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* TheEvilPrince: Possibly, as it's not clear whether or not his status as Emma's adopted son (and therefore heir) is legal or if she calls him a prince as a pet name.
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* TheEvilPrince: Possibly, as it's not clear whether or not his status as Emma's adopted son (and therefore heir) is legal or if she calls him a prince only as a pet name.
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* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Emma Frost, at least to those outside her favor. Averted slightly in that the people living in the nearest cities respect her, and besides some mention of anti-human prejudice there's little indication that any citizens who aren't working for the Free West hate her or want to end her reign.
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* FounderOfTheKingdom
* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen:Emma Frost, at least to To those outside her favor.favor or don't want to work for her. Averted slightly in that the people living in the nearest cities respect her, and besides some mention of anti-human prejudice there's little indication that any citizens who aren't working for the Free West hate her or want to end her reign.
* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen:
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* HotConsort: [[spoiler: Frost wants him to be one for her.]]
* KnightInShiningArmor: Jean sees him as one, such that he sometimes appears in medieval armor when traveling in people's mind-spaces.
* KnightInShiningArmor: Jean sees him as one, such that he sometimes appears in medieval armor when traveling in people's mind-spaces.
* TheEvilPrince: Possibly, as it's not clear whether or not his status as Emma's adopted son (and therefore heir) is legal or if she calls him a prince as a pet name.
* TheHighQueen: What she strives to be.
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* WinterRoyalLady: Styles herself as one, even molding her mental world, psychic presence and mind-birds to seem ice-like and cold.
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* [[spoiler: EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses]]: [[spoiler: May qualify, depending on whether or not Erik's status as a prince is legal or just Frost's pet name for him.]]
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* CoolCrown: In the mind-world, Frost has one that's literally painful to look at.
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* ErmineCapeEffect: '''Always''' wearing nice clothes.
* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Emma Frost, at least to those outside her favor. Averted slightly in that the people living in the nearest cities respect her, and besides some mention of anti-human prejudice there's little indication that any citizens who aren't working for the Free West hate her or want to end her reign.
* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Emma Frost, at least to those outside her favor. Averted slightly in that the people living in the nearest cities respect her, and besides some mention of anti-human prejudice there's little indication that any citizens who aren't working for the Free West hate her or want to end her reign.
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* ParentalSubstitute: To several of the children, most notably Jean.
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* ParentalSubstitute: To several of the children, most notably Jean.Jean, as well as Raven prior to the story's start.
* PoweredByAForsakenChild: Willingly becomes one for the Finder in order to lessen the burden placed on Jean.
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Charles's sister that he rescued and then protected from being captured by the EBS.
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Charles's sister that he rescued and then protected from being captured by the EBS.
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* PoweredByAForsakenChild: Jean was this for the Finder, until [[TakeMeInstead Charles volunteered to replace her]].
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* PoweredByAForsakenChild: Jean was this for the Finder, until [[TakeMeInstead Charles volunteered to replace her]].
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* BrokenBird: Although he'd had his share of hardships before being kidnapped, Charles is well on his way to becoming a bitter, manipulative version of this.
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* PetTheDog: Beyond caring for the children, the fact that he goes out of his way to [[spoiler: help Moria escape]] even though she can't help him- twice- shows that he's not as self-serving as he'd like to believe.
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* MyMasterRightOrWrong: He's loyal to Emma's family, and criticizes many of her decisions but still obeys her without question. Not that he's very moral himself.
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* JerkassWoobie: Petty and vindictive and also trying to save mutants from country that wants to kill or experiment on them
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* TheWoobie: Hard-working, caring, troubled young man who was ranked the lowest in his group and [[spoiler: raped by his boss]]. It's hard not to feel sorry for him.
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* PowerNullifier: To Kurt to prevent him from teleporting away
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* PowerDampener: To psychic attacks
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* PowerNullifier: To Kurt to prevent him from teleporting away
* PowerDampener: Toaway. He can also lessen the power of psychic attacksattacks.
* PowerDampener: To
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* StayInTheKitchen: Not so subtly expressed to Frost by the Free West, by having Stryker's wife give her a cook book. (Although it's possible that might be because of InnocentBigotry on the wife's part.)
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* StayInTheKitchen: Not so subtly expressed to Frost by the Free West, by having Stryker's wife give her a cook book. (Although it's possible that might be because of InnocentBigotry [[InnocentBigot Innocent Bigotry]] on the wife's part.)
