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* OhCrap: Everyone watching in the living world along with Ichigo when [[spoiler:Hell]] kills [[spoiler:Yamamoto]], and even more so when he kills [[spoiler:Urahara]]. Karin gets scared out of her wits when she sees Urahara take on his assasin persona with her TrueSight.

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* OhCrap: Everyone watching in the living world along with Ichigo when [[spoiler:Hell]] kills [[spoiler:Yamamoto]], and even more so when he kills [[spoiler:Urahara]]. Karin gets scared out of her wits when she sees Urahara take on his assasin assassin persona with her TrueSight.
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* OhCrap: Everyone watching in the living world along with Ichigo when [[spoiler:Hell]] kills [[spoiler:Yamamoto]], and even more so when he kills [[spoiler:Urahara]].

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* OhCrap: Everyone watching in the living world along with Ichigo when [[spoiler:Hell]] kills [[spoiler:Yamamoto]], and even more so when he kills [[spoiler:Urahara]]. Karin gets scared out of her wits when she sees Urahara take on his assasin persona with her TrueSight.
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They get resurrected, so it\'s no longer KOFR.


* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Yamamoto and Urahara]] are killed by [[spoiler:Hell]], as are [[spoiler:Masaki and Yoruichi]].

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** Uryuu regains his powers after Ichigo wonders if Orihime could reject him ever losing them.

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** Uryuu regains his powers after Ichigo iii wonders if Orihime could reject him ever losing them.


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* TearsOfRemorse: After the final battle [[TheIdealist Yuzu]] is depressed and crying over having enjoyed seeing their mother's killer suffer and having wanted to see more of it. Ichigo has to convince her she's not a bad person for wanting to see their mother's killer suffer.
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* BeachEpisode: Ichigo and crew go on vacation to the beach after Aizen's dealt with. Sadly, the next crises interrupts them.

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* BeachEpisode: Ichigo and crew go on vacation to the beach after Aizen's dealt with. Sadly, the next crises crisis interrupts them.



* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Gin prevents Soifon from killing Momo.]]

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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Gin [[spoiler:Gin]] prevents Soifon [[spoiler:Soifon]] from killing Momo.]]



--> '''Ichigo:''' Soul Society might tolerate me long enough to put Aizen down, but guess who'd be next? Especially since I'm just a human being living here. Soul Society might tolerate the existence of a human who could defeat some of their best Shinigami, since we humans live a short time anyway. But a human who could defeat some of their best Shinigami and then have the additional power to push him beyond Taicho ''[captain]'' level? They'd assassinate me!

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--> '''Ichigo:''' Soul -->''"Soul Society might tolerate me long enough to put Aizen down, but guess who'd be next? Especially since I'm just a human being living here. Soul Society might tolerate the existence of a human who could defeat some of their best Shinigami, since we humans live a short time anyway. But a human who could defeat some of their best Shinigami and then have the additional power to push him beyond Taicho ''[captain]'' level? They'd assassinate me! me!"''



** Though not used as weapons, Ichigo has been shown to have an affinity for chains to the point that all of his binding kidō appear as chains.

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** Though not used as weapons, Ichigo has been is shown to have an affinity for chains to the point that all of his binding kidō appear as chains.



* NoHuggingNoKissing: The author has made it very clear that there will be no pairings.

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* NoHuggingNoKissing: The author has made makes it very clear that there will be no pairings.pairings. [[spoiler:Averted at the last second when Ichigo and Neliel (the adult version, not "Nel") confess to each other near the end of the epilogue.]]



** Ichigo can become transcendent and thus impossible for any other character to sense. [[spoiler:Hell can transcend beyond what Ichigo can sense.]]

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** Ichigo can become transcendent and thus impossible for any other character to sense. [[spoiler:Hell [[spoiler:Hell]] can transcend beyond what Ichigo can sense.]]



* WalkingSpoiler: [[spoiler:Hell]]

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* WalkingSpoiler: [[spoiler:Hell]][[spoiler:Hell]].
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* AndTheAdventureContinues: [[spoiler:Ayumu is defeated, Hueco Mundo forms a tentative alliance with Soul Society, Masaki is given a proper home and protection in Soul Society, and Ichigo has finally made peace with his life. Then Quincy activity is detected in Hueco Mundo and the heroes are informed about Yhwach's prophesied return, so they start taking steps to counter him.]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5002293/1/A-Protector-s-Pride A Protector's Pride]] is a {{Manga/Bleach}} FanFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/943302/NeoRyu777 NeoRyu777]].

