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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11232525/1/Celadon-s-New-Blossom Celadon's New Blossom]]'' is a ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic by Usagi-Hasano. It's based on the episode "Pokémon Scent-sation!" but deviates from canon by having Ash become an apprentice of Erika's. The story also has a lot of elements from the games sprinkled about.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11232525/1/Celadon-s-New-Blossom Celadon's New Blossom]]'' is a ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' ''Anime/PokemonTheSeries'' fanfic by Usagi-Hasano. It's based on the episode "Pokémon Scent-sation!" but deviates from canon by having Ash become an apprentice of Erika's. The story also has a lot of elements from the games sprinkled about.
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** Delia owning a restaurant that she inherited from her mother comes from ''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation''.
** Ash mentions that at ten years old, kids can either chose to become a legal adult and live as a trainer or continue their schooling. This partially comes from ''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation'', where it's mentioned that ten year olds are legally adults in Kanto.
** Ash mentions that at ten years old, kids can either chose to become a legal adult and live as a trainer or continue their schooling. This partially comes from ''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation'', where it's mentioned that ten year olds are legally adults in Kanto.
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** Delia owning a restaurant that she inherited from her mother comes from ''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation''.
''Literature/PocketMonstersTheAnimation''.
** Ash mentions that at ten years old, kids can either chose to become a legal adult and live as a trainer or continue their schooling. This partially comes from''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation'', ''Literature/PocketMonstersTheAnimation'', where it's mentioned that ten year olds are legally adults in Kanto.
** Ash mentions that at ten years old, kids can either chose to become a legal adult and live as a trainer or continue their schooling. This partially comes from
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* PatchworkFic: It takes some world-building elements from the ''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation'' books, as well as game canon.
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* PatchworkFic: It takes some world-building elements from the ''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation'' ''Literature/PocketMonstersTheAnimation'' books, as well as game canon.
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* ExpositoryHairstyleChange: Erika takes Ash to the hairdresser for his black, spiky hair to be dyed blond and styled into a hime-cut, symbolizing her wish to turn a rowdy, ill-mannered boy in a cute, polite young lady.
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* EarthDrift: Averted. As was the case in Kanto, fish and other animals co-exist amongst Pokémon
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* EarthDrift: Averted. As was the case in Kanto, fish and other animals co-exist amongst PokémonPokémon.
* ElegantGothicLolita: When Ashley first meets Sabrina, she forces him into a "sweet lolita" outfit (complete with frills and bonnet) before their match, and gifts him the dress to keep. Misty gets to see a picture and gushes over Ashley's demureness and grace.
* ElegantGothicLolita: When Ashley first meets Sabrina, she forces him into a "sweet lolita" outfit (complete with frills and bonnet) before their match, and gifts him the dress to keep. Misty gets to see a picture and gushes over Ashley's demureness and grace.
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* PinkMeansFeminine: As he starts living as a girl, Ash finds himself wearing a lot of pink clothes, accessories and make-up.
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: More than a few people won't take Ashley seriously as a trainer for looking like a dainty, cute little girl and he needs to display his stubborness time and again.
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* {{Transgender}}: Ash is not transgender, but he gets mistaken for a trans girl by a Pokémon League inspector. Since Ash began living full-time as a girl, it's assumed that he's come out as a trans girl. From then on, Ash decides to use being trans as a cover-up story. It'll likely cause some issues when he goes back to being "Ash", but he decides to deal with it in the future.
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* JerkassRealization: Erika found extremely funny to force Ash to dress and act the part of a cute little girl... then she saw Ash was actually distressed by the situation and decide to dial it down.
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* JerkassRealization: Erika found it extremely funny to force Ash to dress and act the part of a cute little girl... then she saw Ash was actually distressed by the situation and decide to dial it down.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Lorelei is given back her game name, rather than "Prima" like [=4Kids=] went with due to LipLock problems.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Lorelei is given back her game name, rather than the "Prima" like [=4Kids=] went with due to LipLock problems.