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* NonActionGuy: Although that's because he's surrounded by people who have been trained to fight.
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* NonActionGuy: Although that's because he's surrounded by people who have been trained to fight.fight, and given non-violent care taking or telepathic jobs. Apparently he was a sharpshooter when England was still at war, but we never see these skills get used.
* ParentalSubstitute: To several of the children, most notably Jean.
* ParentalSubstitute: To several of the children, most notably Jean.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Charles from how he views others to how he justifies his actions. Sometimes he acknowledges this when reflecting on his behavior and assumptions in the past.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Charles from how he views others to how he justifies his actions. Sometimes he acknowledges this when [[IHatePastMe reflecting on his behavior and assumptions in the past.past]].
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* AccidentalNightmareFuel: Some of the things he thinks are romantic creep Charles out (and [[EvenEvilHasStandards Azazel]] on one occasion).
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* MoralityPet: Becomes this to Erik.
* DeclarationOfProtection: Gives one to Charles
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* DefrostingTheIceQueen: How she presents herself to Charles in Part 3. Whether she's lying or deliberately allowing herself to do this is unknown.
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* DefrostingTheIceQueen: How she presents herself to Charles in Part 3. Whether she's lying or deliberately allowing herself to do this due to her desire for companionship is unknown.
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* IfICantHaveYou: Subverted, as one of the reasons [[spoiler: Charles never suspects she wants him is because she intended for him to be raped by Erik.]]
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* BadassNormal: Manages to escape the inescapable ESB headquarters and Azazel with a little help from Charles.
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* CorrptTheCutie: What Frost does with the children by having Jean feel glad when their enemies are killed, and having Scott [[spoiler:be present during an assault of the manor where he kills two men]]
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* CorrptTheCutie: CorruptTheCutie: What Frost does with the children by having Jean feel glad when their enemies are killed, and having Scott [[spoiler:be present during an assault of the manor where he kills two men]]
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* ProperlyParanoid: He's one of the few characters who understands just how much Charles lies to everyone, and figures out right away that there are dangers in the Manor that he'll have to figure out in order to survive.
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* DyingDream: Dreams he's in the middle of WWII again, and mistakes Charles for ArchangelMichael after being informed of his upcoming death.
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* AFatherToHisMen: Judging from his relationship with Moria and his talk with Charles when he's dying.
* FaceDeathWithDignity: Inside his DyingDream he accepts death calmly and has a pleasant conversation with Charles.
* FaceDeathWithDignity: Inside his DyingDream he accepts death calmly and has a pleasant conversation with Charles.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Tries to do a toned-down version by pretending to be weaker than he really is in order to avoid drawing attention to himself. After he realizes that [[spoiler: Frost knew how strong he was all along and pretended to underestimate him in order to mock him]], he pretends to be an example of DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Tries to do a toned-down version by pretending to be weaker than he really is in order to avoid drawing attention to himself. After he realizes that [[spoiler: Frost knew how strong he was all along and pretended to underestimate belittled him in order to mock him]], him]] he pretends to be an example of DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength.DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength, [[spoiler: going into Frosts mind from much greater distances than she believes him capable of and tricks her into thinking that he wandered in by accident while asleep]].
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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler: After being attacked, underestimated, drained, and [[AttemptedRape almost]] [[NearRapeExperience raped]] on different occasions.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler: After being attacked, (thinks he's) underestimated, drained, and [[AttemptedRape almost]] [[NearRapeExperience raped]] on different occasions.]]
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Tries to do a toned-down version by pretending to be weaker than he really is in order to avoid drawing attention to himself. After he realizes that [[spoiler: Frost knew how strong he was all along and pretended to underestimate him in order to mock him]], he pretends to be an example of DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Charles. From erasing memories to slightly adjusting how he is perceived. Everyone can be deceived indeed.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Charles. From erasing memories to slightly adjusting how he is perceived.perceived (though he feels bad every time he does this to a friend and tries to avoid these tactics unless absolutely necessary). Probably the best liar in the story, carefully cultivating different images of himself in different people. Everyone can be deceived indeed.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Charles from how he views others to how he justifies his actions
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* AffectionateInsult: The English translation of Azazel's pet name for his son is "backbiter",
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* CorruptionOfInnocence: What Frost does with the children by having Jean feel glad when their enemies are killed, and having Scott [[spoiler:be present during an assault of the manor where he kills two men]]
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* CorruptionOfInnocence: CorrptTheCutie: What Frost does with the children by having Jean feel glad when their enemies are killed, and having Scott [[spoiler:be present during an assault of the manor where he kills two men]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: Logan to Charles on asking which side he's choosing: EBS or the Free West
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* WhatTheHellHero: Logan to Charles on asking which side he's choosing: EBS or the Free West
West. Does it again when he thinks Charles ditched the others during a Free West raid, but backs off when it's made clear that the latter honestly didn't know what was going on and came as soon as he could.
