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Synchronicity (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
#1: Nov 28th 2013 at 11:46:05 PM

Perhaps the first, fourth, seventh, and eighth panels from this?

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#2: Nov 28th 2013 at 11:53:02 PM

That's a clickthrough page, for me. Going through it ... I can't see how the combo relates to the trope.

edited 28th Nov '13 11:55:05 PM by SeptimusHeap

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#3: Nov 28th 2013 at 11:56:27 PM

It's a long way to go, I'll admit.

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#4: Nov 29th 2013 at 3:48:32 AM

Good example, but I think trying to work those into a pic would be problematic.

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#5: Nov 29th 2013 at 4:48:29 AM

Panels 1, 2, and 3 (or either of 1 or 2 alone. 3 alone doesn't work since the story is cut off) are a better illustration of the trope. The panels suggested in the OP are the joke, but they don't have much to do with the trope.

edited 29th Nov '13 4:49:27 AM by Madrugada

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#6: Nov 29th 2013 at 6:49:31 AM

Or maybe this Penny Arcade strip (also listed in the examples)? (Actually, the Oglaf one is too.)

edited 29th Nov '13 7:09:21 AM by Synchronicity

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#7: Nov 29th 2013 at 7:48:51 AM

[up]The panels have too much text, which I don't think will be very legible when shrunk down to Wiki size.

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#8: Nov 29th 2013 at 8:15:28 AM

The Penny Arcade just panels 1 & 2 would work.

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#9: Nov 30th 2013 at 6:48:26 AM

[up] Here's a couple of takes on that.

 

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#10: Nov 30th 2013 at 6:52:57 AM

And here's a take on the Oglaf strip...I think I prefer it to the PA ones. I tried a couple of different arrangements but the layout was too awkward.

edited 30th Nov '13 6:56:56 AM by Willbyr

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#11: Nov 30th 2013 at 6:57:41 AM

I'll take the Oglaf one simply because I can't get my head around that being his kid.

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#12: Nov 30th 2013 at 7:31:44 AM

I like the arrangement in 10. I also prefer it over PA, since I think the forest setting helps with the imagery of the trope. It's also more direct to the point, and the text is much easier to read.

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#14: Nov 30th 2013 at 10:49:31 AM

I prefer the Oglaf as well. For most of the same reasons, plus, the text is larger and easier to read. And it implies that there are lots of Just So Stories.

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#15: Nov 30th 2013 at 4:58:18 PM

[tup] to 10. The caption can be the rest of the comic - "Some guy stabbed me in the stomach!" "We've been through this - that's your belly button."

edited 30th Nov '13 5:00:59 PM by Synchronicity

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#16: Nov 30th 2013 at 5:10:30 PM

[up] Heh...that works for me.

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#17: Nov 30th 2013 at 6:18:26 PM

lol

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#18: Dec 1st 2013 at 1:34:43 AM

@10 seems fine for me.

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#19: Dec 1st 2013 at 3:01:12 AM

I like 10 best as well, making 8 (I think) [tup] votes; up, potholed, tagged, and given the suggested caption.

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