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** Mixed with NauseaFuel: [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch08/ch08_39.html That hand.]] Duane's ''entire body'' was like that for years, and according to WordOfGod, he could ''[[FateWorseThanDeath feel it]]''.

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** Mixed with NauseaFuel: [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch08/ch08_39.html That hand.]] Duane's ''entire body'' was like that for years, and according to WordOfGod, he could ''[[FateWorseThanDeath feel it]]''. A few pages later in the flashback, his HorrorHunger is bad enough to [[ITasteDelicious eat the rotting mess]].
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** A small one in the background of the otherwise horrifying/tearjerking cover of Chapter 10- while the image depicts a carnival atmosphere, with the staff celebrating and prostitutes gleefully and cruelly tormenting [[spoiler: a captured Sette and Duane]], two of the sex workers standing together look dissonantly shocked and horrified at the scene. Look familiar? [[spoiler: They're two of the women that Duane was reading to earlier in the Nevergreen.]]

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** A small one in the background of the otherwise horrifying/tearjerking cover of Chapter 10- while the image depicts a carnival atmosphere, with the staff celebrating and prostitutes gleefully and cruelly tormenting [[spoiler: a captured Sette and Duane]], two of the sex workers standing together look dissonantly shocked and horrified and nauseated at the scene.scene, even holding onto each other for support. Look familiar? [[spoiler: They're two of the women that Duane was reading to earlier in the Nevergreen.]]
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** A small one in the background of the otherwise horrifying/tearjerking cover of Chapter 10- while the image depicts a carnival atmosphere, with the staff celebrating and prostitutes gleefully and cruelly tormenting [[spoiler: a captured Sette and Duane]], two of the sex workers standing together look dissonantly shocked and horrified at the scene. Look familiar? [[spoiler: They're two of the women that Duane was reading to earlier in the Nevergreen.]]

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Redundant, but I liked the quote and the last line.


* IronWoobie: Duane is a devout member of a religion that believes that reanimated dead are the most absolute form of degradation imaginable and are irrevocably damned. He believes this completely and thinks that his God and nature have both rejected him, yet still keeps the faith and makes a point of being a decent person.

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* IronWoobie: Duane is a devout member of a religion that believes that reanimated dead are the most absolute form of degradation imaginable and are irrevocably damned. He believes this completely and thinks that his God and nature have both rejected him, yet still keeps the faith and makes a point of being a decent person. The fans don't just eat it up, they would completely disregard his being a ragdoll arrangement of stitches, leather, bones, and rotten meat to smother him with hugs if they could manage it.
--> "But of course the day is not dark, and the future is bright and the past is a pleasant warmth behind me, so what a foolish thing to ask."



* IronWoobie: Duane. Considering the adversity and pain he faces both physically and psychologically due to his undeath, it's impressive that he has room left over in his rotted heart for the selfless tenacity to protect and avenge the innocent and care for an obnoxious, morally ambiguous hellion. The fans don't just eat it up, they would completely disregard his being a ragdoll arrangement of stitches, leather, bones, and rotten meat to smother him with hugs if they could manage it.
--> "But of course the day is not dark, and the future is bright and the past is a pleasant warmth behind me, so what a foolish thing to ask."
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** The vivid description of Quigley's attempted suicide in ''Orphans'':
--->The end of his dagger was dipped into one of the candles, the flame greeting the steel with a gentle caress. He stripped his vocal cords so he couldn’t scream. Then, when the blade began to glow, he pressed it hard across his marriage brand.\\
Hot like her lips, like her forge in creation and in death, hot like the municipal office burning, like the woods burning in the night. So many fires, was it fair they always stopped just short of him? He swirled the dagger as his flesh split, vivisecting the insect (would Brother Hugh like to see?), pushing the blade deep until he smelled his own grease hissing.\\
Press a little harder. Cut a little hole and let himself pour out of it, tipped like spoiled wine into the thirsty khert’s mouth. Wasn’t his heart hammering for it? Here it beat just below the steel, trying to excavate outward, stifled in the darkness by a cave-in. Let it out, let it out, let the khert fucking have it!
*** Comes with an addition of TearJerker, too, as he's destroying his marriage brand in the process.


