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* MySignificantSenseIsTingling: Twilight gets the feeling Spike's in trouble when he is being chased by Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, Diamond Tiara, and Silver Spoon.
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** Happened again when Twilight tried to make Applejack talk about what was bothering her while "I'm going to get rough!", which is the exact moment Rainbow Dash arrives at the library.
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Flim and Flam didn\'t take the pictures.
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** Flim and Flam get away without any legal repercussions from outing Applejack and Twilight's relationship marriage due to privacy laws.
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* StalkerWithoutACrush: [[spoiler:Flim and Flam have been spying on the Mane Six for ''months'']].
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* StalkerWithoutACrush: [[spoiler:Flim [[spoiler:Whoever married Twilight and Flam have Applejack has been spying on the Mane Six for ''months'']].''months'', and let Flim and Flam use the photos they've taken]].
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* ThirdLineSomeWaiting: There's Twilight and Applejack dealing with their new bond and investigating whomever might be responsible. There's Rarity getting roped into helping Blueblood investigate a possible changeling threat [[spoiler:and possibly his family issues as well]]. Back home, there's Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash navigating their relationship while a jealous Angel Bunny attempts to sabotage them and the other pets stand against him, and Spike ending up in a LoveDodecahedron with the Cutie Mark Crusaders (''and'' Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon). Darth Link 22 eventually decided to tie these last to off and skim over part of the main plot in response to reader complaints.
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* ThirdLineSomeWaiting: There's Twilight and Applejack dealing with their new bond and investigating whomever might be responsible. There's Rarity getting roped into helping Blueblood investigate a possible changeling threat [[spoiler:and possibly his family issues as well]]. Back home, there's Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash navigating their relationship while a jealous Angel Bunny attempts to sabotage them and the other pets stand against him, and Spike ending up in a LoveDodecahedron with the Cutie Mark Crusaders (''and'' Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon). Darth Link 22 eventually decided to tie these last to two off and skim over part of the main plot in response to reader complaints.
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* CallBack: In Chapter 2, when Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy reveal they got together following the party, Applejack warns them that a lot can go wrong with a relationship based on a drunk romance. [[spoiler:It looks like she may be right as it seems Rainbow and Fluttershy are heading for a breakup]].
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* RelatioshipSabotage: Angel Bunny tried to do this to Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy by attempting to leave lipstick on Rainbow's flight suit, but Owlowiscious stops him in time. [[spoiler:It may not matter as it looks like Rainbow and Fluttershy may break up over Rainbow's decision not to have foals]].
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* RelatioshipSabotage: RelationshipSabotage: Angel Bunny tried to do this to Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy by attempting to leave lipstick on Rainbow's flight suit, but Owlowiscious stops him in time. [[spoiler:It may not matter as it looks like Rainbow and Fluttershy may break up over Rainbow's decision not to have foals]].
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* CrazyPrepared: In typical Pinkie Pie fashion, she had an umbrella handy for Rainbow Dash's SpitTake mentioned below.
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* RelatioshipSabotage: Angel Bunny tried to do this to Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy by attempting to leave lipstick on Rainbow's flight suit, but Owlowiscious stops him in time. [[spoiler:It may not matter as it looks like Rainbow and Fluttershy may break up over Rainbow's decision not to have foals]].
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* ThreeLinesSomeWaiting: There's Twilight and Applejack dealing with their new bond and investigating whomever might be responsible. There's Rarity getting roped into helping Blueblood investigate a possible changeling threat [[spoiler:and possibly his family issues as well]]. Back home, there's Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash navigating their relationship while a jealous Angel Bunny attempts to sabotage them and the other pets stand against him, and Spike ending up in a LoveDodecahedron with the Cutie Mark Crusaders (''and'' Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon). Darth Link 22 eventually decided to tie these last to off and skim over part of the main plot in response to reader complaints.
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* ThreeLinesSomeWaiting: ThirdLineSomeWaiting: There's Twilight and Applejack dealing with their new bond and investigating whomever might be responsible. There's Rarity getting roped into helping Blueblood investigate a possible changeling threat [[spoiler:and possibly his family issues as well]]. Back home, there's Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash navigating their relationship while a jealous Angel Bunny attempts to sabotage them and the other pets stand against him, and Spike ending up in a LoveDodecahedron with the Cutie Mark Crusaders (''and'' Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon). Darth Link 22 eventually decided to tie these last to off and skim over part of the main plot in response to reader complaints.
