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Weaver is your resident mission control and an ex-shipbreaker himself. If there's something to be taught he'll be the one to teach you.
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Weaver is your resident mission control and an control, a calm, gentle-voiced Southern guy. An ex-shipbreaker himself. If himself; if there's something to be taught taught, he'll be the one to teach you.
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One of your fellow Shipbreakers in the sector. One of the least-performing employees you're in contact with, thanks to bad luck and even worse gear.
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One of your fellow Shipbreakers in the sector. One of the least-performing employees you're in contact with, thanks to bad luck luck, a bumbling nature and even worse gear.
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The administrator sent to oversee the station Rook and Weaver's team works out of in response to underground unionization attempts. A devout company man his arrival will demonstrate LYNX's heavy-handed responses to "agitators". He initiates Act II of the story with his entrance.
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The administrator sent to oversee the station Rook and Weaver's team works out of in response to underground unionization attempts. A devout company man man, his arrival will demonstrate demonstrates LYNX's heavy-handed responses to "agitators". He initiates Act II of the story with his entrance.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: He was brought in specifically to root out unionization efforts at Lynx, but his awful treatment of the shipbreaking crew ends up getting the skeptics like Dee and Weaver [[spoiler:on board with the first industrial action against Lynx.]] Even better, [[spoiler:recordings of his deranged threats and attempt to inflict FinalDeath on Kai during the sabotage end up leaking to the public, resulting in an outrage that winds up ''forcing'' Lynx to accept unionization.]] Nice going, Hal.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: He was brought in specifically to root out unionization efforts at Lynx, but his awful treatment of the shipbreaking crew ends up getting the skeptics like Dee Deedee and Weaver [[spoiler:on board with the first industrial action against Lynx.]] Even better, [[spoiler:recordings of his deranged threats and attempt to inflict FinalDeath on Kai during the sabotage end up leaking to the public, resulting in an outrage that winds up ''forcing'' Lynx to accept unionization.]] Nice going, Hal.
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* SmugSnake: [[spoiler:Once he manages to get evidence of the union to LYNX and he's confident he's in control, he becomes absolutely insufferable - but doesn't actually do anything competent with the information, not realizing that the unionization is still going on and eventually ends up fouling up so bad he ends up causing such a major scandal that ''forces'' LYNX to accept a union.]]
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* SmugSnake: [[spoiler:Once he manages to get evidence of the union to LYNX and he's confident he's in control, he becomes absolutely insufferable - but doesn't actually do anything competent with the information, not realizing that the unionization is still going on and eventually ends up fouling screwing his efforts up so bad he ends up causing such a major scandal that ''forces'' LYNX to accept a union.]]
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* CloningBlues: The process LYNX uses to map their genome for the sake of cloning them literally and intentionally kills them. The game actually opens with their death.
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* CloningBlues: BodyBackupDrive: The process LYNX uses to map their genome for the sake of cloning them literally and intentionally kills them. The game actually opens with their death.
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* CloningBlues: He used to be a shipbreaker himself [[NoodleIncident until a mishap with his cloning forced him to hang up his cutting gear]]. Other dialogue suggests that this also left his body ill-suited for gate travel as well, which is why he passes his armadillo down to Rook to fix up.
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* CloningBlues: CloneDegeneration: He used to be a shipbreaker himself [[NoodleIncident until a mishap with his cloning forced him to hang up his cutting gear]]. Other dialogue suggests that this also left his body ill-suited for gate travel as well, which is why he passes his armadillo down to Rook to fix up.
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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: Before he got into the shipwrecking business, he used to salvage androids. One time he had a job to break down a high-end 'droid that could reasonably pass for human, and found it so uncomfortable that he switched careers.
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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: Before he got into the shipwrecking shipbreaking business, he used to salvage androids. One time he had a job to break down a high-end 'droid that could reasonably pass for human, and found it so uncomfortable that he switched careers.