* NotSoDifferent: Both he and Charles explore places they aren't supposed to go to try to unravel the ESB's secrets. The two of them later collaborate on this front.
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* AloneWithPrisonerPloy: When Charles talks to Moria alone does he retry his attempt to escape and intentionally reveal Raven's existence.
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* AloneWithPrisonerPloy: When Charles talks to Moria alone does he retry his attempt to escape and intentionally reveal reveals Raven's existence.existence to convince her that he also wants to escape.
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* SweetPollyOliver: Moria's disguise works on Charles for a few moments
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* SweetPollyOliver: Moria's disguise works on Charles for a few moments
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* ValuesDissonance: Although she disagrees with the Free West's white-male-straight prejudices, she doesn't trust Charles despite him saving her life a few times.
* ValuesDissonance: Although she disagrees with the Free West's white-male-straight prejudices, she doesn't trust Charles despite him saving her life a few times.
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* AnimalMotifs: Telepaths express their powers using psychic projections of birds, and Charles favorite becomes a Raven after he's taken from his sister, to the point where most people who know him know that particular thought-bird.
* BecomingTheMask: StockholmSyndrome aside, there's hints that Charles is developing mild PTSD (which he'd been faking after [[spoiler: his and Erik's "honeymoon"]]) and genuinely cares about the children and his friends at the ESB, despite claiming repeatedly that he doesn't know how to love.
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* Hidden Depths: In-story, with Charles's hidden stores of power in his mind and carefully maintained control over the others
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* Hidden Depths: HiddenDepths: In-story, with Charles's hidden stores of power in his mind and carefully maintained control over the others
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* SexSlave: Frost's intention for Charles with [[spoiler: Erik for the "honeymoon".]]
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* SexSlave: Frost's intention for Charles with [[spoiler: Erik for the "honeymoon".]]]] Afterwards, she threatens him with this should he betray her or try to run away.
* PresentAbsence: Despite how often Charles thinks of her, [[spoiler: by the end of Part 3, Raven has yet to re-appear in the story since the beginning.]]
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* PresentAbsence: Despite how often Charles thinks of her, [[spoiler: by the end of Part 3, Raven has yet to re-appear in the story since the beginning.]]
* ConnectedAllAlong: [[spoiler: Jean is Erik's daughter]].
* InTheBlood: This version of her [[spoiler: inherited her powers from her father The Rainmaker, a mutant hero famous in-universe for ending droughts in Africa]].
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* WeatherManipulation: goes with her powers
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* WeatherManipulation: goes Goes with her powers
* FelonyMisdemeanor: The first time they meet, Erik strangles and tortures Charles for going into the forbidden West Wing, and later threatens to take his eyes out for returning.
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* InterplayOfSexAndViolence: [[spoiler: Pre-bargain]] Erik would have loved to torture and rape Charles to death before the bargain was agreed. [[spoiler: Post-bargain]] Erik is fond of biting Charles's shoulder [[spoiler: and seemed to enjoy to actions leading up to the almost-rape]].
* InstantSedation: Erik post-sex.
* InstantSedation: Erik post-sex.
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* InterplayOfSexAndViolence: [[spoiler: Pre-bargain]] Erik would have loved to torture and rape Charles to death before the bargain was agreed. [[spoiler: Post-bargain]] Erik is fond of biting Charles's shoulder [[spoiler: and seemed to enjoy to actions leading up to the almost-rape]].
almost-rape]]. He also has violent fantasies about Charles.
* InstantSedation: Erik post-sex. Once he builds up more stamina he loses this, so [[spoiler: Charles begins drugging him after sex to get into his mind]].
