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* MistakenForPedophile: The characters mistake Hollow Ichigo's attraction to Nel for this. They're relieved when they learn about Nel's adult form.
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* PoisonousPerson: The author added this effect to Ichigo's PhysicalGod form to give him a weakness; basically anyone who touches Ichigo's bare skin while he's in this form gets severely burned, which makes sense given what me know about spiritual pressure if the individual in question were indescribably powerful.
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* PoisonousPerson: The author added this effect to Ichigo's PhysicalGod form to give him a weakness; basically anyone who touches Ichigo's bare skin while he's in this form gets severely burned, which makes sense given what me we know about spiritual pressure if the individual in question were indescribably powerful.
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* PhysicalGod: The full implications of Ichigo's ascension after fusing with Zangetsu are explored. Bleeding out, half-dead, he cuts through ''[BeyondTheImpossible Yamamoto's Bankai]]'' like so much tissue paper.
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* PhysicalGod: The full implications of Ichigo's ascension after fusing with Zangetsu are explored. Bleeding out, half-dead, he cuts through ''[BeyondTheImpossible ''[[BeyondTheImpossible Yamamoto's Bankai]]'' like so much tissue paper.
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* PoisonousPerson: The author added this effect to Ichigo's PhysicalGod form to give him a weakness; basically anyone who touches Ichigo while he's in this form gets severely burned. Other people are also unable to heal him.
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* PhysicalGod: The full implications of Ichigo's ascension after fusing with Zangetsu are explored. Bleeding out, half-dead, he cuts through ''[BeyondTheImpossible Yamamoto's Bankai]]'' like so much tissue paper.
** And you know how powerful soul reapers have a heavy spiritual pressure? Ichigo's is like the sky: It's there, it's beyond immense, but you can't actually feel it, [[ShownTheirWork just like Aizen described when he first saw this form]]. This actually works against Ichigo when he needs to be healed; since the healer can't sense his reiatsu, they can't do anything.
* PoisonousPerson: The author added this effect to Ichigo's PhysicalGod form to give him a weakness; basically anyone who touchesIchigo Ichigo's bare skin while he's in this form gets severely burned. Other people are also unable to heal him.burned, which makes sense given what me know about spiritual pressure if the individual in question were indescribably powerful.
** And you know how powerful soul reapers have a heavy spiritual pressure? Ichigo's is like the sky: It's there, it's beyond immense, but you can't actually feel it, [[ShownTheirWork just like Aizen described when he first saw this form]]. This actually works against Ichigo when he needs to be healed; since the healer can't sense his reiatsu, they can't do anything.
* PoisonousPerson: The author added this effect to Ichigo's PhysicalGod form to give him a weakness; basically anyone who touches
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: Subverted. Aizen effortlessly slaughters several Shinigami when he and Ichigo return to the past, [[spoiler: but they're all revealed to be just received a TapOnTheHead from Ichigo once Aizen's illusion drops.]] The author even defies this trope in the following chapter's notes: "If I kill [Yoruichi], [[DyingMomentOfAwesome it'll be way more epic than that]]. [[{{Badass}} She's awesome]]."
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: Subverted. Aizen effortlessly slaughters several Shinigami when he and Ichigo return to the past, [[spoiler: but they're all revealed to be have just received a TapOnTheHead from Ichigo once Aizen's illusion drops.]] The author even defies this trope in the following chapter's notes: "If I kill [Yoruichi], [[DyingMomentOfAwesome it'll be way more epic than that]]. [[{{Badass}} She's awesome]]."
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* MySisterIsOffLimits: When Ichigo discovers that Karin held an interest in Toshiro, he decides that he's going to kill Toshiro, as [[Really700YearsOld he's at least ten times her age.]] Toshiro, who along with the rest of the Gotei 13 is watching Ichigo via a surveillance device, is [[OhCrap less than enthusiastic]] about the idea.
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* BroughtDownToNormal: Due to events near the beginning of the fic, Orihime loses access to her [[TheMedic Shun]] [[BarrierWarrior Shun]] [[WindsOfDestinyChange Rikka]] abilities, and it's said that it will take at least several months before she returns to her full power. According to the author's notes, this was done partially to serve as a DramaPreservingHandicap: "I wanted to take away Tite Kubo's little get-out-of-death-free card."
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: Subverted. Aizen effortlessly slaughters several Shinigami when he and Ichigo return to the past, [[spoiler: but they're all revealed to be just received a TapOnTheHead from Ichigo once Aizen's illusion drops.]] The author even defies this trope in the following chapter's notes: "If I kill [Yoruichi], [[DyingMomentOfAwesome it'll be way more epic than that]]. [[{{Badass}} She's awesome]]."
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* [[spoiler: EstrogenBrigadeBait: Ichigo, apparently. The Shinigami Women's Association keeps derailing every attempt he makes to get a haircut.]]
