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** Derek has had a terrible childhood. And it's not even a {{hilariously abusive|childhood}} one either; It's just plain sad. Derek chooses to hide this in fear he might not be considered "perfect".
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* '''Enforced''': "Well, Derek ''needs'' to have a flaw; otherwise how is Jason going to win his girl from him at the end?" "I know! Let's make him secretly a nutcase!"
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* '''Enforced''': '''Enforced''':
** "Well, Derek ''needs'' to have a flaw; otherwise how is Jason going to win his girl from him at the end?" "I know! Let's make him secretly anutcase!"nutcase!"
** Derek is a character made for an [[RolePlayingGame RPG]] with a flaws system; the “Broken” part was necessary to gain the points for the “Ace” part.
** "Well, Derek ''needs'' to have a flaw; otherwise how is Jason going to win his girl from him at the end?" "I know! Let's make him secretly a
** Derek is a character made for an [[RolePlayingGame RPG]] with a flaws system; the “Broken” part was necessary to gain the points for the “Ace” part.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Derek's the [[MartyStu absolutely perfect guy]] -- but only because his [[AbusiveParents parents beat into him the idea that]] the very ''second'' he makes even the '''slightest''' mistake, the whole world will scorn him and turn their backs in an instant.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Derek's the [[MartyStu absolutely perfect guy]] guy -- but only because his [[AbusiveParents parents beat into him the idea that]] the very ''second'' he makes even the '''slightest''' mistake, the whole world will scorn him and turn their backs in an instant.
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** Derek is BrilliantButLazy.
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* '''Subverted''': Derek has big problems and fears, but [[AngstWhatAngst he pushes his problems aside]] while he focus more on being TheAce, believing that as long as he tries his best, nothing is impossible and like any other human being, no one's perfect.
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** Derek has crippling fears of failure and success, but he manages to [[CharacterDevelopment develop]] into TheAce in spite of said fears.
* '''Subverted''': Derek has big problems and fears, but [[AngstWhatAngst he pushes his problems aside]]while he focus and focuses more on being TheAce, believing TheAce. He believes that as long as he tries his best, nothing is impossible and like any other human being, no one's perfect.
* '''Subverted''': Derek has big problems and fears, but [[AngstWhatAngst he pushes his problems aside]]
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* '''Implied''': By most indications, Derek is just TheAce. However, sometimes he seems a little upset.
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* '''Implied''': By most indications, Derek smiles and waves at the crowds of people cheering, but as soon as he is just TheAce. However, sometimes he seems a little upset.out of their sight, the smile chases away from his face and his hands start shaking.
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* '''Justified''': Derek has a psychological compulsion to be the best at everything to the point of self-destruction.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Derek has a psychological compulsion to be the best at everything to the point ofself-destruction.self-destruction.
** Derek has Avoidant Personality Disorder.
** Derek has a psychological compulsion to be the best at everything to the point of
** Derek has Avoidant Personality Disorder.
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* '''Implied''': By most indications, Derek is just TheAce. However, sometimes he seems a little upset.
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Jerkass Facade is being merged with Hidden Hearts Of Gold. Hidden Heart of Gold means the Jerkass has a nice side that they keep hidden. Jerk with a Heart of Gold means the character openly shows Jerkass and Nice Guy approaches.
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** Derek has a pretty impressive track record with [[{{Narcissist}} an ego to match]]...but [[TheFriendNobodyLikes gets little to no respect from everyone around him]] thanks to acting like a {{jerkass}}. Though he seems like an [[ArrogantKungFuGuy arrogant]] SmugSnake on the surface, he notably [[HeroicSelfDeprecation calls himself a screw up and expects himself to fail at everything]] whenever we get a glimpse of his internal monologue. Plus, the results of his JerkassFacade [[BreakTheHaughty really begin to take a toll on his psyche]].
