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* RunningGag: A number of these, including Ayame distracting Maeda with a [[BellyDancer belly dance]], and Maeda's ability to judge whether a girl has one of his favorite parts in half a second.
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* RunningGag: A number of these, including Ayame distracting Maeda with a [[BellyDancer belly dance]], dance, and Maeda's ability to judge whether a girl has one of his favorite parts in half a second.
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* IntentionalWeightGain: In chapter 88, Gokou Ooba, a [[ChubbyChaser chubby-chasing]] rich boy who fell for the fattened-up version of Ayame, slips a "bountiful body drug" into the dorm's water supply to fatten up girls in Hachibei's dorm. The chapter ends with each member of Gokou's MaidCorps realizing this and taking a dose of the drug, [[IgnoredEnamoredUnderling confessing their collective love for him]], and [[GoneHorriblyRight inflicting severe bruises on their beloved master when the plumped-up maids all try to hug him at once]]. [[TemporaryBulkChange All girls (except Ayame) return back to normal thanks to the antidote]].
-->'''Maeda:''' ''Liking fat can be a problem...''
-->'''Maeda:''' ''Liking fat can be a problem...''
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%%* PeekABangs: Kureha Kano.
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* OverprotectiveDad: Sakurako's dad really doesn't like it when Hachibei turns up at her house. Even less when Hachi shouts that he hopes to get to know her better at the top of his voice... Then they start competing to see whose love for Sakurako is stronger.
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* GagBoobs: A very rare case of them being realistically sized. While Yukari's breasts are certainly large, they're far from abnormally so for a girl her age. The reason Maeda obsesses over them is because of their ''shape'', not their size.
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* ChristmasCake: Tsubame. Which means Hachibei LikesOlderWomen, at least in this case.
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Hachibei Maeda is a guy with very, ''very'' particular tastes in women. In fact, he isn't so much into girls as he is into his ideal attributes: big, crystal blue eyes; [[BuxomIsBetter perky breasts]] "like bullet trains"; a husky, womanly voice; [[LegFocus long, lean, streamlined legs]]; etc.
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Hachibei Maeda is a guy with very, ''very'' particular tastes in women. In fact, he isn't so much into girls as he is into his ideal attributes: big, crystal blue eyes; [[BuxomIsBetter [[BuxomBeautyStandard perky breasts]] "like bullet trains"; a husky, womanly voice; [[LegFocus long, lean, streamlined legs]]; etc.
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The other good news is, he's offered a place to stay... in the girls' dorm... with four beautiful women, each of whom has one of the attributes he's looking for in a girl (FieryRedhead Sakurako and [[WhatBeautifulEyes her eyes]], shy and bespectacled Yukari and [[BuxomIsBetter her breasts]], twenty-something teacher Tsubame and her legs, and sarcastic {{ninja}}-girl Kirino and her voice).
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The other good news is, he's offered a place to stay... in the girls' dorm... with four beautiful women, each of whom has one of the attributes he's looking for in a girl (FieryRedhead Sakurako and [[WhatBeautifulEyes her eyes]], shy and bespectacled Yukari and [[BuxomIsBetter [[BuxomBeautyStandard her breasts]], twenty-something teacher Tsubame and her legs, and sarcastic {{ninja}}-girl Kirino and her voice).
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* BuxomBeautyStandard: Yukari has a sizable chest, which Hachibei considers "ideal breasts", a trait that is revealed to be hereditary because her older sisters all similarly buxom.
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Thus begins ''Ai Kora: Love & Collage'', an endearingly warped and {{ecchi}} take on harem comedies and every fetish you can possibly imagine, from the creator of ''Manga/MidoriDays''. As Maeda quests (with limited success) to win over the girls, he finds himself learning more about them (and himself) as he learns to appreciate them for more than their parts. The manga ran in ''Magazine/ShonenSunday'' from 2005 to 2008.