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* ShoutOut: Ishida is able to [[TaughtByTelevision rile off several treatments for tuberculosis because of an episode of]] ''{{House}}'' he saw.
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* ShoutOut: Ishida is able to [[TaughtByTelevision rile off several treatments for tuberculosis because of an episode of]] ''{{House}}'' ''Series/{{House}}'' he saw.
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* [[spoiler: EstrogenBrigadeBait: Ichigo, apparently. The Shinigami Women's Association keeps derailing every attempt he makes to get a haircut.]]
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* MamaBear: [[spoiler:Neliel to Yuzu and Karin.]] Unfortunately, before she can act on it, she learns just how outclassed she is by [[spoiler:Ulquiorra]] and thus has to stand down.
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* TrustPassword: Yamamoto gives Ichigo one of these for when Rukia will be RetGone d in the future (i.e. the third film). [[spoiler: It also ends up being useful for identification against Aizen's illusions, though Ichigo almost gets killed then anyway since the password is a name and he has trouble remembering it]].
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* TrustPassword: Yamamoto gives Ichigo one of these for when Rukia will be RetGone d in the future (i.e. the third film). [[spoiler: It also ends up being useful for identification against Aizen's illusions, though Ichigo almost gets killed then anyway since the password is a name and he has trouble remembering it]].it.]]
* TheUnreveal: [[spoiler: When Shinji decides to finally use his Bankai, Aizen knocks him out cold before he can even say, "Bankai".]]
* TheUnreveal: [[spoiler: When Shinji decides to finally use his Bankai, Aizen knocks him out cold before he can even say, "Bankai".]]
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* HoYay: [[spoiler:Muramasa is a devoted zanpakuto.]]
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** Though to be fair, Ichigo's intervention also prevents those crimes from ever happening.
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* IShouldWriteABookAboutThis: Orihime points out that Ichigo's adventures would make a great manga. They could even have it printed in ShonenJump.
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* IShouldWriteABookAboutThis: Orihime points out that Ichigo's adventures would make a great manga. They could even have it printed in ShonenJump.''ShonenJump''.
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* IShouldWriteABookAboutThis: Orihime points out that Ichigo's adventures would make a great manga. They could even have it printed in ShonenJump.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Ichigo's hollow.
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Yeah, you'd think [[spoiler: Muramasa]] had raped your soul or something."
-->'''Ichigo''': What?
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': You didn't want it, did you?
-->'''Ichigo''': No, but- don't say it like that!
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Ah. Sorry. Penetrated, then. Penetrated deeply. Without permission. Into virgin territory. There was thrusting involved. Am I doing any better now?
-->'''Ichigo''': …you were less annoying when I could stab you.
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Right back atcha.
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Yeah, you'd think [[spoiler: Muramasa]] had raped your soul or something."
-->'''Ichigo''': What?
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': You didn't want it, did you?
-->'''Ichigo''': No, but- don't say it like that!
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Ah. Sorry. Penetrated, then. Penetrated deeply. Without permission. Into virgin territory. There was thrusting involved. Am I doing any better now?
-->'''Ichigo''': …you were less annoying when I could stab you.
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Right back atcha.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Ichigo's hollow.
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Yeah, you'd think [[spoiler: Muramasa]] had raped your soul or something."
-->'''Ichigo''': What?
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': You didn't want it, did you?
-->'''Ichigo''': No, but- don't say it like that!
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Ah. Sorry. Penetrated, then. Penetrated deeply. Without permission. Into virgin territory. There was thrusting involved. Am I doing any better now?
-->'''Ichigo''': …you were less annoying when I could stab you.
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Right back atcha.hollow. See DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything below.
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Yeah, you'd think [[spoiler: Muramasa]] had raped your soul or something."
-->'''Ichigo''': What?
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': You didn't want it, did you?
-->'''Ichigo''': No, but- don't say it like that!
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Ah. Sorry. Penetrated, then. Penetrated deeply. Without permission. Into virgin territory. There was thrusting involved. Am I doing any better now?
-->'''Ichigo''': …you were less annoying when I could stab you.
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Right back atcha.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Ichigo's hollow.
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Yeah, you'd think [[spoiler: Muramasa]] had raped your soul or something."
-->'''Ichigo''': What?
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': You didn't want it, did you?
-->'''Ichigo''': No, but- don't say it like that!
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Ah. Sorry. Penetrated, then. Penetrated deeply. Without permission. Into virgin territory. There was thrusting involved. Am I doing any better now?
-->'''Ichigo''': …you were less annoying when I could stab you.
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Right back atcha.
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Yeah, you'd think [[spoiler: Muramasa]] had raped your soul or something."
-->'''Ichigo''': What?
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': You didn't want it, did you?
