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** Larry is in charge of one of the most power corporations in the Koopa Kingdom.
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** Larry is in charge of one of the most power powerful corporations in the Koopa Kingdom.
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** Skallz is this to the Koopalings as [[spoiler: he had a hand in killing their mothers]]. As soon as they realize this, they put aside the fact they have been trying to kill each other and go after him.
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** Skallz is this to the Koopalings as [[spoiler: he had a hand in killing their mothers]].mother]]. As soon as they realize this, they put aside the fact they have been trying to kill each other and go after him.
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Admiral Bobbery]] sacrifices himself to ensure the escape from Stoneshell Prison is successful, [[spoiler:Bombette]] sacrifices herself in the final fight, and, in the end, [[spoiler:Bowser]] sacrifices himself to save the Mushroom World and the galaxy. [[spoiler: K. Rool]] dies taking a hit for Cobal.
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Admiral Bobbery]] sacrifices himself to ensure the escape from Stoneshell Prison is successful, [[spoiler:Bombette]] sacrifices herself in the final fight, and, in the end, [[spoiler:Bowser]] sacrifices himself to save the Mushroom World and the galaxy. [[spoiler: K. Rool]] also dies taking a hit for Cobal.
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* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: [[spoiler:Mario is confident he can sway Rosalina from her course and remind her how much she loved the world with the power of the Dreamstone and his hopes for a happy ending]].
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* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight:
** [[spoiler:Mario is confident he can sway Rosalina from her course and remind her how much she loved the world with the power of the Dreamstone and his hopes for a happyending]].ending. While she's tempted, it doesn't work]].
** [[spoiler:Mario is confident he can sway Rosalina from her course and remind her how much she loved the world with the power of the Dreamstone and his hopes for a happy
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* TogetherInDeath: [[spoiler:Bowser meets Lavaria after expending himself stopping Rosalina, and the two are happy together]].
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* TogetherInDeath: TogetherInDeath:
** [[spoiler:Bowser meets Lavaria after expending himself stopping Rosalina, and the two are happy together]].
** [[spoiler:Bowser meets Lavaria after expending himself stopping Rosalina, and the two are happy together]].
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* ConflictKiller: The Seven Stars announcement of their EvilPlan causes the Mushroom Kingdom and the Koopa Empire to almost ''immediately'' declare a truce in order to stop them.
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* ConflictKiller: ConflictKiller:
** The SevenStars Stars' announcement of their EvilPlan causes the Mushroom Kingdom and the Koopa Empire to almost ''immediately'' declare a truce in order to stop them.
** The Seven
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* MortonsFork: Koops is stuck in one of these when Ludwig sends him out to defeat Mario's other partners. Either he fights and most likely kills his old friends, or he doesn't fight and then the slave seal kills him and his family. He thankfully ends up getting a [[TakeAThirdOption third option]]: [[spoiler: Vivian burns the slave seal off and frees him, letting him join the resistance.]]
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* MortonsFork: Koops is stuck in one of these when Ludwig Larry sends him out to defeat Mario's other partners. Either he fights and most likely kills his old friends, or he doesn't fight and then the slave seal kills him and his family. He thankfully ends up getting a [[TakeAThirdOption third option]]: [[spoiler: Vivian burns the slave seal off and frees him, letting him join the resistance.]]
* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Several of the heroes have this reaction when they realize just what Starfall is...and what it will entail for them.
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** Vivian returned to her old life in a Twilight Town.
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** Vivian returned to her old life in a Twilight Town.
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* DeathIsCheap: [[spoiler: Due to Rosalina becoming one with stars, she will be reincarnated and raised by the Lumas until she is old enough.]]
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* DeathIsCheap: [[spoiler: Due to Rosalina becoming one with the stars, she will be reincarnated and raised by the Lumas until she is old enough.]]
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* DeathIsCheap: [[spoiler: Due to Rosalina becoming one with stars, she will be reincarnated and raised by the Lumas until she is old enough.]]
* DefiantToTheEnd: [[spoiler: Bobbery]] practically dares Skallz to kill him saying that he's lived a good life, everyone else has escaped from Stoneshell Prison and [[spoiler: Scarlette is waiting for him]].
