about younger species, another Matriarch points out that they're not dealing with a younger species.
** Averted with theturian Turian Hierarchy who note that if they went to war against the Kingdom, Botar could just teleport into any of their ships to cripple them or even the Hierarchy's current location to assassinate the entirety of turian leadership.
** A group of batarian pirates attempt to capture the Kingdom inhabitants and sell them into slavery, confident that their weapons will cow the "primitive" beings into compliance. [[ExtraOreDinary Zaria]] [[CurbStompBattle easily disarms the landing party of their weapons and lock them in place and Tahu, Kopaka, Chiara and Axonn destroy theirships.
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** When The Shadowed One, Ancient, Sentrakh, and Johmak go to Omega, they are greeted by a group of Blood Pack mercenaries.[[CurbStompBattle [[MuggingTheMonster The Dark Hunters and Order of Mata Nui agent make short work of them.]]
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** A group of batarian pirates attempt to capture the Kingdom inhabitants and sell them into slavery, confident that their weapons will cow the "primitive" beings into compliance. [[ExtraOreDinary Zaria]] [[CurbStompBattle easily disarms the landing party of their weapons and lock them in place and Tahu, Kopaka, Chiara and Axonn destroy their
** When The Shadowed One, Ancient, Sentrakh, and Johmak go to Omega, they are greeted by a group of Blood Pack mercenaries.
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* FantasticRacism: Due to the Geth causing rampant mistrust of AI, the Citadel races are immediately fearful of the biomechanical inhabitants of the Kingdom when they first meet, with some even advocating to try and destroy them immediately.
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* FantasticRacism: Due to the Geth geth causing rampant mistrust of AI, the Citadel races are immediately fearful of the biomechanical inhabitants of the Kingdom when they first meet, with some even advocating to try and destroy them immediately.
* OutsideContextProblem:
** The Toa's ability to manipulate elements goes beyond anything any of the Citadel races thought possible. [[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu Even Sovereign is brought down by a group of Toa working together.]]
** Botar's ability to teleport into seemingly any location without having to know its precise coordinates is cause for concern for some of the Citadel races. The turians are wary at the idea of going to war with the Kingdom for basically him alone.
* PragmaticHero: The Kingdom's leadership's plans to establish connections in the ''Mass Effect'' universe include making deals with Aria and the geth or having an Order of Mata Nui agent KillAndReplace one of the Shadow Broker's operatives.
** The Toa's ability to manipulate elements goes beyond anything any of the Citadel races thought possible. [[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu Even Sovereign is brought down by a group of Toa working together.]]
** Botar's ability to teleport into seemingly any location without having to know its precise coordinates is cause for concern for some of the Citadel races. The turians are wary at the idea of going to war with the Kingdom for basically him alone.
* PragmaticHero: The Kingdom's leadership's plans to establish connections in the ''Mass Effect'' universe include making deals with Aria and the geth or having an Order of Mata Nui agent KillAndReplace one of the Shadow Broker's operatives.
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* SufficientlyAdvancedTechnology: The Kingdom's technologies and the abilities of many of its inhabitants, despite many of them having seemingly primitive exteriors, are ''so'' far beyond what the Citadel races are capable of that they can't '''begin''' to figure out how to reverse-engineer them, and one scientist notes that the Kanoka discs alone seem to defy every law of nature that they know.
* TimeSkip: The story takes place millennia after the last time that we saw the Kingdom universe in canon, with them having managed to travel to another star system after expanded Mata Nui island started to become unstable.
* TimeSkip: The story takes place millennia after the last time that we saw the Kingdom universe in canon, with them having managed to travel to another star system after expanded Mata Nui island started to become unstable.
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* SufficientlyAdvancedTechnology: The Kingdom's technologies and the abilities of many of its inhabitants, despite many of them having seemingly primitive exteriors, are ''so'' far beyond what the Citadel races are capable of that they can't '''begin''' ''begin'' to figure out how to reverse-engineer them, and one scientist notes that the Kanoka discs alone seem to defy every law of nature that they know.
* TimeSkip: The story takes place millennia after the last time that we saw the Kingdom universe in canon, with them having managed to travel to another star system after the expanded Mata Nui island started to becomeunstable.unstable.
* UnderestimatingBadassery:
** When one of the asari Matriachs brushes off that the Kingdom should pose no threat to the asari's standing in the galaxy as they've thought the same about younger species, another Matriarch points out that they're not dealing with a younger species.
** Averted with the turian Hierarchy who note that if they went to war against the Kingdom, Botar could just teleport into any of their ships to cripple them or even the Hierarchy's current location to assassinate the entirety of turian leadership.
** A group of batarian pirates attempt to capture the Kingdom inhabitants and sell them into slavery, confident that their weapons will cow the "primitive" beings into compliance. [[ExtraOreDinary Zaria]] easily disarms the landing party of their weapons and lock them in place and Tahu, Kopaka, Chiara and Axonn destroy their ships.
** When The Shadowed One, Ancient, Sentrakh, and Johmak go to Omega, they are greeted by a group of Blood Pack mercenaries. [[CurbStompBattle The Dark Hunters and Order of Mata Nui agent make short work of them.]]
** Aria T'Loak attempts to intimidate The Shadowed One when he comes to negotiate. He is unimpressed on account of having run his own criminal empire for much longer. [[KnowWhenToFoldEm Aria backs down and listens to his offer.]]
* TimeSkip: The story takes place millennia after the last time that we saw the Kingdom universe in canon, with them having managed to travel to another star system after the expanded Mata Nui island started to become
* UnderestimatingBadassery:
** When one of the asari Matriachs brushes off that the Kingdom should pose no threat to the asari's standing in the galaxy as they've thought the same about younger species, another Matriarch points out that they're not dealing with a younger species.