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5002293/1/A-Protector-s-Pride A Protector's Pride]] is a {{Manga/Bleach}} FanFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/943302/NeoRyu777 NeoRyu777]]. \n It is now complete.
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* OfficialCouple: Despite promises of NoHuggingNoKissing, the final chapter pairs [[spoiler:Ichigo and Nelliel]].
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* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: Isshin makes one to Ichigo.
-->'''Isshin''': "How do you just come out and say, 'Hey Ichigo, do you wanna hear how your Mom and I first met?'"
-->'''Ichigo''': "[[DeadpanSnarker Exactly like that]]."
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* LongList: One is made for things that cannot be done to [[spoiler:Masaki]] with a note that the list is incomplete, may be added to at any time, and punishments can and will be given out retroactively. Ichigo notes said list was probably made for Mayuri.


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* ProperlyParanoid: Soul Society makes sure to be very diligent with [[spoiler:Masaki's protection]]. Given what happened earlier in the story, it's fully justified.
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* MythologyGag: Nelliel "not minding" Ichigo chaining her up brings to mind her comments on being a masochist when they met in canon.

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* BeachEpisode: Ichigo and crew go on vacation to the beach after Aizen's dealt with. Sadly, the next crises interrupts them.



* ThrowTheDogABone: Zennosuke gets to be a SpannerInTheWorks, since he wasn't around to be hypnotized by Aizen's Shikai, and get a badass moment where he [[spoiler:resists Aizen's reiatsu enough to carry Ichigo's friends and family to safety.]]



* ThrowTheDogABone: Zennosuke gets to be a SpannerInTheWorks, since he wasn't around to be hypnotized by Aizen's Shikai, and get a badass moment where he [[spoiler:resists Aizen's reiatsu enough to carry Ichigo's friends and family to safety.]]
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** Ichigo spends a fair amount of time training to increase his skill rather than his strength, such as learning various ways to use Zangetsu and [[SwordBeam Getsuga Tenshou]].
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* IKnewThereWasSomethingAboutYou: Rukia just knew Ichigo had to be connected to Kaien somehow.
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* TheTheyWouldCutYouUp: When Hitsugaya hears about Rukia's new, Quincy-like ability, he advises her to keep it a secret, unless she wants to be locked up or experimented on.

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* TheTheyWouldCutYouUp: TheyWouldCutYouUp: When Hitsugaya hears about Rukia's new, Quincy-like ability, he advises her to keep it a secret, unless she wants to be locked up or experimented on.
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* TheTheyWouldCutYouUp: When Hitsugaya hears about Rukia's new, Quincy-like ability, he advises her to keep it a secret, unless she wants to be locked up or experimented on.
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** When Ichigo's allies learn that [[spoiler: his mother was a Quincy]] Uryu's reaction is to start [[HeadDesk banging his head]] against the nearest wall. WordOfGod is that he invoked this Trope when he imagined the sheer ''headache'' involved in [[spoiler: teaching [[UnskilledButStrong Ichigo]] how to fight like a [[WeaklButSkilled Quincy]]]] and realized that the job would likely fall to him.

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** When Ichigo's allies learn that [[spoiler: his mother was a Quincy]] Uryu's reaction is to start [[HeadDesk banging his head]] against the nearest wall. WordOfGod is that he invoked this Trope when he imagined the sheer ''headache'' involved in [[spoiler: teaching [[UnskilledButStrong Ichigo]] how to fight like a [[WeaklButSkilled [[WeakButSkilled Quincy]]]] and realized that the job would likely fall to him.
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** When Ichigo's allies learn that [[spoiler: his mother was a Quincy]] Uryu's reaction is to start [[HeadDesk banging his head]] against the nearest wall. WordOfGod is that he invoked this Trope when he imagined the sheer ''headache'' involved in [[spoiler: teaching [[UnskilledButStrong Ichigo]] how to fight like a [[WealButSkilled Quincy]] and realized that the job would likely fall to him.]]