** Earlier in the story, Luigi pulls one of these on a BrainwashedAndCrazy [[spoiler: Mario]]. It works.
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* LegacyCharacter: Mario and Bowser are this to Antonio, Mario's father, and Emperor Morton, Bowser's father. Cobal also turns out to be a descendant of the Yoshi partner from ''The Thousand Year Door''.
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* LegacyCharacter: Mario and Bowser are this to Antonio, Mario's father, and Emperor Morton, Bowser's father. Cobal also turns out to be a descendant of the Yoshi partner from ''The Thousand Year Door''.Door'', although his father turns out to still be alive.
* MoreThanMindControl: [[spoiler: Rosalina has been so heavily manipulated by Antonio that she is willing to kill everyone on her own free will.]] Polari even directly states that [[spoiler: Antonio poisoned her mind.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 38 has a double-whammy. [spoiler:Mario is being kept alive by Seven Stars, and his father Antonio is the Grand Star with plans to de-power everyone powerful in the world, especially the Star Children]].
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 38 has a double-whammy. [spoiler:Mario [[spoiler:Mario is being kept alive by Seven Stars, and his father Antonio is the Grand Star with plans to de-power everyone powerful in the world, especially the Star Children]].
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** Koops moved to the Koopa Kingdom to become Grand General in order to route out corruption in the kingdom, along with Strike and Blueshell.
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** Koops moved to the Koopa Kingdom to become Grand General in order to route root out corruption in the kingdom, along with Strike and Blueshell.
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* EtTuBrute: This is how the Thousand Year Door partners view Koops siding with the Neo Empire until they learn about the Slave Seal.
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* MortonsFork: Koops is stuck in one of these when Ludwig sends him out to defeat Mario's other partners. Either he fights and most likely kills his old friends, or he doesn't fight and then the slave seal kills him and his family. He thankfully ends up getting a [[TakeAThirdOption third option]]: [[spoiler: Vivian burns the slave seal off.]]
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* MortonsFork: Koops is stuck in one of these when Ludwig sends him out to defeat Mario's other partners. Either he fights and most likely kills his old friends, or he doesn't fight and then the slave seal kills him and his family. He thankfully ends up getting a [[TakeAThirdOption third option]]: [[spoiler: Vivian burns the slave seal off.off and frees him, letting him join the resistance.]]
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** Yoshi has been working to find the last remains of the Seven Stars. He has also be working to make up for what he did to Neon City.
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** Yoshi has been working to find the last remains of the Seven Stars. He has also be been working to make up for what he did to Neon City.
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** Koops moved to the Koopa Kingdom to become Grand General in order to route corruption in the kingdom, along with Strike and Blueshell.
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** Koops moved to the Koopa Kingdom to become Grand General in order to route out corruption in the kingdom, along with Strike and Blueshell.
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* ConflictKiller: The Seven Stars announcement of their EvilPlan causes the Mushroom Kingdom and the Koopa Empire to almost ''immediately'' declare a truce in order to stop them.
** Skallz is this to the Koopalings as [[spoiler: he had a hand in killing their mothers]]. As soon as they realize this, they put aside the fact they have been trying to kill each other and go after him.
** Skallz is this to the Koopalings as [[spoiler: he had a hand in killing their mothers]]. As soon as they realize this, they put aside the fact they have been trying to kill each other and go after him.
* SoProudOfYou: Gonzales tells Cobal this at the war's end.
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 38 has a double-whammy. [[spoiler:Mario is being kept alive by Seven Stars, and his father Antonio is the Grand Star with plans to de-power everyone powerful in the world, especially the Star Children]].
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: The final chapter is devoted to everyone's lives after the war, with [[spoiler:peace returning to the Mushroom World as a whole and everyone being on better terms than before]].
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: The final chapter is devoted to everyone's lives after the war, with [[spoiler:peace returning to the Mushroom World as a whole and everyone being on better terms than before]].
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 38 has a double-whammy. [[spoiler:Mario [spoiler:Mario is being kept alive by Seven Stars, and his father Antonio is the Grand Star with plans to de-power everyone powerful in the world, especially the Star Children]].
