Follow TV Tropes

Following

Complete Monster Proposal Thread

Go To

Old Complete Monster cleanup thread

Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

PassingThrough Since: Feb, 2024
#44001: May 11th 2024 at 5:18:11 AM

He also cackles while doing it and pointedly is acting the cruelty out on a minion who was asking to be empowered to help him kill Dante... agreed it's a great bit to showcase the controlling monster he is.

Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#44002: May 11th 2024 at 6:03:00 AM

@Polar Phantom Oh, I would say yes to that video. A perfect example of on how cruel Mundus truly is.

Starkrafty A coupla mammals makin' gravy (Pentatroper)
A coupla mammals makin' gravy
#44003: May 11th 2024 at 7:40:02 AM

Yes to Muscle Man, who is going right up on the Best CM Names List.

Now we're cookin'! While nobody's lookin'! We're family! Culinarily!
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#44004: May 11th 2024 at 7:55:45 AM

[tup] Man of Muscle

"No running in the halls!"
Kronger3124 The Victim from Your Walls Since: Feb, 2024 Relationship Status: Whoa, they're bisexual! I didn't know that!
#44005: May 11th 2024 at 8:01:51 AM

Here is the Orb's writeup!

  • Animator vs. Animation:
    • The Dark Lord
    • "Lucky Blocks" & "Lucky Block Staff": The Orb is the eldritch entity that controls the Lucky Dimension, seeking to spread chaos wherever it goes. Given a chance to escape its temple by Yellow, the Orb possesses his body before trying to either kill the Stick Gang or possess them with replicas of itself, all while killing any allies they spawn; once possessed, the vessel's soul is thrown into a mental prison, forced to watch as its body attacks its friends. Returning years later by hijacking the Lucky Block Staff, the Orb sends dozens of minions to die in an attempt to kill the Stick Gang, before trying to trap them in bedrock cages for eternity, showing for a second time it's a heartless entity that takes pride in its actions.
    • The Witch

KazuyaProta Shin Megami Tensei IV from A Industrial Farm Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Shin Megami Tensei IV
#44006: May 11th 2024 at 8:31:01 AM

[tup] Muscle Man

[tup] Mirror Man

[tup] Unicron

[tup] Iron Mask

[tup] Mirago

[tup] Irv Hartwig

Watch me destroying my country
TheMadCr0w Gentle Laborer from Insignificant Little Blue Planet Since: Aug, 2015 Relationship Status: Get out of here, STALKER
Gentle Laborer
#44007: May 11th 2024 at 9:14:23 AM

  • True Detective: Night Country: Kate McKittrick is the corrupt businesswoman behind Silver Sky Mining, the company responsible for most of the tragedies plaguing Ennis. Controlling the town with her influence, Kate has Silver Sky intentionally contaminate the water as part of a deal with the scientists at Tsalal Arctic Research Station, resulting in innocent people—especially the town's native population—suffering from serious health issues. Kate's utter indifference to their pain leads to development of cancer, birth defects and irreparable genetic damage; nine stillbirths in three months; and protests being met with violence from the police, with Kate even using the cops to hide her involvement with Tsalal and eliminate witnesses.
  • American Horror Story: Delicate: Siobhan Corbyn is a narcissistic immortal being who has walked the Earth for millenia, spreading suffering and planting the seeds for her eventual plans of reshaping the world to her liking. As "The Auteur" of the Delicates, Siobhan is responsible for manipulating and corrupting countless women over the years, having them birth demonic babies that Siobhan will use to wage war against all men in the world and replace the status quo with her definition of what a matriarchy should be. Along the way, Siobhan has any loose end killed, including her most devoted follower; gaslights and torments her "best friend" Anna Alcott on a regular basis; and uses Anna as an unwitting surrogate for a baby that was made as a product of Siobhan having a child with Dexter, her own son, with the sole intention of having the baby be the first of a new breed of superior monsters created from the incestuous belief that her bloodline is the strongest. When Dexter is killed, Siobhan shrugs off his death and casually reveals to having harvested the testicles from his corpse to keep breeding more monsters.

Edited by TheMadCr0w on May 11th 2024 at 2:18:23 PM

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#44008: May 11th 2024 at 9:23:11 AM

  • Alex Rider Stormbreaker: Darrius Sayle is a wealthy businessman who plans on getting revenge for being bullied as a child on all of the schoolchildren in Britain. Sayle created the new Stormbreaker computers and donated one to every school in the country, so that when the Prime Minister activates them they'll release a deadly virus on all the children. When MI6 agent Ian Rider discovers the truth, Sayle has Yassen Gregorivich kill him and has Yassen execute one of his men for dropping a box. When Alex stops the activation, Sayle tries to kill Alex and activate the Stormbreakers himself.

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
KratsUf (Troper in training)
#44009: May 11th 2024 at 9:27:55 AM

Yes for Muscle Man, Mirror Man, Unicron, Iron Mask

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#44010: May 11th 2024 at 9:53:36 AM

Okay, requesting a pause on new writeups for the next several hours so I can clean out the Drafts.

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
LoadsAndLoadsOfFreeTime The Prosecutor from Newfoundland Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In bed with a green-skinned space babe
#44011: May 11th 2024 at 10:38:57 AM

[tup] to Muscle Man, Mirror Man, Unicron, Iron Mask, Mirago and Hartwig (looks like he's another Lambert situation, eh?).