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* ThreeLinesNoWaiting: There's Twilight and Applejack dealing with their new bond and investigating whomever might be responsible. There's Rarity getting roped into helping Blueblood investigate a possible changeling threat [[spoiler:and possibly his family issues as well]]. Back home, there's Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash navigating their relationship while a jealous Angel Bunny attempts to sabotage them and the other pets stand against him, and Spike ending up in a LoveDodecahedron with the Cutie Mark Crusaders (''and'' Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon). Darth Link 22 eventually decided to tie these last to off and skim over part of the main plot in response to reader complaints.
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* ThreeLinesNoWaiting: ThreeLinesSomeWaiting: There's Twilight and Applejack dealing with their new bond and investigating whomever might be responsible. There's Rarity getting roped into helping Blueblood investigate a possible changeling threat [[spoiler:and possibly his family issues as well]]. Back home, there's Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash navigating their relationship while a jealous Angel Bunny attempts to sabotage them and the other pets stand against him, and Spike ending up in a LoveDodecahedron with the Cutie Mark Crusaders (''and'' Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon). Darth Link 22 eventually decided to tie these last to off and skim over part of the main plot in response to reader complaints.
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--> '''Applejack''': "What kinda sick, deprived weirdo would force two ponies to be together?"
--> '''Twilight''': [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E17HeartsAndHoovesDay "Your sister?"]]
--> '''Twilight''': [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E17HeartsAndHoovesDay "Your sister?"]]
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--> '''Applejack''': "What What kinda sick, deprived weirdo would force two ponies to be together?"
together?
--> '''Twilight''': [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E17HeartsAndHoovesDay"Your sister?"]]Your sister?]]
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* ThinkingLikeARomanceNovel: Pinkie (though movie is the term used). When Rainbow points out that they're not in a romance movie, Pinkie replies that it seems like it recently, and RD has no response.
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* ThinkingLikeARomanceNovel: ThinksLikeARomanceNovel: Pinkie (though movie is the term used). When Rainbow points out that they're not in a romance movie, Pinkie replies that it seems like it recently, and RD has no response.
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* AccidentalMarriage: The story focuses on this happening to Twilight and Applejack.
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* AccidentalMarriage: The story focuses on this happening to Twilight and Applejack.Applejack, though ''someone'' is doing their best to make sure that it can't be annulled immediately.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Flim and Flam try to lock Twilight and AJ in a room and knock them out while they make their escape, underestimating the pair. The fact that they tried to make Silver Shill pull their heavy carriage didn't exactly help their speed either.
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* TheDogBitesBack: After Flim and Flam run off in an attempt to get away from Twilight and Applejack, Silver Shill grabs two of their bags of bits (knowing that they'd never report the theft due to their paranoia of the Guards), and buys a caravan of his own, and sets out to give them honest competition.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: When Owlowiscious tells Angel that he has compassion for others even when he doesn't benefit, the bad bunny doesn't get what he's talking about.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: When Owlowiscious tells Angel that he has compassion for others even when he doesn't benefit, the bad bunny doesn't get what he's talking about.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Flim and Flam's actions ''finally'' get them arrested, and while they probably won't ''stay'' in jail that long, [[TheDogBitesBack Silver Shill bites back]] and sets out on his own, apparently to give them some honest competition.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Pinkie on the progression of Spike and the CMC's friendship.
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* SpitTake: Rainbow Dash after Fluttershy asks her how many foals they should have.
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* ThinkingLikeARomanceNovel: Pinkie (though movie is the term used). When Rainbow points out that they're not in a romance movie, Pinkie replies that it seems like it recently, and RD has no response.
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** Flim and Flam get away without any legal repercussions from outing Applejack and Twilight's relationship due to privacy laws.
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* GoldDiger: Diamond Tiara's mother apparently only married Filthy Rich for his money
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* GoldDiger: GoldDigger: Diamond Tiara's mother apparently only married Filthy Rich for his money
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* GoldDiger: Diamond Tiara's mother apparently only married Filthy Rich for his money
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--> '''Applejack:''' "There ain’t nothin’ ta talk about."
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--> '''Twilight:''' "That’s a double negative, which means there is something to talk about. Now tell me."
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--> '''Applejack:''' "There ain’t nothin’ ta talk about."
--> '''Twilight:''' "That’s a double negative, which means there is something to talk about. Now tell me.'''Pinkie:''' "Ooh! A wall!."
--> '''Twilight:''' "That’s a double negative, which means there is something to talk about. Now tell me.
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--> '''Pinkie Pie:''' "Ooh! A wall!"
