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-->[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/12612812 Misconceptions 5.5, titledrop.]]
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-->[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/12612812 Misconceptions 5.5, 5,]] [[TitleDrop titledrop.]]
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->''How much of what I was doing, was I doing in the memory of my father? To make his empty grave a monument, a marker for the moment when the future of this city changed?''
-->[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/12612812 Misconceptions 5.5, titledrop.]]
-->[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/12612812 Misconceptions 5.5, titledrop.]]
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* EnemyCivilWar: Skitter gets quite good at stirring up these. Mostly, as a consequence of being a solo vigilante with a power poorly suited to direct confrontation.
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* EnemyCivilWar: Skitter gets quite good at stirring up these.these up. Mostly, as a consequence of being a solo vigilante with a power poorly suited to direct confrontation.
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* ContinuityNod: "''I was similarly confident that he had pretty good focus – no one gets to be a crimelord accidentally.''" The joke being- in canon, Taylor essentially did just that.
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* ContinuityNod: All over the place.
** "''I was similarly confident that he had pretty good focus – no one gets to be a crimelord accidentally.''" The joke being- in canon, Taylor essentially did just that.
** "''I was similarly confident that he had pretty good focus – no one gets to be a crimelord accidentally.''" The joke being- in canon, Taylor essentially did just that.
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* {{Badass}}: Skitter. She is a complete badass, and takes pains that [[GuileHero nobody comes to realize this]].
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* {{Badass}}: Skitter. She is a complete badass, and takes pains that [[GuileHero nobody comes to realize this]]. Until it benefits her.
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* EnemyCivilWar: Skitter gets quite good at strring up these. Mostly, as a consequence of being a solo vigilante with a power poorly suited to direct confrontation.
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* EnemyCivilWar: Skitter gets quite good at strring stirring up these. Mostly, as a consequence of being a solo vigilante with a power poorly suited to direct confrontation.
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* PoirotSpeak: Krieg likes to use Herr and Frau when talking to other capes, but speaks otherwise perfect English. It's possible it's just an affectation.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: Tattletale had no idea Taylor [[spoiler: was behind the destruction of the ABB]] and later [[spoiler: Kaiser's assassination.]] Finding out about it causes a breif "[[WaitWhat Wait...waht?]]" moment from her.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: Tattletale had no idea Taylor [[spoiler: was behind the destruction of the ABB]] and later [[spoiler: Kaiser's assassination.]] Finding out about it causes prevokes a breif "[[WaitWhat Wait...waht?]]" what?]]" moment from her.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: Tattletale had no idea Taylor [[spoiler: was behind the destruction of the ABB]] and later [[spoiler: Kaiser's assassination.]] Finding out about it causes a breif WaitWhat moment from her.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: Tattletale had no idea Taylor [[spoiler: was behind the destruction of the ABB]] and later [[spoiler: Kaiser's assassination.]] Finding out about it causes a breif WaitWhat "[[WaitWhat Wait...waht?]]" moment from her.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: Tattletale has no idea Taylor [[spoiler: was behind the destruction of the ABB]] and later [[spoiler: Kaiser's assassination.]]
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* DidntSeeThatComing: Tattletale has had no idea Taylor [[spoiler: was behind the destruction of the ABB]] and later [[spoiler: Kaiser's assassination.]]]] Finding out about it causes a breif WaitWhat moment from her.
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* FandomNod: Quinn Calle mentions that people [[AWizardDidIt blame the Simurgh for many of society's problems]]. A refference to the popular meme- "[[MemeticMutation The Simurgh did it]]".
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* FandomNod: Quinn Calle mentions that people [[AWizardDidIt [[MemeticMutation blame the Simurgh for many of society's problems]]. A refference to the popular meme- "[[MemeticMutation "[[AWizardDidIt The Simurgh did it]]".
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* FandomNod: Quinn Calle mentions that people [[AWizardDidIt blame the Simurgh for many of society's problems]].
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* FandomNod: Quinn Calle mentions that people [[AWizardDidIt blame the Simurgh for many of society's problems]]. A refference to the popular meme- "[[MemeticMutation The Simurgh did it]]".