* InstantSedation: Erik post-sex. Once he builds up more stamina he loses this, so [[spoiler: Charles begins drugging him after sex to get into his mind]].
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* PetTheDog: Erik has shown to have a fondness for the children--noticeably Jean ([[spoiler: his daughter]]), John (whom he let take his lighter), and Ororo (whom he protected in the fall battles)
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* PetTheDog: Erik has shown to have a fondness for the children--noticeably Jean ([[spoiler: his daughter]]), John (whom he let take his lighter), and Ororo (whom he protected in the fall battles)battles).
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* DefrostingTheIceQueen: How she presents herself to Charles in Part 33. Whether she's lying or deliberately allowing herself to do this is unknown.
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-->'''Logan:''' We don't waste things here.\\
-->'''Logan:''' We don't waste things here.
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A fighter in the Free West, Logan is compassionate and tries to protect the children and Charles from the war and Erik's wrath.
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!! Hank McCoy[=McCoy=]
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*BiTheWayBiTheWay: Has had lovers both male or female.
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* HeroicSeductressHeroicSeductress: [[spoiler: Seduces Erik in order to protect the children]]
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* IceQueenIceQueen: She's unfriendly and cold towards Charles and the children.
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* BadassBookwormBadassBookworm: For being more of the researcher in the manor, Hank has moments of badassery [[spoiler: helping Alex and driving the truck to Albany]]
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TheWoobie: Hard-working, caring, troubled young man who was ranked the lowest in his group and [[spoiler: raped by his boss]]. It's hard not to feel sorry for him.
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* [[spoiler: TheResistence]]: Appearing as sex worker is a front because she is actually [[spoiler: the leader of TheResistance within the Free West]]
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* [[spoiler: TheResistence]]: TheResistance]]: Appearing as sex worker is a front because she is actually [[spoiler: the leader of TheResistance within the Free West]]
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* QuicklyDemotedWomen: Justified in-story by the Free West: after it's revealed she's a woman, she is striped, and then found again working in a brothel..
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Moria still looks up to MacMurphy even though he bombed cities and killed innocent people.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Moria still looks up to MacMurphy [=MacMurphy=] even though he bombed cities and killed innocent people.
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!! William Stryker
Leader of the Free West, Stryker is relentless in opposing Frost and treating mutants as if they weren't human.
*TheGhost: Although being the president of the Free West, Stryker has yet to appear.
*EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Styker's family
!! Moria McTaggart
A captain in the Free West, Moria first meets Charles while she is held captive at the manor. They eventually become something like allies.
*AloneWithPrisonerPloy: When Charles talks to Moria alone does he retry his attempt to escape and intentionally reveal Raven's existence.
*ImmuneToMindControl: Due to training and being an intelligence officer
*QuicklyDemotedWomen: Justified in-story by the Free West: after it's revealed she's a woman, she is striped, and then found again working in a brothel..
*[[spoiler: TheResistence]]: Appearing as sex worker is a front because she is actually [[spoiler: the leader of TheResistance within the Free West]]
*SweetPollyOliver: Moria's disguise works on Charles for a few moments
!! General MacMurphy
A general in the Free West. He was a major enemy in the November campaign, but [[spoiler: is then captured, tortured, and killed.]]
*EvenEvilHasStandards: On his way to being tortured, also notices that Erik has washed emphasizing how abnormal that action was
*EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Moria still looks up to MacMurphy even though he bombed cities and killed innocent people.
*FauxDeath: When Charles first finds him on the table, he is mistaken for being already dead
*LuredIntoATrap: When he tried to capture Jean, he, himself, is captured
!! Rick Slade
A member of Moria's party. He also meets Charles while being held captive at the manor. [[spoiler: After escaping, and Moria's demotion, he quickly rises in rank in the Free West.]]
*TheStarscream: He always wanted to overthrow Moria's position; gets the opportunity once she's revealed to be a woman
*UnreliableNarrator: In-story, Slade apparently gave his version of the events when he was captured and it likely downplays Moria's involvement in there escape
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!! Erik Lehnsherr
The Terror of the Free West, Erik the Red, Emma Frost's right hand, or "Just Erik" is a leader in the EBS, guardian (and punisher) to the children, and also [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking cleaner for the manor]]. He first lusts for Charles on meeting him, then hurts and threatens him, before Charles strikes a bargain.