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* AttractiveGenderBender: People often comment on Ashley's cuteness. Poor boy feels a mite ambivalent about it.
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* AttractiveGenderBender: AttractiveBentGender: People often comment on Ashley's cuteness. Poor boy feels a mite ambivalent about it.
* DefeatMeansFriendship: After beating Sabrina, Ash decides she really could use some fun and they hang out for a while. [[DefrostingIceQueen Sabrina quickly thaws]] in front of this kindness.
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* JerkassRealisation: Erika found extremely funny to force Ash to dress and act the part of a cute little girl... then she saw Ash was actually distressed by the situation and decide to dial it down.
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* JerkassRealisation: JerkassRealization: Erika found extremely funny to force Ash to dress and act the part of a cute little girl... then she saw Ash was actually distressed by the situation and decide to dial it down.
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* PatchworkFic: It takes some world-building elements from the ''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation'' books, as well as game canon.
* ParentalSubstitute: When Ash's Pokemon egg hatches, the Budew inside immediately takes to the trainer as his mother.
* PatchworkFic: It takes some world-building elements from the ''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation'' books, as well as game canon.
* PatchworkFic: It takes some world-building elements from the ''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation'' books, as well as game canon.
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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyways: Ash's female persona is so cute it manages to fool Brock's girl-radar. Needless to say, he doesn't think it very useful.
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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyways: WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Ash's female persona is so cute it manages to fool Brock's girl-radar. Needless to say, he doesn't think it very useful.
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* AttractiveGenderBender: People often comment on Ashley's cuteness. Poor boy feels a mite ambivalent about it.
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* EarthDrift: Averted. As was the case in Kanto, fish and other animals co-exist amongst Pokémon.
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* EarthDrift: Averted. As was the case in Kanto, fish and other animals co-exist amongst Pokémon.Pokémon
* FriendlyEnemy: The first time he met Ash DisguisedInDrag, James outright praised his looks and offered to give him tips about clothes.
* FriendlyEnemy: The first time he met Ash DisguisedInDrag, James outright praised his looks and offered to give him tips about clothes.
* JerkassRealisation: Erika found extremely funny to force Ash to dress and act the part of a cute little girl... then she saw Ash was actually distressed by the situation and decide to dial it down.
* MakeoverTorment: The girls at Celadon's gym really enjoy pampering Ashley who would gladly decline the honour, thank you very much.
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* UsedToBeATomboy: Outgrowing a tomboyish phase is Ash's excuse for his boyish look when he visits a hair stylist to get his hair styled into a more feminine look.
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* UsedToBeATomboy: Outgrowing a tomboyish phase is Ash's excuse for his boyish look when he visits a hair stylist to get his hair styled into a more feminine look.look.
* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyways: Ash's female persona is so cute it manages to fool Brock's girl-radar. Needless to say, he doesn't think it very useful.
* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyways: Ash's female persona is so cute it manages to fool Brock's girl-radar. Needless to say, he doesn't think it very useful.
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* PatchworkFic: It takes some world-building elements from the ''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation'' books, as well as game canon.
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Ash Ketchum is not allowed in the Celadon Gym after offending its gym leader, Erika. In order to get around this, Ash sneaks in by pretending to be a girl named Ashley. Ash's cover is blown when a fire starts and his wig catches on fire. As it turns out Ash is partially responsible for the incident, Erika decides to have Ash repay her by helping fix the damages. The experience will not only help her, but it'll also help Ash mature and become more responsible. There's one catch to this: Ash has to stay in his "Ashley" disguise to get around the gym's all-girl rule.
