Yeah, that works. The people are a little small, but they're there, and the overall tone is correct.
Check out my fanfiction!25 works.
25
Russell... likes to hurt people... for PEACE.A couple more votes for 25 and we can...well, run with it.
I still think the comic panel I suggested in 14 would work best. We can change Future Imperfect to something like the in-universe crime drama Concrete Universe from Starslip Crisis to free it up. Here's an example of it:
I don't get Crystal Spires and Togas from that PBF comic at all.
It's got the architecture and the people in robes, but I think it's more apt where it is, and the suggestion to replace it on Future Imperfect is much weaker.
...if you don’t love you’re dead, and if you do, they’ll kill you for it.25 isn't bad but what about JorEl◊?
More character than setting.
Check out my fanfiction!Yeah, that is a character image there.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanI'll throw in a vote for 25 here - this is one of those tropes which is a little hard to demonstrate with an image to me, but 25 certainly works.
"Did you expect somebody else?"Throwing in my support for @25.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanGood enough. 25 is up, potholed, and tagged. Caption or no?
Hearing nothing, let's lock up.
Pretty good.