Loud Visions
Loud Visions 2
- Ass Pull:
- In chapter 11, Lincoln randomly gets the ability to teleport himself and objects out of nowhere.
- A never before heard of man named Edge appears at the end of chapter 14 and after Lincoln kills him in the next chapter Lori randomly asks him if he can absorb his powers, and he does just that.
- The whole point of the trip to Hawaii is to make it up to Lynn Jr. after her sisters sabotaged her but right before everyone finally goes in chapter 20, Rita reveals Lynn Jr. can not go.
- They Copied It, So It Sucks!: This story is slowly turning into Brother in Shade
. Rack44 even has a DeviantArt gallery called Sister in Shade. - Too Bleak, Stopped Caring: Despite the author's insistence that things will get better, some readers, especially when Chapter 19 came out, felt that Lynn had been increasingly pointlessly mistreated; even calling the story "Sister in Shade".