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Thus begins ''Ai Kora: Love & Collage'', an endearingly warped and {{ecchi}} take on harem comedies and every fetish you can possibly imagine, from the creator of ''Manga/MidoriDays''.Creator/InoueKazurou. As Maeda quests (with limited success) to win over the girls, he finds himself learning more about them (and himself) as he learns to appreciate them for more than their parts. The manga ran in ''Magazine/ShonenSunday'' from 2005 to 2008.
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Hachibei Maeda is a guy with very, ''very'' particular tastes in women. In fact, he isn't so much into girls as he is into his ideal attributes: big, crystal blue eyes; [[BuxomIsBetter perky breasts]] "like bullet trains"; a husky, womanly voice; [[LegFocus: long, lean, streamlined legs]]; etc.
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Hachibei Maeda is a guy with very, ''very'' particular tastes in women. In fact, he isn't so much into girls as he is into his ideal attributes: big, crystal blue eyes; [[BuxomIsBetter perky breasts]] "like bullet trains"; a husky, womanly voice; [[LegFocus: [[LegFocus long, lean, streamlined legs]]; etc.
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Hachibei Maeda is a guy with very, ''very'' particular tastes in women. In fact, he isn't so much into girls as he is into his ideal attributes: big, crystal blue eyes; [[BuxomIsBetter perky breasts]] "like bullet trains"; a husky, womanly voice; [[ShesGotLegs long, lean, streamlined legs]]; etc.
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Hachibei Maeda is a guy with very, ''very'' particular tastes in women. In fact, he isn't so much into girls as he is into his ideal attributes: big, crystal blue eyes; [[BuxomIsBetter perky breasts]] "like bullet trains"; a husky, womanly voice; [[ShesGotLegs [[LegFocus: long, lean, streamlined legs]]; etc.
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The other good news is, he's offered a place to stay... in the girls' dorm... with four beautiful women, each of whom has one of the attributes he's looking for in a girl (FieryRedhead Sakurako and [[WhatBeautifulEyes her eyes]], shy and bespectacled Yukari and [[BuxomIsBetter her breasts]], twenty-something teacher Tsubame and [[ShesGotLegs her legs]], and sarcastic {{ninja}}-girl Kirino and her voice).
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The other good news is, he's offered a place to stay... in the girls' dorm... with four beautiful women, each of whom has one of the attributes he's looking for in a girl (FieryRedhead Sakurako and [[WhatBeautifulEyes her eyes]], shy and bespectacled Yukari and [[BuxomIsBetter her breasts]], twenty-something teacher Tsubame and [[ShesGotLegs her legs]], legs, and sarcastic {{ninja}}-girl Kirino and her voice).
* LegFocus: To Maeda, Tsubame-sensei's ideal feature is her legs.
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* ShesGotLegs: To Maeda, Tsubame-sensei's ideal feature is her legs.
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* NiceHat: Not as a cool factor or anything, but Sakurako is often seen wearing her beret. It even serves the plot a bit during their {{Crash into Hello}} moment because it prevented Maede from seeing her [[WhatBeautifulEyes beautiful eyes]].
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* FourTemperamentEnsemble: The girls of the dorm.
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* FourTemperamentEnsemble: The girls of the dorm.
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* {{Meganekko}}: A number of characters comment that Yukari's glasses are part of her appeal. In fact, one chapter is devoted to her classmate (and secret crush) Kano Kureha convincing Yukari of this fact with the help of a club of glasses fetishists.
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* {{Meganekko}}: A number of characters comment that Yukari's glasses are part of her appeal. In fact, one chapter is devoted to her classmate (and [[SchoolgirlLesbians secret crush]]) Kano Kureha convincing Yukari of this fact with the help of a club of glasses fetishists.
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* {{Meganekko}}: A number of characters comment that Yukari's glasses are part of her appeal. In fact, one chapter is devoted to her classmate (and [[SchoolgirlLesbians secret crush]]) crush) Kano Kureha convincing Yukari of this fact with the help of a club of glasses fetishists.
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* SchoolgirlLesbians: Kureha Kano, who has a thing for {{Meganekko}}).