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: The final chapter is devoted to everyone's lives after the war, with [[spoiler:peace returning to the Mushroom World as a whole and everyone being on better terms than before]]. Specifics include:
** [[spoiler: Mario and]] Peach rule the Mushroom Kingdom [[spoiler:and have a daughter named Bianca.]]
** Luigi and Daisy rule Sarasaland and have a son named Lorzeno.
** Prince Peasley is working to restore the Beanbean Kingdom and has been crowned king.
** Wario and Waluigi have retired from evil to enjoy their fortune in peace. Wario is planning to start a [[VideoGame/WarioWare video game company]], while Waluigi has devoted his life to tennis.
** Yoshi has been working to find the last remains of the Seven Stars. He has also be working to make up for what he did to Neon City.
** Cobal has joined the new Mushroom Kingdom army, which is led by Captain Toad and Toadette.
** Gonzales has retired from Glitz Pit fighting to become a trainer for up and coming fighters.
** Goombella and Flurrie both work for the University of Goom, with the former being a being a professor of archaeology while the latter teaches an elite acting course.
** Vivian returned to her old life in a Twilight Town.
** Koops moved to the Koopa Kingdom to become Grand General in order to route corruption in the kingdom, along with Strike and Blueshell.
** Bowser Jr took over the Koopa Kingdom and now has a son.
** Morton started a construction company.
** Lemmy started a film studio, mainly focusing on comedies.
** Iggy is helping Jr run the kingdom.
** Wendy's enjoying a life in high society.
** Larry is in charge of one of the most power corporations in the Koopa Kingdom.
** Roy is in prison, but is keeping things in order there.
** Ludwig is under house arrest, where he now composes symphonies and has discovered some scientific breakthroughs
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: The final chapter is devoted to everyone's lives after the war, with [[spoiler:peace returning to the Mushroom World as a whole and everyone being on better terms than before]]. Specifics include:
** [[spoiler: Mario and]] Peach rule the Mushroom Kingdom [[spoiler:and have a daughter named Bianca.]]
** Luigi and Daisy rule Sarasaland and have a son named Lorzeno.
** Prince Peasley is working to restore the Beanbean Kingdom and has been crowned king.
** Wario and Waluigi have retired from evil to enjoy their fortune in peace. Wario is planning to start a [[VideoGame/WarioWare video game company]], while Waluigi has devoted his life to tennis.
** Yoshi has been working to find the last remains of the Seven Stars. He has also be working to make up for what he did to Neon City.
** Cobal has joined the new Mushroom Kingdom army, which is led by Captain Toad and Toadette.
** Gonzales has retired from Glitz Pit fighting to become a trainer for up and coming fighters.
** Goombella and Flurrie both work for the University of Goom, with the former being a being a professor of archaeology while the latter teaches an elite acting course.
** Vivian returned to her old life in a Twilight Town.
** Koops moved to the Koopa Kingdom to become Grand General in order to route corruption in the kingdom, along with Strike and Blueshell.
** Bowser Jr took over the Koopa Kingdom and now has a son.
** Morton started a construction company.
** Lemmy started a film studio, mainly focusing on comedies.
** Iggy is helping Jr run the kingdom.
** Wendy's enjoying a life in high society.
** Larry is in charge of one of the most power corporations in the Koopa Kingdom.
** Roy is in prison, but is keeping things in order there.
** Ludwig is under house arrest, where he now composes symphonies and has discovered some scientific breakthroughs
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** Following his HeroicSacrifice, [[spoiler:Bobbery joined Scarlette in the afterlife.]]
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* AmplifierArtifact: Just like in its game of origin, the Dreamstone can be used to greatly empower the wielder. [[spoiler:Mario and Bowser split it in half to take the fight to Rosalina]].
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* AmplifierArtifact: Just like in its game of origin, the Dreamstone can be used to greatly empower the wielder. [[spoiler:Mario and Bowser split it in half to take the fight to Rosalina]].Rosalina, and Bowser later uses its full strength to defeat her]].
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* TookALevelInCynic: After Mario's death, [[spoiler:Yoshi]] became jaded at his failures and vowed to do whatever it took to bring down Bowser, including [[spoiler:dropping Nuclear Bob-Ombs]].
