Dragonball Fanfiction

I should probably have used the humor mode tag earlier. Not decrying your depiction, just trying to add to the joke.

I took it as constructive critique, so no harm done.

Since it doesn't feel like there's enough mayhem just using Shinji and the Nerima crew, any other crossovers come to mind I might throw in?

Are you familiar with Is This A Zombie?

Nope.

Although, maybe I can find a way to work Liquid in there somehow...

OH MY GOD, I HAVE TO THROW IN JAGI.

edited 9th Dec '13 11:51:23 AM by EvaUnit01

Don't forget to bring in Pilaf and his minions.

I'm sure I would've remembered them sooner or later.

Also, Hyper, while I've sort-of got your attention, can ya check out my latest post on the Gundam fanfic thread and give me your thoughts?

Something seems off about Allelujah's reaction, but it's not something I can put my finger on. Other than that, my main thought is wondering if this is some sort of Transformers crossover.

Yeah, I'm sure that Allelujah was a bit off. I tried to give the impression that he took Setsuna's claim for a joke at first (first time for everything, right?).

And no, it's not a Transformers crossover. It does become a Crisis Crossover of the Gundam franchise later on, though.

Basically, the fic's premise boils down to "Instant A.I.: Just Add Water! as applied to everything bearing the name 'Gundam'." Exia's characterization will become much more apparent in the next snippet, whenever I can manage to find a closing for it.

There. I think that's the problem. Setsuna doesn't joke, so Allelujah wouldn't take it as a joke. He would probably conclude that the Exia was being stolen.

Yeeaaaaaaaaaaaaah I probably should change that. Thing is, Setsuna would know if it had been stolen. I mean, he saw it literally get up and walk away. If it had been stolen, he would've said so, wouldn't he?

<sigh> Probably thinking too hard.

Next snippet will attempt to inject actual humor into it.

It could have been that someone took control of it remotely. Or that they managed to get into it without being seen. Or even that someone implanted it with a basic A.I. With instructions to take the Gundam to a preset location.

Edit: Is it just me, or is it kind of odd that we're discussing Gundam00 in the Dragonball fanfic thread.

edited 9th Dec '13 11:51:12 PM by Hyp3rB14d3

I also replied in the Gundam thread, but you didn't respond again there, so the discussion just kind of wound up being here.

Back to the 'bunch of crossover people seeking out the Dragon Balls' thing for a moment, thinking of throwing in [[Anime/{{Pokémon}} Team Rocket]].

.... I was about to do their In the Name of the Moon speech, and suddenly I can't properly remember how it goes.

This should help.

Remember that dead fic I mentioned on page one where Yamcha runs into Raditz, pulls off a fluke victory, is subsequently abducted by Gero, and Goku arrives just in time to find Piccolo and now recovered Raditz duking it out with no sign of Yamcha anywhere? It updated. Three times.

So yeah, it doesn't seem to be dead anymore.

Down With The Sickness: In the years between the Cell and Buu sagas, an alien ship crash lands onto earth. It carries a stasis frozen Black Band Saiyan, a saiyan with Auto Mutation Syndrome, a disease that causes the power levels of the infected to skyrocket, random mutations to occur, and locks the infected into a mad rage. And in saiyans, causes them to transform into the Oozaru state whenever they are conscious. The worst part: if anyone infected with Auto Mutation Syndrome dies, the disease immediately converts into an extremely lethal variant that kills anything it comes into contact with and spreads on a galactic scale. And it's contagious...

Bringer of Death has updated with Chapter 80.

So between Bringer of Death, Fall of the Tyrant Frieza, and...the Radditz one, which of the Fan Fics with its own tropes page is superior?

The Raditz one? Are you talking about Break Through the Limit?

Yeah, yeah, yeah. Couldn't remember the name, just knew Radditz was the trope picture.

I've yet to read The Fall Of Lord Freeza, but I like Break Through The Limit more than Bringer of Death. Part of it is probably due to me not being a huge Vegeta fan, and Bringer of Death is all about Vegeta. Break Through the Limit, on the other hand, does a fairly good job of giving everyone their time in the spotlight (even if Goku and Raditz do spend more time there than anyone else). Plus, Break Through the Limit is further along than Bringer of Death and has fewer OCs, which is always a plus in my book.

And on that note, there's a new chapter of Bringer of Death.

Cell's disrupted energy is going to become the foundation for Janemba.

Here's another fic: Reign.

The story of a universe where Frieza... continued his reign.

I'm not sure if this belongs here or the Fanfic idea's thread but anyway.

I had this idea for a story. Right around the time of the battle with Cell, some sort of mystical entity or entity's decide he is such a threat that they grant Reality Warper levels of power to one of the strongest fighters on Earth. However this is only for a very short amount of time (equal to or less than 60 seconds).

Unfortunately, they just so happen to choose Mr. Satan, while he is claiming to have defeated Cell. As a result he becomes exactly as powerful as he boasts, and as a result of claiming ki attacks are "tricks" they become just that.

I'm not exactly sure which direction this story would take from there though.

Interesting.

Right now, I'm looking at all the ways to increase power-levels in order to create different fights. The known methods are:

• Training;
• the Sacred Water;
• both methods of Fusion;
• The Majin power-up;
• Elder-Kai's power up ritual;
• Guru's pulling out of hidden potential
• and Cyborg conversion

I'm looking at a good way to, for example, allow Bojack's gang to match up against the Kaioshin gods. They were all weaker than Super Saiyan 2, and outside of East Kaioshin / Supreme Kai, the power levels of the other Supreme Kais is unknown outside of being much stronger then Frieza, being obviously weaker than Buu, and East Kaioshin being the weakest of them.

It seems like he was possibly weaker then Super Saiyan 2 (otherwise he wouldn't have backed off when Goku threatened him back when Babidi was trying to make him fight Vegeta), but that doesn't say anything about the power levels of the rest of them. Then again, Kid Buu was also much weaker than Super Buu, and possibly even Fat Buu before they were separated.

It's hard to gauge really.