Loud Visions
- Lucy is Lincoln's ally in much of the fanfic and decides to protect him from her sisters. She even thinks about stabbing Lynn, but then chooses to poison her with a burrito. So why in chapter 20, Lucy allies with her sisters in SFP, agreeing to guard the television with Lynn Jr. and Lola, even trying to attack Lincoln so he doesn't turn on the TV, exactly like in Brawl In The Family?
- In Chapter 19, Lincoln dreams of two alternative futures, both in which he is beaten by his sisters due to SFP. In the first, they beat him almost to death; in the second, he beats them almost to death. All of this would happen after Lincoln became the hero of the family and even the city, for saving Lana from being eaten alive by a crocodile. So one day he's worth a lot to his sisters and another day, he's just not worth anything to them anymore?
Loud Visions 2
- Lincoln has done several things to get payback on people in these stories, including his own family and Lynn Jr. is known to be much more aggressive than Lincoln. Why has Lynn Jr. not done anything to get payback on her sisters who sabotaged her and her baseball game?
- Chapter 17 explains that Lynn feels like the bad things that were happening to her was a form of punishment for being willing to kick Lincoln out of the house, let alone over bad luck.
- In chapter 14, Lincoln tells Lori they need to talk to Lana about her gross habits even though he did not see anything yet in his future visions about her getting sick from not bathing or eating things out of the garbage or from the ground. How does nothing bad like getting sick or severe digestive issues happen to Lana from doing these things?
- In the next chapter, he reveals that Lana will eat something (he doesn't know what) that will give her a bacterial infection and stomach cancer.