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* TookALevelInCynic: TookALevelInCynic:
** After Mario's death, [[spoiler:Yoshi]] became jaded at his failures and vowed to do whatever it took to bring down Bowser, including [[spoiler:dropping Nuclear Bob-Ombs]].
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** [[spoiler:Rosalina]] once loved the world, but became jaded at the endless strife and decided to depower everything thanks to [[spoiler:Antonio's manipulations]].
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** [[spoiler:Prince Peasley]] didn't take becoming the LastOfHisKind very well, becoming so jaded he abandoned the very concept of heroes... before Cobal changed his mind.
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* {{Crossover}}: ''VideoGame/DonkeyKongCountry'' villain King. K Rool is in the story, on the hero's side.
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* {{Crossover}}: ''VideoGame/DonkeyKongCountry'' villain King. K Rool is in the story, on the hero's side.
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Admiral Bobbery]] sacrifices himself to ensure the escape from Stoneshell Prison is successful, [[spoiler:Bombette]] sacrifices herself in the final fight, and, in the end, [[spoiler:Bowsr]] sacrifices himself to save the Mushroom World and the galaxy.
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Admiral Bobbery]] sacrifices himself to ensure the escape from Stoneshell Prison is successful, [[spoiler:Bombette]] sacrifices herself in the final fight, and, in the end, [[spoiler:Bowsr]] [[spoiler:Bowser]] sacrifices himself to save the Mushroom World and the galaxy.galaxy. [[spoiler: K. Rool]] dies taking a hit for Cobal.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: After 20 years of oppression and many chapters full of battles that could affect the entire galaxy, by the end of things [[spoiler:peace reigns and relations in the Mushroom World are stronger than ever]].
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: The final chapter is devoted to everyone's lives after the war, with [[spoiler:peace returning to the Mushroom World as a whole and everyone being on better terms than before]].
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''Fallen Kingdom'' is a ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros'' fanfic by [=7King Bowser7=].
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* TailorMadePrison: After their defeats, [[spoiler:Antonio and Giovanni]] are incarcerated with enough magic runes and seals to keep them imprisoned.
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Admiral Bobbery]] sacrifices himself to ensure the escape from Stoneshell Prison is successful.
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Admiral Bobbery]] sacrifices himself to ensure the escape from Stoneshell Prison is successful.successful, [[spoiler:Bombette]] sacrifices herself in the final fight, and, in the end, [[spoiler:Bowsr]] sacrifices himself to save the Mushroom World and the galaxy.
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* RestartTheWorld: [[spoiler:Rosalina's last-ditch attack has her plan to restart the galaxy, wiping out everyone in it]].
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* JustToyingWithThem: [[spoiler:Antonio]] tends to not take any opponent seriously given how powerful he is, so when he ''does'' take them seriously it's bad news.
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* AmplifierArtifact: Just like in its game of origin, the Dreamstone can be used to greatly empower the wielder. [[spoiler:Mario and Bowser split it in half to take the fight to Rosalina]].
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* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler:Antonio]] plans a Societal Disruption to remove magic, wishes, and anything remotely powerful.
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* DePower: [[spoiler:Antonio plans to de-power everyone extraordinary in the Mushroom Kingdom to create a balanced world]].
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* LoopholeAbuse: Chapter 59 has the various factions attempting to make wishes that get around the wish-granting restrictions, such as wishing for more ships or power-ups.
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* StoryBreakerPower: Defied with the Koopa Empire using a wish to ensure protection against wish magic, ensuring they can't be undone by powerful wish-granting artifacts.
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* StoryBreakerPower: Defied with the Koopa Empire using a wish to ensure protection against wish magic, ensuring they can't be undone by powerful wish-granting artifacts. The Neo Empire did something similar with the Sundream Stone.
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* MidBattleTeaBreak: After a long, exhausting battle between [[spoiler: Mario and Bowser]] in chapter 58, the two go and sit down on a bench, reminiscing about their lives and past battles.
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* HesBack: Chapter 57 has Bowser, reeling from how weak he's become in his old age, [[spoiler:drinking Kammy's Dark Star potion]], which instantly restores his vitality and empowers him to be even stronger than in his prime.
