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** Pinkie's accidental ''[[{{FanFic/Cupcakes}} Cupcakes]]'' reference.
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** Pinkie's accidental ''[[{{FanFic/Cupcakes}} Cupcakes]]'' ''Fanfic/{{Cupcakes|SergeantSprinkles}}'' reference.
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* CrazyAwesome: Pinkie Pie, like in the series, is insane but awesome.
* CreatorsPet: The author seems to be a Trixie fan.
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* OutOfCharacter: Discord, according to the pre-readers at Equestria Daily.
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* AccidentalAesop: Can be both good or bad; Gilda and Diamond Tiara were sent home because of their attitude and bullying, seemingly providing the aesop that [[CaptainObvious bullying is bad]]. However, Sweetie Belle is sent home for making one mistake that ''anypony'' could have made and wasn't even entirely her fault, which may be telling readers that you have to do everything perfectly, or everyone will hate you.
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* AccidentalAesop: Can be both good or bad; Gilda and Diamond Tiara were sent home because of their attitude and bullying, seemingly providing the aesop that [[CaptainObvious bullying is bad]].bad. However, Sweetie Belle is sent home for making one mistake that ''anypony'' could have made and wasn't even entirely her fault, which may be telling readers that you have to do everything perfectly, or everyone will hate you.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: [[Awesome/TotalMagicPonyIsland Has its own page.]]
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: [[Funny/TotalMagicPonyIsland Also has its own page.]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: [[Heartwarming/TotalMagicPonyIsland You know the drill.]]
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: [[Funny/TotalMagicPonyIsland Also has its own page.]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: [[Heartwarming/TotalMagicPonyIsland You know the drill.]]
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: [[Awesome/TotalMagicPonyIsland Has SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: [[Funny/TotalMagicPonyIsland Also has its own page.]]
*CrowningMomentOfFunny: [[Funny/TotalMagicPonyIsland Also has its own page.]]
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** [[spoiler: Trixie]] may be this, if her DarkAndTroubledPast is anything to go on.on.
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* CompleteMonster: The only even ''remotely'' nice thing Gilda does is reluctantly congratulate Apple Bloom for pulling their team to victory in one challenge. Every other moment, she acts just as bad as in her own episode in the show, if not more so. [[spoiler: Subverted when she returns in chapter 14, as she's become a bit nicer; more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.]]
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* OutOfCharacter: Discord, according to the pre-readers at Equestria Daily.
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* AccidentalNightmareFuel: Gilda's rage during the dodgeball challenge.
** Also when [[spoiler: Trixie goes into her ThenLetMeBeEvil moment.]]
** Nightmare Moon's introduction can possibly catch some people off guard.
** The sudden reappearance of Mare Do Well. Worst part is that, so far, it doesn't seem to be one of the mane six this time...
** After [[spoiler: Silver Spoon]] is eliminated, [[spoiler: Spike]] gives a BadassBoast right before the end of the episode that is equal parts [[LetsGetDangerous awesome]] and [[ThenLetMeBeEvil scary]].
** Pinkie's accidental ''[[{{FanFic/Cupcakes}} Cupcakes]]'' reference.
** Also when [[spoiler: Trixie goes into her ThenLetMeBeEvil moment.]]
** Nightmare Moon's introduction can possibly catch some people off guard.
** The sudden reappearance of Mare Do Well. Worst part is that, so far, it doesn't seem to be one of the mane six this time...
** After [[spoiler: Silver Spoon]] is eliminated, [[spoiler: Spike]] gives a BadassBoast right before the end of the episode that is equal parts [[LetsGetDangerous awesome]] and [[ThenLetMeBeEvil scary]].
** Pinkie's accidental ''[[{{FanFic/Cupcakes}} Cupcakes]]'' reference.
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* NightmareFuel: Gilda's rage during the dodgeball challenge.
** Also when [[spoiler: Trixie goes into her ThenLetMeBeEvil moment.]]
** Nightmare Moon's introduction can possibly catch some people off guard.
** The sudden reappearance of Mare Do Well. Worst part is that, so far, it doesn't seem to be one of the mane six this time...
** After [[spoiler: Silver Spoon]] is eliminated, [[spoiler: Spike]] gives a BadassBoast right before the end of the episode that is equal parts [[LetsGetDangerous awesome]] and [[ThenLetMeBeEvil scary]].
** Pinkie's accidental ''[[{{FanFic/Cupcakes}} Cupcakes]]'' reference.
** Also when [[spoiler: Trixie goes into her ThenLetMeBeEvil moment.]]
** Nightmare Moon's introduction can possibly catch some people off guard.
** The sudden reappearance of Mare Do Well. Worst part is that, so far, it doesn't seem to be one of the mane six this time...