** Averted with the turian Hierarchy who note that if they went to war against the Kingdom, Botar could just teleport into any of their ships to cripple them or even the Hierarchy's current location to assassinate the entirety of turian leadership.
** A group of batarian pirates attempt to capture the Kingdom inhabitants and sell them into slavery, confident that their weapons will cow the "primitive" beings into compliance. [[ExtraOreDinary Zaria]] easily disarms the landing party of their weapons and lock them in place and Tahu, Kopaka, Chiara and Axonn destroy their ships.
** When The Shadowed One, Ancient, Sentrakh, and Johmak go to Omega, they are greeted by a group of Blood Pack mercenaries. [[CurbStompBattle The Dark Hunters and Order of Mata Nui agent make short work of them.]]
** Aria T'Loak attempts to intimidate The Shadowed One when he comes to negotiate. He is unimpressed on account of having run his own criminal empire for much longer. [[KnowWhenToFoldEm Aria backs down and listens to his offer.]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13413805/1/Mass-Effect-Bionicle-Revolution Mass Effect: Bionicle Revolution]] is a crossover between ''Toys/{{Bionicle}}'' and ''Franchise/MassEffect'' where, in the Kingdom AlternateUniverse, the Kingdom managed to successfully immigrate to another planet, only to then run into the Citadel races and completely upend the galaxy, throwing a major wrench in the plans of the Reapers in the process.
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* ReformedButNotTamed: The best way to describe the morally ambiguous members of the Kingdom's leadership. The Shadowed One in particular notes that he's actually grown genuinely fond of the Matoran over the millennia. He'd still kill the others on the Coucil without remorse, sure, but only if the Kingdom's survival depended on it.
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* ReformedButNotTamed: The best way to describe the morally ambiguous members of the Kingdom's leadership. The Shadowed One in particular notes that he's actually grown genuinely fond of the Matoran over the millennia. He'd still kill the others on the Coucil Council without remorse, sure, but only if the Kingdom's survival depended on it.
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* TimeSkip: The story takes place millennia after the last time that we saw the Kingdom universe in canon, with them having managed to travel to another star system after expanded the Mata Nui island started to become unstable.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13413805/1/Mass-Effect-Bionicle-Revolution Mass Effect: Bionicle Revolution]] is a crossover between ''Toys/{{Bionicle}}'' and ''Franchise/MassEffect'' where, in the Kingdom AlternateUniverse, the Kingdom managed to successfully immigrate to another planet, only to then run into the Citadel races and completely upend the galaxy, throwing a major wrench in the plans of the Reapers in the process.
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* FantasticRacism: Due to the Geth causing rampant mistrust of AI, the Citadel races are immediately fearful of the biomechanical inhabitants of the Kingdom when they first meet, with some even advocating to try and destroy them immediately.
* IAmNotLeftHanded: The Kingdom is careful to keep their full capabilities under wraps when dealing with aliens. Most notably, they're careful not to breath so much of a word about the Vahi, Ignika, or their Energized Protodermis stores.
* ReformedButNotTamed: The best way to describe the morally ambiguous members of the Kingdom's leadership. The Shadowed One in particular notes that he's actually grown genuinely fond of the Matoran over the millennia. He'd still kill the others on the Coucil without remorse, sure, but only if the Kingdom's survival depended on it.
* SchizoTech: Despite their technology being far beyond anything that the Citadel races have seen in a number of areas, the inhabitants of the Kingdom didn't have anything like normal computers before first contact as just one example of this, consequently making it much harder for other races to get a read on them.
* SufficientlyAdvancedTechnology: The Kingdom's technologies and the abilities of many of its inhabitants, despite many of them having seemingly primitive exteriors, are ''so'' far beyond what the Citadel races are capable of that they can't '''begin''' to figure out how to reverse-engineer them, and one scientist notes that the Kanoka discs alone seem to defy every law of nature that they know.
* TimeSkip: The story takes place millennia after the last time that we saw the Kingdom universe in canon, with them having managed to travel to another star system after expanded the Mata Nui island started to become unstable.
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* FantasticRacism: Due to the Geth causing rampant mistrust of AI, the Citadel races are immediately fearful of the biomechanical inhabitants of the Kingdom when they first meet, with some even advocating to try and destroy them immediately.
* IAmNotLeftHanded: The Kingdom is careful to keep their full capabilities under wraps when dealing with aliens. Most notably, they're careful not to breath so much of a word about the Vahi, Ignika, or their Energized Protodermis stores.
* ReformedButNotTamed: The best way to describe the morally ambiguous members of the Kingdom's leadership. The Shadowed One in particular notes that he's actually grown genuinely fond of the Matoran over the millennia. He'd still kill the others on the Coucil without remorse, sure, but only if the Kingdom's survival depended on it.
* SchizoTech: Despite their technology being far beyond anything that the Citadel races have seen in a number of areas, the inhabitants of the Kingdom didn't have anything like normal computers before first contact as just one example of this, consequently making it much harder for other races to get a read on them.
* SufficientlyAdvancedTechnology: The Kingdom's technologies and the abilities of many of its inhabitants, despite many of them having seemingly primitive exteriors, are ''so'' far beyond what the Citadel races are capable of that they can't '''begin''' to figure out how to reverse-engineer them, and one scientist notes that the Kanoka discs alone seem to defy every law of nature that they know.
* TimeSkip: The story takes place millennia after the last time that we saw the Kingdom universe in canon, with them having managed to travel to another star system after expanded the Mata Nui island started to become unstable.
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