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** To avoid making it look like he has any sympathies for Taylor, after a group of older Slytherin boys try to sneak into her room and are badly beaten by her, Snape lectures the other Slytherins about how the boy's plan wasn't cunning like Slytherins are supposed to be.
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** To avoid making it look like he has any sympathies for Taylor, after a group of older Slytherin boys try to sneak into her room and are badly beaten by her, Snape lectures the other Slytherins about how the boy's boys' plan wasn't cunning like Slytherins are supposed to be.
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** Warrington tried to kill Taylor in a duel to avenge his father, a Death Eater killed during a failed attack on her and Harry, by summoning snakes that had been specifically spelled so that their venom would be resistant to magical healing, only for Taylor to deflect the snakes back at him. The duel might have been cut short early enough to save him, too, if it weren't for the shield he set up to prevent any outside interference.
** [[spoiler: Voldemort let Crouch die without even trying to save him. This lets Taylor get Winky to break a Time Turner and trap Voldemort in a time loop]]
** [[spoiler: The reason Voldemort couldn't defeat Taylor, even with his Seer Machine? Because he was the one who killed the Seers and used their brains in it, even though he was assured that they weren't conscious, he was sure that the Seers were working against him, so he never fully trusted it]].
** [[spoiler: Voldemort let Crouch die without even trying to save him. This lets Taylor get Winky to break a Time Turner and trap Voldemort in a time loop]]
** [[spoiler: The reason Voldemort couldn't defeat Taylor, even with his Seer Machine? Because he was the one who killed the Seers and used their brains in it, even though he was assured that they weren't conscious, he was sure that the Seers were working against him, so he never fully trusted it]].
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** Warrington tried tries to kill Taylor in a duel to avenge his father, a father (a Death Eater killed during a failed attack on her and Harry, Harry), by summoning snakes that had been specifically spelled so that their venom would be resistant to magical healing, healing -- only for Taylor to deflect the snakes back at him. The duel might have been cut short early enough to save him, too, if it weren't for the shield he set up to prevent any outside interference.
**[[spoiler: Voldemort let Crouch allows [[spoiler:Crouch to die without even trying to save him. This lets Taylor get Winky (who was loyal to the Crouch family) to break a Time Turner and trap Voldemort in a time loop]]
loop.]]
**[[spoiler: The reason Voldemort couldn't defeat Taylor, even Taylor [[spoiler:even with his Seer Machine? Because Since he was the one who killed the Seers and used their brains in it, even though he was assured that they weren't conscious, he was sure that the Seers were working against him, so he never fully trusted it]].it.]]
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** Because Muggle-Borns can't practice magic at home over the summer and other holidays due to the Trace, those children with wizarding parents able to get an edge over them, especially with the Pure-Bloods who can afford tutors for their children.
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** Because Muggle-Borns can't practice magic at home over the summer and other holidays due to the Trace, those children with wizarding parents are able to get an edge over them, especially with the Pure-Bloods who can afford tutors for their children.
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* InnocentBigot:
** Madam Pomfrey has a moment where she implies, apparently unconsciously, that wizard lives are worth more than Muggle lives.
** Taylor thinks that such subconscious views aren't uncommon, even if the wizards aren't aware of it.
** Madam Pomfrey has a moment where she implies, apparently unconsciously, that wizard lives are worth more than Muggle lives.
** Taylor thinks that such subconscious views aren't uncommon, even if the wizards aren't aware of it.
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* InnocentBigot:
**InnocentBigot: Madam Pomfrey has a moment where she implies, apparently unconsciously, that wizard lives are worth more than Muggle lives.
**lives. Taylor thinks that such subconscious views aren't uncommon, even if the wizards aren't aware of it.
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* MoralMyopia: Thomas sees Taylor kill Nigel without any apparent remorse, and takes that as proof that she's demonic rather than human. Meanwhile, both Thomas and Nigel were present for the specific purpose of murdering Taylor, which Thomas considers to be morally praiseworthy. (It makes sense in his head because he thinks [[FantasticRacism only purebloods are really human]].)
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* MoralMyopia: Thomas sees Taylor kill Nigel without any apparent remorse, and takes that as proof that she's demonic rather than human. Meanwhile, both Thomas and Nigel were present for the specific purpose of murdering Taylor, which Thomas feels no remorse about and considers to be morally praiseworthy. (It makes sense in his head because he thinks [[FantasticRacism only purebloods are really human]].)
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** At one point, Dumbledore suggests that Muggle medicine might one day even surpass wizarding medicine. [[spoiler: Despite Madame Pomfrey's reaction, the DistantFinale revealed that Muggles were the ones that eventually cracked immortality]].
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** At one point, Dumbledore suggests that Muggle medicine might one day even surpass wizarding medicine. [[spoiler: Despite Madame Pomfrey's reaction, the DistantFinale revealed reveals that Muggles were the ones that eventually cracked immortality]].
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* AccentuateTheNegative: Taylor tends to do this.
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* AccentuateTheNegative: Taylor tends to do this.this due to her cynical nature.
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** [[spoiler: Umbridge is assassinated not long after and replaced by Amelia Bones]].
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** [[spoiler: Umbridge is assassinated by Taylor (framing the Death Eaters for it) not long after and replaced by Amelia Bones]].
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* ForWantOfANail: The main nail being the Death Eaters getting the Hogwarts acceptance list and targeting the Muggle-Borns on it ''before'' they get their letters. This leads to Taylor ending up in the Harry Potter world in the body of a murdered Muggle-Born girl, and the rest is history.
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* PointOfDivergence: The main point being the Death Eaters getting the Hogwarts acceptance list and targeting the Muggle-Borns on it ''before'' they get their letters. This leads to Taylor ending up in the Harry Potter world in the body of a murdered Muggle-Born girl, and the rest is history.
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* TheShameless: When Taylor hears about the nasty slur "mudblood" for those of nonmagical heritage, rather than be upset by it or ignore it, she starts calling ''herself'' that. Draco Malfoy is thrown far off balance -- especially when she proceeds to imply that she's a crazed killer.
--> '''Taylor:''' Oh, I know what it means. And if anyone else calls me that, they'll likely regret it. But it doesn't bother me all that much. I know what I am, and I'm comfortable with it.
--> '''Taylor:''' Oh, I know what it means. And if anyone else calls me that, they'll likely regret it. But it doesn't bother me all that much. I know what I am, and I'm comfortable with it.
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Waking in the body of a murdered child, Taylor Hebert, once a supervillain and later a superhero must discover who has been killing muggleborns while being forced to go to Hogwarts, among groups who are the most likely suspects.
''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17947397/chapters/42385007 Link]]'' to Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn version.\\
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17947397/chapters/42385007 Link]]'' to Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn version.\\
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Waking in the body of a murdered child, Taylor Hebert, once a supervillain and later a superhero superhero, must discover who has been killing muggleborns muggleborns, while she is being forced to go to Hogwarts, among groups who are the most likely suspects.
''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17947397/chapters/42385007 Link]]'' to It is posted on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn version.\\
''[[https://www.([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17947397/ here]]), Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13220537/1/A-Wand-for-Skitter Link]]'' to Website/FanFictionDotNet version.net/s/13220537/1/ here]]), and Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-wand-for-skitter.730018/ thread 1]], [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-wand-for-skitter-worm-hp-thread-2-complete.763766/ thread 2]]), and is [[CompletedFic complete]].
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