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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: Before he got into the shipwrecking business, he used to salvage androids. One time he had a job to break down a high-end 'droid that could reasonably pass for human, and found it so uncomfortable that he switched careers.
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* AffablyEvil: She tries to project an image of LYNX as a big family that's glad to have you, and that it's a benevolent and happy workplace, and she has the company send out curated snippets of its own history to the cutters. This is in stark contrast to the realities of the [[IndenturedServitude crippling debt]] the company hands out to new hires, its incredibly faulty and cut down equipment, and frequent union busting to keep cutters under their thumb.
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* AffablyEvil: She tries to project an image of LYNX as a big family that's glad to have you, and that it's a benevolent and happy workplace, and she has the company send out curated snippets of its own history to the cutters. This is in stark contrast to the realities of the [[IndenturedServitude crippling debt]] the company hands out to new hires, its incredibly faulty and cut down worn out equipment, and frequent union busting to keep cutters under their thumb.
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* {{Gonk}}: His picture goes out of its way to make him look ugly, from his unkempt beard to the many lines on his face. Especially noticeable when the credits present his old concept art and you see his portrait getting progressively uglier.
* HateSink: He's an obnoxious, condescending, egotistical asshole who's also [[InsufferableImbecile a complete buffoon]] that often pushes the crew into stupidly risking their lives to increase productivity. On top of that, he's as [[{{Gonk}} ugly on the outside]] and he is on the inside. It's obvious the player is meant to hate him just as much as the rest of the salvaging team does. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more satisfying when he gets his comeuppance in the end.]]
* HateSink: He's an obnoxious, condescending, egotistical asshole who's also [[InsufferableImbecile a complete buffoon]] that often pushes the crew into stupidly risking their lives to increase productivity. On top of that, he's as [[{{Gonk}} ugly on the outside]] and he is on the inside. It's obvious the player is meant to hate him just as much as the rest of the salvaging team does. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more satisfying when he gets his comeuppance in the end.]]
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* {{Gonk}}: His picture portrait goes out of its way to make him look ugly, from his unkempt beard to the many lines on his face. Especially noticeable when the credits present his old concept art and you see his portrait getting progressively uglier.
* HateSink: He's an obnoxious, condescending, egotistical asshole who's also [[InsufferableImbecile a complete buffoon]] that is all-too-willing to [[BadBoss put the crew's lives at risk for stupid and oftenpushes the crew into stupidly risking their lives to increase productivity.downright petty reasons]]. On top of that, he's as [[{{Gonk}} ugly on the outside]] and he is on the inside. It's obvious the player is meant to hate him just as much as the rest of the salvaging team does. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more satisfying when he gets his comeuppance in the end.]]
* HateSink: He's an obnoxious, condescending, egotistical asshole who's also [[InsufferableImbecile a complete buffoon]] that is all-too-willing to [[BadBoss put the crew's lives at risk for stupid and often
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: He was brought in specifically to root out unionization efforts at Lynx, but his awful treatment of the shipbreaking crew ends up pushing the skeptics [[spoiler:to carry out the first industrial action against Lynx.]] Even better, [[spoiler:recordings of his deranged threats and attempt to inflict FinalDeath on Kai during the sabotage end up leaking to the public, resulting in an outrage that winds up ''forcing'' Lynx to accept unionization.]] Nice going, Hal.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: He was brought in specifically to root out unionization efforts at Lynx, but his awful treatment of the shipbreaking crew ends up pushing getting the skeptics [[spoiler:to carry out like Dee and Weaver [[spoiler:on board with the first industrial action against Lynx.]] Even better, [[spoiler:recordings of his deranged threats and attempt to inflict FinalDeath on Kai during the sabotage end up leaking to the public, resulting in an outrage that winds up ''forcing'' Lynx to accept unionization.]] Nice going, Hal.