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/ Cenotaph]]is widely considered one of the best [[Literature/{{Worm}} Worm]] fanfics ever written, a ''very'' OriginalFlavor [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] that emulates the origional style so seamlessly that some consider it equal and opposite the origional. The Hero to Wildbow's Villain. One that flows organically and naturally from a very minor divergence into a stand-alone plot that only resembles the origional timeline in the very loosest sense.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/ Cenotaph]]is widely considered one of the best [[Literature/{{Worm}} Worm]] fanfics ever written, a ''very'' OriginalFlavor [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] that emulates the origional style so seamlessly that some consider it equal and opposite the origional. The Hero to Wildbow's Villain. One Villain- one that flows organically and naturally from a very minor divergence into a stand-alone plot that only resembles the origional timeline in the very loosest sense.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/ Cenotaph]]is widely considered one of the best [[Literature/{{Worm}} Worm]] fanfics ever written, and emulates the origional style so seamlessly that some consider it equal and opposite the origional. The Hero to Wildbow's Villain. Cenotaph is a ''very'' OriginalFlavor [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] that flows organically and naturally from a very minor divergence into a stand-alone plot that only resembles the origional timeline in the very loosest sense.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/ Cenotaph]]is widely considered one of the best [[Literature/{{Worm}} Worm]] fanfics ever written, and a ''very'' OriginalFlavor [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] that emulates the origional style so seamlessly that some consider it equal and opposite the origional. The Hero to Wildbow's Villain. Cenotaph is a ''very'' OriginalFlavor [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] One that flows organically and naturally from a very minor divergence into a stand-alone plot that only resembles the origional timeline in the very loosest sense.
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* {{Badass}}: Skitter. She is a complete badass, and takes pains that nobody comes to realize this.
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* {{Badass}}: Skitter. She is a complete badass, and takes pains that [[GuileHero nobody comes to realize this.this]].
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* GuileHero: Skitter, 'natch.
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In this timeline, Taylor did not give Armsmaster a definitive answer following their pivotal meeting. Instead, he offers her a chance to test the waters, and see if she would be comfortable dealing with Protectorate oversight. Unfortunately, this quickly leads to tragedy. Taylor wakes up a month later, a [[spoiler: newly minted orphan]]. What follows is both an epic RoaringRampageOfRevenge, and a heartwarming exploration of Taylor's character, and the character of the Brockton Bay Wards, the Undersiders, and Taylor's other allies and enemies.
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In this timeline, Taylor did not give Armsmaster a definitive answer following their pivotal meeting. Instead, he offers her a chance to test the waters, and see if she would be comfortable dealing with Protectorate oversight. Unfortunately, this quickly leads to tragedy. Taylor wakes up a month later, a [[spoiler: newly minted orphan]]. What follows is both an epic RoaringRampageOfRevenge, and a heartwarming exploration of Taylor's character, and alongside the character of the Brockton Bay Wards, the Undersiders, and Taylor's other allies and enemies.
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In this timeline, Taylor did not give Armsmaster a definitive answer following their pivotal meeting. Instead, he offers her a chance to test the waters, and see if she would be comfortable dealing with Protectorate oversight. Unfortunately, this quickly leads to tragedy. Taylor wakes up a month later, a [[spoiler: newly minted orphan]]. What follows is both an epic RoaringRampageOfRevenge, and a heartwarming exploration of Taylor's character, and the character of the Brockton Bay Wards.
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In this timeline, Taylor did not give Armsmaster a definitive answer following their pivotal meeting. Instead, he offers her a chance to test the waters, and see if she would be comfortable dealing with Protectorate oversight. Unfortunately, this quickly leads to tragedy. Taylor wakes up a month later, a [[spoiler: newly minted orphan]]. What follows is both an epic RoaringRampageOfRevenge, and a heartwarming exploration of Taylor's character, and the character of the Brockton Bay Wards.
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In this timeline, Taylor did not give Armsmaster a definitive answer following their pivotal meeting. Instead, he offers her a chance to test the waters, and see if she would be comfortable dealing with Protectorate oversight. Unfortunately, this quickly leads to tragedy. Taylor wakes up a month later, a [[spoiler: newly minted orphen]]. What follows is both an epic RoaringRampageOfRevenge, and a heartwarming exploration of Taylor's character, and the character of the Brockton Bay Wards.
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In this timeline, Taylor did not give Armsmaster a definitive answer following their pivotal meeting. Instead, he offers her a chance to test the waters, and see if she would be comfortable dealing with Protectorate oversight. Unfortunately, this quickly leads to tragedy. Taylor wakes up a month later, a [[spoiler: newly minted orphen]].orphan]]. What follows is both an epic RoaringRampageOfRevenge, and a heartwarming exploration of Taylor's character, and the character of the Brockton Bay Wards.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/ Cenotaph]]is considered one of the best [[Literature/{{Worm}} Worm]] fanfics ever written, and emulates the origional style so seamlessly that some consider it equal and opposite the origional. The Hero to Wildbow's Villain. Cenotaph is a ''very'' OriginalFlavor [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] that flows organically and naturally from a very minor divergence into a stand-alone plot that only resembles the origional timeline in the very loosest sense.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/ Cenotaph]]is widely considered one of the best [[Literature/{{Worm}} Worm]] fanfics ever written, and emulates the origional style so seamlessly that some consider it equal and opposite the origional. The Hero to Wildbow's Villain. Cenotaph is a ''very'' OriginalFlavor [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] that flows organically and naturally from a very minor divergence into a stand-alone plot that only resembles the origional timeline in the very loosest sense.