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Ash Ketchum is not allowed in the Celadon Gym after offending its gym leader, Erika. In order to get around this, Ash sneaks in by pretending to be a girl named Ashley. Ash's cover is blown when a fire starts and his wig catches on fire. As it turns out Because Ash is partially responsible for the incident, Erika decides to have Ash repay her by helping fix the damages. The experience will not only help her, but it'll also help Ash mature and become more responsible. There's one catch to this: Ash has to stay in his "Ashley" disguise to get around the gym's all-girl rule.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11232525/1/Celadon-s-New-Blossom Celadon's New Blossom]]'' is a ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic by Usagi-Hasano. It's based on the episode "Pokémon Scent-sation!" but deviates from canon by having Ash become an understudy of Erika.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11232525/1/Celadon-s-New-Blossom Celadon's New Blossom]]'' is a ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic by Usagi-Hasano. It's based on the episode "Pokémon Scent-sation!" but deviates from canon by having Ash become an understudy apprentice of Erika.Erika's. The story also has a lot of elements from the games sprinkled about.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Erika's AdaptationalJerkass behavior is treated as an OutOfCharacterMoment. She's written more in-line with her game persona.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: AdaptationNameChange: Lorelei is given back her game name, rather than "Prima" like [=4Kids=] went with due to LipLock problems.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy:
** Erika's AdaptationalJerkass behavior is treated as an OutOfCharacterMoment. She's written more in-line with her gamepersona.persona.
** Charmander evolves into Charmeleon, but he keeps his nice personality. He trusts Ash too much to treat him badly.
* AgeLift: Ash is eleven, not ten. He started his journey at ten but turned eleven by the time he met Giselle.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy:
** Erika's AdaptationalJerkass behavior is treated as an OutOfCharacterMoment. She's written more in-line with her game
** Charmander evolves into Charmeleon, but he keeps his nice personality. He trusts Ash too much to treat him badly.
* AgeLift: Ash is eleven, not ten. He started his journey at ten but turned eleven by the time he met Giselle.
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* TheCameo: Ash has a run-in with a nameless Paul in chapter 6. He's later mentioned again, by name, in chapter 9 when he abandons a young Pokémon at the Celadon gym.
* DeadFic: ''Celadon's New Blossom'' hasn't been updated since chapter 15 in September 2016. Its last update involved Ash catching a Dratini at the Safari Zone.
* DisappearedDad: Ash's father left when he was an infant. Growing up, Ash was teased for having an absentee father.
* DeadFic: ''Celadon's New Blossom'' hasn't been updated since chapter 15 in September 2016. Its last update involved Ash catching a Dratini at the Safari Zone.
* DisappearedDad: Ash's father left when he was an infant. Growing up, Ash was teased for having an absentee father.
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* LastNameBasis: Nurse Joy's are addressed this way as "Joy" is actually their surname.
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* TalkingAnimal: At the Safari Zone, Ash and his friends come across a Dragonair who can communicate telepathically.
* {{Transgender}}: Ash is not transgender, but he gets mistaken for a trans girl by a Pokémon League inspector. Since Ash began living full-time as a girl, it's assumed that he's come out as a trans girl. From then on, Ash decides to use being trans as a cover-up story. It'll likely cause some issues when he goes back to being "Ash", but he decides to deal with it in the future.
* UrbanLegends: When Ash's Pokédex tells him that it's rumored a boy turned into a Kadabra, Ash dismissively notes that an urban legend isn't useful information.
* {{Transgender}}: Ash is not transgender, but he gets mistaken for a trans girl by a Pokémon League inspector. Since Ash began living full-time as a girl, it's assumed that he's come out as a trans girl. From then on, Ash decides to use being trans as a cover-up story. It'll likely cause some issues when he goes back to being "Ash", but he decides to deal with it in the future.
* UrbanLegends: When Ash's Pokédex tells him that it's rumored a boy turned into a Kadabra, Ash dismissively notes that an urban legend isn't useful information.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11232525/1/Celadon-s-New-Blossom Celadon's New Blossom]]'' is a ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic by Usagi-Hasano. It's based on the episode "Pokémon Scent-sation!" but deviates from canon by having Ash become an understudy of Erika.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11232525/1/Celadon-s-New-Blossom Celadon's New Blossom]]'' is a ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic by Usagi-Hasano. It's based on the episode "Pokémon Scent-sation!" but deviates from canon by having Ash become an understudy of Erika.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11232525/1/Celadon-s-New-Blossom Celadon's New Blossom]]'' is a ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic by Usagi-Hasano. It's based on the episode "Pokémon Scent-sation!" but deviates from canon by having Ash become an understudy of Erika.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11232525/1/Celadon-s-New-Blossom Celadon's New Blossom]]'' is a ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic by Usagi-Hasano. It's based on the episode "Pokémon Scent-sation!" but deviates from canon by having Ash become an understudy of Erika.
