A rewrite of Jeff The Killer (2011) by Sirius Nightshade, which won 2nd place in the community challenge for the new Jeff the Killer story to be featured on the Creepypasta Fandom Wiki (with Jeff The Killer (JZoidberg) in 3rd place and Jeff the Killer (2015) in 1st place).
The story can be read here
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This work contains examples of:
- Abusive Parents: Liu lives away from Jeff with his abusive father Bradley who is implied to be alcoholic. Jeff finds Liu naked and covered with bruises, and kills Bradley in a fit of rage.
- Adaptational Angst Upgrade: Jeff the Killer's signature phrase "Go to sleep" is what he used as a soothing mantra to himself whenever he felt stressed.
- Adaptational Heroism: Troy tries him to stop Randy from mocking Jeff's mental issues, unlike the original character who had no problem assisting Randy's crimes.
- Adaptation Name Change:
- Jeff Walters is the titular Jeff's full name instead of the original Jeffrey Woods.
- Jeff's father is named Bradley instead of Peter and his mother is named Martha instead of Margert.
- Beard of Evil: Bradley Walters is an abusive father, and Jeff notes his "terribly groomed beard" after killing him.
- Adaptational Villainy: Jeff's father may have been uncaring, but this story has him physically and sexually abusive of Liu and possibly Jeff.
- Fauxreigner: Keith puts on a fake southern accent, as opposed to Troy's authentic one.
- Hoist by His Own Petard: Randy gives Jeff a knife to kill himself, but Jeff instead kill Randy.
- Named by the Adaptation: Randy, Keith, and Troy are given the surnames Graham, McNelly, and Fitchett.
- Parental Incest: Bradley molests his son Liu, driving Jeff to murder him.
- Spared By Adaptation:
- Jeff kills his father for his abuse of Liu, but not his mother or Liu.
- Jeff only kills Randy, not Troy or Keith.
