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* TotallyEighteen: [[spoiler: Shego pulls this on Drew, telling him she's 18 when she is, in reality, 15]]
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* TotallyEighteen: Totally18: [[spoiler: Shego pulls this on Drew, telling him she's 18 when she is, in reality, 15]]
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* AboveTheInfluence
* AbsurdlyYouthfulMother
* AbsurdlyYouthfulMother
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* {{Angrish}}: Drew descends into this after learning [[spoiler: his mother sabotaged his attempts at birth control so she could have grandbabies]]
** Drakken normally stumbles verbally like this.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Shego gives one to Drakken when he starts losing it near the end of the fic.
* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler: Gemini]]
* AxCrazy: Gemini, per canon
* BadassFamily: The Go family, which includes [[spoiler: Kim Possible via her mother, Shego]]
* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: Drew/Drakken
* BeleagueredBureaucrat: Betty has shades of this
* {{Birdcaged}}: Aviarius pulls this off on the heroes
* BlackAndWhiteMorality: Hego seems to have a case of this.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Drew, in the sequel]]
* BrainwashResidue: [[spoiler: Drew seems to be suffering aftereffects from being tortured and [[BrainwashedAndCrazy brainwashed]] by Gemini for months.]]
* BreakingBadNewsGently: Happens twice. First time with Kim, who listens and sits down. The second time with Drakken and Shego, one of which passes out on the floor.
* BreatherEpisode: Kim and Shego go to a resort together in one chapter. No, really, that's it.
* ButWeUsedACondom: Subverted. [[spoiler:Mama Lipsky intentionally sabotaged their efforts at protection]]
* CallBack: Drakken being listed as [[spoiler: personnel in GJ's records]].
** Kim being reluctant to say 'will do' due to [[FeetOfClay another person with a similar name mucking up her thoughts]]
*** Continues in the sequel
** Wade forgot to turn the security systems back on for the GJ evidence locker...
** Drakken is still injured in the sequel from the end of S Plus D Equals K
** Drakken disapproves of Ron as Kim's boyfriend
** Shego finds Drew adorable when he pouts
* CardboardPrison: Discussed
* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler: Gemini]]
* AxCrazy: Gemini, per canon
* BadassFamily: The Go family, which includes [[spoiler: Kim Possible via her mother, Shego]]
* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: Drew/Drakken
* BeleagueredBureaucrat: Betty has shades of this
* {{Birdcaged}}: Aviarius pulls this off on the heroes
* BlackAndWhiteMorality: Hego seems to have a case of this.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Drew, in the sequel]]
* BrainwashResidue: [[spoiler: Drew seems to be suffering aftereffects from being tortured and [[BrainwashedAndCrazy brainwashed]] by Gemini for months.]]
* BreakingBadNewsGently: Happens twice. First time with Kim, who listens and sits down. The second time with Drakken and Shego, one of which passes out on the floor.
* BreatherEpisode: Kim and Shego go to a resort together in one chapter. No, really, that's it.
* ButWeUsedACondom: Subverted. [[spoiler:Mama Lipsky intentionally sabotaged their efforts at protection]]
* CallBack: Drakken being listed as [[spoiler: personnel in GJ's records]].
** Kim being reluctant to say 'will do' due to [[FeetOfClay another person with a similar name mucking up her thoughts]]
*** Continues in the sequel
** Wade forgot to turn the security systems back on for the GJ evidence locker...
** Drakken is still injured in the sequel from the end of S Plus D Equals K
** Drakken disapproves of Ron as Kim's boyfriend
** Shego finds Drew adorable when he pouts
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* CassandraTruth: [[spoiler: Drew really did have no idea about Project Utopia]]
* CerebusRetcon: You know the scar and blue color? Yeah, they're the result from [[spoiler: torture at the hands of Gemini]], not that he knows the truth about it until later in the fic. He just knows it was a Tuesday.
* CerebusRetcon: You know the scar and blue color? Yeah, they're the result from [[spoiler: torture at the hands of Gemini]], not that he knows the truth about it until later in the fic. He just knows it was a Tuesday.
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* ChronicVillainy: [[spoiler: Drakken]] gets stuck in the loop
* CigaretteOfAnxiety: James smokes a pipe when he gets stressed.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Only the aftermath for the most part, thank goodness.
* CombatTentacles: How [[spoiler: Agent Alpha]] fights for the most part.
* CigaretteOfAnxiety: James smokes a pipe when he gets stressed.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Only the aftermath for the most part, thank goodness.