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** When Ichigo's allies learn that [[spoiler: his mother was a Quincy]] Uryu's reaction is to start [[HeadDesk banging his head]] against the nearest wall. WordOfGod is that he invoked this Trope when he imagined the sheer ''headache'' involved in [[spoiler: teaching [[UnskilledButStrong Ichigo]] how to fight like a [[WealButSkilled Quincy]] [[WeaklButSkilled Quincy]]]] and realized that the job would likely fall to him.]]
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** When Ichigo's allies learn that [[spoiler: his mother was a Quincy]] Ury&#363's reaction is to start banging his head against the nearest wall. WordOfGod is that he invoked this Trope when he imagined the sheer ''headache'' involved in [[spoiler: teaching [[UnskilledButStrong Ichigo]] how to fight like a [[WealButSkilled Quincy]] and realized that the job would likely fall to him.]]

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** When Ichigo's allies learn that [[spoiler: his mother was a Quincy]] Ury&#363's Uryu's reaction is to start [[HeadDesk banging his head head]] against the nearest wall. WordOfGod is that he invoked this Trope when he imagined the sheer ''headache'' involved in [[spoiler: teaching [[UnskilledButStrong Ichigo]] how to fight like a [[WealButSkilled Quincy]] and realized that the job would likely fall to him.]]
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** When Ichigo's allies learn that [[spoiler: his mother was a Quincy]] Ury&#363's reaction is to start banging his head against the nearest wall. WordOfGod is that he invoked this Trope when he imagined the sheer ''headache'' involved in [[spoiler: teaching [[UnskilledButStrong Ichigo]] how to fight like a [[WealButSkilled Quincy]] and realized that the job would likely fall to him.]]
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* SlasherSmile: Ichigo gets one when he starts taking vengeance on [[spoiler:Ayumu]]. [[spoiler:''Yuzu'']] has one at the same time due to her empathic ability making her feel Ichigo's emotions at the time.


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* StormOfBlades: This is one of many tactics [[spoiler:Ayumu]] uses to attempt to counter Ichigo's [[spoiler:Segunda Etapa]].

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* CallBack: [[spoiler:Hell's]] barrier is pierced in a similar manner to how Ichigo and Uryū attempted to defeat a Menos back in the Substitute Shinigami arc.

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* CallBack: [[spoiler:Hell's]] CallBack:
** [[spoiler:Hell]]'s
barrier is pierced in a similar manner to how Ichigo and Uryū attempted to defeat a Menos back in the Substitute Shinigami arc.arc.
** The Turn Back the Pendulum arc of the manga includes souls breaking apart and disappearing, and Urahara mentioning an experimental gigai he's inventing that could re-stabilize a crumbling soul. For when the soul's pieces are totally scattered far apart already, such as those souls making up the desert in the bottom level of Hell, Urahara reveals here that he came up with an experimental spell to pull them back together.
** The Hougyoku's ability to read people's hearts is used to set up a system for [[spoiler:letting souls out of Hell]]: those who truly wish for redemption, forgiveness, and to set things right are [[spoiler:released from their Hell chains]] and sent to Soul Society.



* ColorCodedArmies: When Uryuu makes note of the canon red (Shinigami) and white (ordinary humans and quincies) colorations of spirit ribbons, he also mentions that Hollows appear black and Togabito appear purple.

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* ColorCodedArmies: When Uryuu makes note of the canon red (Shinigami) and white (ordinary humans and quincies) Quincies) colorations of spirit ribbons, he also mentions that Hollows appear black and Togabito appear purple.



* CombinedEnergyAttack: Urahara has an experimental Kido spell that can pull a dispersed soul back together, but it requires ''WAY'' more reiryoku (spirit energy) to use than he has personally. So, all of the Shinigami currently around add their power to his in order to use the spell.



* MentalWorld: Taking physically manifesting a Zanpakutou spirit to the logical extreme, it is theoretically possible to physically manifest one's entire inner world.



* NakedOnRevival: All of the good guys who were killed in Hell when they get revived by [[spoiler:Ichigo]].



* SmallNameBigEgo: Zommari has this in spades, claiming that even [[spoiler:the king of hell]] fears his power. Never mind that the other combatants could kill him by proximity alone.