*BrainwashingForTheGreaterGood: [[spoiler: Frost changed Erik [[DemotedToDragon so that she could control him]]. Otherwise he would have acted as Shaw instructed him.]]
*BerserkButton: If you enter his library without permission, and [[spoiler: Shaw's cologne]].
*TheDragon: Erik to the Free West (and Charles)
*IKissYourfoot: Erik does this quite a few times, much to Charles's annoyance.
*InterplayOfSexAndViolence: [[spoiler: Pre-bargain]] Erik would have loved to torture and rape Charles to death before the bargain was agreed. [[spoiler: Post-bargain]] Erik is fond of biting Charles's shoulder [[spoiler: and seemed to enjoy to actions leading up to the almost-rape]].
*InstantSedation: Erik post-sex.
*ImmuneToMindControl: For the most part, Erik is able to repel Charles's mental attacks; however, [[spoiler: this is given Frost's brainwashing]]
*MagnetismManipulation
*NoNameGiven: Erik at the beginning, but the audience [[SlashFic should be able to guess it]] even if Charles is unwilling.
*PetTheDog: Erik has shown to have a fondness for the children--noticeably Jean ([[spoiler: his daughter]]), John (whom he let take his lighter), and Ororo (whom he protected in the fall battles)
*RoofHopping: Erik does this from time to time: in Part 1, [[spoiler: chasing down Alex]] and, in Part 3, playing around with Azazel
*SugarAndIcePersonality: Erik: lucid and talkative or violent and feral.
*TragicMonster
*TestosteronePoisoning: Erik's character in the Free West produced film.
*VillainousBreakdown: Erik, quite a bit actually: [[spoiler: when Charles puts him in the bath, when Charles went into his mind again without permission, when he realized he was frightening Charles post-Albany]]
!! Emma Frost
Leader of the Free West, Lady Frost works hard to train effective [[ChildSoldier soldiers]], manipulate world leaders, and defeat the Free West, a corrupt nation. However, her actions are [[WellIntentionedExtremist often cruel or unethical in order to get what she wants]]. She was the one who discovers Charles and kidnaps him.
*TheBaroness: Don't get on Frost's bad side.
*CorruptionOfInnocence: What Frost does with the children by having Jean feel glad when their enemies are killed, and having Scott [[spoiler:be present during an assault of the manor where he kills two men]]]]
*DefrostingTheIceQueen: How she presents herself to Charles in Part 3
*IceQueen
*JerkassWoobie: Petty and vindictive and also trying to save mutants from country that wants to kill or experiment on them
*MeanBoss: Frost in spades. If your charges temporarily escape, you'll be tortured in [[ForcedToWatch front of them]].
*PoweredByAForsakenChild: Jean was this for the Finder, until [[TakeMeInstead Charles volunteered to replace her]].
*StayInTheKitchen: Not so subtly expressed to Frost by the Free West, by having Stryker's wife give her a cook book. (Although it's possible that might be because of InnocentBigotry on the wife's part.)
*WellIntentionedExtremist: Torturing and generally giving children [[DystopiaJustifiesTheMeans an unpleasant childhood]] will make better [[ChildSoldier soldiers]]. It worked for her!
!! Logan
A fighter in the Free West, Logan is compassionate and tries to protect the children and Charles from the war and Erik's wrath.
*JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Despite hiding things from Charles he really does care about him and the children
*LongDistanceRelationship: with Rogue
*RedOniBlueOni: with Blue Hank
*TeamDad: Keeping an eye for the children and trying to protect Alex from punishment
*WhatTheHellHero: Logan to Charles on asking which side he's choosing: EBS or the Free West
!! Hank McCoy
A researcher in the Free West, Charles is first put under his charge. He has issues from time to time with his powers, but ultimately wants to help protect the children.
*BadassBookworm
*RedOniBlueOni: with Red Logan
*Sleeping with the Boss: [[spoiler: Not that he gave his expressed consent]]
*TheWoobie
!! Angel Salvadore
One of the supervisors for the children before the November campaign. She is kind, but can get angry if needed.
*FriendVersusLover: After the November campaign, Erik views her as a rival for Charles's care
*InterruptedIntimacy: Subverted when she almost walks in on Charles and Erik in bed
*LaserGuidedAmnesia: As punishment for Charles's escaping, one of her memories is removed by Frost without her being consciously aware of it
*MamaBear: Generally cares for the children and Charles
!! Alex Summers
One of the supervisors for the children before the November campaign. He is noticeably more irritable, but cares deeply for his younger brother Scott.