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* UsedToATomboy: Outgrowing a tomboyish phase is Ash's excuse for his boyish look when he visits a hair stylist to get his hair styled into a more feminine look.
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* UsedToATomboy: UsedToBeATomboy: Outgrowing a tomboyish phase is Ash's excuse for his boyish look when he visits a hair stylist to get his hair styled into a more feminine look.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11232525/1/Celadon-s-New-Blossom Celadon's New Blossom]]'' is a ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic by Usagi-Hasano. It's based on the episode "Pokémon Scent-sation!" but deviates from canon by having Ash become an understudy of Erika.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11232525/1/Celadon-s-New-Blossom Celadon's New Blossom]]'' is a ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic by Usagi-Hasano. It's based on the episode "Pokémon Scent-sation!" but deviates from canon by having Ash become an understudy of Erika.
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* DisguisedInDrag: Ash is in disguise as a girl named "Ashley" due to Erika's gym being all-female. As it turns out, being Erika's student will likely take years, so Ash has to stay Ashley for longer than he'd like. He can continue on his journey, but he has to routinely return to Erika. His ID is changed to fit the disguise.
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* DisguisedInDrag: Ash is in disguise as a girl named "Ashley" due to Erika's gym being all-female. As it turns out, being Erika's student will likely take years, so Ash has to stay Ashley for longer than he'd like.like (precisely, until he beats the Pokémon League). He can continue on his journey, but he has to routinely return to Erika. His ID is changed to fit the disguise.
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* MythologyGag: Delia owning a restaurant that she inherited from her mother comes from ''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation''.
* ShonenHair: Poked fun at when a hair stylist calls Ash's hair "too stiff".
* ShonenHair: Poked fun at when a hair stylist calls Ash's hair "too stiff".
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* MythologyGag: EarthDrift: Averted. As was the case in Kanto, fish and other animals co-exist amongst Pokémon.
* InterspeciesRomance: Primeape begins obeying Ash because he has a crush on "Ashley".
* MythologyGag:
** Delia owning a restaurant that she inherited from her mother comes from ''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation''.
** Ash mentions that at ten years old, kids can either chose to become a legal adult and live as a trainer or continue their schooling. This partially comes from ''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation'', where it's mentioned that ten year olds are legally adults in Kanto.
* ShonenHair: Poked fun at when a hair stylist calls Ash's hair "too stiff".
* StockShonenHero: This applying to Ash is lampshaded by Erika when she tries to explain why she's so interested in training him:
-->'''Erika''': "I just see someone who I want to help. Human emotions are illogical, and we all get feelings we can't explain. I think after seeing you, I just feel like one of those characters from a shounen anime who takes on a diamond in the rough, acting as their sensei and training them to find their potential."
-->'''Ash''': "So... I'm like some kinda chosen hero protagonist in that way then?"
* UsedToATomboy: Outgrowing a tomboyish phase is Ash's excuse for his boyish look when he visits a hair stylist to get his hair styled into a more feminine look.
* InterspeciesRomance: Primeape begins obeying Ash because he has a crush on "Ashley".
* MythologyGag:
** Delia owning a restaurant that she inherited from her mother comes from ''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation''.
** Ash mentions that at ten years old, kids can either chose to become a legal adult and live as a trainer or continue their schooling. This partially comes from ''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation'', where it's mentioned that ten year olds are legally adults in Kanto.
