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* ShoutOut: In 11.12 the Matriarch says of Yohrin “That salarian has to be the worst STG agent I’ve ever heard of.” He respond by leaning back around the corner and saying “[[Film/PiratesOfTheCaribbeanTheCurseOfTheBlackPearl But youhave heard of me.]]”

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* ShoutOut: In 11.12 the Matriarch says of Yohrin “That salarian has to be the worst STG agent I’ve ever heard of.” He respond by leaning back around the corner and saying “[[Film/PiratesOfTheCaribbeanTheCurseOfTheBlackPearl But youhave you have heard of me.]]”
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* ShoutOut: In 11.12 the Matriarch says of Yohrin “That salarian has to be the worst STG agent I’ve ever heard of.” He respond by leaning back around the corner and saying “[[Film/PiratesOfTheCarribbeanTheCurseOfTheBlackPearl But have heard of me.]]”

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* ShoutOut: In 11.12 the Matriarch says of Yohrin “That salarian has to be the worst STG agent I’ve ever heard of.” He respond by leaning back around the corner and saying “[[Film/PiratesOfTheCarribbeanTheCurseOfTheBlackPearl “[[Film/PiratesOfTheCaribbeanTheCurseOfTheBlackPearl But have youhave heard of me.]]”
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* ShoutOut: In 11.12 the Matriarch says of Yohrin “That salarian has to be the worst STG agent I’ve ever heard of.” He respond by leaning back around the corner and saying “[[Film/PiratesOfTheCarribbean:TheCurseOfTheBlackPearl But have heard of me.]]”

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* ShoutOut: In 11.12 the Matriarch says of Yohrin “That salarian has to be the worst STG agent I’ve ever heard of.” He respond by leaning back around the corner and saying “[[Film/PiratesOfTheCarribbean:TheCurseOfTheBlackPearl “[[Film/PiratesOfTheCarribbeanTheCurseOfTheBlackPearl But have heard of me.]]”
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* ShoutOut: In 11.12 the Matriarch says of Yohrin “That salarian has to be the worst STG agent I’ve ever heard of.” He respond by leaning back around the corner and saying “[[Film/PiratesOfTheCarribbean But have heard of me.]]”

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* ShoutOut: In 11.12 the Matriarch says of Yohrin “That salarian has to be the worst STG agent I’ve ever heard of.” He respond by leaning back around the corner and saying “[[Film/PiratesOfTheCarribbean “[[Film/PiratesOfTheCarribbean:TheCurseOfTheBlackPearl But have heard of me.]]”
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* ShoutOut: In 11.12 the Matriarch says of Yohrin “That salarian has to be the worst STG agent I’ve ever heard of.” He respond by leaning back around the corner and saying “[Film/PiratesOfTheCarribbean But have heard of me.]]”

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* ShoutOut: In 11.12 the Matriarch says of Yohrin “That salarian has to be the worst STG agent I’ve ever heard of.” He respond by leaning back around the corner and saying “[Film/PiratesOfTheCarribbean “[[Film/PiratesOfTheCarribbean But have heard of me.]]”
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* ShoutOut: In 11.12 the Matriarch says of Yohrin “That salarian has to be the worst STG agent I’ve ever heard of.” He respond by leaning back around the corner and saying “[Film/PiratesOfTheCarribbean But have heard of me.]]”
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* StarKilling: [[spoiler: The Shards consume stars for energy. As they're using Backlash to emulate other Shards in order to follow any time Eye goes through a Mass Relay, it takes a hell of a lot more energy than it would with a specialized Shard like Vista's. When this is revealed to Ahern and the Salarian assistance, concerns are... somewhat alleviated by Cerebrex explaining they don't consume stars in this reality.]]
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* EarthShatteringKaboom: [[spoiler: Noveria gets cracked in half]]

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* EarthShatteringKaboom: [[spoiler: Minus the boom. Noveria gets cracked in half]]simply loses a continental plate when the Shards pull Kindred Administrator out of the Mass Effect reality, and into the one they're using to follow Eye around. This comes with disasterous consequences as entire cities fall into the hole that's left, including half of Port Hashan, where the rest of the Normandy crew are. Noveria is a dead world within hours.]]
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''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/totally-losing-it-mass-effect-worm-si-a-sequel-to-totally-winging-it.35655/ Totally Losing It]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect[=/=]Literature/{{Worm}}'' crossover fanfic co-written by WhoAmEye and Hellgodsrus.