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Thus begins ''Ai Kora: Love & Collage'', an endearingly warped and {{ecchi}} take on harem comedies and every fetish you can possibly imagine, from the creator of ''Manga/MidoriDays''. As Maeda quests (with limited success) to win over the girls, he finds himself learning more about them (and himself) as he learns to appreciate them for more than their parts.
parts. The manga ran in ''Magazine/ShonenSunday'' from 2005 to 2008.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: It's not a good idea to come right out and say that you like a girl solely for her body parts ''to her face,'' [[spoiler:''especially'' after she confessed to you. ShrinkingViolet Yukari is rightfully insulted, and monumentally furious at Maeda.]] Other events play out against expected tropes as well.
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* RealityEnsues: It's not a good idea to come right out and say that you like a girl solely for her body parts ''to her face,'' [[spoiler:''especially'' after she confessed to you. ShrinkingViolet Yukari is rightfully insulted, and monumentally furious at Maeda.]] Other events play out against expected tropes as well.
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** [[spoiler:As it turns out, he and Hachibei are NotSoDifferent, as [[YouAreWhatYouHate they both are parts fetishists,]] although he has a reason why he stopped and why he's trying to stop Hachibei.]]
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** In chapter 77, Yukari ends up in a costume that's half SchoolSwimsuit, half PlayboyBunny
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** In chapter 77, Yukari ends up in a costume that's half SchoolSwimsuit, half PlayboyBunnyPlayboyBunny while trying to disguise her identity as the mysterious ace gamer "Fantasma".
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* LoveableSexManiac: Maeda tends to get
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* LoveableSexManiac: Maeda tends to get Maeda's "parts love" frequently gets the best of him, but he's ultimately a good person.
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* BerserkButton: Mess with the girls in Maeda's harem at your own risk.
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* BerserkButton: BerserkButton:
** Mess with the girls in Maeda's harem at your own risk.
** Mess with the girls in Maeda's harem at your own risk.
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%%* {{Cult}}: The Church of Bluish-Purple from chapters 104 and 105.
%%* CuteGhostGirl: Who gets a ToplessnessFromTheBack scene.
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* HeavyVoice: [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Hachibei in [[http://www.tenmanga.com/chapter/AiKora88/134965-14.html chapter 88, page 14]].
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* HeavyVoice: [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Hachibei in [[http://www.tenmanga.com/chapter/AiKora88/134965-14.html chapter 88, page 14]].when Kirino's voice is distorted by her sudden weight gain.
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** In chapter 15, Sakurako seems surprised to find herself dragged into a maid outfit as part of a contest.
** In chapter 77, Yukari ends up in a costume that's half SchoolSwimsuit, half PlayboyBunny
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* OverprotectiveDad: Sakurako's dad really doesn't like it when Hachibei turns up at her house. Even less when Hachi shouts that he hopes to get to know her better at the top of his voice.
** ...then they start competing to see whose love for Sakurako is stronger.
* OverprotectiveDad: Sakurako's dad really doesn't like it when Hachibei turns up at her house. Even less when Hachi shouts that he hopes to get to know her better at the top of his voice.
** ...then they start competing to see whose love for Sakurako is stronger.
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* OverprotectiveDad: Sakurako's dad really doesn't like it when Hachibei turns up at her house. Even less when Hachi shouts that he hopes to get to know her better at the top of his
** ...then
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** Boom-de-yada, boom-de-yada, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=at_f98qOGY0 boom-de-yada...]]
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** Boom-de-yada, boom-de-yada, One chapter has the boys of the school declaring their non-romantic "love" for various things and hobbies, which may remind one of [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=at_f98qOGY0 boom-de-yada...]]a famous Discovery Channel ad campaign]].
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%%* YaoiFangirl: Yukari.
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* BookEnds: [[spoiler: The guy who tried to burn down the girl's dorm in the first chapter shows up in the last chapter, once again takes Sakurako hostage, and once again gets his butt kicked by Maeda.]]
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* BookEnds: [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The guy who tried to burn down the girl's dorm in the first chapter shows up in the last chapter, once again takes Sakurako hostage, and once again gets his butt kicked by Maeda.]]