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* SmallNameBigEgo: Zommari has this in spades, claiming that even [[spoiler:the king of hell]] Hell]] fears his power. Never mind that the other combatants could kill him by proximity alone.



* UpToEleven: Ichigo can become transcendent and thus impossible for any other character to sense. [[spoiler:Hell can transcend beyond what Ichigo can sense.]]

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* UpToEleven: UpToEleven:
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Ichigo can become transcendent and thus impossible for any other character to sense. [[spoiler:Hell can transcend beyond what Ichigo can sense.]]]]
** One Shinigami skill is to pull one's zanpakutou spirit from the world of one's heart (i.e., "inner world") and manifest it in the physical world. The logical extreme of this is to pull the entire world of the heart into the physical world.
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** Renji shouts one when [[spoiler:Yamamoto is killed]].
** Ichigo gives one when [[spoiler:Urahara is killed]].

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--->''"This is my power. You may be able to [[spoiler:rot away flesh, bone and sinew. You may be able to decompose earth and metal and even dissipate reiatsu.]] But my technique is based on none of those, nothing but the eternal force of my will to protect! This is my power, [[spoiler:Baraggan, Lord of Hueco Mundo!]] This power that intrudes on Kami's territory! The power to reject and reshape reality! And I reject you and your power! Tsubaki! Koten Zanshun! I reject!"''

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--->''"This is my power. You may be able to [[spoiler:rot away flesh, bone and sinew. sinew]]. You may be able to decompose [[spoiler:decompose earth and metal and even dissipate reiatsu.]] reiatsu]]. But my technique is based on none of those, nothing but the eternal force of my will to protect! This is my power, [[spoiler:Baraggan, Lord of Hueco Mundo!]] Mundo]]! This power that intrudes on Kami's territory! The power to reject and reshape reality! And I reject you and your power! Tsubaki! Koten Zanshun! I reject!"''


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* DualWielding: When Ichigo first wins his battle with his inner Hollow, he claims the latter's sword for himself, and from then on is able to use both Zangetsus as once. However, he rarely does so due to it being Awesome But Impractical (see above).
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--->''What makes a person a monster?''

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--->''What --->''"What makes a person a monster?''monster?"''



---> ''I channel that desire [to hurt others] into my left arm, and I've used it to protect others. What is better? To be born perfect, or overcome your flawed nature through great effort?''

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---> ''I ''"I channel that desire [to hurt others] into my left arm, and I've used it to protect others. What is better? To be born perfect, or overcome your flawed nature through great effort?''effort?"''



--->''This is my power. You may be able to [[spoiler:rot away flesh, bone and sinew. You may be able to decompose earth and metal and even dissipate reiatsu.]] But my technique is based on none of those, nothing but the eternal force of my will to protect! This is my power, [[spoiler:Baraggan, Lord of Hueco Mundo!]] This power that intrudes on Kami's territory! The power to reject and reshape reality! And I reject you and your power! Tsubaki! Koten Zanshun! I reject!''

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--->''This --->''"This is my power. You may be able to [[spoiler:rot away flesh, bone and sinew. You may be able to decompose earth and metal and even dissipate reiatsu.]] But my technique is based on none of those, nothing but the eternal force of my will to protect! This is my power, [[spoiler:Baraggan, Lord of Hueco Mundo!]] This power that intrudes on Kami's territory! The power to reject and reshape reality! And I reject you and your power! Tsubaki! Koten Zanshun! I reject!''reject!"''



--->''Allow me to tell you exactly whom you are dealing with. My name is Yamamoto Genryusai Shigekuni. I have lived for millennia, in times of war and in times of peace. I have made damning mistakes. I have won impossible victories. I have committed terrible atrocities, ordered and led utter genocide, not once, not twice, but thrice in the name of world balance, in the name of sanity, in the name of the human soul. I am he who conquered Soul Society and united the strongest under my rule! I am he who fought and survived the First Quincy, Yhwach, one thousand years ago, destroying his powers! I have had one thousand years since then to increase my powers, [[spoiler:Hell]]! Now taste the ever-burning flame of my soul! Bankai! Zanka no Tachi. Now... can the fires of Hell compare to me?''

