#2: May 6th 2018 at 10:42:17 PM
Previous thread. The suggestion's an improvement.
TheUnsquished
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#4: May 6th 2018 at 11:41:34 PM
I like it.
(Annoyed grunt)
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#5: May 7th 2018 at 2:47:42 AM
Better than the current.
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#6: May 7th 2018 at 2:49:37 AM
i like it.
"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
#7: May 7th 2018 at 3:06:27 AM
It's clearer.
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#8: May 7th 2018 at 6:56:00 AM
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#9: May 7th 2018 at 8:22:06 AM
Suggestion.
Health sure is versatile. It's possible to be both light-headed and dim-witted. At the same time, no less.
miraculous
Goku Black
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#12: May 8th 2018 at 1:13:32 AM
"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
#14: May 9th 2018 at 7:42:07 AM
Health sure is versatile. It's possible to be both light-headed and dim-witted. At the same time, no less.
TheUnsquished
Filthy casual
from Southern Limey Land
(Life not ruined yet)
Relationship Status: Married to the job
#15: May 9th 2018 at 8:26:36 AM
I'll go with 11.
(Annoyed grunt)
#16: May 9th 2018 at 11:14:34 AM
It highlights the trope, and it's funny.
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#17: May 9th 2018 at 9:15:12 PM
It's added and tagged; locking up.
Total posts: 17
edited 6th May '18 5:45:06 PM by eroock