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* ChivalrousPervert: Maeda.
* ChristmasCake: Tsubame.
** Which means Hachibei LikesOlderWomen, at least in this case.
* ClosetGeek: Yukari
* CloudCuckoolander: Outani Umeka.
* CrashIntoHello: Maeda and Sakurako.
* ChristmasCake: Tsubame.
** Which means Hachibei LikesOlderWomen, at least in this case.
* ClosetGeek: Yukari
* CloudCuckoolander: Outani Umeka.
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* {{Cult}}: The Church of Bluish-Purple from chapters 104 and 105.
* CuteGhostGirl: Who gets a ToplessnessFromTheBack scene.
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* {{Expy}}: Two characters are clearly inspired by Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion: Sensei Tsubame has purple hair, drinks heavily, and is a car nut/crazy driver -- Misato. Sakurako has orange hair with red ribbons, blue eyes, and a fiery temper -- Asuka Langley Sohryu.
** This manga is very similar to Manga/LoveHina in terms of characters: Sakurako = Naru, Yukari = Shinobu, Kirino = Motoko, and Tsubame = Mitsune; however Hachibei is less like Keitaro, and more like [[Manga/UruseiYatsura Ataru Moroboshi]].
** This manga is very similar to Manga/LoveHina in terms of characters: Sakurako = Naru, Yukari = Shinobu, Kirino = Motoko, and Tsubame = Mitsune; however Hachibei is less like Keitaro, and more like [[Manga/UruseiYatsura Ataru Moroboshi]].
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* {{Expy}}: {{Expy}}:
** Two characters are clearly inspired byAnime/NeonGenesisEvangelion: ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'': Sensei Tsubame has purple hair, drinks heavily, and is a car nut/crazy driver -- Misato. Sakurako has orange hair with red ribbons, blue eyes, and a fiery temper -- Asuka Langley Sohryu.
** This manga is very similar toManga/LoveHina ''Manga/LoveHina'' in terms of characters: Sakurako = Naru, Yukari = Shinobu, Kirino = Motoko, and Tsubame = Mitsune; however Hachibei is less like Keitaro, and more like [[Manga/UruseiYatsura Ataru Moroboshi]].
** Two characters are clearly inspired by
** This manga is very similar to
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* FanDisservice: Among other things, naked [[NonstandardCharacterDesign Aburazaka]] (from behind, thankfully) and an old man wearing pantyhose.
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* FanDisservice: Among other things, naked [[NonstandardCharacterDesign [[NonStandardCharacterDesign Aburazaka]] (from behind, thankfully) and an old man wearing pantyhose.
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* FirstKiss: During the chapter of the [[http://tenmanga.com/chapter/AiKora61/134938-21.html same name]]. Obviously huge spoiler.
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* FirstKiss: During the chapter of the [[http://tenmanga.com/chapter/AiKora61/134938-21.html same name]]. Obviously huge spoiler.name.
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* LoveFreak: Haiji, self-proclaimed "Ally of Love".
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* LoveFreak: Haiji, Haiji Kikuno, self-proclaimed "Ally of Love".
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* {{Ninja}}: Kirino.
* NonstandardCharacterDesign: Shibusawa's senior, Aburazaka, is accurately described as "manga-faced" at one point.
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* {{Ojou}}: Ayame.
* {{Otaku}}: [[spoiler:[[OtakuSurrogate Yukari]]]] secretly loves [[CosplayOtakuGirl cosplay]], [[GamerChick gaming]] and [[YaoiFangirl manga]].
* {{Otaku}}: [[spoiler:[[OtakuSurrogate Yukari]]]] secretly loves [[CosplayOtakuGirl cosplay]], [[GamerChick gaming]] and [[YaoiFangirl manga]].
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* {{Otaku}}: [[spoiler:[[OtakuSurrogate Yukari]]]] secretly loves [[CosplayOtakuGirl cosplay]], [[GamerChick gaming]] and [[YaoiFangirl manga]].