*[[Jerkass Jerkass]]
*DisproportionateRetribution: For having one of his charges run away and then attempting to run away to avoid punishment, he is attacked and has his ankles broken. He was then locked up to be tortured more.
*ScheduleFanatic: He gets angry with Sean for missing his appointment. Justified given [[DisproportionateRetribution what will happen to Alex]] if Sean runs away.
!! Azazel
Friend of [[TheBaroness Emma Frost]], he lives to serve her.
*BigRedDevil: Lampshaded where Erik and Azazel tried to sneak into see a soccer game "dressed" up as a priest and a devil
*EvilAllAlong: Azazel can at times appear friendly and helpful; but [[spoiler: he works for Frost, he may have raped others before, and he agreed to kill a sex worker shortly after just meeting her]].
*ParentsAsPeople: He tries to protect Kurt and give him gifts, but other times Charles's notices how he doesn't visit Kurt while in the Manor
*TeleportersAndTransporters: Goes with his powers
!! Armando Muñoz
A new recruit to the EBS as a supervisor for the children after he was rescued from the Free West.
*DefrostingTheIceQueen: Armando over time opens up and becomes more friendly to Charles
*LiteralistSnarker: Armando on his introduction scene
-->'''Logan:''' We don't waste things here.\\
-->'''Armando:''' Except my time, Wolverine. Except my time...
*HaveIMentionedIAmGay: Justified; His sexuality and preference is revealed when talking to Charles, and we never witness any actions; however, he's largely recovering from experiments and torture from the Free West and doesn't "go for white boys."
*PowerNullifier: To Kurt to prevent him from teleporting away
*PowerDampener: To psychic attacks
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* SexForServices: Charles offers this to Erik so that the children will be protected in the battle.
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* ScrewThisImOttaHere: Charles attempts this on multiple occasions
* SexSlave: Frost's intention for Charles with Erik for the "honeymoon".
* ScrewThisImOttaHere: Charles attempts this on multiple occasions
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* SexForServices: Charles offers this to [[spoiler: Erik so that the children will be protected in the battle.
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* SexSlave: Frost's intention for Charles with [[spoiler: Erik for the"honeymoon".
"honeymoon".]]
*ScrewThisImOttaHere: ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Charles attempts this on multiple occasions
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!! Jean Grey
One of the children in the manor. Jean is around 5 years old and only communicates through her telepathy.
*ConditionedToAcceptHorror: Jean agrees to be hooked up to the Finder and witnesses, unflinchingly, the destruction of war.
*InnocentProdigy
*MoralityPet: Jean to Erik.
*NotInFrontOfTheKid: None of Erik's attacks to Charles occur while Jean is conscious or in the same room
*PsychicPowers: She [[MindProbe speaks to others with her mind]], [[JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind enters people's minds]] and can move physical objects.
!! Ororo Munroe
The most mature of the children, Ororo decides on the social rules, and [[spoiler: looks for ways to escape the manor]]. She is around 16 years old.
*AdaptationDyeJob: Unlike in the comic books, shows and movies, Ororo is described as having dark hair shot with white.
*FireForgedFriends: Ororo with Erik after Charles tells Erik to go back to protect her
*MamaBear: Looks after Jean more than the other children
*PublicSecretMessage: When she left Charles a book and put attention on it helping her grew a [[{{Pun}} spine]].
*StepfordSmiler: Ororo is a caring and capable individual, but [[spoiler: understandably has difficulty coming to terms with how she was taken away from her family]]
*StoicWoobie: Taking care of the younger children, being a child soldier, being overworked and not willing to talk about how your family gave you to the EBS.
*WeatherManipulation: goes with her powers
!! Bobby Drake
One of the children in the manor. Bobby is described as being older and having blond hair. He is said to have cried for 2 months after being taken to the manor.
*AnIcePerson: Although not shown to Charles
*HeterosexualLifePartners: Implied with Bobby and John
*StealthPun: At one point, when he says "Chill, Man"
!! John Allerdyce
One of the children in the manor. John is described as having brown hair and darker than the others.
*HeterosexualLifePartners: Implied with Bobby and John
*HormoneAddledTeenager: Of all the children, he is the one to make sexual comments
--> "She can blow ''my'' trumpet –" John started; Sean snickered and Charles sighed.