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''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/totally-losing-it-mass-effect-worm-si-a-sequel-to-totally-winging-it.35655/ Totally Losing It]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect[=/=]Literature/{{Worm}}'' crossover fanfic co-written by WhoAmEye Who Am Eye/Fedorable and Hellgodsrus.
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* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler: Lt. Taylor Hebert died alongside her the rest of her troops on Akuze. Lazara Keyes is all that survived.]]

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* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler: Lt. Taylor Hebert died alongside her the rest of her troops on Akuze. Lazara Keyes is all that survived.]]
* WeCanRebuildHim: [[spoiler: For all intents and purposes Lazara was a test run for the Lazarus Project. The only difference was she was still alive when the Shadow Broker's medical team rebuilt her after Akuze. Much like Shepard the cybernetics are under the skin.
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* DownerEnding: Two non-canon endings written by the two writers as what-ifs. One has Eye cast aside her humanity to win against the Reapers. The other has Eye become all too human.



* EarthShatteringKaboom: [[spoiler: Noveria]]

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* EarthShatteringKaboom: [[spoiler: Noveria]]Noveria gets cracked in half]]



* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Both Samara and Kaiden died on Noveria.]]

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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Both Samara and Kaiden died on Noveria. And that's not counting the sheer amount of characters that bit it during the massive shootout in the Spaceport and when Noveria is cracked in half.]]
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''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/totally-losing-it-mass-effect-worm-si-a-sequel-to-totally-winging-it.35655/ Totally Losing It]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect[=/=]Literature/{{Worm}}'' crossover fanfic.

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''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/totally-losing-it-mass-effect-worm-si-a-sequel-to-totally-winging-it.35655/ Totally Losing It]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect[=/=]Literature/{{Worm}}'' crossover fanfic.
fanfic co-written by WhoAmEye and Hellgodsrus.
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* BrainUploading: [[spoiler: The origins of Eye. According to the Author Eye was created when Abaddon copied a random person’s brain to pilot his Anti-Warrior weapon. Problem is that he looked for someone who would killed Zion. He didn’t look for someone who would do that and obey his orders.]]

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* BrainUploading: [[spoiler: The origins of Eye. According to the Author Eye was created when Abaddon copied a random person’s brain to pilot his Anti-Warrior weapon. Problem is that he weapon, since Backlash had locked him out of it. Cerebrex looked for someone who would killed Zion. He didn’t look for someone who would do that be capable of getting Path to Victory back, and obey his orders.came upon the author. The end result was an incomplete upload thanks to Backlash disrupting the process.]]



* EarthShatteringKaboom: [[spoiler: Novera]]

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* EarthShatteringKaboom: [[spoiler: Novera]]Noveria]]



* HumanoidAbomination: [[spoiler: Eye. She’s essentially a baby Entity for all intents and purposes. She technically doesn’t even exist. Her body is just an Avatar form the Shards make for her ego to interact with the universe. Despite that she’s the normal teenagel lewd ball of anxiety that we know and love]]
* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Both Samara and Kaiden died on Novera.]]
* MeaningfulName: Lazara Keys. [[spoiler: Lazara is the female form of Lazarus, hinting at her death and rebirth from Lt. Taylor Hebert]]
* MergingTheBranches: Donovan Shepard was the Hero of Elysium. Liz was The Butcher of Torfan [[spoiler: Lazara Keys/Lt. Taylor Hebert was the Sole Survivor.]]

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* HumanoidAbomination: [[spoiler: Eye. She’s essentially a baby Entity for all intents and purposes. She technically doesn’t even exist. Her body is just an Avatar form the Shards make for her ego to interact with the universe. Despite that she’s the normal teenagel teenage lewd ball of anxiety that we know and love]]
* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Both Samara and Kaiden died on Novera.
love.]]
* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Both Samara and Kaiden died on Noveria.]]
* MeaningfulName: Lazara Keys.Keyes. [[spoiler: Lazara is the female form of Lazarus, hinting at her death and rebirth from Lt. Taylor Hebert]]
* MergingTheBranches: Donovan Shepard was the Hero of Elysium. Liz was The Butcher of Torfan [[spoiler: Lazara Keys/Lt.Keyes/Lt. Taylor Hebert was the Sole Survivor.]]



