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* PoorCommunicationKills: Both Yang and Winter are guilty of this. [[Yang witholding information about her mother being the Spring Maiden and Winter hiding that she is the new Winter Maiden creates all sorts of problems for themselves, the people around them and Atlas as a whole.]]
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Both Yang and Winter are guilty of this. [[Yang [[spoiler: Yang witholding information about her mother being the Spring Maiden and Winter hiding that she is the new Winter Maiden creates all sorts of problems for themselves, the people around them and Atlas as a whole.]]
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Both Yang and Winter are guilty of this. [[Yang witholding information about her mother being the Spring Maiden and Winter hiding that she is the new Winter Maiden creates all sorts of problems for themselves, the people around them and Atlas as a whole.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: To say that Winter dropped the ball on things would an understatement of the highest order. [[spoiler:Following Team RWBY's arguement, she manipulated Weiss into revealing their secrets and spitting them apart, leading Weiss to blackmail Ruby into telling Ironwood the whole truth. This leads to Yang revealing the Amity Project to Robyn and Blake's vigilantism in Mantle, which would lead to AccidentalMurder. Then, after becoming the Winter Maiden and during the Grimm attack, Winter barely reacted to a bomb being thrown at her, which led to Vine having to sacrifice himself to save her. And all because she didn't reveal that she was the new maiden.]]
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This is an AlternateUniverseFic of Volunme 7 where Winter takes great exception to the actions of the heroes as of late and takes charge to put them in the right direction. Few can tell what consequences will become of her decisions.
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''Ironside'' is a ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/14869333/GodHand96 GodHand96]].
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: Winter tells Yang that she needs to apologize to Weiss when she wakes up, stating she had no right to take her frustrations out on her. In retailiation, Yang royally calls Winter out for manipulating Weiss into revealing the truth about Ozpin and the lamp, adding that [[spoiler:Vine's HeroicSacrifice could have been avoided if she had revealed the truth about the Maidens.]]
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: Winter tells Yang that she needs to apologize to Weiss when she wakes up, stating she had no right to take her frustrations out on her. In retailiation, retailiation however, Yang royally calls Winter out for manipulating Weiss into revealing the truth about Ozpin and the lamp, adding that [[spoiler:Vine's HeroicSacrifice could have been avoided if she had revealed the truth about the Maidens.]]
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* OrderedApology: Yang gets this from several people, demanding she apologize to Weiss and Blake for her insensitive remarks during their arugement.
* PutOnAPrisonBus: [[spoiler:Blake is sentenced to 40 years in prison, with an eligibility for parole in 15.
* PutOnAPrisonBus: [[spoiler:Blake is sentenced to 40 years in prison, with an eligibility for parole in 15.
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* OrderedApology: Yang gets this from several people, demanding she apologize to Weiss and Blake for her insensitive remarks during their arugement.
* PutOnAPrisonBus: [[spoiler:Blake is sentenced to 40 years in prison, with an eligibility for parole in 15.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Teams RWBY and JNR along with Qrow insist that Ironwood can't be trusted because he took a day to inform them that someone was murdering his political rivals. At the same time, they're trying to justify why they're withholding far more critical information, such as the Relic of Knowledge still having one question left, for weeks.
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** Teams RWBY and JNR along with Qrow insist that Ironwood can't be trusted because he took a day to inform them that someone was murdering his political rivals. At the same time, they're trying to justify why they're withholding far more critical information, such as the Relic of Knowledge still having one question left, forweeks.weeks.
** Yang is the worst of the group, trying to hide from everyone that her mother is the Spring Maiden, despite ''knowing'' how important said information is. All the while, she's one of the most insistent that Ironwood can't be trusted for withholding information.
** Teams RWBY and JNR along with Qrow insist that Ironwood can't be trusted because he took a day to inform them that someone was murdering his political rivals. At the same time, they're trying to justify why they're withholding far more critical information, such as the Relic of Knowledge still having one question left, for
** Yang is the worst of the group, trying to hide from everyone that her mother is the Spring Maiden, despite ''knowing'' how important said information is. All the while, she's one of the most insistent that Ironwood can't be trusted for withholding information.
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* MildlyMilitary: Winter notes that despite Atlas military being known for its serious and disciplined, there were some eccentric soldiers within the ranks such as [[QuirkyMinibossSquad Ace-Ops]] and [[TheGadfly Lieutenant Anna Brosnan]]. However, they can be serious when the situation calls for it and proved why they earned their ranks for a reason.
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* MildlyMilitary: Winter notes that despite Atlas military being known for its serious anddisciplined, disciplined forces, there were some eccentric soldiers within the ranks such as [[QuirkyMinibossSquad Ace-Ops]] and [[TheGadfly Lieutenant Anna Brosnan]]. However, they can be serious when the situation calls for it and proved why they earned their ranks for a reason.
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: Maria calls Fria as this during their younger years at Atlas Academy, acting like a "giggling bimbo" to throw off others into underestimating her.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Winter and Ironwood both make a point of accommodating the heroes when they can and explaining why not when they can't. They also arrange for Oscar to contact his aunt, who hasn't heard from him in nearly a year and whom he merely left a note saying he had to leave.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Winter and Ironwood both make a point of accommodating the heroes when they can and explaining why not when they can't. They also arrange for Oscar to contact his aunt, who hasn't heard from him in nearly a year and whom he merely left a note saying he had to leave.