* CombatTentacles: How [[spoiler: Agent Alpha]] fights for the most part.
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* CrackFic: The premise is... Less than normal for the fandom
* CutLexLuthorACheck: Drakken starts making small helpful machines that he patents to make money off of.
** It's noted that he patented the hover technology that he uses for some of his machines since [[{{Muggles}} it isn't common tech for the average Joe]] and no one else, hero or villain, thought to do it themselves.
* CutLexLuthorACheck: Drakken starts making small helpful machines that he patents to make money off of.
** It's noted that he patented the hover technology that he uses for some of his machines since [[{{Muggles}} it isn't common tech for the average Joe]] and no one else, hero or villain, thought to do it themselves.
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* CutLexLuthorACheck: Drakken starts making small helpful machines that he patents to make money off of.
** It's noted that he patented the hover technology that he uses for some of his machines since [[{{Muggles}} it isn't common tech for the average Joe]] and no one else, hero or villain, thought to do it themselves.
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* DeadGuyJunior: [[spoiler: Kim is named after Shego's mother, Kimberly]]
* DeadpanSnarker: Naturally, with Shego being present
* DejaVu: Used dramatically as Shego [[spoiler: loses her memories to the brain-tap machine]]
* DeadpanSnarker: Naturally, with Shego being present
* DejaVu: Used dramatically as Shego [[spoiler: loses her memories to the brain-tap machine]]
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* DoomsdayDevice: Kinda expected for a KimPossible fanfic...
* DoorstopBaby: [[spoiler: Kim was one]]
* TheDragon: [[spoiler: Drew, to Gemini in the sequel]]
* TheDreaded: Gemini
* DoorstopBaby: [[spoiler: Kim was one]]
* TheDragon: [[spoiler: Drew, to Gemini in the sequel]]
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* EnhanceButton: Discussed and lampshaded
* EpicFail: Drew can't pass even a basic gen ed English class
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Drakken doesn't understand why Kim and Shego don't want to rule the world with him.
** FaceMonsterTurn: [[spoiler:Agent Alpha]] doesn't understand why his family won't join him as Gemini's underlying in the sequel
* EvilGloating
* {{Fainting}}: The emotional variety, twice.
* EpicFail: Drew can't pass even a basic gen ed English class
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Drakken doesn't understand why Kim and Shego don't want to rule the world with him.
** FaceMonsterTurn: [[spoiler:Agent Alpha]] doesn't understand why his family won't join him as Gemini's underlying in the sequel
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* FaceMonsterTurn
* GiveGeeksAChance: How in the world do you explain Drew and Shego otherwise?
* GutPunch: [[spoiler: Gemini, in the sequel, torturing and mutating Drew into being his new Agent Alpha]]
* HaHaHaNo: Used by Shego a few times.
* HandshakeRefusal: Drakken shuts down all of Ron's attempts to high-five
* FaceMonsterTurn
* GiveGeeksAChance: How in the world do you explain Drew and Shego otherwise?
* GutPunch: [[spoiler: Gemini, in the sequel, torturing and mutating Drew into being his new Agent Alpha]]
* HaHaHaNo: Used by Shego a few times.
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* InterrogatedForNothing: [[spoiler: Drew, in relation to Project Utopia]]
* IWantGrandkids: Mama Lipsky, even when she was younger
* InsistentTerminology: Again, Drakken asserts that he let HIMSELF out of college, thank you very much!
** ''Recommitment ceremony''
* IWantGrandkids: Mama Lipsky, even when she was younger
* InsistentTerminology: Again, Drakken asserts that he let HIMSELF out of college, thank you very much!
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* KickTheDog: Gemini does this continually to [[spoiler: Drew/Agent Alpha]] during their chapters
* KnightOfCerebus: '''Gemini'''
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler: The brain-tap machine used on Drew and Shego produces this effect]]
* LastMinuteBabyNaming
* LawOfInverseFertility: [[spoiler: Shego, who lampshades it slightly]]
* KnightOfCerebus: '''Gemini'''
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler: The brain-tap machine used on Drew and Shego produces this effect]]
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* MadScientistsBeautifulDaughter: [[spoiler: Kim is, unknowingly, this to Drakken]]
* MorningSickness
* MyBelovedSmother: Mama Lipsky
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* TheNicknamer: Shego. Would be TermsOfEndangerment if not for [[spoiler: her being Kim's mother]]
* NoPlansNoPrototypeNoBackup: Discussed
* NoodleIncident: What in the world happened to Pepe?