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--->''Allow --->''"Allow me to tell you exactly whom you are dealing with. My name is Yamamoto Genryusai Shigekuni. I have lived for millennia, in times of war and in times of peace. I have made damning mistakes. I have won impossible victories. I have committed terrible atrocities, ordered and led utter genocide, not once, not twice, but thrice in the name of world balance, in the name of sanity, in the name of the human soul. I am he who conquered Soul Society and united the strongest under my rule! I am he who fought and survived the First Quincy, Yhwach, one thousand years ago, destroying his powers! I have had one thousand years since then to increase my powers, [[spoiler:Hell]]! Now taste the ever-burning flame of my soul! Bankai! Zanka no Tachi. Now... can the fires of Hell compare to me?''me?"''



--->''Enough talk! No Togabito will distract me! No attack will faze me! No defense will stop me! I came here to end the threat you pose to all the worlds, and you will not escape me!''

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--->''Enough --->''"Enough talk! No Togabito will distract me! No attack will faze me! No defense will stop me! I came here to end the threat you pose to all the worlds, and you will not escape me!''me!"''



---> ''I am the sōtaicho of the Gotei 13! There is no Shinigami stronger than I! What does it matter if you understand one technique? I have dozens, [[MasterOfAll hundreds of techniques]] that I have mastered in the millennia I have lived! Your armor may have saved you from my flame, but do not presume to think you have defeated me! ... I may not succeed in sealing you, but I ''will'' keep you from getting to Kurosaki Ichigo. I will [[DelayingAction buy him the time he needs]] to ''tear your soul apart!'' ''

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---> ''I ''"I am the sōtaicho of the Gotei 13! There is no Shinigami stronger than I! What does it matter if you understand one technique? I have dozens, [[MasterOfAll hundreds of techniques]] that I have mastered in the millennia I have lived! Your armor may have saved you from my flame, but do not presume to think you have defeated me! ... I may not succeed in sealing you, but I ''will'' keep you from getting to Kurosaki Ichigo. I will [[DelayingAction buy him the time he needs]] to ''tear your soul apart!'' ''apart!''"''



--->''Did you really think that after a hundred years of exile, I would not have a plan for how to counter Yamamoto? That I would not [[CrazyPrepared account for every possibility]]? I know his Shikai. I know his Bankai. I know every single one of his capabilities, and I have a plan to counter them all. This is why Aizen feared me so, why he never came after me directly until after he had the Hōgyoku in his grasp. He knew that if he did, I would kill him, because I ''always'' work out a counter to every power I am ever exposed to.''

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--->''Did --->''"Did you really think that after a hundred years of exile, I would not have a plan for how to counter Yamamoto? That I would not [[CrazyPrepared account for every possibility]]? I know his Shikai. I know his Bankai. I know every single one of his capabilities, and I have a plan to counter them all. This is why Aizen feared me so, why he never came after me directly until after he had the Hōgyoku in his grasp. He knew that if he did, I would kill him, because I ''always'' work out a counter to every power I am ever exposed to.''"''



--->''Look me in the eyes, [[spoiler:Ayumu]]. The fact that you breathe is an unforgivable affront to me after what you have done. So this is your punishment. You will die at my hands, again and again, until I am satisfied. When you revive, you are to return directly to me. For every minute you do not appear before me, I will use a Gran Rey Cero to tear your world, your soul apart. And when I get bored of that, I will seal you with a technique of my own making, one that will leave you in [[AndIMustScream eternal agony]]. Then I will leave you buried alive in the deepest level of this world. Your existence will be nothing. Blind, alone, in endless torment with no one to hear your screams. Now die, [[spoiler:Ayumu]]. Die, and return to me for more. ''[SlasherSmile widens]'' Or don't return to me. The Quincy thought for years they were destroying souls. It would be rather fitting for me to destroy yours, oh so slowly. Anyways, the choice is yours.''