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--> '''Pinkie Pie:''' "Ooh! A wall!"'''Applejack:''' "There ain’t nothin’ ta talk about."
--> '''Twilight:''' "That’s a double negative, which means there is something to talk about. Now tell me."
--> '''Twilight:''' "That’s a double negative, which means there is something to talk about. Now tell me."
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* ConfusingMultipleNegatives: One way Twilight corrects Applejack's grammar.
--> '''Pinkie Pie:''' "Ooh! A wall!"
--> '''Pinkie Pie:''' "Ooh! A wall!"
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--> '''Pinkie Pie:''' "Ooh! A wall!"'''Applejack:''' "There ain’t nothin’ ta talk about."
--> '''Twilight:''' "That’s a double negative, which means there is something to talk about. Now tell me."
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* [[ChickMagnet Mare Magnet]]: Somehow, don't ask any questions, Spike is shaping up to be one. The Cutie Mark Crusaders are competing with Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon over [[ItMakesSenseInContext who among them he thinks is the best kisser]].
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I\'ve decided to drop that... what I had planned wasn\'t going to work.
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* ParentalNeglect: There seems to be hints that this is true about Twilight's parents.
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** And in a twist, the magic on the rings reveals Applejack and Twilight have to be bedmates!
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** And in a twist, the magic on the rings reveals Applejack and Twilight have ''have'' to be bedmates!bedmates! They found that out the hard way when it magically pulled Applejack across Ponyville!
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* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: Twilight stumbles into this when Applejack is asking out loud who would try and force them together.
--> '''Applejack''': "What kinda sick, deprived weirdo would force two ponies to be together?"
--> '''Twilight''': [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E17HeartsAndHoovesDay "Your sister?"]]
--> '''Applejack''': "What kinda sick, deprived weirdo would force two ponies to be together?"
--> '''Twilight''': [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E17HeartsAndHoovesDay "Your sister?"]]
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* MythologyGag: Pinkie entertains Apple Bloom with a story her Granny Pie had taught her, which is clearly based on the first TV special from the G1 series (the one with Tirek and the Rainbow of Light).
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A few months after the events of Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000, Applejack decides to officially integrate the others into her family with an Apple tradition: a long night of cider drinking.
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A few months after the events of Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000, Applejack decides to officially integrate the others into her family with an Apple tradition: a long night of cider drinking.
drinking. The next morning Applejack wakes up... in Twilight's bed... with a gold band on her hoof... and a legally binding document on the bedside table...
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** Twilight mentions the possibility of [[Franchise/HarryPotter leaving body parts behind during teleportation]].
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* DogsAreDumb: Winona definitely counts, once we hear the sort of conversations she has with the other pets.
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** As of chapter 10, it's become a double recursion, with a few elements from the recursive fanfic integrated back into the original.
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Adding more! :D
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* TVTropesWillRuinYourVocabulary: Pinkie uses a trope name and seriously confuses Big Mac (though to be fair, she had him totally confused already by that point).
--> '''Pinkie Pie:''' "We have to [[PairTheSpares pair the spares]]!"
--> '''Big Macintosh:''' "... Wha?"
--> '''Pinkie Pie:''' "We have to [[PairTheSpares pair the spares]]!"
--> '''Big Macintosh:''' "... Wha?"
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* InterspeciesRomance: Well, technically, since Applejack is an earth pony and Twilight Sparkle is a unicorn (as are, respectively, Bonbon and Lyra, mentioned to be married in this story).
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That is not how the braces work.
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* HiddenDepths: [[Blueblood is shaping up to be this. He's shown to take his royal duties seriously, was capable of stopping a drunken Rarity when she attacked him without either of them getting hurt, and has mentioned knowing both Twilight and Spike pretty well in the past.]]
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* HiddenDepths: [[Blueblood Blueblood is shaping up to be this. He's shown to take his royal duties seriously, was capable of stopping a drunken Rarity when she attacked him without either of them getting hurt, and has mentioned knowing both Twilight and Spike pretty well in the past.]]
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Blueblood at the very least ''tells'' mares he sleeps with that this is a one time thing before hoof. He also makes it clear that he would never take advantage of a mare too intoxicated to consent.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Blueblood at the very least ''tells'' mares he sleeps with that this is a one time thing before hoof. [[AboveTheInfluence He also makes it clear that he would never take advantage of a mare too intoxicated to consent.]]
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Blueblood at the very least ''tells'' mares he sleeps with that this is a one time thing before hoof. [[AboveTheInfluence He also makes it clear that he would never take advantage of a mare too intoxicated to consent]].consent.