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** ''[[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/Stories/orphans.html Orphans]]''. All of it.
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* ViewerGenderConfusion: Timofey is actually a guy, despite certainly looking like a CuteGhostGirl.
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* HotMom: [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch06/ch06_11.html Vienne,]] Quigley's wife and Matty's smokin' hot mom.
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*** Shortly after its comic page was posted, Cope actually ''[[http://glassshard.tumblr.com/post/68288483943/glassshard-see-the-untouched-flats-above-it-i reposted the blog entry]]'' because "[[TrollingCreator You needed a larger view of this in your life.]]"
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** What it was like for Duane [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch08/ch08_40.html when he 'woke up', so to speak:]] blind, constantly suffocating, choking on his own blood, and gradually beginning to crave the flesh of his beloved brother and wife.
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*** [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch08/ch08_39.html That isn't even the half of it.]]
** Mixed with NauseaFuel: [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch08/ch08_39.html That hand.]] Duane's ''entire body'' was like that for years, and according to WordOfGod, he could ''[[FateWorseThanDeath feel it]]''.


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** "[[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch08/ch08_37.html Ain't no one ever calls me Sette the way ya call me Mikaila.]]"

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* {{Squick}}: You can ''see [[spoiler:Ephsephin]]'s mashed brains'' stuck to the [[GrievousBottleyHarm wine bottle]] used to beat him to death in [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch06/ch06_54.html this]] page.

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You can ''see [[spoiler:Ephsephin]]'s mashed brains'' stuck to the [[GrievousBottleyHarm wine bottle]] used to beat him to death in [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch06/ch06_54.html this]] page.


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** '''''[[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch08/ch08_39.html That hand.]]''''' This one gleefully skips across {{Squick}} and lands ''deep'' in NauseaFuel territory.
*** Even better: [[http://glassshard.tumblr.com/post/52843484329/see-the-untouched-flats-above-it-i-always-colour the author posted a closeup of that panel a few months before it appeared in the comic.]] Not for the faint of stomach.
*** While it is undoubtedly overshadowed by '''''that hand''''', the top panel of that page is no walk in the park either. The Aldish sure do enjoy their ColdBloodedTorture.


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*** [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch08/ch08_39.html Chapter 8 page 39]]'s last panel shows some of the aftermath. It's a small detail, but you can see Will hanging his head as he leaves the funeral...
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* IronWoobie: Duane is a devout member of a religion that believes that reanimated dead are the most absolute form of degradation imaginable and are irrevocably damned. He believes this completely and thinks that his God and nature have both rejected him, yet still keeps the faith and makes a point of being a decent person.
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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with a little girl the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned when Starfish's lair was uncovered. When he's not motivated by greed, he is prone to partaking in horrific actions [[ForTheEvulz simply for his personal pleasure]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in his skull. He also betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Starfish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that his son Matty will also undergo the procedure.

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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of supply for extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with a little girl the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned when Starfish's lair was uncovered. When he's not motivated by greed, he is prone to partaking in horrific actions [[ForTheEvulz simply for his personal pleasure]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in his skull. He also betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Starfish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that his son Matty will also undergo the procedure.
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* Everyone feels sorry for Cara.

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* ** Everyone feels sorry for Cara.
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* Everyone feels sorry for Cara.
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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned when Starfish's lair was uncovered. When he's not motivated by greed, he is prone to partaking in horrific actions [[ForTheEvulz simply for his personal pleasure]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in his skull. He also betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Starfish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that his son Matty will also undergo the procedure.

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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned when Starfish's lair was uncovered. When he's not motivated by greed, he is prone to partaking in horrific actions [[ForTheEvulz simply for his personal pleasure]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in his skull. He also betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Starfish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that his son Matty will also undergo the procedure.
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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned when Starfish's lair was uncovered. When he's not motivated by greed, he is prone to partaking in horrific actions [[ForTheEvulz simply for his personal pleasure]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in his skull. He also betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that his son Matty will also undergo the procedure.