* NiceHat: In a fit of ADHD Eye randomly makes hats and puts them on Liara and Shiala while they're having a serious conversation. They don't notice due to said conversation.
* OffTheRails: Might as well be the alternative title of the story. To begin with there are two Shepards and Garrus has a Female Turian partner. [[spoiler: Udina has been revealed to be working for Cerebrus. Saren revealed most of the Council's dirty laundry throwing everything into chaos. Samara died on Noveria. Noveria was cracked in half. Kaiden died on Feros.]]

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* NiceHat: In a fit of ADHD Eye randomly makes grabs some hats and puts them on Liara and Shiala while they're having a serious conversation. They don't notice due to said conversation.
* OffTheRails: Might as well be the alternative title of the story. To begin with there are two Shepards and Garrus has a Female Turian partner. [[spoiler: Udina has been revealed to be working for Cerebrus. Saren revealed most of the Council's dirty laundry throwing everything into chaos. Samara died on Noveria. Noveria was cracked in half. Kaiden died on Feros.Noveria.]]



* SparedByTheAdaptation: Nihlus survives Eden Prime due to the presence of a second Shepard. [[spoiler: Benezia technically. She had to literally be asorbed by the Fleshcraftershard and have her body remade to remove her Indoctrination.]]
* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler: Lt. Taylor Hebert died alongside her the rest of her troops on Akuze. Lazara Keys is all that survived.]]

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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Nihlus survives Eden Prime due to the presence of a second Shepard. [[spoiler: Benezia technically. She had to literally be asorbed by the Fleshcraftershard and have her body remade mind very vigorously scrubbed by Cerebrex, a Shard that has aspects carried by the Simurgh's Song, to remove her Indoctrination.indoctrination. End result is she's having some trouble reintegrating all of her memories again.]]
* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler: Lt. Taylor Hebert died alongside her the rest of her troops on Akuze. Lazara Keys Keyes is all that survived.]]
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* DoorStopper: Currently clocking in at 560,000 words. And they're barely halfway through Mass Effect 1.
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* MotorMouth: Due to a quirk of the translators. When Eye says "Adorkable" Garrus' translator translates it as "A Portmanteau of Adorable and Dork." In the same span it takes for Eye to say the word. Eye immediately then says Adorable several times in a row, leaving Garrus yelling at the rapid spam of his translator.

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* MotorMouth: Due to a quirk of the translators. When Eye says "Adorkable" Garrus' translator translates it as "A Portmanteau of Adorable and Dork." In the same span it takes for Eye to say the word. Eye immediately then says Adorable Adorkable several times in a row, leaving Garrus yelling screaming at the rapid spam of his translator.
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Samara died on Novera. Kaiden was rendered brain dead on Feros and the energy requirement to bring him back was impossible for the Shards at the current time.]]

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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Both Samara and Kaiden died on Novera. Kaiden was rendered brain dead on Feros and the energy requirement to bring him back was impossible for the Shards at the current time.Novera.]]

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* TheAloner: [[spoiler: Lazara realized that Eye is the only person who would actually care if she died. This hits her hard, and starts to set up her HeelFaceTurn]]



* ButICantBePregnant: [[spoiler: This hits Liara hard. What makes this especially hard hitting is that Asari literally can not get pregnant unless they want to. This makes Liara realize that she's deeply in love with Liz as that means her subconscious wanted to get pregnant while melding with Shepard.]]



* EarthShatteringKaboom: [[spoiler: Novera]]
* GenkiGirl: Eye when she isn't in a depressive mood. [[spoiler: Kasumi even more so than in canon. This is because Kenji isn't dead and by all accounts is going to remain this way.]]



* MeaningfulName: Lazara Keys. [[spoiler: Lazara is the female form of Lazarus, hinting at her death and rebirth from Lt. Taylor Hebert]]



* OffTheRails: Might as well be the alternative title of the story. To begin with there are two Shepards and Garrus has a Female Turian partner.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Nihlus survives Eden Prime due to the presence of a second Shepard.