Edited by LoadsAndLoadsOfFreeTime on May 11th 2024 at 10:39:13 AM

You've been kicked out of the Mickey Mouse Clubhouse. :(
KratsUf (Troper in training)
#44012: May 11th 2024 at 10:44:24 AM

Edited by KratsUf on May 11th 2024 at 5:44:44 PM

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#44013: May 11th 2024 at 11:12:12 AM

Since nobody has reserved it, calling The Acolyte.

Open for collab as always.

LarryMullen Since: May, 2015
#44014: May 11th 2024 at 11:14:25 AM

[up] Doesn't the show have to premiere first? We don't know if any characters will qualify yet.

TurlesTheVegan from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
#44015: May 11th 2024 at 11:14:55 AM

You can reserve something a month in advance of its premiere.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#44016: May 11th 2024 at 11:41:18 AM

Rider's getting a page, so...

Edited by ACW on May 11th 2024 at 2:46:19 PM

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
Atlantis1930 Since: May, 2012
#44017: May 11th 2024 at 11:49:57 AM

[tup] Muscle Man, Mirror Man.

Whilst I'm waiting to post the writeups due to the pause I have a very quick one from The Bill's Series 12 episode "Unlucky In Love".

Sgt. Matthew Boyden goes undercover after suspicions are raised that a dating agency is secretly using underage prostitutes as young as 12. As it turns out, that's exactly the case and it's run by a very unpleasant woman called Paula Turnbull.

What has she done?

Under the guise of a respectable dating agency, Turnbull would go out and find underage girls who were runaways and provide them with clean clothes in return for a "few favours". Namely, satisfying pedophiles who specifically want to have sex with underage girls that she hunts down using her legitimate dating agency as cover. We meet two of the traffiked victims, and one of them describes how she was raped by these depraved men up to 3 times a day for years, with Turnbull taking nearly all of the money and using them as slave labour.

After one of them is nearly killed whilst "working" Sgt. Boyden went undercover and Turnbull immediately tries to sell him one of her victims. It backfires, however, as the victim reveals her entire operation upon hearing about how her friend was nearly killed, giving him enough evidence to arrest her and putting an end to her horrific operation.

Redeeming Qualities or Freudian Excuse?

Not a chance. Every scene with her is the definition of Faux Affably Evil. She's polite to Boyden when she's trying to interest him in underage girls and that's it.

Heinous Standard?

There are only one set of keeps from this show involving sex trafficking so far (specifically a trio from much later on) and whilst Turnbull certainly lacks their onscreen victim count (mostly due to the fact that it's only a 20 minute episode) we still get more than enough to show that what happened to the two girls has happened to possibly dozens of others and that all of this was just routine business for her. Also, whilst her operation is smaller than the existing keeps this is mostly because she lacks the resources that the later trafficking keeps do as they have an entire criminal network at their disposal. Additionally, trafficking is very rare for this show. For all that then? Easily passes it, especially for the show's earlier seasons.

Conclusion?

Yep.

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#44019: May 11th 2024 at 11:57:44 AM

[tup]turnbull

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#44022: May 11th 2024 at 12:14:19 PM

[tup] Turnbull

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
jlvs200s Jogo from The Netherlands (Troper in training) Relationship Status: At the center of everything that happens to me
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#44024: May 11th 2024 at 12:23:39 PM

[tup] Turnbull

  • "Bumblebee", by Bentley Little: The redneck is a racist psychopath and murderer who kills anybody he suspects of being illegal immigrants. Responsible for a slew of racially motivated murders, including burning 14 immigrants alive in a semi-truck, the redneck hopes to storm Father Lopez’s church and kill all the Salvadoran immigrants in his basement. When the narrator’s hired by Lopez to gather evidence on the redneck, the redneck beats his friend Trinidad to near death in retaliation, with Trinidad dying from his wounds. Later murdering Father Lopez, the redneck is eventually captured by the undead corpses of his victims, enough to have filled an entire graveyard.
  • City Hunter (2024): The unnamed head of Union Teope’s Japan division is tasked with creating an enhanced version of the combat drug Angel Dust to be sold on the black market. Harboring a disdain for those he deems weak, the head uses cosmetics company Lore as a front to experiment on runaway kids and homeless people, unleashing some in Shinjuku to cause terror and eventually die from the drug’s effects, with one of them killing Kaori Makimura’s brother Hideyuki. When one of his subjects, the cosplayer Kurumi, escapes with some samples of the drug, the head orders his lackeys to retrieve her, even killing a random henchman to instill fear in them. Killing a cop after he brings him Kurumi, the head kills Lore’s CEO and orders his men to massacre the scientists and test subjects after finding no use in them anymore. Hoping to make an escape with Kurumi in hand, the head sadistically reveals to Kaori that he was responsible for the death of her father.

"No running in the halls!"
TheGrayFox ....Phenomenal from A Lovecraftian fishing village Since: Sep, 2011
....Phenomenal
#44025: May 11th 2024 at 1:35:38 PM

[tup] for Mirror Man, Unicron, Muscle Man, and Turnbull.

There remains a foothold out of this mire — now climb.

Total posts: 45,069
Top