*NotAMorningPerson: Usually non-communicative until he gets coffee.
*PlayingWithFire: goes with his powers
!! Kurt Wagner
Kurt is brought to the manor after the new year. He is around 3 years old.
*AffectionateInsult: The english translation of Azazel's pet name for his son is "backbiter",
*CryingLittleKid: When he is separated by his father during the start of his stay in the manor
*ThirdWheel: Even though they are all children, Kurt is this to Jean and Scott
!! Scott Summers
Scott is brought to the manor after the new year. He is the younger brother of Alex Summers. He wears a blindfold over his eyes, and is the oldest of himself, Jean and Kurt.
*AdorablyPrecociousChild: He acts the most responsibly out of the other children and keeps his eyes shut for the many days while wearing only a blindfold
*AfraidOfTheirOwnStrength: Upon blasting a a hole through the snow, he starts crying
*BlessedWithSuck: Uncontrollable laser beams coming from your eyes makes it unable for him to see
*ChildrenForcedToKill: He was left behind when the Free West attacked the manor and in some way was forced to kill two enemy soldiers. He doesn't take it well.
*EyeBeams
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The is the character sheet for the Film/XMenFirstClass fanfic Fanfic/NineElevenTen.
[[folder: Charles and Raven]]
!! Charles Xavier
The [[UnreliableNarrator POV]] Character kidnapped from his country and brought to manor where he is forced on a side of a war he doesn't want anything to do with.
*AudienceSurrogate
*BiTheWay
*BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler: After being attacked, underestimated, drained, and [[AttemptedRape almost]] [[NearRapeExperience raped]] on different occasions.]]
*TheCasanova: Charles was known as the "Oxford Casanova" who [[ReallyGetsAround really got around]].
*CulturalPosturing: When describing his disdain for the modestly laws Erik grew up with; Erik calls him out on it.
*DeniedFoodAsPunishment:
**Starved Charles is not allowed to attend the victory feast.
**Frost tells Erik that he has permission to starve Charles in order for sexual services.
**Erik also makes it so Charles cannot eat without him, although more as way to "normalize" their interactions.
---> '''Erik:''' If you don’t eat with me, you don’t eat at all.
*DirtyCoward: Justified with what Charles has put up with, but considering how he hates being called one, this fits.
*DisproportionateRetribution: Frost to Charles. He defies her publicly. She has him starved, beaten, chained and prepared to be raped and humiliated.
*FirstNameBasis: Charles sometimes introduces himself or insists on being called by his first name to appear friendly (e.g., Ororo), while insisting on something more formal if he doesn't like the other person (e.g., Alex).
*GildedCage: Charles once he's given access to the library and not treated like a child. However, still very much a cage as he is still locked in rooms and not allowed to leave the manor unless on a mission.
*HeroicSacrifice: Charles to protect Raven from being found, and to the Manor's children.
*HeroicSeductress
*Hidden Depths: In-story, with Charles's hidden stores of power in his mind and carefully maintained control over the others
--> '''Charles:''' Everyone can be deceived.
*ManipulativeBastard: Charles. From erasing memories to slightly adjusting how he is perceived. Everyone can be deceived indeed.
*MindRape: Charles was [[spoiler: literally going to rape Erik in his mind]], but fortunately, he realized [[WhatYouAreInTheDark what he was doing]] and [[NearRapeExperience stopped]].
*NonActionGuy: Although that's because he's surrounded by people who have been trained to fight.
*PsychicPowers: Include [[LivingLieDetector detecting when someone is lying to him]], [[MindManipulation erasing and planting memories]], [[MindProbe speaking to and reading people's minds]], [[JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind entering people's minds]], [[PsychicRadar detecting others]], [[SeeingThroughAnothersEyes switching perspectives]], and [[MasterOfIllusion hiding his presence]]
*SexForServices: Charles offers this to Erik so that the children will be protected in the battle.
*SexSlave: Frost's intention for Charles with Erik for the "honeymoon".
*ScrewThisImOttaHere: Charles attempts this on multiple occasions
*UnreliableNarrator: Charles from how he views others to how he justifies his actions
--> '''[[spoiler: Erik]] (to Charles):''' "Do you only value those aspects of civilization that are fashionable, or those with which you happen to agree?"]