* OfficialCouple: Ships canon to the show
* OlderThanTheyLook: [[spoiler: Drew and Shego, the latter far more so since she's 15 but looks 18]]
* OpenMindedParent: James and Anne Possible
* NoPlansNoPrototypeNoBackup: Discussed
* NoodleIncident: What in the world happened to Pepe?
* OfficialCouple: Ships canon to the show
* OlderThanTheyLook: [[spoiler: Drew and Shego, the latter far more so since she's 15 but looks 18]]
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* PuppyDogEyes: Kim uses her puppy dog pout to its full effect on Drakken.
* RapidFireTyping: Wade, naturally.
* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler: Just because they're related doesn't mean that Kim and her biological parents are going to be jumping for joy and crying their eyes out right away. It takes some unpacking on Kim's end with a psychologist to even really figure things out for herself.]]
** [[spoiler: Drakken may have found out Kim was his daughter, but that doesn't change the fact that he wants to TakeOverTheWorld. It's displayed as more of a mental illness than anything.]]
* RealMenCook: Drakken prepares a smorgasbord of food midway through the first fic for breakfast.
* ReforgedIntoAMinion: [[spoiler: Drew]]
* ReformedCriminal: [[spoiler: Shego. Drakken, [[ChronicVillainy not so much.]]]]
* RapidFireTyping: Wade, naturally.
* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler: Just because they're related doesn't mean that Kim and her biological parents are going to be jumping for joy and crying their eyes out right away. It takes some unpacking on Kim's end with a psychologist to even really figure things out for herself.]]
** [[spoiler: Drakken may have found out Kim was his daughter, but that doesn't change the fact that he wants to TakeOverTheWorld. It's displayed as more of a mental illness than anything.]]
* RealMenCook: Drakken prepares a smorgasbord of food midway through the first fic for breakfast.
* ReforgedIntoAMinion: [[spoiler: Drew]]
* ReformedCriminal: [[spoiler: Shego. Drakken, [[ChronicVillainy not so much.]]]]
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* SickAndWrong: Not said word-for-word, but it comes pretty close in a few spots by the TropeNamer
* SmallRoleBigImpact: [[spoiler: The first Agent Alpha]]
* {{Squick}}: Don't think too hard on [[spoiler: Shego's age during the college section]]
* StrappedToAnOperatingTable: [[spoiler: Drew is during the torture scene]]
* SurprisePregnancy
* SmallRoleBigImpact: [[spoiler: The first Agent Alpha]]
* {{Squick}}: Don't think too hard on [[spoiler: Shego's age during the college section]]
* StrappedToAnOperatingTable: [[spoiler: Drew is during the torture scene]]
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* {{Tearjerker}}: What's worse? [[spoiler: Forgetting and learning far past the point it would've helped that you have a baby, forgetting your own significant other and rediscovering them years later, or watching your significant other slowly lose who they are while you watch helplessly?]]
* TearsOfRemorse
* TeenPregnancy
* ThatManIsDead: Drakken insists that of Drew Lipsky at one point
* TherapyIsForTheWeak: Said nearly word-for-word by Hego
* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted; Shego explicitly brings them up a few times and [[spoiler: even plans on becoming a child psychologist]]
* TearsOfRemorse
* TeenPregnancy
* ThatManIsDead: Drakken insists that of Drew Lipsky at one point
* TherapyIsForTheWeak: Said nearly word-for-word by Hego
* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted; Shego explicitly brings them up a few times and [[spoiler: even plans on becoming a child psychologist]]
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted; Shego explicitly brings them up a few times and [[spoiler: even plans on becoming a child psychologist]]
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* UglyCute: Discussed, with Shego claiming this about Drakken
* UglyGuyHotWife: [[spoiler: Drew and Shego]]
* UnknownCharacter: Agent Alpha
* UglyCute: Discussed, with Shego claiming this about Drakken
* UglyGuyHotWife: [[spoiler: Drew and Shego]]
* UnknownCharacter: Agent Alpha
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* InTheBlood: Heroing for the Go family
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* JailBait: [[spoiler: Shego while she was in college]]
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* FrickinLaserBeams
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* IAintGotTimeToBleed: [[spoiler: [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain Drakken]] in particular ignores his wounds from the fight with Gemini, even though he's [[OnlyAFleshWound rather badly injured.]]]]
