SeptimusHeap
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Aug 21st 2014 at 12:10:26 AM
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I do not see "gloating"; but I see a couple of No Real Life Examples, Please! tropes that need to be scrapped.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
Kanten
Since: Mar, 2010
Aug 26th 2014 at 3:06:33 PM
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This page isn't under No Real Life Examples Please. And as for the "gloating" (couldn't think of another word), I refer mostly to the first sentence wicking Write What You Know while scrapping the entire existing (impartial and listed specific documented events with no opinions presented) section. And the "making our presence felt" thing comes across rather boastful.
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SeptimusHeap
MOD
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Aug 26th 2014 at 11:20:48 PM
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Uh, no. This page not being NRLEP doesn't mean that other tropes which are should be cited in the Real Life section.
I personally don't think that that sentence is boastful.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
LordGro
Since: May, 2010
Aug 27th 2014 at 1:34:05 PM
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The Real Life section of this page is being discussed here
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Am I wrong, or does the Real Life section come across almost like gloating? The previous section had direct examples with no actual stance being made, and it was scrapped and replaced with a subjective Author Tract.
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