*WhatBeautifulEyes: Noticed by Erik
!! Raven/Mystique
Charles's sister that he rescued and then protected from being captured by the EBS.
*MoralityPet: For Charles: both his sister and his birds represent his compassion
*TheResistance: [[spoiler: Leading the resistance against the EBS under the pseudonym "Mystique"]]
*PresentAbsence: Despite how often Charles thinks of her, [[spoiler: by the end of Part 3, Raven has yet to re-appear in the story since the beginning.]]
*TrueBlueFemininity: Charles likes wearing his blue sweater because it reminds him of Raven
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Children]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Eastern Brethren and Sistren (EBS)]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Free West]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Charles and Raven]]
!! Charles Xavier
The [[UnreliableNarrator POV]] Character kidnapped from his country and brought to manor where he is forced on a side of a war he doesn't want anything to do with.
*AudienceSurrogate
*BiTheWay
*BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler: After being attacked, underestimated, drained, and [[AttemptedRape almost]] [[NearRapeExperience raped]] on different occasions.]]
*TheCasanova: Charles was known as the "Oxford Casanova" who [[ReallyGetsAround really got around]].
*CulturalPosturing: When describing his disdain for the modestly laws Erik grew up with; Erik calls him out on it.
*DeniedFoodAsPunishment:
**Starved Charles is not allowed to attend the victory feast.
**Frost tells Erik that he has permission to starve Charles in order for sexual services.
**Erik also makes it so Charles cannot eat without him, although more as way to "normalize" their interactions.
---> '''Erik:''' If you don’t eat with me, you don’t eat at all.
*DirtyCoward: Justified with what Charles has put up with, but considering how he hates being called one, this fits.
*DisproportionateRetribution: Frost to Charles. He defies her publicly. She has him starved, beaten, chained and prepared to be raped and humiliated.
*FirstNameBasis: Charles sometimes introduces himself or insists on being called by his first name to appear friendly (e.g., Ororo), while insisting on something more formal if he doesn't like the other person (e.g., Alex).
*GildedCage: Charles once he's given access to the library and not treated like a child. However, still very much a cage as he is still locked in rooms and not allowed to leave the manor unless on a mission.
*HeroicSacrifice: Charles to protect Raven from being found, and to the Manor's children.
*HeroicSeductress
*Hidden Depths: In-story, with Charles's hidden stores of power in his mind and carefully maintained control over the others
--> '''Charles:''' Everyone can be deceived.
*ManipulativeBastard: Charles. From erasing memories to slightly adjusting how he is perceived. Everyone can be deceived indeed.
*MindRape: Charles was [[spoiler: literally going to rape Erik in his mind]], but fortunately, he realized [[WhatYouAreInTheDark what he was doing]] and [[NearRapeExperience stopped]].
*NonActionGuy: Although that's because he's surrounded by people who have been trained to fight.
*PsychicPowers: Include [[LivingLieDetector detecting when someone is lying to him]], [[MindManipulation erasing and planting memories]], [[MindProbe speaking to and reading people's minds]], [[JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind entering people's minds]], [[PsychicRadar detecting others]], [[SeeingThroughAnothersEyes switching perspectives]], and [[MasterOfIllusion hiding his presence]]
*SexForServices: Charles offers this to Erik so that the children will be protected in the battle.
*SexSlave: Frost's intention for Charles with Erik for the "honeymoon".
*ScrewThisImOttaHere: Charles attempts this on multiple occasions
*UnreliableNarrator: Charles from how he views others to how he justifies his actions
--> '''[[spoiler: Erik]] (to Charles):''' "Do you only value those aspects of civilization that are fashionable, or those with which you happen to agree?"]
*WhatBeautifulEyes: Noticed by Erik
!! Raven/Mystique
Charles's sister that he rescued and then protected from being captured by the EBS.
*MoralityPet: For Charles: both his sister and his birds represent his compassion
*TheResistance: [[spoiler: Leading the resistance against the EBS under the pseudonym "Mystique"]]
*PresentAbsence: Despite how often Charles thinks of her, [[spoiler: by the end of Part 3, Raven has yet to re-appear in the story since the beginning.]]
*TrueBlueFemininity: Charles likes wearing his blue sweater because it reminds him of Raven
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Children]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Eastern Brethren and Sistren (EBS)]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Free West]]
[[/folder]]
