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Spark9 Gentleman Troper! from Castle Wulfenbach Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Gentleman Troper!
#1: Jul 10th 2011 at 2:32:23 PM

Gee, what do you want to do in this thread? ... The same thing we do in every thread - try to Guess The Trope!

Okay, today's trope is Squeaking Carpet. Despite the name, it isn't really related to tapestries, and rather more to the quote I just put up above (and while popculturally sound, the "squeaking" part is not really factual either). 23 wicks, 19 inbounds says "not healthy" to me. Can we rename it to something better?

Rhetorical, eh? ... Eight!
Xtifr World's Toughest Milkman Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
World's Toughest Milkman
#2: Jul 10th 2011 at 2:39:36 PM

I can't even say "I Thought It Meant", because I came up utterly blank on this one.

Speaking words of fandom: let it squee, let it squee.
LouieW Loser from Babycowland Since: Aug, 2009
Loser
#3: Jul 10th 2011 at 2:55:53 PM

There is now a single proposition rename crowner for this trope here.

I think this name is rather non-indicative, especially the carpet part, so I support a rename.

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Leaper Since: May, 2009
#4: Jul 10th 2011 at 4:13:00 PM

Worse, the description takes until the end of the second paragraph to actually clearly explain the trope and thus how the name applies to it. I may do some juggling there.

Balmung Since: Oct, 2011
#5: Jul 10th 2011 at 4:18:44 PM

Wow, all three redirects would make a much better title for this.

Leaper Since: May, 2009
#6: Jul 10th 2011 at 4:26:09 PM

Okay, rewrote the description. Now readers don't have to go through two paragraphs of setup to get to what the trope is actually about.

Good or no?

Oh, and I Thought It Meant when a carpeted floor squeaks to give away a sneaking person, even though it shouldn't because of the, well, carpet.

edited 10th Jul '11 4:41:18 PM by Leaper

TheJackal Lurker from the UK Since: Dec, 2009
Lurker
#7: Jul 10th 2011 at 4:42:35 PM

I like the new description. Sums up concisely and effectively what the trope is, and is generally much better than the previous one.

As for the name, while it does create a very evocative mental image it definitely needs to be changed because it doesn't have a particularly obvious connection to the trope itself. Rat Horde and Swarm of Rats are both much clearer and would be better main titles for the trope.

Spark9 Gentleman Troper! from Castle Wulfenbach Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Gentleman Troper!
#8: Jul 10th 2011 at 4:43:40 PM

Wait, what? Swarms of mice? Rats that eat through metal? Magical exponential reproduction? This is starting to sound like a comedy trope instead of nightmare fuel.

Rhetorical, eh? ... Eight!
nrjxll Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Not war
#9: Jul 10th 2011 at 4:45:37 PM

The description does have something of an... exaggerated quality to it. Attack Of The Rats? (kidding)

I agree the name is pretty bad.

Leaper Since: May, 2009
#11: Jul 10th 2011 at 4:54:00 PM

[up][up][up] Those parts are retained from the original description. If they should be cut, or at least reduced, feel free.

Xtifr World's Toughest Milkman Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
World's Toughest Milkman
#12: Jul 10th 2011 at 5:04:08 PM

I'm pretty sure swarms of mice is a real variant, albeit not as common. Swarms of mice eating the fields to the ground and leaving the people starving is probably more common than swarms of mice eating people, though, which may or may not fit here.

Speaking words of fandom: let it squee, let it squee.
Ackbar96 It's a trope! from my secret lair. Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Leaper Since: May, 2009
#14: Jul 10th 2011 at 5:45:52 PM

Some are only appropriate if, as suggested above, the trope is expanded to cover (or already covers) large swarms of rodents regardless of whether or not they eat anyone or are meant to be scary (though I'd imagine 99% of the time they are meant to be scary).