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* TheUnwantedHarem: subverted: Maeda ''definitely'' [[HaremSeeker wants these girls]], if only because each has one of the parts he's looking for.
** Could even be inverted. As noted above, while it's Maeda who wants the girls, it's the girls ''who don't want him.'' [[spoiler: Until recently. And only in some cases. And then there's ''Ayame'', who's [[StalkerWithACrush just nuts]], but lately seems to have developed feelings for Haiji.]]
** Could even be inverted. As noted above, while it's Maeda who wants the girls, it's the girls ''who don't want him.'' [[spoiler: Until recently. And only in some cases. And then there's ''Ayame'', who's [[StalkerWithACrush just nuts]], but lately seems to have developed feelings for Haiji.]]
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* TheUnwantedHarem: subverted: UnwantedHarem: Inverted: Maeda ''definitely'' [[HaremSeeker wants these girls]], if only because each has one of the parts he's looking for.
** Could even be inverted. As noted above, while it's Maeda who wants the girls,for, it's the girls ''who don't want him.'' [[spoiler: Until [[spoiler:Until recently. And only in some cases. And then there's ''Ayame'', who's [[StalkerWithACrush just nuts]], but lately seems to have developed feelings for Haiji.]]
** Could even be inverted. As noted above, while it's Maeda who wants the girls,
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** This manga is very similar to Love Hina in terms of characters: Sakurako = Naru, Yukari = Shinobu, Kirino = Motoko, and Tsubame = Mitsune; however Hachibei is less like Keitaro, and more like [[Manga/UruseiYatsura Ataru Moroboshi]].
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** This manga is very similar to Love Hina Manga/LoveHina in terms of characters: Sakurako = Naru, Yukari = Shinobu, Kirino = Motoko, and Tsubame = Mitsune; however Hachibei is less like Keitaro, and more like [[Manga/UruseiYatsura Ataru Moroboshi]].
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Hachibei Maeda is a guy with very, ''very'' particular tastes in women. In fact, he isn't so much into girls as he is into his ideal attributes: big, crystal blue eyes; perky breasts "like bullet trains"; a husky, womanly voice; long, lean, streamlined legs; etc.
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Hachibei Maeda is a guy with very, ''very'' particular tastes in women. In fact, he isn't so much into girls as he is into his ideal attributes: big, crystal blue eyes; [[BuxomIsBetter perky breasts breasts]] "like bullet trains"; a husky, womanly voice; [[ShesGotLegs long, lean, streamlined legs; legs]]; etc.
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The good news is, he's offered a place to stay... in the girls' dorm... with four beautiful women, each of whom has one of the attributes he's looking for in a girl (FieryRedhead Sakurako and [[WhatBeautifulEyes her eyes]], shy and bespectacled Yukari and [[BuxomIsBetter her breasts]], twenty-something teacher Tsubame and [[ShesGotLegs her legs]], and sarcastic {{ninja}}-girl Kirino and her voice).
The bad news, he almost immediately gets off on the wrong foot with them, and now they all think he's crazy, a pervert, or both. [[IResembleThatRemark Okay, so he is]], but that's beside the point...
The bad news, he almost immediately gets off on the wrong foot with them, and now they all think he's crazy, a pervert, or both. [[IResembleThatRemark Okay, so he is]], but that's beside the point...
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The other good news is, he's offered a place to stay... in the girls' dorm... with four beautiful women, each of whom has one of the attributes he's looking for in a girl (FieryRedhead Sakurako and [[WhatBeautifulEyes her eyes]], shy and bespectacled Yukari and [[BuxomIsBetter her breasts]], twenty-something teacher Tsubame and [[ShesGotLegs her legs]], and sarcastic {{ninja}}-girl Kirino and her voice).
The other bad news, he almost immediately gets off on the wrong foot with them, and now they all think he's crazy, a pervert, or both. [[IResembleThatRemark Okay, so he is]], but that's beside the point...
The other bad news, he almost immediately gets off on the wrong foot with them, and now they all think he's crazy, a pervert, or both. [[IResembleThatRemark Okay, so he is]], but that's beside the point...
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