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-->'''Asher, now standing in the doorway''': [[CasualDangerDialog I heard what happened]].
-->'''Matt''': [[{{Determinator}} And somehow you dragged yourself all the way here]]. [[CasualDangerDialog How did you even get in here?]] [[CrazyPrepared The psycho locked all the doors]].
-->'''Matt''': [[{{Determinator}} And somehow you dragged yourself all the way here]]. [[CasualDangerDialog How did you even get in here?]] [[CrazyPrepared The psycho locked all the doors]].
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-->'''Asher, now standing in the doorway''': [[CasualDangerDialog [[CasualDangerDialogue I heard what happened]].
-->'''Matt''': [[{{Determinator}} And somehow you dragged yourself all the way here]].[[CasualDangerDialog [[CasualDangerDialogue How did you even get in here?]] [[CrazyPrepared The psycho locked all the doors]].
-->'''Matt''': [[{{Determinator}} And somehow you dragged yourself all the way here]].
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!Moment Subpages are SpoilersOff. YouHaveBeenWarned.
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-->'''Matt:''' You're a pretty tough girl.
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** Evelyn calling out her former best friend on the rooftop definitely counts.
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** Evelyn calling out her former best friend on the rooftop definitely counts. Doubles as a tearjerker.
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-->'''Evelyn [[BrokenPedestal (shaking her head with tears)]]''': [[ShutUpHannibal You're a monster, Jordan]]. A bloodthirsty, [[DirtyCoward cowardly]] [[HairTriggerTemper angry]] [[YouMonster monster]].
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-->'''Evelyn [[BrokenPedestal (shaking her head with tears)]]''': [[ShutUpHannibal You're a monster, Jordan]]. [[ArmorPiercingResponse A bloodthirsty, [[DirtyCoward cowardly]] [[HairTriggerTemper cowardly, angry]] [[YouMonster monster]].
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* [[VitriolicBestBuds The main six]] get into a few confrontations with bullies throughout the story. What do they do? [[TrueCompanions Stand together as one]], daring anyone to just touch one of them. [[BewareTheNiceOnes Mike]], [[TranquilFury Matt]] and Asher in particular get defensive, with Mike vocally expressing his disdain, while Matt and Asher settle for [[DeathGlare silent]] [[EyeAmWatchingYou threats]].
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* [[VitriolicBestBuds The main six]] get into a few confrontations with bullies [[TheBully bullies]] throughout the story. What do they do? [[TrueCompanions Stand together as one]], daring anyone to just touch one of them. [[BewareTheNiceOnes Mike]], [[TranquilFury Matt]] and Asher in particular get defensive, with Mike [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech vocally expressing his disdain, disdain]], while Matt and Asher settle for [[DeathGlare silent]] [[EyeAmWatchingYou threats]].
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** Also, when Mike finally discovers that his new friends aren't really his friends, only using him to get closer to and hurt Mara, he ''[[BerserkButton snaps]]''. He calls them out on it and leaves. Later lampshaded by his friends how awesome it was for him to do that.
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** Also, when Mike finally discovers that [[FalseFriend his new friends aren't really his friends, friends]], only using him to get closer to and hurt Mara, he ''[[BerserkButton snaps]]''. He calls them out on it and leaves. Later lampshaded by his friends how awesome it was for him to do that.
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-->'''Matt''': [[CasualDangerDialog And somehow you dragged yourself all the way here]]. How did you even get in here? [[CrazyPrepared The psycho locked all the doors]].
-->'''Asher (matter-of-factly)''': Uh, lock picking? Ya doi.
-->'''Asher (matter-of-factly)''': Uh, lock picking? Ya doi.
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-->'''Matt''': [[CasualDangerDialog [[{{Determinator}} And somehow you dragged yourself all the way here]]. [[CasualDangerDialog How did you even get in here? here?]] [[CrazyPrepared The psycho locked all the doors]].
-->'''Asher (matter-of-factly)''': Uh, [[HiddenDepths lockpicking? picking]]? Ya doi.
-->'''Asher (matter-of-factly)''': Uh, [[HiddenDepths lock
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** This is also similar to [[BullyHunter Jordi]] standing up for [[MoralityPet Evelyn]] earlier in the cafeteria by calling out the bullies.
** Also, when Mike finally discovers that his new friends aren't really his friends, only using him to get closer to and hurt Mara, he ''[[BerserkButton snaps]]''. He calls them out on it and leaves. Later lampshaded by his friends how awesome it was for him to do that.
* Another one goes for Mike when he goes over to Mara and discovers her horrible home life. He's able to handle the situation well enough and even gives Mara her FirstKiss and makes a LoveConfession. Doubles as heartwarming.