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* MoodWhiplash: The story is full of it. This mimics Eye's emotional state.
* MotorMouth: Due to a quirk of the translators. When Eye says "Adorkable" Garrus' translator translates it as "A Portmanteau of Adorable and Dork." In the same span it takes for Eye to say the word. Eye immediately then says Adorable several times in a row, leaving Garrus yelling at the rapid spam of his translator.
* NiceHat: In a fit of ADHD Eye randomly makes hats and puts them on Liara and Shiala while they're having a serious conversation. They don't notice due to said conversation.
* OffTheRails: Might as well be the alternative title of the story. To begin with there are two Shepards and Garrus has a Female Turian partner.
partner. [[spoiler: Udina has been revealed to be working for Cerebrus. Saren revealed most of the Council's dirty laundry throwing everything into chaos. Samara died on Noveria. Noveria was cracked in half. Kaiden died on Feros.]]
* PregnantBadass: [[spoiler: Liara as of the current chapters. It helps that she's very early on and isn't showing any physical signs yet.]]
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Nihlus survives Eden Prime due to the presence of a second Shepard. [[spoiler: Benezia technically. She had to literally be asorbed by the Fleshcraftershard and have her body remade to remove her Indoctrination.]]
* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler: Lt. Taylor Hebert died alongside her the rest of her troops on Akuze. Lazara Keys is all that survived.]]
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* ArtificialIntelligence: Mass Effect's canon negative attitude towards A.I. remains intact. Eye, on the other hand, is from a universe where the only A.I. in the setting is probably the single nicest person on the planet, and a victim of prejudice, not to mention of of Eye's friends. This leads to Eye getting into an argument with Tali soon after they first meet. They eventually patch things up though.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Eye, for all her insanity and mood swings, is really good at killing bad guys and she gets even better once she receives formal training. Of course, she fits right in on Shepard's RagTagBandOfMisfits.
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* FunWithHomophones: Eye's name lends itself well to this, naturally. However 'Eye' and 'I' sound different in some alien languages, confusing the alien crew members on occasion.

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* FunWithHomophones: Eye's name lends itself well to this, naturally. However However, 'Eye' and 'I' sound different in some alien languages, confusing the alien crew members on occasion.

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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Samara died on Novera. Kaiden was rendered brain dead on Feros and the energy requirement to bring him back was impossible for the Shards at the current time.]]

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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Samara died on Novera. Kaiden was rendered brain dead on Feros DerailedTrainOfThought: A frequent pass time of Eye's.
* FunWithHomophones: Eye's name lends itself well to this, naturally. However 'Eye'
and 'I' sound different in some alien languages, confusing the energy requirement to bring him back was impossible for the Shards at the current time.]]alien crew members on occasion.


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* MistakenIdentity: The first time Eye sees Lazara she calls her Taylor, thinking she’s her girlfriend. She’s quickly corrected. [[spoiler: She actually is Taylor. This universe’s Taylor.]]

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* MistakenIdentity: The first time Eye sees Lazara she calls her Taylor, thinking she’s her girlfriend. She’s quickly corrected. [[spoiler: She As it turns out, Eye isn't as mistaken as she thought. Lazara is actually is Taylor. This universe’s Taylor.]]the Mass Effect Universe's version of Taylor]]
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* OffTheRails: Might as well be the alternative title of the story. To begin with there are two Shepards.

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On the Citadel a small pale girl nearly drowns in the Presidium’s lake. On the Normandy the Shepard Twins prepare for the shakedown. Things quickly go off the rails.

Totally Losing It is technically a sequel to an unfinished Self-Insert story, Totally Winging it. In which Eye wakes up and pretty much attaches herself at the hip to Taylor Hebert, the main character of Worm. And quickly worms her way into her heart. Totally Losing it starts off right after the End of Totally Winging It ending like Worm Canon.


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On the Citadel a small pale girl nearly drowns in the Presidium’s lake. On the Normandy the Shepard Twins siblings prepare for the shakedown. Things quickly go off the rails.

Totally Losing It is technically a sequel to an unfinished Self-Insert story, Totally Winging it. In which Eye wakes up and pretty much attaches herself at the hip to Taylor Hebert, the main character of Worm. And quickly worms her way into her heart. Totally Losing it starts off It starts right after the End of Totally Winging It ending like Worm Canon.




* OffTheRails: Might as well be the alternative title of the story. To begin with there are two Shepards.

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* OffTheRails: Might as well be the alternative title of the story. To begin with there are two Shepards.Shepards.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Nihlus survives Eden Prime due to the presence of a second Shepard.
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* MergingTheBranches: Donovan Shepard was the Hero of Elysium. Liz was The Butcher of Torfan [[spoiler Lazara Keys/Lt. Taylor Hebert was the Sole Survivor.]]