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* HateSink: He's an obnoxious, condescending, egotistical asshole who's also [[InsufferableImbecile a complete buffoon ignorant of his own stupidity]]. On top of that, he's as [[{{Gonk}} ugly on the outside]] and he is on the inside. It's obvious the player is meant to hate him just as much as the rest of the salvaging team does.
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* HateSink: He's an obnoxious, condescending, egotistical asshole who's also [[InsufferableImbecile a complete buffoon ignorant of his own stupidity]].buffoon]] that often pushes the crew into stupidly risking their lives to increase productivity. On top of that, he's as [[{{Gonk}} ugly on the outside]] and he is on the inside. It's obvious the player is meant to hate him just as much as the rest of the salvaging team does. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more satisfying when he gets his comeuppance in the end.]]
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: He was brought in specifically to root out unionization efforts at Lynx, but his awful treatment of the shipbreaking crew ends up pushing the skeptics [[spoiler:to carry out the first industrial action against Lynx.]] Even better, [[spoiler:recordings of his deranged threats and attempt to inflict FinalDeath on Kai during the sabotage end up leaking to the public, resulting in an outrage that winds up ''forcing'' Lynx to accept unionization.]] Nice going, Hal.
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* HateSink: He's an obnoxious, condescending, egotistical asshole who's also [[InsufferableImbecile a complete buffoon ignorant of his own stupidity]]. On top of that, he's as [[{{Gonk}} ugly on the outside]] and he is on the inside. It's obvious the player is meant to hate him just as much as the rest of the salvaging team does.
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* ISeeThemToo: Kaito's the only other person who notices that the sound the AI nodes make when destroyed sounds uncomfortably like screaming.
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler:Retires once Hal has been dealt with, the Union successfully forces LYNX to back down, and everything is getting back to normal.]]
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler:Retires once Hal has been dealt with, the Union successfully forces LYNX to back down, and everything is getting back to normal. He says that he wants to retire on a high note, and it is indeed at the happiest part of the story that he leaves.]]
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* NotSoStoic: He's normally a calm, soothing voice of reason, but even he has his limits. When Hal starts being needlessly cruel with LYNX's approval, Weaver snaps and Hal has to mute him.
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* NotSoStoic: He's normally a calm, soothing voice of reason, but even he has his limits. When Hal starts being needlessly cruel with LYNX's approval, Weaver snaps and Hal has to mute him. Goes up to epic proportions when [[spoiler: Kai at first seems to be [[KilledOffForReal permanently killed]] by Hal's desperate attempt to stop the crew in the final mission.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Lou eventually loses patience with Hal's behavior and reaches out to the union to organize against LYNX. The call is intercepted and LYNX goes full fascist in response, revoking the human rights of the Cutters and exercising full control over their lives until the union is no longer a threat.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Lou eventually loses patience with Hal's behavior and reaches out to the union to organize against LYNX. The call is intercepted and LYNX goes full fascist in response, revoking the human rights of the Cutters and exercising full control over their lives until the union is no longer a threat. [[spoiler:This works out well for the workers and the union in the end though, as LYNX's [[NiceJobFixingItVillain horrifying reaction]] leads to public outcry strong enough to get the government to step in ''and'' dramatically increases union membership among shipbreakers.]]
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* WideEyedIdealist: Lou's faith in the union is practically unshakeable.
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* WideEyedIdealist: Lou's faith in the union is practically unshakeable. It turns out that she's [[spoiler:completely right, as the union is a crucial part of getting the workers out of enslavement to LYNX.]]
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LYNX's first CEO proper, and the one who took the minor salvage company and turned it into a planet-running conglomerate, with all that came with that.
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LYNX's first CEO proper, and the one who took the minor salvage company and turned it into a planet-running conglomerate, with all that came with that.while starting LYNX down the path of dystopian {{megacorp}}.
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* {{Expy}}: Calls himself "founder" of a company he actually just bought. Built [[SpaceX private space transportation infrastructure]] using public government subsidies. Yup, that's Elon.