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** Derek has a pretty impressive track record with [[{{Narcissist}} an ego to match]]...but [[TheFriendNobodyLikes gets little to no respect from everyone around him]] thanks to acting like a {{jerkass}}. Though he seems like an [[ArrogantKungFuGuy arrogant]] SmugSnake on the surface, he notably [[HeroicSelfDeprecation calls himself a screw up and expects himself to fail at everything]] whenever we get a glimpse of his internal monologue. Plus, the results of his JerkassFacade jerk act [[BreakTheHaughty really begin to take a toll on his psyche]].
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** Derek is an AlmightyJanitor. That is, he is completely unremarkable and nobody really cares about him, but Derek is more competent than he lets on.
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** Derek has a pretty impressive track record with [[TheNarcissist an ego to match]]...but [[TheFriendNobodyLikes gets little to no respect from everyone around him]] thanks to acting like a {{jerkass}}. Though he seems like an [[ArrogantKungFuGuy arrogant]] SmugSnake on the surface, he notably [[HeroicSelfDeprecation calls himself a screw up and expects himself to fail at everything]] whenever we get a glimpse of his internal monologue. Plus, the results of his JerkassFacade [[BreakTheHaughty really begin to take a toll on his psyche]].
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** Derek has a pretty impressive track record with [[TheNarcissist [[{{Narcissist}} an ego to match]]...but [[TheFriendNobodyLikes gets little to no respect from everyone around him]] thanks to acting like a {{jerkass}}. Though he seems like an [[ArrogantKungFuGuy arrogant]] SmugSnake on the surface, he notably [[HeroicSelfDeprecation calls himself a screw up and expects himself to fail at everything]] whenever we get a glimpse of his internal monologue. Plus, the results of his JerkassFacade [[BreakTheHaughty really begin to take a toll on his psyche]].
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** Derek has a pretty impressive track record with [[TheNarcissist an ego to match]]...but [[TheFriendNobodyLikes gets little to no respect from everyone around him]] thanks to acting like a {{jerkass}}. Though he seems like an [[ArrogantKungFuGuy arrogant]] SmugSnake on the surface, he notably [[HeroicSelfDeprecation calls himself a screw up and expects himself to fail at everything]] whenever we get a glimpse of his internal monologue. Plus, the results of his JerkassFacade [[BreakTheHaughty really begin to take a toll on his psyche]].
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Derek is attractive, well-liked, and multi-talented, but turns out to actually feel quite nervous in social situations and sometimes dislikes the recognition he receives.
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** And that he turned around and gloated to her to cover his tracks, because the thought that someone knows he's not perfect was eating him alive. Turning his moment of weakness into a SarcasticConfession retroactively.
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** And that That he turned around and gloated to her to cover his tracks, because the thought that someone knows he's not perfect was eating him alive. Turning his moment of weakness into a SarcasticConfession retroactively.
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* '''Invoked''': Derek's parents intentionally mind-screw him while driving him to become TheAce.
* '''Exploited''': They do so so that whenever Derek decides to turn his back on them, they would be able to pull off a HannibalLecture as a defence.
* '''Exploited''': They do so so that whenever Derek decides to turn his back on them, they would be able to pull off a HannibalLecture as a defence.
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* '''Invoked''': Derek's parents intentionally mind-screw him while driving him to become TheAce.
TheAce so he'll be a WellDoneSonGuy.
* '''Exploited''':They do so so that whenever Derek decides to turn During a competition one of Derek's opponents [[IShallTauntYou taunts him about his back on them, they would be able to pull off a HannibalLecture as a defence.flaws so he'll slip.]]
* '''Exploited''':
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* '''Deconstructed''': As it turns out, Derek is a fully capable and effective Hero in his own right, but due to the pressures of society's expectations of larger-than-life supermen -- not to mention their assumptions that he ''must'' have some hidden inadequacies, since ''everybody does'' -- he's over-thinking and overworking himself in the quest to become TheAce. Had he just striven for Heroism without trying to live up to the "role" society presented him, he could have excelled.
* '''Reconstructed''': Derek knows that his constant need to be the best and live up to high expectations will destroy him, but he pushes forward because his problems are bigger than him and YouCantFightFate.
