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** In Part 3.1, Peter, Jean, and Emma walk past someone who's identified as [[Characters/MarvelComicsTheKingpin Mrs. Fisk]].
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** In Part 3.1, Peter, Jean, and Emma meet a security guard named [[Characters/MCUCompanies Luis]] who's also a MotorMouth.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: In Part 1.7, Peter watches a debate on mutants between Dr. Essex and Dr. Pym. Fans of comics will quickly recognize them as Mister Sinister and ComicBook/AntMan.
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** Several times in the story, a school called the Future Foundation is mentioned.
** In Part 1.7, Peter watches a debate on mutants between Dr. Essex and Dr. Pym. Fans of comics will quickly recognize them as Mister Sinister and ComicBook/AntMan.
** Several times in the story, a school called the Future Foundation is mentioned.
** In Part 1.7, Peter watches a debate on mutants between Dr. Essex and Dr. Pym. Fans of comics will quickly recognize them as Mister Sinister and ComicBook/AntMan.
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* GadgeteerGenius: Peter builds various type of gear for himself and his friends, like the web-shooters or the telepathic range boosters he makes specifically for Jean.
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* GadgeteerGenius: Peter builds various type of gear for himself and his friends, like the web-shooters or the telepathic range boosters boosters/psychic-enhancing earbuds he makes specifically for Jean.
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* AdaptationalNameChange: In this fic, Sebastian Shaw's son is named Sean Shaw. This is because the author thinks [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-15#post-4240774 it makes more sense]] for a status obsessed, petty, rich asshole like Sebastian to name his son with a more normal sounding name than Shinobi.
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* SlutShaming: Anne Marie does this when accusing Emma of flirting with Peter.
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* UnexpectedVirgin: Jean implies that Emma is this after Anne Marie [[SlutShaming slut-shames]] Emma.
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** Jean and Peter shorten Anne Marie's name to "Annie". [[spoiler:It takes on a bit of a tragic twist when Jean reveals that she first manifested her powers when she was 10 when she was in her friend Annie's mind when the latter died.]]
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* GadgeteerGenius: Peter builds various type of gear for himself and his friends, like the web-shooters or the telepathic range boosters he makes specifically for Jean.
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* SwitchOutMove: When Peter, Jean, and Anne Marie find themselves in a stalemate against Duke, Callisto, and Frog-man respectively, Emma advises that they swap opponents, though only Peter and Jean actually do this.
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** The codenames that the Night Crawlers choose are based on ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' classes.
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** The codenames that the Queen's Night Crawlers choose are based on ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' classes.classes.
** During Peter and Duke's CasualDangerDialog, the two quote ''Film/ThePrincessBride''.
** During Peter and Duke's CasualDangerDialog, the two quote ''Film/ThePrincessBride''.
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* OhCrap: Frog-man reacts this way after he lets his anger get the better of him and attacks Jean.
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* EgocentricTeamNaming: Inverted. Jean claims that Peter's CodeName is Night Crawler, due to the fact that he was the first one seen when people started calling them the Queen's Night Crawlers.
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* ThemeNaming: Frog-man points out the the {{Code Name}}s of the Queen's Night Crawlers are based on [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons D&D]] character classes.
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* ThemeNaming: Frog-man points out the that the {{Code Name}}s of the Queen's Night Crawlers are based on [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons D&D]] character classes.
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* EgocentricTeamNaming: Inverted. Jean claims that Peter's CodeName is Night Crawler, due to the fact that he was the first one seen when people started calling them the Queen's Night Crawlers.
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* GiverOfLameNames: Jean naming things leads to things having very silly names, such as calling Anne Marie's SpiderSense her "Peter Tingle".
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* GiverOfLameNames: Jean naming things leads to things having very silly names, such as calling Anne Marie's SpiderSense her "Peter Tingle"."danger tingles".
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: Due to Jean's PowerIncontinence, her psychic presence inadvertently [[spoiler:interferes with Caliban's ability to track mutants]].
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Due to a change in circumstances, Kurt is [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-10#post-4223429 a little bit less of a careless and whimsical type and a bit more introspective and perceptive]] than in the cartoon.
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** Due to a change in circumstances, Kurt is [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-10#post-4223429 a little bit less of a careless and whimsical type and a bit more introspective and perceptive]] than in thecartoon.cartoon.
** Anne Marie is [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-10#post-4224021 better adjusted than in canon]], but still has some issues.
** Due to a change in circumstances, Kurt is [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-10#post-4223429 a little bit less of a careless and whimsical type and a bit more introspective and perceptive]] than in the
** Anne Marie is [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-10#post-4224021 better adjusted than in canon]], but still has some issues.
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* LivesInAVan: As she has been kicked out by her family and [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-10#post-4222587 lacks practical life experience]], Emma has to sleep in her car.
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* LivesInAVan: As she has been kicked out by her family, Emma has to sleep in her car.
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* LivesInAVan: As she has been kicked out by her family, family and [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-10#post-4222587 lacks practical life experience]], Emma has to sleep in her car.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Due to a change in circumstances, Kurt is [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-10#post-4223429 a little bit less of a careless and whimsical type and a bit more introspective and perceptive]] than in the cartoon.
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* OutWithABang: Downplayed and played with. As Kurt is [[spoiler:teleporting himself, Emma, and her car away from Blob and Caliban]], his thoughts are: [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-10#post-4223429 "At least I will die the way I always dreamed. With my face buried in an absolutely wonderful pair of tits."]].
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* AppropriatedAppellation: After Caliban asks if Kurt is some sort of [[Film/SpiderManFarFromHome night monkey]], Kurt decides to make the German translation of it, Nachtaffe, his codename.
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* ProjectileWebbing: Anne Marie can fire webbing from her fingers. Peter uses the webbing she creates for his own web-shooters before he makes his own synthetic version.
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* ProjectileWebbing: Anne Marie can fire webbing from her fingers. Peter uses the webbing she creates for his own web-shooters before he makes his own synthetic version.version, which he then shares with Jean and Kurt.
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* MoneyDumb: Emma is [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-9#post-4216617 really bad at managing her own finances]].
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* MoneyDumb: Emma is [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-9#post-4216617 really bad at managing managing]] [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-10#post-4222587 her own finances]].
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: As intelligent as Emma is, she's also [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-10#post-4222587 a sheltered girl with no applicable skills]] when it comes to living on her own, which is why why sleeps in her car.
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** When Emma first gets to know Peter, Jean, and Anne Marie, [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-69574267 she assumed]] they were part of some mutant group, and that Peter's mutant power was SuperIntelligence.
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** When Emma first gets to know Peter, Jean, and Anne Marie, [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-69574267 she assumed]] they were part of some mutant group, and that [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-10#post-4222587 Peter's mutant power power]] was SuperIntelligence.
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** Kurt calls Jean "Angel".
** Emma likes calling Peter "Darling". It's somewhat less affectionate when she calls Anne Marie "Streaky".
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** Emma likes calling Peter "Darling". It's somewhat less affectionate when she calls Anne Marie "Streaky".
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** At the very least, Emma won't have to spend too much money for her wardrobe [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-75291455 after Peter starts making her clothes]].
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* SheepInSheepsClothing: To Emma's surprise, Peter, Jean, Anne Marie, and the Parkers are as nice as they all seem, with no ulterior motive to approach her.
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* NoodleIncident: When Jean asks Emma if she's ever met another telepath, Emma replies yes with a snarl, ending Jean's inquiry.
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* EyebrowWaggle: Jean likes doing this whenever a DoubleEntendre or something that could be misconstrued as something lecherous is said .