-->'''Ichigo''': No, but- don't say it like that!
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Ah. Sorry. Penetrated, then. Penetrated deeply. Without permission. Into virgin territory. There was thrusting involved. Am I doing any better now?
-->'''Ichigo''': …you were less annoying when I could stab you.
-->'''Ichigo's Hollow''': Right back atcha.
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It's different from most other PeggySue stories in that both TheHero and the BigBad get sent back in time, leaving both sides are on a level playing field. Ichigo also wastes no time in explaining to everyone that time travel is going on, forgoing any masquerade or working behind the scenes.
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It's different from most other PeggySue stories in that both TheHero and the BigBad get sent back in time, leaving both sides are on a level playing field. Ichigo also wastes no time in explaining to everyone that time travel is going on, forgoing any masquerade or working behind the scenes.
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* OnlyMostlyDead: Unohara calls Ichigo this after the first fight with Aizen.
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* OnlyMostlyDead: Unohara Unohana calls Ichigo this after the first fight with Aizen.
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* TheDreaded: The RunningGag with everyone being terrified of Unohara continues as even Ichigo's [[SuperpoweredEvilSide hollow self]] is frightened of her. [[http://lizeth.deviantart.com/art/HeM-sketch-193460959#/d376jfj There's even a fanart of it]].
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* TheDreaded: The RunningGag with everyone being terrified of Unohara Unohana continues as even Ichigo's [[SuperpoweredEvilSide hollow self]] is frightened of her. [[http://lizeth.deviantart.com/art/HeM-sketch-193460959#/d376jfj There's even a fanart of it]].
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* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: Ichigo ends up in this position, despite also being a GodModeSue]].
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'''Hollow:''' Ah. [[BlatantLie Sorry.]] [[HurricaneOfEuphemisms Penetrated, then. Penetrated deeply. Without permission. Into virgin territory. There was thrusting involved.]] Am I doing any better now?
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'''Hollow:''' Ah. [[BlatantLie [[BlatantLies Sorry.]] [[HurricaneOfEuphemisms Penetrated, then. Penetrated deeply. Without permission. Into virgin territory. There was thrusting involved.]] Am I doing any better now?
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: When everyone sees Ichigo's memories of Tatsuki, which are mostly or her fighting, Kenpachi is impressed and declares that she will be welcome in Squad 11 when she dies and becomes a Shinigami.
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: When everyone sees Ichigo's memories of Tatsuki, which are mostly or of her fighting, Kenpachi is impressed and declares that she will be welcome in Squad 11 when she dies and becomes a Shinigami.
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: When everyone sees Ichigo's memories of Tatsuki, which are mostly or her fighting, Kenpachi is impressed and declares that she will be welcome in Squad 11 when she dies and becomes a Shinigami.
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* [[spoiler: TheWoundThatWouldNotHeal: The power of Shakushi, Kenpachi's sword. The effect can be deactivated.]]
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Nnoitra gets annoyed by Aizen's complex plans and EvilGloating and wishes he would just kill the good guys and get it over with.
-->'''Nnoitra''': "We should've just killed the human as soon as Aizen-sama knew he was alive. This setup is bullshit."
-->'''Nnoitra''': "We should've just killed the human as soon as Aizen-sama knew he was alive. This setup is bullshit."
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* CockFight: Hilarious, non-romantic example between [[spoiler:Tensa Zangetsu and Muramasa]].
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'''Hollow:''' Ah. Sorry. Penetrated, then. Penetrated deeply. Without permission. Into virgin territory. There was thrusting involved. Am I doing any better now?
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'''Hollow:''' Ah. Sorry. [[BlatantLie Sorry.]] [[HurricaneOfEuphemisms Penetrated, then. Penetrated deeply. Without permission. Into virgin territory. There was thrusting involved. ]] Am I doing any better now?
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The hollow has fun with [[spoiler:Muramasa's unwanted intrusion into Ichigo's soul.]]
-->'''Hollow:''' You'd think [[spoiler:Muramasa]] had raped your soul or something.\\
'''Ichigo:''' What?\\
'''Hollow:''' You didn't want it, did you?\\
'''Ichigo:''' No, but- don't say it like that!\\
'''Hollow:''' Ah. Sorry. Penetrated, then. Penetrated deeply. Without permission. Into virgin territory. There was thrusting involved. Am I doing any better now?
-->'''Hollow:''' You'd think [[spoiler:Muramasa]] had raped your soul or something.\\
'''Ichigo:''' What?\\
'''Hollow:''' You didn't want it, did you?\\
'''Ichigo:''' No, but- don't say it like that!\\
'''Hollow:''' Ah. Sorry. Penetrated, then. Penetrated deeply. Without permission. Into virgin territory. There was thrusting involved. Am I doing any better now?