-->'''Mike:''' Mara, you don't have to tell me anything you don't want to. Just know that everyone and me are here for you. Okay, little baby girl?
-->'''Mara:''' T-thank you.
* When he receives the news that his name was found on a note near Dexter's body, Matt leaves the cafeteria so Mara decides to follow after and try to help. It's an awesome moment showcasing her attempts to break out of her shell and look out for her friends, something she often struggled with before this.
** Following this is another moment for a character overcoming their insecurities for the sake for their loved ones, that character being Matthew. The moment he realizes his friends could be targeted, he sucks it up and faces them to tell them this information. Keep in mind that this is happening after his disastrous date where he rejected Evelyn, and thinks everyone pretty much hates him for it. He might be a jerk sometimes, but there's no denying his HiddenHeartOfGold is there.
* Rose's CharacterDevelopment is one of the highlights of the book, so it's only natural that it would be listed here.
** Also, when Mike finally discovers that his new friends aren't really his friends, only using him to get closer to and hurt Mara, he ''[[BerserkButton snaps]]''. He calls them out on it and leaves. Later lampshaded by his friends how awesome it was for him to do that.
* Another one goes for Mike when he goes over to Mara and discovers her horrible home life. He's able to handle the situation well enough and even gives Mara her FirstKiss and makes a LoveConfession. Doubles as heartwarming.
-->'''Mike:''' Mara, you don't have to tell me anything you don't want to. Just know that everyone and me are here for you. Okay, little baby girl?
-->'''Mara:''' T-thank you.
* When he receives the news that his name was found on a note near Dexter's body, Matt leaves the cafeteria so Mara decides to follow after and try to help. It's an awesome moment showcasing her attempts to break out of her shell and look out for her friends, something she often struggled with before this.
** Following this is another moment for a character overcoming their insecurities for the sake for their loved ones, that character being Matthew. The moment he realizes his friends could be targeted, he sucks it up and faces them to tell them this information. Keep in mind that this is happening after his disastrous date where he rejected Evelyn, and thinks everyone pretty much hates him for it. He might be a jerk sometimes, but there's no denying his HiddenHeartOfGold is there.
* Rose's CharacterDevelopment is one of the highlights of the book, so it's only natural that it would be listed here.
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* Evelyn calling out her former best friend on the rooftop definitely counts.counts.
-->'''Jordi''': Don't take another step closer, Eve.
-->'''Evelyn''': I know, Jordan. I just have a few words to say to you...
-->'''Jordi''': [[BigWhat WHAT?!]]
-->'''Evelyn''': [[CallBack It's the same thing I told Asher before]], [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech but unlike you]], [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy he accepted it]] and [[CharacterDevelopment tried to move on]]. [[MurderIsTheBestSolution Picking up a gun and taking lives]] [[DefiedTrope is not how you deal with your problems]]. That just makes you a [[DirtyCoward coward]] for turning to violent methods, [[RageBreakingPoint letting anger take over your words and actions]], making [[JerkAss you]] hurt others and putting them through [[TraumaCongaLine nightmarish torture]] that is [[DisproportionateRetribution way beyond being a suitable punishment]]...[[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Asher]] tried to move on and find someone else. [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Why couldn't you have done the same?]]
-->'''Jordi''': Because I'm not him!! I wanted you! [[EntitledToHaveYou I EARNED YOU]]!
-->'''Evelyn [[BrokenPedestal (shaking her head with tears)]]''': [[ShutUpHannibal You're a monster, Jordan]]. A bloodthirsty, [[DirtyCoward cowardly]] [[HairTriggerTemper angry]] [[YouMonster monster]].
-->'''Jordi''': Don't take another step closer, Eve.
-->'''Evelyn''': I know, Jordan. I just have a few words to say to you...
-->'''Jordi''': [[BigWhat WHAT?!]]
-->'''Evelyn''': [[CallBack It's the same thing I told Asher before]], [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech but unlike you]], [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy he accepted it]] and [[CharacterDevelopment tried to move on]]. [[MurderIsTheBestSolution Picking up a gun and taking lives]] [[DefiedTrope is not how you deal with your problems]]. That just makes you a [[DirtyCoward coward]] for turning to violent methods, [[RageBreakingPoint letting anger take over your words and actions]], making [[JerkAss you]] hurt others and putting them through [[TraumaCongaLine nightmarish torture]] that is [[DisproportionateRetribution way beyond being a suitable punishment]]...[[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Asher]] tried to move on and find someone else. [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Why couldn't you have done the same?]]
-->'''Jordi''': Because I'm not him!! I wanted you! [[EntitledToHaveYou I EARNED YOU]]!
-->'''Evelyn [[BrokenPedestal (shaking her head with tears)]]''': [[ShutUpHannibal You're a monster, Jordan]]. A bloodthirsty, [[DirtyCoward cowardly]] [[HairTriggerTemper angry]] [[YouMonster monster]].
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**''[[TheDoorSlamsYou (The door swings open, knocking Jordi down)]]''
-->'''Matt (shocked)''':[[FlatWhat ...I'm sorry, what?]]
-->'''Asher, now standing in the doorway''': [[CasualDangerDialog I heard what happened]].
-->'''Matt''': [[CasualDangerDialog And somehow you dragged yourself all the way here]]. How did you even get in here? [[CrazyPrepared The psycho locked all the doors]].
-->'''Asher (matter-of-factly)''': Uh, lock picking? Ya doi.
-->'''Matt''': [[SincerityMode I'm impressed]]. [[LampshadeHanging Also impressed by]] [[JustInTime the perfect timing]].
-->'''Matt (shocked)''':[[FlatWhat ...I'm sorry, what?]]
-->'''Asher, now standing in the doorway''': [[CasualDangerDialog I heard what happened]].
-->'''Matt''': [[CasualDangerDialog And somehow you dragged yourself all the way here]]. How did you even get in here? [[CrazyPrepared The psycho locked all the doors]].
-->'''Asher (matter-of-factly)''': Uh, lock picking? Ya doi.
-->'''Matt''': [[SincerityMode I'm impressed]]. [[LampshadeHanging Also impressed by]] [[JustInTime the perfect timing]].
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* The climax. To sum it up, our protagonists have been locked in the school. They are able to keep a calm head and look for an exit. Matt in particular takes on the role of TheLeader and instructs everyone to look for Jordi while he looks for an exit. He also tells them to look after each other and runs off. When everyone regroups after finding Jordi, she [[TheReveal reveals]] her to be the murderer, and it's nothing short of a chillingly awesome reveal. Mike gets to do a HeroicSacrifice (even if it was reckless) that buys Matt time to disarm Jordi and tells Mara and Evelyn to get Mike and themselves to safety. A fight ensues between Matt and Jordi, who proves to be a stronger foe, but Matt doesn't give up and opts to taunt her to win the psychological fight.
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* The climax. To sum it up, our protagonists have been locked in the school. They are able to keep a calm head and look for an exit. Matt in particular takes on the role of TheLeader and instructs everyone to look for Jordi while he looks for an exit. He also tells them to look after each other and runs off. When everyone regroups after finding Jordi, she [[TheReveal reveals]] her to be the murderer, and it's nothing short of a chillingly awesome reveal. Mike gets to do a HeroicSacrifice (even if it was reckless) that buys Matt time to disarm Jordi and tells Mara and Evelyn to get Mike and themselves to safety. A fight ensues between Matt and Jordi, who proves to be a stronger foe, but Matt doesn't give up and opts to [[IShallTauntYou taunt her to win the psychological fight.fight]].
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** Matt gets another badass moment when he goes DefiantToTheEnd even after being defeated and nearly killed, dealing yet another TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Jordi.
*[[BigDamnHeroes Asher]] gets a moment when he arrives just in time to save Matt from Jordi.
*Evelyn calling out her former best friend on the rooftop definitely counts.
** Matt gets another badass moment when he goes DefiantToTheEnd even after being defeated and nearly killed, dealing yet another TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Jordi.
*[[BigDamnHeroes Asher]] gets a moment when he arrives just in time to save Matt from Jordi.
*Evelyn calling out her former best friend on the rooftop definitely counts.
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* The climax. [[spoiler: To sum it up, our protagonists have been locked in the school. They are able to keep a calm head and look for an exit. Matt in particular takes on the role of TheLeader and instructs everyone to look for Jordi while he looks for an exit. He also tells them to look after each other and runs off. When everyone regroups after finding Jordi, she [[TheReveal reveals]] her to be the murderer, and it's nothing short of a chillingly awesome reveal. Mike gets to do a HeroicSacrifice (even if it was reckless) that buys Matt time to disarm Jordi and tells Mara and Evelyn to get Mike and themselves to safety. A fight ensues between Matt and Jordi, who proves to be a stronger foe, but Matt doesn't give up and opts to taunt her to win the psychological fight]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Matt:''']] You're a pretty tough girl.
-->[[spoiler:'''Jordi:''']] [[StealthInsult Ha. I could say the same about you]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Matt:''']] [[LampshadeHanging I see you haven't lost your penchant for]] [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]] and [[StealthInsult stealthy insults]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Jordi:''']] Never will.
-->[[spoiler:'''Matt:''']] [[BadassBoast I'll make sure you do]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Matt:''']] You're a pretty tough girl.
-->[[spoiler:'''Jordi:''']] [[StealthInsult Ha. I could say the same about you]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Matt:''']] [[LampshadeHanging I see you haven't lost your penchant for]] [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]] and [[StealthInsult stealthy insults]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Jordi:''']] Never will.
-->[[spoiler:'''Matt:''']] [[BadassBoast I'll make sure you do]].
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* The climax. [[spoiler: To sum it up, our protagonists have been locked in the school. They are able to keep a calm head and look for an exit. Matt in particular takes on the role of TheLeader and instructs everyone to look for Jordi while he looks for an exit. He also tells them to look after each other and runs off. When everyone regroups after finding Jordi, she [[TheReveal reveals]] her to be the murderer, and it's nothing short of a chillingly awesome reveal. Mike gets to do a HeroicSacrifice (even if it was reckless) that buys Matt time to disarm Jordi and tells Mara and Evelyn to get Mike and themselves to safety. A fight ensues between Matt and Jordi, who proves to be a stronger foe, but Matt doesn't give up and opts to taunt her to win the psychological fight]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Matt:''']]fight.
-->'''Matt:''' You're a pretty tough girl.
-->[[spoiler:'''Jordi:''']] -->'''Jordi:''' [[StealthInsult Ha. I could say the same about you]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Matt:''']] -->'''Matt:''' [[LampshadeHanging I see you haven't lost your penchant for]] [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]] and [[StealthInsult stealthy insults]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Jordi:''']] -->'''Jordi:''' Never will.
-->[[spoiler:'''Matt:''']] -->'''Matt:''' [[BadassBoast I'll make sure you do]].
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-->'''Matt:''' You're a pretty tough girl.
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* [[VitriolicBestBuds The main six]] get into a few confrontations with bullies throughout the story. What do they do? [[TrueCompanions Stand together as one]], daring anyone to just touch one of them. [[BewareTheNiceOnes Mike]], [[TranquilFury Matt]] and Asher in particular get defensive, with Mike vocally expressing his disdain, while Matt and Asher settle for [[DeathGlare silent]] [[EyeAmWatchingYou threats]].
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* [[VitriolicBestBuds The main six]] get into a few confrontations with bullies throughout the story. What do they do? [[TrueCompanions Stand together as one]], daring anyone to just touch one of them. [[BewareTheNiceOnes Mike]], [[TranquilFury Matt]] and Asher in particular get defensive, with Mike vocally expressing his disdain, while Matt and Asher settle for [[DeathGlare silent]] [[EyeAmWatchingYou threats]].threats]].
*The climax. [[spoiler: To sum it up, our protagonists have been locked in the school. They are able to keep a calm head and look for an exit. Matt in particular takes on the role of TheLeader and instructs everyone to look for Jordi while he looks for an exit. He also tells them to look after each other and runs off. When everyone regroups after finding Jordi, she [[TheReveal reveals]] her to be the murderer, and it's nothing short of a chillingly awesome reveal. Mike gets to do a HeroicSacrifice (even if it was reckless) that buys Matt time to disarm Jordi and tells Mara and Evelyn to get Mike and themselves to safety. A fight ensues between Matt and Jordi, who proves to be a stronger foe, but Matt doesn't give up and opts to taunt her to win the psychological fight]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Matt:''']] You're a pretty tough girl.
-->[[spoiler:'''Jordi:''']] [[StealthInsult Ha. I could say the same about you]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Matt''']] [[LampshadeHanging I see you haven't lost your penchant for]] [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]] and [[StealthInsult stealthy insults]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Jordi:''']] Never will.
-->[[spoiler:'''Matt:''']] [[BadassBoast I'll make sure you do]].
*The climax. [[spoiler: To sum it up, our protagonists have been locked in the school. They are able to keep a calm head and look for an exit. Matt in particular takes on the role of TheLeader and instructs everyone to look for Jordi while he looks for an exit. He also tells them to look after each other and runs off. When everyone regroups after finding Jordi, she [[TheReveal reveals]] her to be the murderer, and it's nothing short of a chillingly awesome reveal. Mike gets to do a HeroicSacrifice (even if it was reckless) that buys Matt time to disarm Jordi and tells Mara and Evelyn to get Mike and themselves to safety. A fight ensues between Matt and Jordi, who proves to be a stronger foe, but Matt doesn't give up and opts to taunt her to win the psychological fight]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Matt:''']] You're a pretty tough girl.
-->[[spoiler:'''Jordi:''']] [[StealthInsult Ha. I could say the same about you]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Matt''']] [[LampshadeHanging I see you haven't lost your penchant for]] [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]] and [[StealthInsult stealthy insults]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Jordi:''']] Never will.
-->[[spoiler:'''Matt:''']] [[BadassBoast I'll make sure you do]].
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