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* MergingTheBranches: Donovan Shepard was the Hero of Elysium. Liz was The Butcher of Torfan [[spoiler [[spoiler: Lazara Keys/Lt. Taylor Hebert was the Sole Survivor.]]
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* Humanoid Abomination: [[spoiler: Eye. She’s essentially a baby Entity for all intents and purposes. She technically doesn’t even exist. Her body is just an Avatar form the Shards make for her ego to interact with the universe. Despite that she’s the normal teenagel lewd ball of anxiety that we know and love]]

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* Humanoid Abomination: HumanoidAbomination: [[spoiler: Eye. She’s essentially a baby Entity for all intents and purposes. She technically doesn’t even exist. Her body is just an Avatar form the Shards make for her ego to interact with the universe. Despite that she’s the normal teenagel lewd ball of anxiety that we know and love]]
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''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/totally-losing-it-mass-effect-worm-si-a-sequel-to-totally-winging-it.35655/ Exiled]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect[=/=]Literature/{{Worm}}'' crossover fanfic.

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''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/totally-losing-it-mass-effect-worm-si-a-sequel-to-totally-winging-it.35655/ Exiled]]'' Totally Losing It]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect[=/=]Literature/{{Worm}}'' crossover fanfic.
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'''Warning:''' Massive spoilers for ''{{Literature/Worm}}'' and ‘’'Franchise/MassEffect’’.

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'''Warning:''' Massive spoilers for ''{{Literature/Worm}}'' and ‘’'Franchise/MassEffect’’.''Franchise/MassEffect''.



* MergingTheBranches: Donavan Shepard was the Hero of Elysium. Liz was The Butcher of Torfan [[spoiler Lazara Keys/Lt. Taylor Hebert was the Sole Survivor.]]
* MistakenIdentiy: The first time Eye sees Lazara she calls her Taylor, thinking she’s her girlfriend. She’s quickly corrected. [[spoiler: She actually is Taylor. This universe’s Taylor.]]

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* MergingTheBranches: Donavan Donovan Shepard was the Hero of Elysium. Liz was The Butcher of Torfan [[spoiler Lazara Keys/Lt. Taylor Hebert was the Sole Survivor.]]
* MistakenIdentiy: MistakenIdentity: The first time Eye sees Lazara she calls her Taylor, thinking she’s her girlfriend. She’s quickly corrected. [[spoiler: She actually is Taylor. This universe’s Taylor.]]
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''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/totally-losing-it-mass-effect-worm-si-a-sequel-to-totally-winging-it.35655/ Exiled]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect[=/=]Literature/{{Worm}}'' crossover fanfic.

On the Citadel a small pale girl nearly drowns in the Presidium’s lake. On the Normandy the Shepard Twins prepare for the shakedown. Things quickly go off the rails.

Totally Losing It is technically a sequel to an unfinished Self-Insert story, Totally Winging it. In which Eye wakes up and pretty much attaches herself at the hip to Taylor Hebert, the main character of Worm. And quickly worms her way into her heart. Totally Losing it starts off right after the End of Totally Winging It ending like Worm Canon.


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!! This series provides examples of:


*BrainUploading: [[spoiler: The origins of Eye. According to the Author Eye was created when Abaddon copied a random person’s brain to pilot his Anti-Warrior weapon. Problem is that he looked for someone who would killed Zion. He didn’t look for someone who would do that and obey his orders.]]
*KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Samara died on Novera. Kaiden was rendered brain dead on Feros and the energy requirement to bring him back was impossible for the Shards at the current time.]]
*HoneyTrap: Played Straight [[spoiler: Lazara is ordered by the ShadowBroker to get close to Eye in order to be able to ship her to the Shadow Broker.]] And then Subverted [[spoiler: Lazara has fallen for Eye incredibly fast and is trying to figure out a way to betray the Shadow Broker and keep Eye safe.]]
*Humanoid Abomination: [[spoiler: Eye. She’s essentially a baby Entity for all intents and purposes. She technically doesn’t even exist. Her body is just an Avatar form the Shards make for her ego to interact with the universe. Despite that she’s the normal teenagel lewd ball of anxiety that we know and love]]
*MergingTheBranches: Donavan Shepard was the Hero of Elysium. Liz was The Butcher of Torfan [[spoiler Lazara Keys/Lt. Taylor Hebert was the Sole Survivor.]]
*MistakenIdentiy: The first time Eye sees Lazara she calls her Taylor, thinking she’s her girlfriend. She’s quickly corrected. [[spoiler: She actually is Taylor. This universe’s Taylor.]]
*OffTheRails: Might as well be the alternative title of the story. To begin with there are two Shepards.

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