* ShonenHair: Poked fun at when a hair stylist calls Ash's hair "too stiff".
* StockShonenHero: This applying to Ash is lampshaded by Erika when she tries to explain why she's so interested in training him:
-->'''Erika''': "I just see someone who I want to help. Human emotions are illogical, and we all get feelings we can't explain. I think after seeing you, I just feel like one of those characters from a shounen anime who takes on a diamond in the rough, acting as their sensei and training them to find their potential."
-->'''Ash''': "So... I'm like some kinda chosen hero protagonist in that way then?"
* UsedToATomboy: Outgrowing a tomboyish phase is Ash's excuse for his boyish look when he visits a hair stylist to get his hair styled into a more feminine look.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11232525/1/Celadon-s-New-Blossom Celadon's New Blossom]]'' is a ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic by Usagi-Hasano. It's based on the episode "Pokémon Scent-sation!" but deviates from canon by having Ash become an understudy of Erika.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11232525/1/Celadon-s-New-Blossom Celadon's New Blossom]]'' is a ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic by Usagi-Hasano. It's based on the episode "Pokémon Scent-sation!" but deviates from canon by having Ash become an understudy of Erika.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Erika's AdaptationalJerkass behavior is treated as an OutOfCharacterMoment. She's written more in-line with her game persona.
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* DisguisedInDrag: Erika has Ash living as a girl named "Ashley".
* DisguisedInDrag: Erika has Ash living as a girl named "Ashley".
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* DudeLooksLikeALady: Discusssed when Delia tries to ease Ash's anxiety by telling him that, even though he's wearing a dress, he's still Ash. She compares him to a Kirlia, which causes Ash to note that even girly-looking Pokémon can be male.
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Ash Ketchum is not allowed in the Celadon Gym after offending its gym leader, Erika. In order to get around this, Ash sneaks in by pretending to be a girl named Ashley. Ash's cover is blown when a fire starts and his wig catches on fire. As it turns out Ash is partially responsible for the incident, Erika decides to have Ash repay her by helping fix the damages. The experience will not only help her, but it'll also help Ash mature and become more responsible. There's one catch to this: Ash has to stay in his "Ashley" disguise to get around the gym's all-girl rule.
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11232525/1/Celadon-s-New-Blossom Celadon's New Blossom]]'' is a ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic by Usagi-Hasano. It's based on the episode "Pokémon Scent-sation!" but deviates from canon by having Ash become an understudy of Erika.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: There are various deviations from canon in the first chapter. Ash's disguise is only blown when the fire burns his wig, Ash isn't given a Rainbow Badge for saving the gym, and, most importantly, Ash is made to work at the Celadon Gym until he fixes the damage.
* CharacterCheck: Erika's AdaptationalJerkass behavior is treated as an OutOfCharacterMoment. She's written more in-line with her game persona.
* DisguisedInDrag: Erika has Ash living as a girl named "Ashley".
* MythologyGag: Delia owning a restaurant that she inherited from her mother comes from ''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation''.
* ShonenHair: Poked fun at when a hair stylist calls Ash's hair "too stiff".
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11232525/1/Celadon-s-New-Blossom Celadon's New Blossom]]'' is a ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic by Usagi-Hasano. It's based on the episode "Pokémon Scent-sation!" but deviates from canon by having Ash become an understudy of Erika.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: There are various deviations from canon in the first chapter. Ash's disguise is only blown when the fire burns his wig, Ash isn't given a Rainbow Badge for saving the gym, and, most importantly, Ash is made to work at the Celadon Gym until he fixes the damage.
* CharacterCheck: Erika's AdaptationalJerkass behavior is treated as an OutOfCharacterMoment. She's written more in-line with her game persona.
* DisguisedInDrag: Erika has Ash living as a girl named "Ashley".
* MythologyGag: Delia owning a restaurant that she inherited from her mother comes from ''LightNovel/PocketMonstersTheAnimation''.
* ShonenHair: Poked fun at when a hair stylist calls Ash's hair "too stiff".
