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* AdultFear: All too aware that just one event, accidental or intentional, has the potential to wipe out what's left of her entire species.
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* InterspeciesRomance: With Liara (in the past) and Tali (currently.
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* InterspeciesRomance: With Liara (in the past) and Tali (currently.(currently).
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* InterspeciesRomance: With Liara and Tali.
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* InterspeciesRomance: With Liara (in the past) and Tali.Tali (currently.
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:The new Shadow Broker (not that it's revealed they replaced the original) regrets the organizations prior actions agains the equestrians and seeks to make amends.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:The new Shadow Broker (not that it's revealed they replaced the original) regrets the organizations prior actions agains against the equestrians and seeks to make amends.]]
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* ClosetGeek: {{Implied}}. Her mothers extranet activity included, in contest to their usual business use, include purchases of numerous comics filled by a search for "how to restrict child from credit account".
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler:Their motivations for the kidnapping are revealed by Liara due to believing the species held the means to surviving the Reaper invasion as it was old enough to have lived though many prior (unaware it was due to their facility as opposed to the species themselves).]]
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Mentions in her reports she's centuries old.
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Mentions in her reports entries she's centuries old.
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* KarmaHoudini: Talk Twilight into letting her go by [[{{Blackmail}} threatening to reveal dirt on the Heard]] if arrested and the only other option is for Twilight to kill her, [[ThouShaltNotKill which she's unwilling to do.]] [[spoiler:Even once the Shadow Broker is replaced by one sympathetic to the ponies, there's nothing suggesting she facing any consequences.]]
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* KarmaHoudini: Talk Talked Twilight into letting her go by [[{{Blackmail}} threatening to reveal dirt on the Heard]] if arrested and the only other option is for Twilight to kill her, [[ThouShaltNotKill which she's unwilling to do.]] do]], leaving with nothing worse than a bruised ego. [[spoiler:Even once the Shadow Broker is replaced by one sympathetic to the ponies, there's nothing suggesting it's stated Valdiv's valuable enough their grateful for them sparing her and she facing any consequences.]] remain s in their employ seemingly without consequence.]]
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* NoNameGiven: There name was unknown by the time of the fics original cancelation. It's only after it returned that their name Valdiv was given in the rewritten Arc 2 finale.
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Mentions in her reports she's centuries old.
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* BigBadWannabe: Arc 1 of ''Shades of Twilight'' has his attempts to sabotage the equestrians thwarted without incident. His MaliciousSlander in Arc 2 might have been significant, but once [[spoiler:the Shadow Broker leaks proof of his illic intent, it completely collapses]].
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* BigBadWannabe: Arc 1 of ''Shades of Twilight'' has his attempts to sabotage the equestrians thwarted without incident. His MaliciousSlander in Arc 2 might have been significant, but once [[spoiler:the Shadow Broker leaks proof of his illic illicit intent, it completely collapses]].