* '''Reconstructed''': Derek knows that his constant need to be the best and live up to high expectations will destroy him, but he pushes forward because his problems are bigger than him and YouCantFightFate.
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* '''Invoked''': Derek's parents intentionally mind-screw him while driving him to become TheAce.
* '''Deconstructed''': As it turns out, Derek is a fully capable and effective Hero in his own right, but due to the pressures of society's expectations of larger-than-life supermen -- not to mention their assumptions that he ''must'' have some hidden inadequacies, since ''everybody does'' -- he's over-thinking and overworking himself in the quest to become TheAce. Had he just striven for Heroism without trying to live up to the "role" society presented him, he could have excelled.
* '''Reconstructed''': Derek knows that his constant need to be the best and live up to high expectations will destroy him, but he pushes forward because his problems are bigger than him and YouCantFightFate.
* '''Reconstructed''': Derek knows that his constant need to be the best and live up to high expectations will destroy him, but he pushes forward because his problems are bigger than him and YouCantFightFate.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Derek's the [[MartyStu absolutely perfect guy]] -- but only because his CompleteMonster [[AbusiveParents parents beat into him the idea that]] the very ''second'' he makes even the '''slightest''' mistake, the whole world will scorn him and turn their backs in an instant.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Derek's the [[MartyStu absolutely perfect guy]] -- but only because his CompleteMonster [[AbusiveParents parents beat into him the idea that]] the very ''second'' he makes even the '''slightest''' mistake, the whole world will scorn him and turn their backs in an instant.
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* '''Inverted''': Derek's a dim underachiever, but is the happiest and most innocent character in the show.
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Derek's a dim underachiever, but is the happiest and most innocent character in the show.
** Derek's a dim underachiever, but is the happiest and most innocent character in the show.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Derek confides in [[TheIngenue Sara]] that playing the ace is actually really stressful for him... only to turn around and secretly gloat about how that sob story left her completely wrapped around his little finger. However, it's later implied that he wasn't ''completely'' lying about the toll it takes...
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** Derek confides in [[TheIngenue Sara]] that playing the ace is actually really stressful for him... only to turn around and secretly gloat about how that sob story left her completely wrapped around his little finger. However, it's later implied that he wasn't ''completely'' lying about the toll it takes...
** Derek confides in [[TheIngenue Sara]] that playing the ace is actually really stressful for him... only to turn around and secretly gloat about how that sob story left her completely wrapped around his little finger. However, it's later implied that he wasn't ''completely'' lying about the toll it takes...
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* '''Averted''': '''Averted''':
** Derek isn't presented as an Ace, or is completely mentally balanced.
** Derek isn't presented as an Ace, or is completely mentally balanced.
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* '''Exploited''': They do so so that whenever Derek decides to turn his back on them, they would be able to pull off a HannibelLecture as a defence.
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* '''Exploited''': They do so so that whenever Derek decides to turn his back on them, they would be able to pull off a HannibelLecture HannibalLecture as a defence.
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** Derek is talented enough to be TheAce, but ultimately his flaws keep him from ''becoming'' one; he averts the BrokenAce because his brokenness is inverse to how much of an Ace he is.
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* '''Invoked''': Derek's parents drove him to become TheAce without thinking or caring about the psychological effect it might have on him.
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* '''Invoked''': Derek's parents drove intentionally mind-screw him while driving him to become TheAce without thinking or caring about the psychological effect it might have TheAce.
* '''Exploited''': They do so so that whenever Derek decides to turn his back onhim.them, they would be able to pull off a HannibelLecture as a defence.
* '''Exploited''': They do so so that whenever Derek decides to turn his back on
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** And that he turned around and gloated to her to cover his tracks, because the thought that someone knows he's not perfect was eating him alive. Turning his moment of weakness into a SarcasticConfession retroactively.
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* '''Inverted''': Derek is TheAce.
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* '''Inverted''': Derek Derek's a dim underachiever, but is TheAce.the happiest and most innocent character in the show.
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': Probably not applicable.