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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned when Starfish's lair was uncovered. When he's not motivated by greed, he is prone to partaking in horrific actions [[ForTheEvulz simply for his personal pleasure]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in his skull. He also betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish Starfish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that his son Matty will also undergo the procedure.
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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned when Starfish's lair was uncovered. In addition to his greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in his skull. He also betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that his son Matty will also undergo the procedure.

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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned when Starfish's lair was uncovered. In addition to his When he's not motivated by greed, Starfish he is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic horrific actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]].for his personal pleasure]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in his skull. He also betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that his son Matty will also undergo the procedure.
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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his lair was uncovered. In addition to his greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in his skull. He also betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that his son Matty will also undergo the procedure.

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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his Starfish's lair was uncovered. In addition to his greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in his skull. He also betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that his son Matty will also undergo the procedure.
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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his lair was uncovered. In addition to his greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been poisoned and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in his skull. He also betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that his son Matty will also undergo the procedure.

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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his lair was uncovered. In addition to his greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been poisoned wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in his skull. He also betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that his son Matty will also undergo the procedure.
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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his lair was uncovered. In addition to his greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been gravely wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in his skull. He also betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that his son Matty will also undergo the procedure.

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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his lair was uncovered. In addition to his greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been gravely wounded poisoned and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in his skull. He also betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that his son Matty will also undergo the procedure.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Starfish crosses the line when he decides to use children for his procedure just so that he can earn extra money.
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*** WordOfGod [[http://www.formspring.me/GlassShard/q/474976436193608704 explicitly says]] that he is designed to be as vile and hateable as possible.

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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body.. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his lair was uncovered. In addition to his rampant greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been gravely wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves his skull with a whiskey bottle. He also, once better muscle comes along, betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that Quigley’s eight-year-old son, Matty, will undergo the procedure as well.
** Murkoph appears to be incredibly violent and amoral. The first thing he does after Sette frees him is try to ''[[ImAHumanitarian eat her]]'', and later, he openly mocks her for showing sympathy for anyone else. There's probably a good reason he was [[SealedEvilInACan imprisoned in the khert]]...

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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body..body. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his lair was uncovered. In addition to his rampant greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been gravely wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in his skull with a whiskey bottle. skull. He also, once better muscle comes along, also betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that Quigley’s eight-year-old son, Matty, his son Matty will also undergo the procedure as well.
** Murkoph appears to be incredibly violent and amoral. The first thing he does after Sette frees him is try to ''[[ImAHumanitarian eat her]]'', and later, he openly mocks her for showing sympathy for anyone else. There's probably a good reason he was [[SealedEvilInACan imprisoned in the khert]]...
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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body.. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his lair was uncovered. In addition to his rampant greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been gravely wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in the man's skull with a whiskey bottle. He also, once better muscle comes along, betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that Quigley’s eight-year-old son, Matty, will undergo the procedure as well.

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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body.. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his lair was uncovered. In addition to his rampant greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been gravely wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in the man's his skull with a whiskey bottle. He also, once better muscle comes along, betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that Quigley’s eight-year-old son, Matty, will undergo the procedure as well.
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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Gang. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body.. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his lair was uncovered. In addition to his rampant greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been gravely wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in the man's skull with a whiskey bottle. He also, once better muscle comes along, betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that Quigley’s eight-year-old son, Matty, will undergo the procedure as well.

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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Gang.Boys. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body.. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his lair was uncovered. In addition to his rampant greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been gravely wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in the man's skull with a whiskey bottle. He also, once better muscle comes along, betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that Quigley’s eight-year-old son, Matty, will undergo the procedure as well.
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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Gang. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body.. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his lair was uncovered. In addition to his rampant greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been gravely wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in the man's skull with a whiskey bottle. He also, once better muscle comes along, betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that Quigley’s eight-year-old son, Matty, will undergo the procedure as well. Additionally, as Starfish tries to have Quigley drowned, [[ForcedToWatch he forces a crying Matty to watch the whole thing]].imply because it's easier than trying to patch him up]]. ''[[NightmareFace With a smile on his face]]''.