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--->''Look --->''"Look me in the eyes, [[spoiler:Ayumu]]. The fact that you breathe is an unforgivable affront to me after what you have done. So this is your punishment. You will die at my hands, again and again, until I am satisfied. When you revive, you are to return directly to me. For every minute you do not appear before me, I will use a Gran Rey Cero to tear your world, your soul apart. And when I get bored of that, I will seal you with a technique of my own making, one that will leave you in [[AndIMustScream eternal agony]]. Then I will leave you buried alive in the deepest level of this world. Your existence will be nothing. Blind, alone, in endless torment with no one to hear your screams. Now die, [[spoiler:Ayumu]]. Die, and return to me for more. ''[SlasherSmile widens]'' Or don't return to me. The Quincy thought for years they were destroying souls. It would be rather fitting for me to destroy yours, oh so slowly. Anyways, the choice is yours.''"''



** This is why [[spoiler:Zen'i]] doesn't try to break his own [[spoiler:Hell Chains]]..

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** This is why [[spoiler:Zen'i]] doesn't try to break his own [[spoiler:Hell Chains]]..Chains]].



** Orihime vs Yammy.
--->'''Orihime''': Trying to kill my friend again... was a very big mistake, you cocky little bastard! Koten Zanshun! Tsubaki! Kill the son of a bitch!
** Later, Chad vs. Ulquiorra
--->'''Chad''': It doesn't matter what you look like, I'm going to rip that scrawny head of yours from your fucking shoulders!

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** Orihime vs gives one while fighting Yammy.
--->'''Orihime''': Trying --->''"Trying to kill my friend again... was a very big mistake, you cocky little bastard! Koten Zanshun! Tsubaki! Kill the son of a bitch!
bitch!"''
** Later, Chad vs. gives one while fighting Ulquiorra
--->'''Chad''': It --->''"It doesn't matter what you look like, I'm going to rip that scrawny head of yours from your fucking shoulders!shoulders!"''



* {{Touche}}: Uryuu concedes that he has no place to talk about creepy powers given that his [[spoiler:send people to Hell.]]

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* {{Touche}}: Uryuu concedes that he has no place to talk about creepy powers given that his [[spoiler:send people to Hell.]]Hell]].
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* BloodyMurder: [[spoiler:Urahara]]'s bankai includes a spell that can call down a RainOfBlood and turn it into a FlechetteStorm. It also allows him to control the blood of everyone he's ever killed. Which is implied to be a ''lot'' of people.

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* BloodyMurder: [[spoiler:Urahara]]'s bankai includes a spell that can call down a RainOfBlood and turn it into a FlechetteStorm. It also allows him to control the blood of everyone he's ever killed. Which killed, which is implied to be a ''lot'' of people.

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--->'''Zangetsu''': What makes a person a monster?

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--->'''Zangetsu''': What --->''What makes a person a monster?monster?''



---> '''Chad''': I channel that desire [to hurt others] into my left arm, and I've used it to protect others. What is better? To be born perfect, or overcome your flawed nature through great effort?

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---> '''Chad''': I ''I channel that desire [to hurt others] into my left arm, and I've used it to protect others. What is better? To be born perfect, or overcome your flawed nature through great effort?effort?''



* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Zommari Leroux comes back as a Togabito. Grimmjow was presumed dead, but it's revealed he actually ate a Togabito and inherited its chains.]]

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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Zommari Leroux Leroux]] comes back as a Togabito. Grimmjow [[spoiler:Grimmjow]] was presumed dead, but it's revealed he actually ate [[spoiler:ate a Togabito and inherited its chains.]]



** Ichigo gives a '''very'''dark one in Chapter 81 with a SlasherSmile on his face:

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** Ichigo gives a '''very'''dark '''very''' dark one in Chapter 81 with a SlasherSmile on his face:



* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: Ichigo and Ishida point out to Orihime that the only reason the Gotei 13 haven't done anything to them before is that there was the threat of Aizen to worry about and they needed the help.
** Way earlier in the fic, Hitsugaya accuses Ichigo of distrusting the Gotei 13. Ichigo retorts that if Aizen wasn't the bigger threat, the Gotei 13 would be coming after him and his friends.
---> '''Ichigo:''' Soul Society might tolerate me long enough to put Aizen down, but guess who'd be next? Especially since I'm just a human being living here. Soul Society might tolerate the existence of a human who could defeat some of their best Shinigami, since we humans live a short time anyway. But a human who could defeat some of their best Shinigami and then have the additional power to push him beyond Taicho ''[captain]'' level? They'd assassinate me!

