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Clarified some confusing language in one of Gildhe's tropes (Not His Blood). Thanks eroock for spotting it!
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* [[NotHisBlood Not Their Blood]]: After Regent Ilaina attacks the Reaches, Crislie becomes concerned when she notices that Gildhe's skirts are covered in feyrie blood. Gildhe grimly announces that the blood actually belongs to their sibling, Karah, who didn't make it.
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* [[NotHisBlood Not Their Blood]]: After Regent Ilaina attacks the Reaches, Crislie becomes concerned when she notices that Gildhe's skirts are covered in feyrie blood. blood, assuming that they were injured during the fighting. Gildhe grimly announces tells her that the blood actually belongs to one of their sibling, Karah, siblings, who didn't make it.
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Cleaned up Atevia's folder a little and added connecting tropes to Crislie and Jeidhe's folders.
* BrutishCharacterBrutishWeapon: In the middle of ''Shadow Herald'', Crislie manages to steal a double-headed [[BarbaricBattleaxe war ax]] from Knight Jeidhe, and the weapon shifts her fighting style from that of a wild-swinging fistfighter to something more ruthless and deadly.
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A higher-up among the Irongardhe knights who prefers to solve her problems with as little violence and fuss as possible.
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A higher-up among the Irongardhe knights who prefers to solve her problems with as little violence and fuss as possible. When her orders put her in a moral predicament she can't sidestep, she has to reevaluate her lifelong loyalties and career.
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** "Serve your Regent by relaying my message, and perhaps Ilaina herself will grant you . . . mercy."
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* BrutishCharacterBrutishWeapon: Knight Jeidhe starts off wielding an ax in his first appearance, where he shows himself to be a brutal fighter ruthlessly dedicated to his cause. Then Crislie takes his ax -- and notices later on that he's still trying to fight like an ax wielder even when he's been handed a sword as a replacement.
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Added one last trope example and marked Gildhe's folder as fully crosswicked.
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%% Note to self; this folder needs to be checked for crosswicking.
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%% Note to self; this This folder needs to be checked for crosswicking.has been fully crosswicked.
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* DeviousDaggers: Gildhe fights with twin blades, Bark & Bite, characterizing them as a LoveableRogue in contrast to Crislie's battle-ax brutality. At one point they point out that at least they're honest about the fact that their daggers are stolen, whereas she keeps insisting that she won Ember as "a prize of battle."
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...spelled it wrong again, but double-checked this time.
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* BoyishShortHair: From a metatextual perspective; when paired with Gildhe's flamboyant skirts, it helps ease readers into their in-between gender identity. In-universe, [[NonHeter0normativeSociety short hair is considered "ungendered"]] in Gadhi.
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* BoyishShortHair: From a metatextual perspective; when paired with Gildhe's flamboyant skirts, it helps ease readers into their in-between gender identity. In-universe, [[NonHeter0normativeSociety [[NonHeteronormativeSociety short hair is considered "ungendered"]] "ungendered" in Gadhi.]]