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* CompleteMonster: Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Gang. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body.. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his lair was uncovered. In addition to his rampant greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been gravely wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in the man's skull with a whiskey bottle. He also, once better muscle comes along, betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that Quigley’s eight-year-old son, Matty, will undergo the procedure as well. Additionally, as Starfish tries to have Quigley drowned, [[ForcedToWatch he forces a crying Matty to watch the whole thing]].imply because it's easier than trying to patch him up]]. ''[[NightmareFace With a smile on his face]]''.
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* CompleteMonster: Starfish is the leader of the Red Berry Boys, a criminal gang that earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness, all the while in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body.. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his lair was uncovered. In addition to his rampant greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been gravely wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in the man's skull with a whiskey bottle. He also, once better muscle comes along, betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that Quigley’s eight-year-old son, Matty, will undergo the procedure as well. Additionally, as Starfish tries to have Quigley drowned, [[ForcedToWatch he forces a crying Matty to watch the whole thing]].imply because it's easier than trying to patch him up]]. ''[[NightmareFace With a smile on his face]]''.

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* CompleteMonster: Starfish is Starfish, the leader of the Red Berry Boys, a criminal gang that Gang. He earns money by kidnapping people, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness, all the while consciousness in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body.. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his lair was uncovered. In addition to his rampant greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been gravely wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in the man's skull with a whiskey bottle. He also, once better muscle comes along, betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that Quigley’s eight-year-old son, Matty, will undergo the procedure as well. Additionally, as Starfish tries to have Quigley drowned, [[ForcedToWatch he forces a crying Matty to watch the whole thing]].imply because it's easier than trying to patch him up]]. ''[[NightmareFace With a smile on his face]]''.
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* CompleteMonster: Starfish is the leader of the Red Berry Boys, a criminal gang that earns money by kidnapping people, cutting out their organs, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness, all the while in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body, not per amount of substance in each body. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his lair was uncovered. In addition to his rampant greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been gravely wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in the man's skull with a whiskey bottle. He also, once better muscle comes along, betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that Quigley’s eight-year-old son, Matty, will undergo the procedure as well. Additionally, as Starfish tries to have Quigley drowned, [[ForcedToWatch he forces a crying Matty to watch the whole thing]].imply because it's easier than trying to patch him up]]. ''[[NightmareFace With a smile on his face]]''.

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* CompleteMonster: Starfish is the leader of the Red Berry Boys, a criminal gang that earns money by kidnapping people, cutting out their organs, vivisecting them, and using the available space to transport a magical substance in their captives' bodies. The process leaves its victims drifting in and out of consciousness, all the while in a constant state of pain. Recently, Starfish has made it a priority to target [[WouldHurtAChild children]] for this procedure. He does so because his buyers pay him the same amount per body, not per amount of substance in each body.body.. By using smaller bodies he can stretch out his supply, swindling his buyers out of extra cash. What this process entails is shown in gruesome detail with [[spoiler:Cara]], a little girl who the readers see slowly dying on an operating table, having had most of her organs removed and then been abandoned by Starfish when his lair was uncovered. In addition to his rampant greed, Starfish is prone to partaking in brutal and sadistic actions [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]. When his mook, [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], has been gravely wounded and is begging Starfish for a doctor, [[DissonantSerenity Starfish merely smiles]] and caves in the man's skull with a whiskey bottle. He also, once better muscle comes along, betrays Quigley, an {{Antivillain}} who only signed up with Stafish so long as the captive children were set free once the job ended. Not only does Starfish [[ILied renege on their deal]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempts to have Quigley killed]], but he even states that Quigley’s eight-year-old son, Matty, will undergo the procedure as well. Additionally, as Starfish tries to have Quigley drowned, [[ForcedToWatch he forces a crying Matty to watch the whole thing]].imply because it's easier than trying to patch him up]]. ''[[NightmareFace With a smile on his face]]''.

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