ETA: Hmm, the mention of Cruel and Unusual Death in the description, and the indexing in Horror Tropes, seems to limit it to scary deaths... Though again, we could expand.

edited 10th Jul '11 8:04:44 PM by Leaper

Deboss I see the Awesomeness. from Awesomeville Texas Since: Aug, 2009
I see the Awesomeness.
#16: Jul 10th 2011 at 10:42:53 PM

Well, getting eaten by anything is generally considered rather scary.

Fight smart, not fair.
Spark9 Gentleman Troper! from Castle Wulfenbach Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Gentleman Troper!
#17: Jul 11th 2011 at 2:51:46 AM

We could name it Scary Rat Swarm, then...

Rhetorical, eh? ... Eight!
Camacan from Australiatown Since: Jan, 2001
Stratadrake Dragon Writer Since: Oct, 2009
Dragon Writer
#19: Jul 12th 2011 at 6:08:17 AM

I Thought It Meant when the floorboards underneath a carpet creak and ruin one's stalking. (Yes, the carpet itself isn't squeaking, but the floor under it). Given other people've revealed the answer I can see the connection ("floor carpeted with rats" or "Why is the carpet squeaking?" "That's no carpet." I call Moon Logic Title), but it's definitely not intuitive, and easily misleading.

edited 13th Jul '11 8:59:48 AM by Stratadrake

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melloncollie Since: Feb, 2012
#20: Jul 16th 2011 at 4:57:59 PM

Well, this is embarrassing.

At the time I proposed this in YKTTW it was just "The Rat Horde", which I thought was kinda lame-sounding. The only other alternative proposed was Squeaking Carpet, hence the current title.

I kinda like Rodent Onslaught for some reason, some variant of Ravenous Rats also sounds good, probably because of the alliteration.

Wait, what? Swarms of mice? Rats that eat through metal? Magical exponential reproduction? This is starting to sound like a comedy trope instead of nightmare fuel.
Those are all real-life properties of rodents, although the metal thing is a bit exaggerated. Rats can chew through metal wires but probably not through steel plating.

As for exponential reproduction, google "Australian mouse plague". That sorta thing tends to happen with any animal population that has a big food source and not enough predators around.

edited 16th Jul '11 5:03:18 PM by melloncollie

troacctid "µ." from California Since: Apr, 2010
#21: Jul 16th 2011 at 5:29:01 PM

I distinctly remember suggesting Swarm of Rats in the YKTTW. Checking...

According to Wikipedia, the proper collective terms would be a colony, horde, mischief, pack, plague, or swarm. I like Swarm of Rats best, personally; conjures up a good image of swarming rats.

Yup I definitely said that. And I still like Swarm of Rats.

Rhymes with "Protracted."
Auxdarastrix Since: May, 2010
#22: Jul 16th 2011 at 6:17:14 PM

Except that this trope include not just rats but all rodents. Therefore, any replacement name should say Rodent instead of Rat.

edited 16th Jul '11 6:17:54 PM by Auxdarastrix

Stratadrake Dragon Writer Since: Oct, 2009
Dragon Writer
#23: Jul 16th 2011 at 6:43:50 PM

Technically, but "rat" has more negative connotations that are not associated with rodentia in general.

An Ear Worm is like a Rickroll: It is never going to give you up.
melloncollie Since: Feb, 2012
#24: Jul 16th 2011 at 11:09:56 PM

^^^ Blagh, sorry for misremembering. I vaguely recall not liking that name, but I can't remember the reasoning other than "kinda bland".

I don't think the Rodent vs. Rat distinction is all that important, the title invoking the image of a Zerg Rush of little furry things that're gonna eat you is what's important. Rat does sound slightly more threatening.

edited 16th Jul '11 11:11:35 PM by melloncollie

DoktorvonEurotrash Since: Jan, 2001
#25: Jul 17th 2011 at 1:14:16 AM

Definitely needs changing. Whoever thought this name was a good idea?

I like Geoduck's Wall To Wall Rats.

edited 17th Jul '11 1:14:26 AM by DoktorvonEurotrash

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