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** In Cenotaph, Taylor was given a low Tinker rateing- refferenceing Brian's comments in canon that her ability to create bug-themed equipment, or use her insects to create usful products, was a Tinker trait.
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* {{OrigionalFlavor}}: Deliciously so.
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* {{OrigionalFlavor}}: OriginalFlavor: Deliciously so.
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** Lung as well. He knowingly walks into an ambush he knows was arranged by [[spoiler: Skitter]] because he is confident he can survive.
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* ContinuityNod: "''I was similarly confident that he had pretty good focus – no one gets to be a crimelord accidentally.''" The joke being- in canon, Taylor essentially did just that.
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* FandomNod: "''I was similarly confident that he had pretty good focus – no one gets to be a crimelord accidentally.''" The joke being- in canon, Taylor essentially did just that.
** Quinn Calle mentions that people [[AWizardDidIt blame the Simurgh for many of society's problems]].
** Quinn Calle mentions that people [[AWizardDidIt blame the Simurgh for many of society's problems]].
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* FandomNod: "''I was similarly confident that he had pretty good focus – no one gets to be a crimelord accidentally.''" The joke being- in canon, Taylor essentially did just that.
**Quinn Calle mentions that people [[AWizardDidIt blame the Simurgh for many of society's problems]].
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Both played straight and inverted. On one hand [[spoiler: Taylor's father is murdered by Bakuda]] on the other, Taylor dosen't spend the first month of her cape carreer fighting for her life against ''both'' sides of the law.
* DidntSeeThatComing: Tattletale has no idea Taylor [[spoiler: was behind the destruction of the ABB]] and later [[spoiler: Kaiser's assassination.]]
* DidntSeeThatComing: Tattletale has no idea Taylor [[spoiler: was behind the destruction of the ABB]] and later [[spoiler: Kaiser's assassination.]]
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Both played straight and inverted. On one hand [[spoiler: Taylor's father is murdered by Bakuda]] on the other, Taylor dosen't spend the first month of her cape carreer fighting for her life against ''both'' sides of the law.
* DidntSeeThatComing: Tattletale has no idea Taylor [[spoiler: was behind the destruction of the ABB]] and later [[spoiler: Kaiser's assassination.]]
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Both played straight and inverted. On FandomNod: "''I was similarly confident that he had pretty good focus – no one hand [[spoiler: Taylor's father is murdered by Bakuda]] on the other, gets to be a crimelord accidentally.''" The joke being- in canon, Taylor dosen't spend essentially did just that.
** Quinn Calle mentions that people [[AWizardDidIt blame thefirst month of her cape carreer fighting Simurgh for her life against ''both'' sides many of the law.
* DidntSeeThatComing: Tattletale has no idea Taylor [[spoiler: was behind the destruction of the ABB]] and later [[spoiler: Kaiser's assassination.]]society's problems]].
** Quinn Calle mentions that people [[AWizardDidIt blame the
* DidntSeeThatComing: Tattletale has no idea Taylor [[spoiler: was behind the destruction of the ABB]] and later [[spoiler: Kaiser's assassination.]]
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* ShoutOut: "''I was similarly confident that he had pretty good focus – no one gets to be a crimelord accidentally.''" The joke being- in canon, Taylor essentially did just that.
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The plot makes full use of [[FlatCharacter characters]] [[OCStandIn not fully utilized in-canon]] to build a very different perspective of the gangs and happenings of Brockton Bay.
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The plot makes full use of [[FlatCharacter characters]] [[OCStandIn not fully utilized realized in-canon]] to build a very different perspective of the gangs and happenings of Brockton Bay.
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* TheChessmaster: Skitter. Due to haveing a power best suited to reconninsence and spying, she plays to her strengths and gets her enemies to fight each other. Coil also counts, to a lesser degree.
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* TheChessmaster: Skitter. Due to haveing a power best suited to reconninsence reconnaissance and spying, she plays to her strengths and gets her enemies to fight each other. Coil also counts, to a lesser degree.
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* ShoutOut: "''I was similarly confident that he had pretty good focus – no one gets to be a crimelord accidentally.''" The joke being- in canon, Taylor essentially did just that.
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* ShoutOut: "''I was similarly confident that he had pretty good focus – no one gets to be a crimelord accidentally.''" The joke being- in canon, Taylor essentially did just that.that.
* TheChessmaster: Skitter. Due to haveing a power best suited to reconninsence and spying, she plays to her strengths and gets her enemies to fight each other. Coil also counts, to a lesser degree.
* TheChessmaster: Skitter. Due to haveing a power best suited to reconninsence and spying, she plays to her strengths and gets her enemies to fight each other. Coil also counts, to a lesser degree.
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* EnemyCivilWar: Skitter gets quite good at this. Mostly, as a consequence of being a solo vigilante with a power poorly suited to direct confrontation.
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* EnemyCivilWar: Skitter gets quite good at this.strring up these. Mostly, as a consequence of being a solo vigilante with a power poorly suited to direct confrontation.