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Trip Since: Mar, 2012
#326: May 4th 2015 at 7:55:21 AM

HEY SPAZ GET OVER HERE

~Wonder Squid

edited 4th May '15 7:55:33 AM by Trip

And then there was silence
WonderSquid Since: May, 2012
#327: May 4th 2015 at 11:00:47 AM

It doesn't work if you edit the markup in, I think.

Both accepted, at any rate. Do either of you have any questions?

astrokitty Happiness is a cup of tea from Somewhere Out There Since: May, 2014 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Happiness is a cup of tea
#328: May 4th 2015 at 11:52:58 AM

Just one. When roleplaying, do I do it in third-person or first person Po V?

Somebody once told me the world was macaroni, I took a bite out of a tree
WonderSquid Since: May, 2012
#329: May 4th 2015 at 11:55:28 AM

Whichever you're more comfortable with, though most of us use third person.

thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#330: May 4th 2015 at 11:55:49 AM

it's up to you

generally when people rp here they don't do prose, but a weird script format

compare

Johnny So-And-So goes to get a soda pop.

to

-goes to get a soda pop-

ultimately, it is a matter of personal style, so do whatever you're used to/want to do

UN JOUR JE SERAI DE RETOUR PRÈS DE TOI
astrokitty Happiness is a cup of tea from Somewhere Out There Since: May, 2014 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Happiness is a cup of tea
#331: May 5th 2015 at 4:13:42 AM

Thank you!

Somebody once told me the world was macaroni, I took a bite out of a tree
darkdestinysoul Since: Mar, 2015
#332: May 5th 2015 at 7:38:59 AM

Sigh, this is my second time writing this. (My laptop crashed before I finished double checking it) Anyway I like to do RP, I also have this character for a story I want to develop for a story. So lets do both at once and do some RP with him to practice getting into his head.

  • Name: Lucius Drake
  • Age: 17
  • Gender: Male

  • Appearance: Lucius is 5'6 (167cm) tall and is thinly built with little muscle definition. His skin is very pale though lightly freckled and a small scar no longer than a inch is on the lower part of his right cheek. He has short straight chestnut brown hair and deep blue eyes that are oddly reflective. He wears a dark blue t-shirt with a white long sleeved undershirt and black trousers. He wears a small silver chain loosely around his neck. (Sorry haven't gotten a image of him drawn yet.) Edit: Well Kazuma from Kaze no Stigma is decently close to what I imagine.

  • Personality:Lucius is overall shy, quiet and introverted. He is rather timid and dislikes conflict when unnecessary. (Issues with being physically weak and family reasons on-top.) He is however curious and kindhearted, listening deeply to the concerns of others even if he is too shy to respond. He is good natured and while reluctant and afraid to get into conflict still does when he sees others being mistreated or in a danger. (Even at common risk to his own well being.)

  • Abilities: Lucius has a variety of Psychic Powers ranging from Telekinesis, Pyro/ Cryokenisis and a form of Telepathy reliant on physical contact with the target. He also gets the added benefit of Psychic Nosebleed in addition to other drawbacks such as tiredness, extreme hunger and possibly worse symptoms when he overuses his abilities. Lucius also has a incredible memory, one which sometimes haunts him as he can't just forget events.

  • Password: Did you read the rules? ( Yes! sunstar )

I don't know if that is enough for my OC but I have some notes to pour through if you want more.

edited 5th May '15 7:53:00 AM by darkdestinysoul

"After time adrift among open stars, along tides of light and through shoals of dust, I will return to where I began."
Trip Since: Mar, 2012
#333: May 5th 2015 at 7:42:41 AM

If you can't get him drawn, I reccomend finding a faceclaim as a temporary substitute until you can. Otherwise, up to ~Wonder Squid

And then there was silence
Azure Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist from The World Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: We finish each other's sandwiches
Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist
#334: May 5th 2015 at 7:48:40 AM

Yes like Trip said you need an avatar. There are lots of art sites out there so you might be able to find something that looks approximately like him.

Otherwise its a pretty great profile.

