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The first chapter can be read [[https://www.deviantart.com/miss-sherlocked/art/Germany-X-Reader-Asthma-Part-1-325509784 here.]]
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-->''"Here goes nothing. I mean, how bad can it be, right?"''right?"''
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* HappyEnding
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* LovableJock: Ludwig.
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* AskAStupidQuestion: Lampshaded, as the reader never ''actually'' said it to him.
-->Germany: "''W-Was?'' T-this whole time?"
-->Reader: ''NO WITHIN THE LAST FIVE MINUTES.''
-->Germany: "''W-Was?'' T-this whole time?"
-->Reader: ''NO WITHIN THE LAST FIVE MINUTES.''
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* RageBreakingPoint: Ludwig on the second day of training, when reader unintentionally insinuates he's [[spoiler: only interested in saving her because it would reflect poorly on the camp if she died.]]
* TryingNotToCry: Reader during the first day of training.
* TryingNotToCry: Reader during the first day of training.
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* RageBreakingPoint: Ludwig on the second day of training, when reader unintentionally insinuates he's [[spoiler: only interested in saving her because it would reflect poorly on the camp if she died.got hurt.]]
* TryingNotToCry: Reader during the first day oftraining.training.
* WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong: Done by the reader several times.
**''"It can't be that bad… right?"''
**''"Here goes nothing. I mean, how bad can it be, right?"''
* TryingNotToCry: Reader during the first day of
* WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong: Done by the reader several times.
**''"It can't be that bad… right?"''
**''"Here goes nothing. I mean, how bad can it be, right?"''
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* NotSoStoic:
NotSoStoic: Lugwig's demeanor suddenly unravels when reader is [[spoiler: TryingNotToCry]]
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RageBreakingPoint: Ludwig on the second day of training, when reader unintentionally insinuates he's [[spoiler: only interested in saving her because it would reflect poorly on the camp if she died.]]
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* NerdyInhaler: Slightly subverted, as the reader isn't seen as "nerdy". As an asthmatic, though, they always seem to have one in hand. [[spoiler:Except, of course, when they actually ''need '' it.]]
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* ItsQuietTooQuiet: Ludwig when he realizes Reader's BigSecret
BigSecret.
* LovableJock: Ludwig.
* NerdyInhaler: Slightly subverted, as the reader isn't seen as "nerdy". As an asthmatic, though, they always seem to have one in hand. [[spoiler:Except, of course, when they actually ''need '' it.]]]]
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* LovableJock: Ludwig.
* NerdyInhaler: Slightly subverted, as the reader isn't seen as "nerdy". As an asthmatic, though, they always seem to have one in hand. [[spoiler:Except, of course, when they actually ''need '' it.
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* BabiesEverAfter: As revealed in the epilogue.
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* GratuitousGerman: Used constantly in the story, with phrases like ''"Was?" "Sehr gut." "Mine Gott." '' etc.
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* BreakUpMakeUpScenario: When Ludwig quits his lessons early, and reader subsequently [[spoiler: goes to his cabin in the middle of the night.]]
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* HappyEnding
* ItsQuietTooQuiet: Ludwig when he realizes Reader's BigSecret
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Trying this out! :D Sorry if I suck at it!
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A Reader Insert Hetalia Reader-Insert created by Miss-Sherlocked [[http://miss-sherlocked.deviantart.com/]]
com/ Miss-Sherlocked]].
Set at an exercise camp, it features a strict, iconoclastic Ludwig/Germany as the Director of Activities and an asthmatic reader trying desperately to keep it a secret. And also not die.
Set at an exercise camp, it features a strict, iconoclastic Ludwig/Germany as the Director of Activities and an asthmatic reader trying desperately to keep it a secret. And also not die.
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* NerdyInhaler: The Slightly subverted, as the reader isn't seen as "nerdy". As an asthmatic, though, they always seems seem to have one on in hand. [[spoiler:Except, of course, when they actually need ''need '' it.]]
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A Reader Insert created by Miss-Sherlocked [[http://miss-sherlocked.deviantart.com/]]
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*NerdyInhaler: The reader always seems to have one on hand. [[spoiler:Except, of course, when they actually need it.]]
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*NerdyInhaler: The reader always seems to have one on hand. [[spoiler:Except, of course, when they actually need it.]]
