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TheMuse Since: Aug, 2011 Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
#1: Oct 25th 2014 at 9:05:11 AM

My setting is in the modern day, but in a secluded area of the United States (I'm not exactly sure where, but somewhere on the east coast probably) there is a small town where, due to supernatural means, the people there do not age. This place has existed and been affected since the 17th - 18th century. Their community is effectively self sufficient and they have very limited contact with the outside world (except the higher ups do interact with it to some degree) Citizens are not allowed to leave for any reason (except for children who are reared in a small settlement just outside of the town until they reach adulthood and pregnant women because otherwise they wouldn't gestate) under punishment of death for not only them, but their family as well. Outsiders are very much discouraged from entering. Their society's morals are mostly in line with those of much earlier centuries.

  • And to clarify some of the specifics of the "no aging" thing before someone says "that doesn't make sense. how the hell have they managed to sustain themselves for centuries?"
    • While the town is in "no aging" mode, female citizens are incapable of going through hormonal cycles and are temporarily sterile.
    • Citizens CAN die from things such as psychical injuries, poisoning and illness. When someone within the town's borders dies, the aging is temporarily turned back on until someone is born within the town's borders.

I have a few questions regarding this however:

  • What is a 17th-18th century sect of Christianity that settled in the U.S. that could believably warp into a cult-ish and immortality supporting belief system (I'm not asking you to make a list of Christian sects that would take over the world, I mean ones that prioritized aspects such as close knit communities and isolationism and such)
  • Considering the town has the values of a 17th-18th colonial America, they most likely would very much disapprove of women engaging in premarital sex. But while the town is in "aging off" mode, women can't become pregnant which would be the biggest repercussion for engaging in that. How could I reconcile this?
  • Also, eventually the town's "magic" stops working for whatever reason and I'm still not sure what kind of magic actually makes it possible in the first place, just that through actions of one character it stops working. I'm not sure if I want to make it connected to some Immortality Inducer artifact that gets destroyed or if the whole system is due to people behind the scenes having it Powered by a Forsaken Child, only to have it be interrupted and stop working.

Any thoughts about this would be appreciated :)

Leliel Sir Night, Wayward Hunter-Angel Since: Aug, 2009
Sir Night, Wayward Hunter-Angel
#2: Oct 26th 2014 at 7:59:14 AM

The defining trait of a cult is generally its leader, and the emotional abuse he (it's usually a he) puts the cult members through to become the center of their world.

I'd say the inventor/finder of the immortality artifact is a good candidate, even if he lies about where it comes from. He could describe himself as a prophet who God acted through to give the town their immortality, in order to preserve their faith past the Great Tribulation-or-something. Anything to keep the other townies in his web. He also wants the cult to grow, so he created a system of proscribed births and theology that explained his criteria (naturally, he and his direct lieutenants are the judges for this criteria).

So there's a start.

edited 26th Oct '14 8:03:44 AM by Leliel

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TheMuse Since: Aug, 2011 Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
#3: Oct 27th 2014 at 8:20:46 AM

I could probably have their religion be a mishmash of 16-17th century Christian principles (considering they' were already broken off from the major religions of the day) It would be plausible for them to at least change slightly over the centuries, right?

  • But if for a majority of the time, people don't have to worry about ST Ds or pregnancies, how would their community dissuade people from engaging in premarital sex?

  • And would it be less believable for the community to have almost NO contact with the outside world or for higher ups to have some interaction with it? (Outsiders occasionally end up in the town because they are traveling through the area and get stranded, but that's not the norm)

edited 27th Oct '14 8:20:58 AM by TheMuse

Sharysa Since: Jan, 2001
#4: Oct 28th 2014 at 10:02:38 PM

Perhaps they believe (through the leader's persuasion) the lack of aging is a gift from God, or that they lack original sin because of their beliefs? After all, hardships and shortened lifespans only happened when Adam and Eve were cast out of Eden. "Sex Before Marriage = Becoming Sinners Like Everyone Else" would be a good incentive to keep people from premarital sex.

edited 28th Oct '14 10:03:37 PM by Sharysa

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