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darkdestinysoul Since: Mar, 2015
#335: May 5th 2015 at 7:53:06 AM

Well in that case I have edited the post with a character who is decently close enough. His eyes are a little bright in that image and there is no scar on the cheek (though I could edit that in) but it is close enough.

"After time adrift among open stars, along tides of light and through shoals of dust, I will return to where I began."
WonderSquid Since: May, 2012
#336: May 5th 2015 at 7:53:35 AM

You are going to need an avatar. It doesn't have to be a perfect likeness but you will need something. I would recommend Zerochan's original tag for OCs, since the artwork there tends to be SFW, if not rather stylised at times. Or deviantArt, but I'm ass at navigating DA so I couldn't help you there. Once you do that, though, feel free to join.

Oop, just realised you have an image. Just go ahead and crop that and you should be good to go.

edited 5th May '15 8:00:19 AM by WonderSquid

darkdestinysoul Since: Mar, 2015
#337: May 5th 2015 at 8:01:43 AM

Thanks, especially on the fast response time. I will go and crop that down.

"After time adrift among open stars, along tides of light and through shoals of dust, I will return to where I began."
darkdestinysoul Since: Mar, 2015
#338: May 5th 2015 at 8:41:27 AM

Opps sorry, clicked post here by accident. Not sure if there is a way to delete posts...

edited 5th May '15 8:42:16 AM by darkdestinysoul

"After time adrift among open stars, along tides of light and through shoals of dust, I will return to where I began."
WonderSquid Since: May, 2012
#339: May 5th 2015 at 8:43:53 AM

There isn't. You just have to blank them, mostly.

darkdestinysoul Since: Mar, 2015
#340: May 5th 2015 at 10:36:15 AM

Damn it, I am closing this tab so I stop doing this... ;( Sorry

edited 5th May '15 10:36:45 AM by darkdestinysoul

"After time adrift among open stars, along tides of light and through shoals of dust, I will return to where I began."
Imca (Veteran)
#341: May 5th 2015 at 10:42:11 AM

you can aslo use the word "thump" [[enclosed like this]]

I would show the actual markup, but it is the only markup that cant be nulled out.

YOLOisfox Something something DBZ from your closet Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: And here's to you, Mrs. Robinson
Something something DBZ
#342: May 18th 2015 at 6:29:33 AM

Name:LEEEEEEROOOOOOOY JENKINSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

Age: 56

Gender: male

Appearance: Leeroy Jenkins he is my avatar so yeah.

Personality: he is dumb hotheaded and likes chicken

Abilities:not much so yeah

Password: Sunstar

edited 18th May '15 6:30:20 AM by YOLOisfox

What is a man? A miserable pile of secrets, but enough talk have at you!
ramuf Electric Heart from the Shining Throne Since: Jan, 2013
Electric Heart
#343: May 18th 2015 at 6:39:57 AM

Sorry, but your signup is way too sparse. We need more detail.

Trip Since: Mar, 2012
#344: May 18th 2015 at 6:59:34 AM

Joke characters as your first character tends to go badly, from what we've seen, as a warning

And then there was silence
ramuf Electric Heart from the Shining Throne Since: Jan, 2013
Electric Heart
TheKaBlammer Meh own orginal character geiz! from The RP I made this for Since: May, 2015 Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
Meh own orginal character geiz!
#346: Jun 4th 2015 at 5:23:32 PM