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* GreenEyes: Brought up as a minor note
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* [[spoiler: ButWeUsedACondom: Subverted; Mama Lipsky intentionally sabotaged their efforts at protection]]
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* [[spoiler: LukeYouAreMyFather: Kim lets Drakken and Shego know that they're her parents. Drakken [[{{Fainting}} doesn't take it so well]]]]
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* EverythingsBetterWithPlatypi: Aviarius uses a platypus-shaped mad science bomb to trap the group in a cage. He doesn't understand that [[TaxonomicTermConfusion platypi aren't a kind of bird]].
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* ShoutOut: [[QuestionableContent Baking is science for hungry people]]
** A [[MeetTheParents Nurse Focker]] shows up in one scene
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* InterrogatedForNothing: [[spoiler: Drew, in relation to Project Utopia]]
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* LovesTheSoundOfScreaming: Gemini [[spoiler: especially the second time around of torturing Drew]]
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* TailorMadePrison: [[spoiler: Drew/Agent Alpha is placed in a cell made from Lorwardian metals with no space for his vines to wrap around]]
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* CartesianKarma: Looks like [[spoiler: Drew]] is facing some consequences for his actions while he was BrainwashedAndCrazy
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* CardboardPrison: Discussed
* CartesianKarma:Looks like [[spoiler: Drew]] is facing faced with some consequences for his actions while he was BrainwashedAndCrazyBrainwashedAndCrazy by Gemini
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* BrainwashResidue: [[spoiler: Drew seems to be suffering aftereffects from being tortured and [[BrainwashedAndCrazy brainwashed]] by Gemini for months.]]
** Shego finds Drew adorable when he pouts
* CartesianKarma: Looks like [[spoiler: Drew]] is facing some consequences for his actions while he was BrainwashedAndCrazy
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Only the aftermath for the most part, thank goodness
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Only the aftermath for the most part, thank goodnessgoodness.
* CombatTentacles: How [[spoiler: Agent Alpha]] fights for the most part.
* CombatTentacles: How [[spoiler: Agent Alpha]] fights for the most part.
** [[spoiler: [[FaceMonsterTurn Agent Alpha]] doesn't understand why his family won't join him as Gemini's underling in the sequel]]
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* HealingFactor: [[spoiler: Drew/Agent Alpha has a rather strong one once he's mutated more by Gemini. He heals a decent-sized missing chunk of his leg in less than a minute.]]
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* JawDrop: Drew does it a few times. Shego picks it back up once.
** Gemini also gets one in [[spoiler: when Ron tosses Agent Alpha halfway across the room with his Mystical Monkey Power]]
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: [[spoiler: The first Agent Alpha]]
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* KickTheDog: Gemini does this continually to [[spoiler: Drew/Agent Alpha]] during their chapters
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* TrespassingToTalk: Subverted. It '''seems''' like that's what happened, but in actuality [[spoiler: Gemini had been there for over a day tormenting and mutating Drew]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: Drew once the mind control serums fully wear off.]]
* TearsOfRemorse
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* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler: Drew '''was''' on the path to recovery... And then Gemini showed up and transformed him into his new Agent Alpha]]
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* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler: Drew '''was''' on the path to recovery... And then Gemini showed up and transformed him into his new Agent Alpha]]
* YearInsideHourOutside: Used dramatically [[spoiler: due to Gemini using a temporal distorter to stretch out the time he had to break Drew down and rebuild him as Agent Alpha]]
* YearInsideHourOutside: Used dramatically [[spoiler: due to Gemini using a temporal distorter to stretch out the time he had to break Drew down and rebuild him as Agent Alpha]]
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Drew, in the sequel]]
* TheDragon: [[spoiler: Drew, to Gemini in the sequel]]
** [[spoiler: [[FaceMonsterTurn Agent Alpha]] doesn't understand why his family won't join him as Gemini's underling in the sequel]]
* FaceMonsterTurn
* GutPunch: [[spoiler: Gemini, in the sequel, torturing and mutating Drew into being his new Agent Alpha]]
** ''Recommitment ceremony''
* KnightOfCerebus: '''Gemini'''
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler: Drew's treatments and therapy left him defenseless once Gemini showed up, paralyzing him with fear and without his [[SuperpowerLottery superstrong vines]] to help him]]
* NoodleIncident: What in the world happened to Pepe?
* ReforgedIntoAMinion: [[spoiler: Drew]]
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* SwiperNoSwiping: Kim has a pretty easy time talking [[spoiler: Shego and Drakken]] down near the end of the fic...
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* SwiperNoSwiping: Kim has a pretty easy time talking [[spoiler: Shego and Drakken]] down near the end of the first fic...
* TragicMonster: [[spoiler: Drew, in the sequel after Gemini gets his hands back on him.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: Gemini orders [[spoiler: baby Kim]] to be 'disposed of'.of'.
* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler: Drew '''was''' on the path to recovery... And then Gemini showed up and transformed him into his new Agent Alpha]]
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** It's noted that he patented the hover technology that he uses for some of his machines since [[{{Muggles}} it isn't common tech for the average Joe]] and no one else, hero or villain, thought to do it themselves.
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** Shego discusses it in relation to Hego's insistence on being heroes after [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatResponsibility they were hit by the comet]]
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* NoPlansNoPrototypeNoBackup: Discussed
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** No one can remember that Shego wants to be [[spoiler: a child psychologist instead of a villain]]
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* UglyCute: Discussed, with Shego claiming this about Drakken
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* BlackAndWhiteMorality: Hego seems to have a case of this.
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* HandshakeRefusal: Drakken shuts down all of Ron's attempts to high-five
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* UnholyMatrimony: [[spoiler: Drakken and Shego, who renew their wedding vows]]
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* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: Drew/Drakken
* {{Birdcaged}}: Aviarius pulls this off on the heroes
* {{Birdcaged}}: Aviarius pulls this off on the heroes
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* CutLexLuthorACheck: Drakken starts making small helpful machines that he patents to make money off of
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* OverTheShoulderCarry: Shego carries Drakken around like this when [[spoiler: Kim, Shego, and Drakken infiltrate the [[SecretGovernmentWarehouse GJ evidence warehouse]]]]
* ParentalSexualitySquick: Kim when it's implied that [[spoiler: Drakken and Shego, her parents, have sex.]] Anne even teases her about it.
* ParentalSexualitySquick: Kim when it's implied that [[spoiler: Drakken and Shego, her parents, have sex.]] Anne even teases her about it.
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* TraumaInducedAmnesia: Implied to be some of [[spoiler: Drew's]] problem with remembering what happened during his memory blank
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* [[spoiler: AgeGapRomance: Drew and Shego, who fail the [[AgeGapAlgebra creepy test]].]]
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* BadassFamily: The Go family, which includes [[spoiler: Kim Possible via her mother, Shego]]
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Drakken doesn't understand why Kim and Shego don't want to rule the world with him.
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* InTheBlood: Heroing for the Go family
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* OfficialCouple: Ships canon to the show
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* EpicFail: Drew can't pass even a basic gen ed English class
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* HaHaHaNo: Used by Shego a few times.
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* MyGirlIsNotASlut: Drakken complains that Shego has class and wouldn't do ''that'' with him on a second date.
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* SequelEscalation: You thought that the first story was dramatic? The second one is [[{{Angst}} even worse]]
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** [[spoiler: Drakken may have found out Kim was his daughter, but that doesn't change the fact that he wants to TakeOverTheWorld. It's displayed as more of a mental illness than anything.]]
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* ShooOutTheClowns: Ron sees himself out of a scene where [[spoiler: Drakken is being convinced to seek help for his mental illness]]
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* TherapyIsForTheWeak: Said nearly word-for-word by Hego
* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted; Shego explicitly brings them up a few times and [[spoiler: even plans on becoming a child psychologist]]
* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted; Shego explicitly brings them up a few times and [[spoiler: even plans on becoming a child psychologist]]
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* DoomsdayDevice: Kinda expected for a KimPossible fanfic...
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* FrickinLaserBeams
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* TheDreaded: Gemini
* TheNicknamer: Shego. Would be TermsOfEndangerment if not for [[spoiler: her being Kim's mother]]
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* TheNicknamer: Shego. Would be TermsOfEndangerment if not for [[spoiler: her being Kim's mother]]
* TheNicknamer: Shego. Would be TermsOfEndangerment if not for [[spoiler: her being Kim's mother]]
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** A [[MeetTheParents Nurse Focker]] shows up in one scene
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: "Aviarius is assaulting the aerodynamics auditorium on Albany Avenue!" the mayor announced, absolutely astonished.
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*** Continues in the sequel
** Wade forgot to turn the security systems back on for the GJ evidence locker...
** Drakken is still injured in the sequel from the end of S Plus D Equals K
** Drakken disapproves of Ron as Kim's boyfriend
** Wade forgot to turn the security systems back on for the GJ evidence locker...
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** Hego still bothers Shego with rejoining Team Go
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* EverythingsBetterWithPlatypi: Aviarius uses a platypus-shaped mad science bomb to trap the group in a cage. He doesn't understand that [[TaxonomicTermConfusion platypi aren't a kind of bird]].