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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: Ichigo and Ishida point out to Orihime that the only reason the Gotei 13 haven't done anything to them before is that there was the threat of Aizen to worry about and they needed the help.
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help. Way earlier in the fic, Hitsugaya accuses Ichigo of distrusting the Gotei 13. 13, and Ichigo retorts that if Aizen wasn't weren't the bigger threat, the Gotei 13 would be coming after him and his friends.
---> --> '''Ichigo:''' Soul Society might tolerate me long enough to put Aizen down, but guess who'd be next? Especially since I'm just a human being living here. Soul Society might tolerate the existence of a human who could defeat some of their best Shinigami, since we humans live a short time anyway. But a human who could defeat some of their best Shinigami and then have the additional power to push him beyond Taicho ''[captain]'' level? They'd assassinate me!



** Though not used as weapons, Ichigo has been shown to have an affinity for chains. To the point that all of his binding kidō appear as chains.

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** Though not used as weapons, Ichigo has been shown to have an affinity for chains. To chains to the point that all of his binding kidō appear as chains.



** [[spoiler:Hell sending Togabito to Karakura turns out to be this. If his minions kill the defenders, he can more easily invade. If they don't, the reishi left behind when they lose will eventually let him merge the Hell dimension and the living world.]]

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** [[spoiler:Hell sending Togabito to Karakura Karakura]] turns out to be this. If [[spoiler:If his minions kill the defenders, he can more easily invade. If they don't, the reishi left behind when they lose will eventually let him merge the Hell dimension and the living world.]]



** Later, [[spoiler:Ichigo becomes the king of Hueco Mundo after killing Aizen]]. He then has to fight a lot of Hollows to [[spoiler:prove his strength so other contenders won't attack him in the human world and cause a lot of collateral damage while trying to become king themselves.]]

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** Later, [[spoiler:Ichigo becomes the king of Hueco Mundo after killing Aizen]]. He then has to fight a lot of Hollows to [[spoiler:prove his strength so other contenders won't attack him in the human world and cause a lot of collateral damage while trying to become king themselves.]]]]
** [[spoiler:Grimmjow]] eats a Togabito and inherits its Hell chains.
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*** Because Zommari's Amor controls only whatever it hits (hitting someone's hand give control over their hand, not their whole body) he can't fully control [[spoiler:Ichigo's chains and can only take control of one link at a time.]]


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* SmallNameBigEgo: Zommari has this in spades, claiming that even [[spoiler:the king of hell]] fears his power. Never mind that the other combatants could kill him by proximity alone.

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* BadassCreed: Ichigo uses one to [[spoiler:bring out his Inner World]].



** Later in the same battle, he learns how to [[spoiler:project his Inner World into the real world]].



* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Yamamoto and Urahara]] are killed by [[spoiler:Hell]].

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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Yamamoto [[spoiler:Yamamoto and Urahara]] are killed by [[spoiler:Hell]].[[spoiler:Hell]], as are [[spoiler:Masaki and Yoruichi]].
* LaughingMad: This happens to [[spoiler:Yuzu]] when she feels the rage and vengeance in Ichigo's heart as he goes on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge.



* ResurrectedForAJob: [[spoiler:Ayumu]] resurrects Zommari Leroux in a bid to use his Amor to turn Ichigo's power against him.
* TheReveal: Chapter 82 finally reveals the completed versions of the lines that Ichigo has been gradually discovering as well as the fact that [[spoiler:Ichigo's inner spirits each view him as a part of ''them'', as well]].



** Ichigo after gaining [[spoiler:Resurreccion: Segunda Etapa]]



* ShoutOut: [[Videogame/TheElderscrollsVSkyrim "What is better? To be born perfect, or to overcome your flawed nature through great effort?"]]

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* ShoutOut: [[Videogame/TheElderscrollsVSkyrim ShoutOut:
** To ''VideoGame/TheElderscrollsVSkyrim'': Chad asks [[spoiler:Hell]],
"What is better? To be born perfect, or to overcome your flawed nature through great effort?"]]effort?"
** The BadassCreed Ichigo uses to [[spoiler:bring his Inner World into the real world]] is a shout-out to ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', but actually doing it was thought up long before the author had seen anything from the Nasuverse.
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