Name: Kuro Kami


Age: 13
Gender: Male
Appearance: Kuro usually wears a black tank top with some sort of theming on it, whether an anime or cartoon. He also has black hair, styled like Spike Spiegel's hair, red and white cat ears that he obscures with his hair to fit in with humans, a pair of jeans, a pair of Swiss Gear sneakers, glasses, a white cat tail, and he always has his headphones on. Occasionally, he will also don the goggles Radical Edward wore.
Personality: Kuro is a Deadpan Snarker who likes to be alone and either ponder or watch TV. Also, being a loner all his life, he has become an otaku, but not to unhealthy levels. Also, when he's not being pestered, he can actually be pretty cheerful, while keeping his smart wisecracks hidden in his gigantic hairdo. He is also obsessed with the '90s, but not to the point of every singular thing from that decade. He is also what he likes to call "semi-OCD." There are certain places that wants neatly placed together and in order, and not just messy. Finally, he...can get really depressed, despite his cartoonish appearance and other personality traits. He was raised by two regular humans, as his parents were too lazy and hateful of Kiro to raise him and sent him to Earth, and is now homeless, so he can get really down, and if somebody ticks him off during these days, he can get really mad. His personality is a result of him never actually interacting with somebody that was his species. His sarcastic and sometimes humorous ways and TV watchinv are a way to help him escape from reality, and it works, for a relatively long time, too. But he's not a comic relief. If anything, he's more sarcastic and depressed-sounding than comical, most of the time.
Abilities: Being an alien (an Nekohito, to be exact), he has many strange abilities. He can transform into an actual cat with his signature hair, glasses, and headphones, to sneak up to enemies or nearby friends. He can also run a good 30 mph when prompted, 7 mph faster than the fastest human alive. Being a catperson, basically, he can climb on walls, as well. Finally, he has the ability to inspect food to see if it has toxins or other dangerous substances.
Species Explanation: An Nekohito is your average anime alien creature. A human with cat features, such as ears, a tail, and the like. However, unlike a Catgirl, their genes are special, in which some have specific catlike features, powers, and weaknesses, while others don't. For example, like actual cats, Kiro is allergic to raisins/grapes, and can climb on walls, thanks to thicker, slightly longer claws. Others might lack this ability, still walk on all fours, and more.
Password: Of course I did. sunstar
Update: I changed around some of things, such as the names of my character and his species, his personality, and extracted all signs of a plucky comic relief I could notice. Hopefully, this works slightly better.

edited 4th Jun '15 6:34:49 PM by TheKaBlammer

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ramuf Electric Heart from the Shining Throne Since: Jan, 2013
Electric Heart
#347: Jun 4th 2015 at 5:35:02 PM

Well, the first thing that strikes me is that he seems to be a little meme-y. Of course, that's not a perfect word to use, but having most of his personality be related to pop culture gives me that impression.

His name being Otaku Fudgelord also contributes to that. It seems to be mostly for laughs than for anything else. Now, playing someone for humor is fine, but your first character should be more grounded.

Also, and not to nitpick, but you didn't explain what an Ikimato is. If it's important to be mentioned, there should be a little explanation of it.

In my eyes, it's not an acceptable signup right now.

edited 4th Jun '15 5:41:14 PM by ramuf

Boxen whatever he can Since: Jan, 2013
whatever he can
#348: Jun 4th 2015 at 5:46:40 PM

To add to what Ramuf said, I wouldn't start with a character whose express purpose is humor. Humor is fine as a part of a character, where it can be used effectively through timing and wit, but when humor is the whole, not the part, it can become expected. The character also strikes me as one of these characters, especially the name and the personality.

I'm not the GM so I can't say anything, but I'd suggest revising your signup with this in mind.

dead devotion
ramuf Electric Heart from the Shining Throne Since: Jan, 2013
Electric Heart
#349: Jun 4th 2015 at 7:37:57 PM

Saw the edit.

Also, when he's not being pestered, he can actually be pretty cheerful

Finally, he...can get really depressed

I know you acknowledged that it clashes with the happy-go-lucky jokester part, but I really think it just doesn't gel. Most people don't wildly alternate between those two very easily.

It's a little disjointed, I think, and that's not a good thing for any character.

My advice is to start from the ground up and not try to blend the two. If you can, try to make the character more focused.

Oh also.

I didn't catch this earlier. The password is wrong. You need to read the rules, or we won't let you in.

edited 4th Jun '15 7:56:05 PM by ramuf

Azure Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist from The World Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: We finish each other's sandwiches
Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist
#350: Jun 4th 2015 at 7:50:15 PM

Yeah. What Ramuf said.

It doesn't have to be totally depressing or totally jokey and quirky but we'd like to see a character with a focused personality. Think up some traits and think about how he came to develop those from his previous experiences.

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