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* {{Expy}}: Calls himself "founder" of a company he actually just bought. Built [[SpaceX private space transportation infrastructure]] using public government subsidies. Yup, that's Elon.Elon Musk.
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History lessons can go in trivia, if anywhere, once the game is released in full.
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The administrator sent to oversee the station Rook and Weaver's team works out of in response to underground unionization attempts. A devout company man his arrival will demonstrate LYNX's heavy-handed responses to "agitators". He debuted in the 0.6.0 update, initiating Act II of the story with his entrance.
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The administrator sent to oversee the station Rook and Weaver's team works out of in response to underground unionization attempts. A devout company man his arrival will demonstrate LYNX's heavy-handed responses to "agitators". He debuted in the 0.6.0 update, initiating initiates Act II of the story with his entrance.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Weaver does not try to sugar coat or lie about the conditions of working for LYNX but he does almost always prefer to work within the system. Given he has leeway to set conditions he can assure that at least his team has a decent working experience and is as safe as possible under the circumstances of their employment. [[spoiler: His suggestion of Industrial Action and move to undermine LYNX directly is a sign of how serious things have gotten.]]
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* AmbiguouslyGay: In one private chat, Lou mentions being attracted to another woman.
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* WideEyedIdealist: Lou's faith in the union borders on fanatical and is too willing to believe that it'll be able to fix everything wrong with LYNX. This eventually leads her to pulling the trigger on reaching out to them and causing the situation to go from bad to worse not just for her own team but for every blue collar worker in LYNX's iron grip. It also gives Hal cause to remove her entirely to an unknown location.
* DesignatedHero: Despite Lou's actions consistently hurting her co-workers and her advice to the player being worse than useless, the story paints her as the hero of the working class (including via stereotypical ethnic, racial, and sexual orientation coding) and never avoids an opportunity to have her lecture in the player's ear.
* DesignatedHero: Despite Lou's actions consistently hurting her co-workers and her advice to the player being worse than useless, the story paints her as the hero of the working class (including via stereotypical ethnic, racial, and sexual orientation coding) and never avoids an opportunity to have her lecture in the player's ear.
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* WideEyedIdealist: Lou's faith in the union borders on fanatical and is too willing to believe that it'll be able to fix everything wrong with LYNX. This eventually leads her to pulling the trigger on reaching out to them and causing the situation to go from bad to worse not just for her own team but for every blue collar worker in LYNX's iron grip. It also gives Hal cause to remove her entirely to an unknown location.
* DesignatedHero: Despite Lou's actions consistently hurting her co-workers and her advice to the player being worse than useless, the story paints her as the hero of the working class (including via stereotypical ethnic, racial, and sexual orientation coding) and never avoids an opportunity to have her lecture in the player's ear.practically unshakeable.
* DesignatedHero: Despite Lou's actions consistently hurting her co-workers and her advice to the player being worse than useless, the story paints her as the hero of the working class (including via stereotypical ethnic, racial, and sexual orientation coding) and never avoids an opportunity to have her lecture in the player's ear.
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[[folder:Calyssia Del-Paulsen]]
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[[folder:Calyssia Del-Paulsen]]Rai-Paulsen]]
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* DesignatedHero: Despite Lou's actions consistently hurting her co-workers and her advice to the player being worse than useless, the story paints her as the hero of the working class (including via stereotypical ethnic, racial, and sexual orientation coding) and never avoids an opportunity to have her lecture in the player's ear.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Attempts this on you at the very end [[spoiler:when you join in on trashing the ship during the Industrial Action mission. He explicitly calls you out, telling you he thought you'd be better than this]].
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* WhatTheHellHero: Attempts this on you at the very end [[spoiler:when you join in on trashing the ship during the Industrial Action mission. He explicitly calls you out, telling you he thought you'd be better than this]].
this and regretting ever saying you reminded him of his early years]].
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* {{Gonk}}: His picture goes out of its way to make him look ugly, from his unkempt beard to the many lines on his face.