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* AdaptationalOriginConnection: Fria and Maria Calavera were old acquaintances during their younger years and when Maria was allowed to visit Fria, they catch up on old times by the time Winter arrive to check on her. Fria also happens to know [[The Napoleon Caroline Cordovin]] as well.
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* AdaptationalOriginConnection: Fria and Maria Calavera were old acquaintances during their younger years and when Maria was allowed to visit Fria, they catch up on old times by the time Winter arrive to check on her. Fria also happens to know [[The Napoleon [[TheNapoleon Caroline Cordovin]] as well.
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* FullConversionCyborg: Averted as Ironwood had his cybernetics removed and his organic body regrown by advanced Atlas medical technology. He volunteered first as his Semblance can help him handle through the entire surgical procedure. And there were others in the Atlas military including Anna Brosnan who volunteered to have their cybernetics removed.
* HeroicLineage: Oscar's aunt Harlequin revealed to him that his deceased parents were Huntsman and Huntress who protected their home village with their lives and she was proud of her nephew following their footsteps.
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* HeroicLineage: Oscar's aunt Harlequin revealed to him that his deceased parents were Huntsman and Huntress who protected their home village with their lives and she was proud of her nephew following their footsteps.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Oscar's nameless aunt in the show was given the name of Harlequin Pine.
* NoodleIncident: Winter walked in on the janitor's closet where Anna and the Atlesian sergeant were [[MakingLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces having fun inside there]] during her patrol at 2am in the morning. She had to see a therapist after witnessing a horrid experience.
* NoodleIncident: Winter walked in on the janitor's closet where Anna and the Atlesian sergeant were [[MakingLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces having fun inside there]] during her patrol at 2am in the morning. She had to see a therapist after witnessing a horrid experience.
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* AdaptationalOriginConnection: Fria and Maria Calavera were old acquaintances during their younger years and when Maria was allowed to visit Fria, they catch up on old times by the time Winter arrive to check on her. Fria also happens to know [[The Napoleon Caroline Cordovin]] as well.
* DeepSouth: Dubnar is this in the Atlas military, described to be speaking with a southern drawl, wearing a torn Atlas uniform, and has a distinct lack of teeth and strong smell of tobacco as he served as the driver of the truck carrying supplies for the Amity Coliseum.
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* MistakenIdentity: Arthur Watts mistook Ruby Rose as the new Winter Maiden, unaware that [[spoiler: Winter Schnee is one all along.]]
* ObfuscatingStupidity: Maria calls Fria as this during their younger years at Atlas Academy, acting like a "giggling bimbo" to throw off others into underestimating her.
* MistakenIdentity: Arthur Watts mistook Ruby Rose as the new Winter Maiden, unaware that [[spoiler: Winter Schnee is one all along.]]
* ObfuscatingStupidity: Maria calls Fria as this during their younger years at Atlas Academy, acting like a "giggling bimbo" to throw off others into underestimating her.
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* AdaptationalKarma: In the canon series, Blake and Yang leaking the Amity Project to Robyn doesn't lead to consequences until later in the volume, where even ''then'', the consequences end up vindicating her. Here, however, Yang spills the tea to Robyn by herself, and everyone's opinion of her immediately sours.
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* AdaptationalKarma: In the canon series, Blake and Yang leaking the Amity Project to Robyn doesn't lead to consequences until later in the volume, where even ''then'', the consequences end up vindicating her. Here, however, Yang spills the tea to Robyn by herself, and everyone's opinion of her immediately sours.sours.
* BrainUploading: Of sort as [[spoiler: Ozpin's soul was eventually transferred to an android body made in likeness of the Beacon Academy's headmaster, freeing Oscar from being fully assimilating his soul.]]
* BreakingTheFellowship: [[spoiler: Team RWBY broke up after the members were in a heated argument and Ruby was helpless to stop it.]]
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler: Tyrian Callows dies at the hand of Qrow Branwen during the attack on Atlas.]]
* MildlyMilitary: Winter notes that despite Atlas military being known for its serious and disciplined, there were some eccentric soldiers within the ranks such as Ace-Ops and Anna Brosnan.
* BrainUploading: Of sort as [[spoiler: Ozpin's soul was eventually transferred to an android body made in likeness of the Beacon Academy's headmaster, freeing Oscar from being fully assimilating his soul.]]
* BreakingTheFellowship: [[spoiler: Team RWBY broke up after the members were in a heated argument and Ruby was helpless to stop it.]]
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler: Tyrian Callows dies at the hand of Qrow Branwen during the attack on Atlas.]]
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->''A re-telling of V7, where Winter Schnee does everything in her power to protect Ironwood. Even if that means going against the very "allies" she holds so near and dear. But will it be enough to save Atlas from it's untimely end? Or will they destroy themselves from within?''
-->-- Summary from [[Website/FanfictionDotNet Fanfiction.net]]
''Ironside'' is a ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/14869333/GodHand96 GodHand96]].
This is an AlternateUniverseFic of Volunme 7 where Winter takes great exception to the actions of the heroes as of late and takes charge to put them in the right direction. Few can tell what consequences will become of her decisions.
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-->-- Summary from [[Website/FanfictionDotNet Fanfiction.net]]
''Ironside'' is a ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/14869333/GodHand96 GodHand96]].
This is an AlternateUniverseFic of Volunme 7 where Winter takes great exception to the actions of the heroes as of late and takes charge to put them in the right direction. Few can tell what consequences will become of her decisions.
Needs WikiMagic love.
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!!This work provides examples of:
