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A story in FanFic/TheWeedverse, ''FanFic/TheWeedverse'', [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/387752/spring-broke Spring Broke]] is a sequel to FanFic/ABasketABlanketAndABundleOfBills, ''FanFic/ABasketABlanketAndABundleOfBills'', set a few weeks later.
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* CallingTheOldWomanOut: Buttermilk viciously deconstructs Butter Fudge's conservative worldview when the opportunity arises (see Hypocrite, below). To Butter Fudge's credit, she listens.
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* ButWeUsedACondom: Copperquick and Cielo didn't use a condom, but Cielo was on the pill. Unfortunately, it didn't work, possibly as a result of Copperquick being an earth pony.
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* ButWeUsedACondom: Copperquick and Cielo didn't use a condom, but Cielo was on the pill. Unfortunately, it didn't work, possibly as a result of Copperquick being an earth pony. Later on,[[spoiler: Buttermilk and Copperquick are having some fun, unfortunately, the condom breaks, causing Buttermilk to panic]].
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* NobleBigot: For all Butter Fudge's tribalism, homophobia and internalised sexism, she does genuinely try to do right by her daughter and granddaughter.
* NostalgiaFilter: Butter Fudge still believes in the "way things were", despite having directly witnessed the negative consequences (see FreudianExcuse, above).
* NostalgiaFilter: Butter Fudge still believes in the "way things were", despite having directly witnessed the negative consequences (see FreudianExcuse, above).
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* RightThroughTheWall: Butter Fudge is completely cognizant of what the thumping from upstairs means.
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* DeathGlare: Why Copperquick decides not to continue a smartarse comment to Butter Fudge.
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* DeathGlare: Why Copperquick decides not to continue a smartarse smartflank comment to Butter Fudge.
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* FreudianExcuse: [[spoiler:It turns out a lot of Butter Fudge's dark opinion of stallions, and earth pony stallions in particular, may well derive from her own parents' problems. Her father forced himself on her mother indiscriminately, and when she finally snapped and fought off yet another attempt at marital rape, it drove them apart and lead to her father raping one of her friends, Daisy Belle. Daisy was blamed for the assault, as was Butter Fudge's mother, and when Daisy began showing, she was forced to marry her rapist. Butter Fudge left home to get away from the situation]].
* ImagineSpot: Buttermilk slips into a double-entendre laden one while churning butter. Once it's over, she resolves to enact them that afternoon.
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* MadonnaWhoreComplex: Ripple Rusher has been hit with the dark side of a society-wide Complex. She slept with one guy on the promise of marriage, but he betrayed her, and while he got acclamation for his "conquest", she was seen as merely a slut, losing her job and forcing her into TheOldestProfession just to make ends meet. (Note, this is the story [[UnreliableNarrator as she told it]]. The truth may be less clear-cut, but she is still a victim of the trope). [[spoiler:This is why when the case is brought to Twilight Velvet's attention, she arranges relocation as part of the aid package, to allow Ripple Rusher to escape the stigma]].
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* LikeParentLikeSpouse: Butter Fudge sees a lot of Mighty Midge in Copperquick. Buttermilk, due to past experience with her mother's opinions, is wary.
* MadonnaWhoreComplex: Ripple Rusher has been hit with the dark side of a society-wide Complex. She slept with one guy on the promise of marriage, but he betrayed her, and while he got acclamation for his "conquest", she was seen as merely a slut, losing her job and forcing her into TheOldestProfession just to make ends meet. (Note, this is the story[[UnreliableNarrator [[UnreliableExpositor as she told it]]. The truth may be less clear-cut, but she is still a victim of the trope). [[spoiler:This is why when the case is brought to Twilight Velvet's attention, she arranges relocation as part of the aid package, to allow Ripple Rusher to escape the stigma]].
* MadonnaWhoreComplex: Ripple Rusher has been hit with the dark side of a society-wide Complex. She slept with one guy on the promise of marriage, but he betrayed her, and while he got acclamation for his "conquest", she was seen as merely a slut, losing her job and forcing her into TheOldestProfession just to make ends meet. (Note, this is the story
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While there, he finds himself caught in an old argument between Buttermilk and her mother, Butter Fudge, over Butter Fudge's rather conservative views, compared to Buttermilk's less conservative ones. Oh, and Seville Orange comes looking for Copperquick, hoping to kickstart his career as a reporter.
* CoolAirship: The Factory Ship, an entire factory suspended in the air, allowing to to move to where the raw materials are and where the finished goods are needed, rather than the other way around. The particular one that shows up, flown by Captain Goldfrost, processes fish and crustaceans into meals for Canterlot, and does a sideline taking other products, including Butter Fudge's cheese, to market.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Someone is not telling the whole truth about Ripple Rusher, either herself, claiming she was taken advantage of and fell afoul of the MadonnaWhoreComplex, or Butter Fudge, claiming that she went off birth control in an attempt to BabyTrap her then-boyfriend and it backfired when her father threw her out instead of forcing a ShotgunWedding.
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* HotLibrarian: Despite not strictly being a librarian, Buttermilk hits the aesthetic, which, combined with Copperquick's feather fetish, leads to more than a little distraction.
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* LieBackAndThinkOfEngland: The majority of Copperquick's sex ed in the Grittish Isles had this sort of theme, which resulted in the [[TheCasanova counterreaction]] when he moved to Equestria, something he's trying to move past.
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* LieBackAndThinkOfEngland: The majority of Copperquick's sex ed in the Grittish Isles had this sort of theme, which resulted in the [[TheCasanova counterreaction]] when he moved to Equestria, something he's trying to move past. [[spoiler:Butter Fudge also gave this advice to her daughter, saying that if sex should turn unpleasant once begun, she should simply put up with it, because better some discomfort and sorting it later than to risk an angry and violent stallion. This freaks Buttermilk enough to put a major block on her ability to actually do the deed with Copperquick. Copperquick responds to this coming out by promising to do what he can to make sure that Buttermilk has nothing but good experiences of love and sex when it comes to telling Esme about such things]].
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* GoAndSinNoMore: Buttermilk [[DiscussedTrope Discusses]] the trope to try and add a more positive note to Seville's report, saying that when someone makes a mistake, giving them the opportunity to fix it rather than cling to biases can be very important and end very well, like in the case of Copperquick and Esmerelda, but she does acknowledge that not everyone will take the opportunities, but still, it's WorthIt for when it does work.
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* HappilyAdopted: Buttermilk completely considers Esmerelda as hers, despite the legalities being far from dealt with, most of the time, but sometimes the fact she's not Esmerelda's biological mother distresses her.
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* HappilyAdopted: Buttermilk completely considers Esmerelda as hers, despite the legalities being far from dealt with, most [[ZigZagged most]] of the time, but sometimes the fact she's not Esmerelda's biological mother distresses her.
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* ItsAllMyFault: {{Downplayed}}, but Seville blames himself for the arguments he witnesses between Butter Fudge and Buttermilk. Copperquick reassures him that they were arguing long before his arrival.
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* HowMuchDidYouHear: After being caught watching Copperquick and Buttermilk get very intimate[[note]]Though not actually having sex, although it's pretty close, much to Butter Fudge's [[ShipperOnDeck vocal]] [[IWantGrandkids disappointment]][[/note]], she's asked how long she's been there. Although she doesn't give a straight answer, she does say that Esmerelda was giggling due to Butter Fudge pulling funny faces. Esmerelda has been laughing for the entire chapter...
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* HowMuchDidYouHear: After being caught watching Copperquick and Buttermilk get very intimate[[note]]Though not actually having sex, although it's pretty close, much to Butter Fudge's her [[ShipperOnDeck vocal]] [[IWantGrandkids disappointment]][[/note]], she's Butter Fudge is asked how long she's been there. Although she doesn't give a straight answer, she does say that Esmerelda was giggling due to Butter Fudge pulling funny faces. Esmerelda has been laughing for the entire chapter...
* InternalizedCategorism: Butter Fudge bites her tongue around Mighty Midge more than is really healthy, out of deference to the "man of the house", showing just how the sexist attitudes persist once entrenched. She's got the additional problem that if she ''does'' break from the role, then Buttermilk will call her on it, as she tried instill the same behaviours into Buttermilk[[note]]When she finally does have a row with Mighty, it's after Buttermilk has already stormed out[[/note]]. Buttermilk herself isn't entirely immune, showing off her abilities at various traditionally feminine tasks to try and entice Copperquick, though he considers such efforts entirely superfluous (though far from unappreciated), after all, she's already won him over.
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* LetMeAtHim: When Seville drops by unannounced, Butter Fudge, furious about the trespass onto her land, has to be restrained by her daughter. She changes her tune when she discovers why he has come.
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* LetMeAtHim: When Seville drops by unannounced, Butter Fudge, furious about the trespass onto her land, has to be restrained by her daughter. She changes her tune when she discovers why he has come. It's at least partially for show, after all, what would the neighbours think if they saw her welcoming a strange stallion into the house while her husband was away?
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* SleepSquashing: {{Downplayed}}, but Esmerelda is stuck underneath Copperquick when he fails at GettingTheBabyToSleep.
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* AllAbusersAreMale: {{Discussed}}. Part of Copperquick's problems are people reacting badly to being told that it's Esmerelda's ''mother's'' fault that she's been neglected and stunted, usually in response to trying to tell him that he should let Esme be raised by her mother, because he can't do it properly.
* ButWeUsedACondom: Copperquick and Cielo didn't use a condom, but Cielo was on the pill. Unfortunately, it didn't work, possibly as a result of Copperquick being an earth pony.
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* MadonnaWhoreComplex: Ripple Rusher has been hit with the dark side of a society-wide Complex. She slept with one guy on the promise of marriage, but he betrayed her, and while he got acclamation for his "conquest", she was seen as merely a slut, losing her job and forcing her into TheOldestProfession just to make ends meet. (Note, this is the story [[UnreliableNarrator as she told it]]. The truth may be less clear-cut, but she is still a victim of the trope).
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* MadonnaWhoreComplex: Ripple Rusher has been hit with the dark side of a society-wide Complex. She slept with one guy on the promise of marriage, but he betrayed her, and while he got acclamation for his "conquest", she was seen as merely a slut, losing her job and forcing her into TheOldestProfession just to make ends meet. (Note, this is the story [[UnreliableNarrator as she told it]]. The truth may be less clear-cut, but she is still a victim of the trope). [[spoiler:This is why when the case is brought to Twilight Velvet's attention, she arranges relocation as part of the aid package, to allow Ripple Rusher to escape the stigma]].
* MissConception: {{Downplayed}}, but Copperquick's sex ed is a little spotty, including not knowing that earth pony stallions have been known to overcome the pill (which resulted in Esmerelda).
* MistakenForPedophile: Copperquick tells Seville that he's had a few incidents of this, due to people not expecting a single father to be about, especially when taking his daughter into a bathroom to change her.
* MistakenForPedophile: Copperquick tells Seville that he's had a few incidents of this, due to people not expecting a single father to be about, especially when taking his daughter into a bathroom to change her.
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* ShowWithinAShow: The characters go to see a film, a black-and-white SilentFilm called ''Sinister Dark Versus the Despicables''
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* FantasticRacism: Seville gets some sympathy from Butter Fudge for the trouble he's having trying to become a reporter as an earth pony.
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* GoingForTheBigScoop: The reason that Seville has come so far to speak to Copperquick.
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* BabyTalk: Esmerelda is just starting to speak (rather late, due to Cielo's ParentalNeglect), and actually progresses from one word[[note]]"Foosh", an imitation of the sound of a toilet, to indicate PottyEmergency[[/note]] to several over the course of the story.
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* EatingTheEyeCandy: Copperquick takes his ability to do this as Buttermilk walks away from him as proof that he doesn't need glasses, really.
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* InnocentBigot: Mighty Midge's opinions on immigrants and LGBTQ ponies aren't as bad as they could be, but they're still enough to upset Buttermilk.
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* OhCrap: Buttermilk briefly panics when Esmerelda topples over mid-play and stops moving. Fortunately, she's just gone to sleep, as young foals do.
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* TooKinkyToTorture: Briefly alluded to, as when Mighty Midge suggests that he should paddle Butter Fudge for misbehaving, she claims she'd misbehave more often.
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* BigDamnKiss: While at Flapper's Henhouse, Copperquick kisses Buttermilk, intending it to be a quick peck. She has other ideas.
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* DaddysGirl: Buttermilk theorises that this is why she finds being affectionate with Copperquick in the presence of Mighty Midge worse than doing so in the presence of Butter Fudge.
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Copperquick's reaction to Esmerelda being fed an awful lot of syrup.
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* ComfortingComforter: Buttermilk returns from a shopping trip to find that someone has done this to Copperquick.
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* RuleOfCute: InUniverse, one of the reasons that Buttermilk procures a ball for Esmerelda[[note]]The other is to help her legs develop[[/note]].
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* FeedByExample: Done (fairly successfully) to try and ween Esmerelda.
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* YourCheatingHeart: {{Discussed}} fairly deeply, as Butter Fudge cautions Buttermilk keep Copperquick satisfied to avoid him looking elsewhere. Buttermilk doesn't like the UnfortunateImplications of the attitude, but isn't able to articulate why straight away.
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* CallingTheOldWomanOut: Buttermilk viciously deconstructs Butter Fudge's conservative worldview when the opportunity arises (see Hypocrite, below). To Butter Fudge's credit, she listens.
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* HowMuchDidYouHear: After being caught watching Copperquick and Buttermilk get very intimate[[note]]Though not actually having sex, although it's pretty close, much to Butter Fudge's [[ShipperOnDeck vocal]] [[IWantGrandkids disappointment]][[/note]], she's asked how long she's been there. Although she doesn't give a straight answer, she does say that Esmerelda was giggling due to Butter Fudge pulling funny faces. Esmerelda has been laughing for the entire chapter...
* LieBackAndThinkOfEngland: The majority of Copperquick's sex ed in the Grittish Isles had this sort of theme, which resulted in the [[TheCasanova counterreaction]] when he moved to Equestria, something he's trying to move past.
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* ShipperOnDeck: Mrs. Velvet is apparently keen on Copperquick/Buttermilk, if the box of condoms is any indication.
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* DeathGlare: Why Copperquick decides not to continue a smartarse comment to Butter Fudge.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: When Buttermilk is churning butter. {{Lampshaded}} like nobody's business with the [[DistractedByTheSexy effect on Copperquick's studying]].
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* LikeMotherLikeDaughter: Several times, Copperquick notices similarities between Buttermilk and Butter Fudge.
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* AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents: Poor Buttermilk.
* AlphaBitch: Copperquick really hopes that Esmerelda hasn't inherited this off her mother. Despite her moments though, she doesn't appear to.
* AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents: Poor Buttermilk.
* AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents: Poor Buttermilk.
* DivineRightOfKings: A {{Deconstruction}} of the trope (though it's presented in a nonstandard way). The belief that a cutie-mark indicating rulership or lawmaking prowess indicates right and fitness to rule is entrenched in parts of Equestria (including with Butter Fudge)[[note]]It's actually impossible for those not so-marked to become a judge or magistrate[[/note]], but it's permitted a system to become riddled with hypocrisy and corruption without overview, which is now collapsing once that's exposed.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Justice Heavy Gavel, the "defender of the common mare", known to be harsh on philandering stallions (and the judge meant to handle Copperquick's case) turns out to have over a dozen illegitimate foals with several mares. It's part of a larger investigation into the judicial system instigated by Twilight Velvet to try and shift some of the [[ObstructiveBureaucrat mess]].
* HypocriticalHumour: Buttermilk tells Copperquick off when Esmerelda begins repeating swear words, despite being the source of the offending remark.
* HypocriticalHumour: Buttermilk tells Copperquick off when Esmerelda begins repeating swear words, despite being the source of the offending remark.
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* IWantGrandkids: {{Discussed}}, Butter Fudge does want grandfoals, but doesn't push Buttermilk because she knows her daughter has other plans.
* MadonnaWhoreComplex: Ripple Rusher has been hit with the dark side of a society-wide Complex. She slept with one guy on the promise of marriage, but he betrayed her, and while he got acclamation for his "conquest", she was seen as merely a slut, losing her job and forcing her into TheOldestProfession just to make ends meet. (Note, this is the story [[UnreliableNarrator as she told it]]. The truth may be less clear-cut, but she is still a victim of the trope).
* MadonnaWhoreComplex: Ripple Rusher has been hit with the dark side of a society-wide Complex. She slept with one guy on the promise of marriage, but he betrayed her, and while he got acclamation for his "conquest", she was seen as merely a slut, losing her job and forcing her into TheOldestProfession just to make ends meet. (Note, this is the story [[UnreliableNarrator as she told it]]. The truth may be less clear-cut, but she is still a victim of the trope).
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* PrivateInvestigator: Yam Spade is mentioned, as the results of his actions make themselves known.
* PrivateInvestigator: Yam Spade is mentioned, as the results of his actions make themselves known.
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* XanatosSpeedChess: Twilight Velvet's gambits to reform the legal system form a significant background element. Buttermilk is unsure how much is new improvisation and how much was planned, and is currently being kept out of the loop because she needs to focus on Copperquick.
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* BodySurf: One of the villains in ''Sinister Dark Versus the Despicables'' is a wizard who has learned how to do this through golem bodies, and constructed hundreds. Sinister tricks him by implanting a golem core into her own body and trapping him inside.
* BriarPatching: [[spoiler:Her disapproval of Buttermilk attending university was deliberately calculated by Butter Fudge to push her to go]].
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* CorruptCorporateExecutive: Mister Mariner is mentioned, apparently he's been trying to buy up all the locally-owned businesses. Fortunately, most of the community was smart enough not to let him.
* DownerEnding: ''[[ShowWithinAShow Sinister Dark Versus the Despicables]]'' has one, with Sinister Dark [[HeroicSacrifice walking into Tartarus]] to trap the Golem Lord.
* FantasyForbiddingMother: Buttermilk is concerned about how her parents will react to her news, due to their previous disapproval of her choices. [[spoiler:Butter Fudge is overjoyed, as her previous disapproval was an attempt to get Buttermilk to leave and grow strong for herself, something she has more than succeeded at]].
* DownerEnding: ''[[ShowWithinAShow Sinister Dark Versus the Despicables]]'' has one, with Sinister Dark [[HeroicSacrifice walking into Tartarus]] to trap the Golem Lord.
* FantasyForbiddingMother: Buttermilk is concerned about how her parents will react to her news, due to their previous disapproval of her choices. [[spoiler:Butter Fudge is overjoyed, as her previous disapproval was an attempt to get Buttermilk to leave and grow strong for herself, something she has more than succeeded at]].
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* GadgeteersHouse: Butter Fudge has turned her island into one after getting sick of lanterns and teaching herself electrical engineering.
* Gasshole: Esmeralda has a bout of it after being fed rather richer food that she's used to.
* GenkiGirl: Initially, Buttermilk isn't, despite her characterisation in the previous story. This is due to a lack of caffeine. Once this is remedied, she returns to form, and we find out that her parents are nearly as bad at times.
* GoodParents: Butter Fudge and Mighty Midge, as well as Copperquick and Buttermilk.
* HellSeeker: Sinister Dark, in the film that the characters go to see, [[LaughingMad laughing]] and singing all the way. It's necessary to contain the evil wizard trapped in her body.
* HeroicSacrifice: Sinister Dark walks into Tartarus, taking the Golem Lord with her.
* Gasshole: Esmeralda has a bout of it after being fed rather richer food that she's used to.
* GenkiGirl: Initially, Buttermilk isn't, despite her characterisation in the previous story. This is due to a lack of caffeine. Once this is remedied, she returns to form, and we find out that her parents are nearly as bad at times.
* GoodParents: Butter Fudge and Mighty Midge, as well as Copperquick and Buttermilk.
* HellSeeker: Sinister Dark, in the film that the characters go to see, [[LaughingMad laughing]] and singing all the way. It's necessary to contain the evil wizard trapped in her body.
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* MotorMouth: Butter Fudge, as well as her daughter.
* NervousWreck: Due to Cielo's ParentalNeglect, Esmerelda is prone to separation anxiety if she cannot see her parents, leading to some special instructions for handling her. [[note]]"You cannot raise your voice and begin shouting, because that does bad things to her. She’ll just shut down and become despondent. She has some abandonment issues. You can’t just put her down and say that she’ll be fine if she’s left to cry it out. She won’t. She’s afraid of the dark and Mrs. Velvet believes that it is because Esmeralda can’t see us. It isn’t enough to hear our voices or to touch us… and don’t cover up her face with a blanket to play peekaboo because she’ll freak out and have the worst meltdown you could possibly imagine."[[/note]]
* NervousWreck: Due to Cielo's ParentalNeglect, Esmerelda is prone to separation anxiety if she cannot see her parents, leading to some special instructions for handling her. [[note]]"You cannot raise your voice and begin shouting, because that does bad things to her. She’ll just shut down and become despondent. She has some abandonment issues. You can’t just put her down and say that she’ll be fine if she’s left to cry it out. She won’t. She’s afraid of the dark and Mrs. Velvet believes that it is because Esmeralda can’t see us. It isn’t enough to hear our voices or to touch us… and don’t cover up her face with a blanket to play peekaboo because she’ll freak out and have the worst meltdown you could possibly imagine."[[/note]]
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* SingingInTheShower: Copperquick indulges himself while he has the opportunity (he'd recently been evicted from his own home).
* SecurityBlanket: Esmeralda has a stuffed carrot.
* ShowWithinAShow: The characters go to see a film, a black-and-white SilentFilm called ''Sinister Dark Versus the Despicables''
* TinyGuyHugeGirl: Mighty Midge and Butter Fudge.
* UnreliableNarrator: Someone is not telling the whole truth about Ripple Rusher, either herself, claiming she was taken advantage of and fell afoul of the MadonnaWhoreComplex, or Butter Fudge, claiming that she went off birth control in an attempt to BabyTrap her then-boyfriend and it backfired when her father threw her out instead of forcing a ShotgunWedding.
* WrenchWench: Butter Fudge taught herself electrical engineering.
* SecurityBlanket: Esmeralda has a stuffed carrot.
* ShowWithinAShow: The characters go to see a film, a black-and-white SilentFilm called ''Sinister Dark Versus the Despicables''
* TinyGuyHugeGirl: Mighty Midge and Butter Fudge.
* UnreliableNarrator: Someone is not telling the whole truth about Ripple Rusher, either herself, claiming she was taken advantage of and fell afoul of the MadonnaWhoreComplex, or Butter Fudge, claiming that she went off birth control in an attempt to BabyTrap her then-boyfriend and it backfired when her father threw her out instead of forcing a ShotgunWedding.
* WrenchWench: Butter Fudge taught herself electrical engineering.
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* ContinuityNod: The encounter with Blancmange and the [[BigDamnKiss result]] are referenced.
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* NoodleIncident: An encounter with a cave troll has apparently occurred between this and FanFic/ABasketABlanketAndABundleOfBills. Although the encounter is unrevealed, its consequences [[BigDamnKiss are not]].
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A story in FanFic/TheWeedverse, [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/387752/spring-broke Spring Broke]] is a sequel to FanFic/ABasketABlanketAndABundleOfBills, set a few weeks later.
Copperquick has had a trying few weeks since becoming both homeless and jobless after the sudden arrival of his daughter. He's only just keeping up with the schoolwork and the duties of being a single dad. Still, he's got a break now, and is taking a trip with Miss Buttermilk Oddbody to stay with her parents for a week.
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!!This Fanfic contains examples of:
* AcePilot: Ripple Rusher manages to impress Copperquick with her ability to drive a skiff.
* BawdySong: Apparently Princess Luna authored some dirty poetry before her banishment that's still read.
* BigBrotherInstinct: The oldest of Ripple's foals is displaying this. The fact he's having to so young is not a good sign.
* FirstNameBasis: Copperquick and Buttermilk, reflected in the narration, which now generally calls Buttermilk by her first name, rather than "Miss Oddbody", as in FanFic/ABasketABlanketAndABundleOfBills.
* HumanCannonball: Nearly the fate of whoever tried building a train track [[WhatAnIdiot across the delta]].
* MadonnaWhoreComplex: Ripple Rusher has been hit with the dark side of a society-wide Complex. She slept with one guy on the promise of marriage, but he betrayed her, and while he got acclamation for his "conquest", she was seen as merely a slut, losing her job and forcing her into TheOldestProfession just to make ends meet.
* MassiveNumberedSiblings: Ripple Rusher's foals, due to her [[TheOldestProfession profession]].
* MeetTheInLaws: Buttermilk is not looking forwards to explaining everything going on to her parents.
* MoodWhiplash: The initially benign story takes a sharp turn for the miserable when they meet Ripple Rusher.
* NoodleIncident: An encounter with a cave troll has apparently occurred between this and FanFic/ABasketABlanketAndABundleOfBills. Although the encounter is unrevealed, its consequences [[BigDamnKiss are not]].
* ScreamingPlaneBaby: Much to the embarrassment of Copperquick and Buttermilk, Esmerelda is one while the train passes through a long tunnel.
* ShipperOnDeck: Mrs. Velvet is apparently keen on Copperquick/Buttermilk, if the box of condoms is any indication.
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Copperquick has had a trying few weeks since becoming both homeless and jobless after the sudden arrival of his daughter. He's only just keeping up with the schoolwork and the duties of being a single dad. Still, he's got a break now, and is taking a trip with Miss Buttermilk Oddbody to stay with her parents for a week.
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!!This Fanfic contains examples of:
* AcePilot: Ripple Rusher manages to impress Copperquick with her ability to drive a skiff.
* BawdySong: Apparently Princess Luna authored some dirty poetry before her banishment that's still read.
* BigBrotherInstinct: The oldest of Ripple's foals is displaying this. The fact he's having to so young is not a good sign.
* FirstNameBasis: Copperquick and Buttermilk, reflected in the narration, which now generally calls Buttermilk by her first name, rather than "Miss Oddbody", as in FanFic/ABasketABlanketAndABundleOfBills.
* HumanCannonball: Nearly the fate of whoever tried building a train track [[WhatAnIdiot across the delta]].
* MadonnaWhoreComplex: Ripple Rusher has been hit with the dark side of a society-wide Complex. She slept with one guy on the promise of marriage, but he betrayed her, and while he got acclamation for his "conquest", she was seen as merely a slut, losing her job and forcing her into TheOldestProfession just to make ends meet.
* MassiveNumberedSiblings: Ripple Rusher's foals, due to her [[TheOldestProfession profession]].
* MeetTheInLaws: Buttermilk is not looking forwards to explaining everything going on to her parents.
* MoodWhiplash: The initially benign story takes a sharp turn for the miserable when they meet Ripple Rusher.
* NoodleIncident: An encounter with a cave troll has apparently occurred between this and FanFic/ABasketABlanketAndABundleOfBills. Although the encounter is unrevealed, its consequences [[BigDamnKiss are not]].
* ScreamingPlaneBaby: Much to the embarrassment of Copperquick and Buttermilk, Esmerelda is one while the train passes through a long tunnel.
* ShipperOnDeck: Mrs. Velvet is apparently keen on Copperquick/Buttermilk, if the box of condoms is any indication.
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