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* {{Gonk}}: His picture goes out of its way to make him look ugly, from his unkempt beard to the many lines on his face. Especially noticeable when the credits present his old concept art and you see his portrait getting progressively uglier.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Attempts this on you at the very end [[spoiler:when you join in on trashing the ship during the Industrial Action mission. He explicitly calls you out, telling you he thought you'd be better than this]].
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* ClosedCircle: [[spoiler: After the Union gets established and LYNX gets forced to adapt their practices they are not happy with Hal, whose crew was ground Zero of the movement. He ends up right back in processing.]]
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* ClosedCircle: [[spoiler: [[spoiler:He relishes the chance to clamp down on all communications outside the station as soon as he has the excuse, and takes away the Armadillo as well, making sure no one can leave or get in contact with the outside. It backfires on him right at the end: After the Union gets established and LYNX gets forced to adapt their practices they are not happy with Hal, whose crew was ground Zero of the movement.movement and who cannot blame anyone else but himself for having the workers revolt like that. He ends up right back in processing.]]
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* Expy: {{Expy}}: Calls himself "founder" of a company he actually just bought. Built [[SpaceX private space transportation infrastructure]] using public government subsidies. Yup, that's Elon.
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* AffablyEvil: She tries to project an image of LYNX as a big family that's glad to have you, and that it's a benevolent and happy workplace, and she has the company send out curated snippets of the its own history to the cutters. This is in stark contrast to the realities of the [[IndenturedServitude crippling debt]] the company hands out to new hires, it's incredibly faulty and cut down equipment, and frequent Union busting to keep cutters under their thumb.
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* AffablyEvil: She tries to project an image of LYNX as a big family that's glad to have you, and that it's a benevolent and happy workplace, and she has the company send out curated snippets of the its own history to the cutters. This is in stark contrast to the realities of the [[IndenturedServitude crippling debt]] the company hands out to new hires, it's its incredibly faulty and cut down equipment, and frequent Union union busting to keep cutters under their thumb.
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* KarmaHoudini: She suffers zero personal consequences for the entire story. [[spoiler:Even after Rook, Weaver, Kaito, and Deedee blow the lid on LYNX's practices. She pins it all on the administrator teams, allowing her and her family to continue profiting off of the salvage business, though having to play by government rules.]]
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* KarmaHoudini: She suffers zero personal consequences for the entire story. [[spoiler:Even after Rook, Weaver, Kaito, and Deedee blow the lid on LYNX's practices. She practices, she pins it all on the administrator teams, allowing her and her family to continue profiting off of the salvage business, though having to play by government rules.]]
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* TheLoad: Weaver describes him as someone who can be taught the same lesson a thousand times and never once retain it, no matter how earnest he is in his desire to do better.
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* TheLoad: Weaver describes him as someone who can be taught the same lesson a thousand times and never once retain it, no matter how earnest he is in his desire to do better. [[spoiler:And during the Industrial Action mission, where you can see his progress bar while everyone is ''purposefully'' trying to completely trash the ship, he still screws up enough to ''almost'' get a salvage goal]].
* RunningGag: Kaito just can't deal properly with reactors, and every time you overhear him on the radio trying to handle one, you can expect it to go boom. [[spoiler:It takes a darker turn when it goes off during Industrial Action, right after Hal deleted his backups in a rage]].
* RunningGag: Kaito just can't deal properly with reactors, and every time you overhear him on the radio trying to handle one, you can expect it to go boom. [[spoiler:It takes a darker turn when it goes off during Industrial Action, right after Hal deleted his backups in a rage]].
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* OhCrap: He nearly has a panic attack when he realizes [[spoiler:in deleting Kaito's backup trying to punish him, right as he turned off his controls while he was threatening to dunk a reactor into the furnace, that he just killed a LYNX worker for ''real''. Even after finding out he survived, Hal gets most of the wind taken right out of his sails afterwards, in contrast with his earlier fury]].