** After [[spoiler: Silver Spoon]] is eliminated, [[spoiler: Spike]] gives a BadassBoast right before the end of the episode that is equal parts [[LetsGetDangerous awesome]] and [[ThenLetMeBeEvil scary]].
** Pinkie's accidental ''[[{{FanFic/Cupcakes}} Cupcakes]]'' reference.
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* BetterThanItSounds
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* CompleteMonster: The only even ''remotely'' nice thing Gilda does is reluctantly congratulate Apple Bloom for pulling their team to victory in one challenge. Every other moment, she acts just as bad as in her own episode in the show, if not more so.
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* CompleteMonster: The only even ''remotely'' nice thing Gilda does is reluctantly congratulate Apple Bloom for pulling their team to victory in one challenge. Every other moment, she acts just as bad as in her own episode in the show, if not more so. [[spoiler: Subverted when she returns in chapter 14, as she's become a bit nicer; more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.]]
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: [[Awesome/TotalMagicPonyIsland Has its own page.]]
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: [[Funny/TotalMagicPonyIsland Also has its own page.]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: [[Heartwarming/TotalMagicPonyIsland You know the drill.]]
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: [[Funny/TotalMagicPonyIsland Also has its own page.]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: [[Heartwarming/TotalMagicPonyIsland You know the drill.]]
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler: Trixie]]'s past. As well as her breakdown after the talent show.
** [[spoiler: Apple Bloom]] being voted off without a reason, as part of [[spoiler: Trixie]]'s plan to stay safe.
** [[spoiler: Silver Spoon]] getting eliminated counts as well, especially [[spoiler: Spike's]] reaction.
** Celestia's breakdown after [[spoiler: Luna is eliminated]].
** [[spoiler: Spike's]] HeroicBSOD after being eliminated.
** [[spoiler: Apple Bloom]] being voted off without a reason, as part of [[spoiler: Trixie]]'s plan to stay safe.
** [[spoiler: Silver Spoon]] getting eliminated counts as well, especially [[spoiler: Spike's]] reaction.
** Celestia's breakdown after [[spoiler: Luna is eliminated]].
** [[spoiler: Spike's]] HeroicBSOD after being eliminated.
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler: Trixie]]'s past. As well as her breakdown after the talent show.
** [[spoiler: Apple Bloom]] being voted off without a reason, as part of [[spoiler: Trixie]]'s plan to stay safe.
** [[spoiler: Silver Spoon]] getting eliminated counts as well, especially [[spoiler: Spike's]] reaction.
** Celestia's breakdown after [[spoiler: Luna is eliminated]].
** [[spoiler: Spike's]] HeroicBSOD after being eliminated.[[TearJerker/TotalMagicPonyIsland Has its own page.]]
** [[spoiler: Apple Bloom]] being voted off without a reason, as part of [[spoiler: Trixie]]'s plan to stay safe.
** [[spoiler: Silver Spoon]] getting eliminated counts as well, especially [[spoiler: Spike's]] reaction.
** Celestia's breakdown after [[spoiler: Luna is eliminated]].
** [[spoiler: Spike's]] HeroicBSOD after being eliminated.
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** The fact that the unicorns are treated as useless due to not having their magic, pegasus wings, or earth pony power seems like saying if you lose whatever you're good at, you will become completely useless to everybody around you.
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** The fact that the unicorns are treated as useless due to not having their magic, pegasus Pegasus wings, or earth pony power seems like saying if you lose whatever you're good at, you will become completely useless to everybody around you.
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** Pinkie's accidental ''[[FanFic/Cupcakes Cupcakes]]'' reference.
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* {{Squick}}: The cupcake-eating challenge. Including Trixie cupcakes, made out of [[spoiler: ''Trixie's fur, hoof clippings, and saliva'']]. Almost everypony reacts this way, and even more when [[spoiler: Twilight eats a Trixie cupcake and ''likes it'']].
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** Celestia's breakdown after [[spoiler: Luna is eliminated]].
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** After [[spoiler: Silver Spoon]] is eliminated, [[spoiler: Spike]] gives a BadassBoast right before the end of the episode that is equal parts [[LetsGetDangerous awesome]] and [[ThenLetMeBeEvil scary]].
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* CreatorsPet: The author seems to be a Trixie fan.
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* TearJerker: The implications of [[spoiler: Trixie]]'s past. As well as her breakdown after the talent show.
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* TearJerker: The implications of [[spoiler: Trixie]]'s past. As well as her breakdown after the talent show.
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* TheWoobie: Silver Spoon, especially during the camping challenge.
** [[spoiler: Trixie]] may be this, if her implied DarkAndTroubledPast is anything to go on.
** [[spoiler: Trixie]] may be this, if her implied DarkAndTroubledPast is anything to go on.
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** [[spoiler: Silver Spoon]] getting eliminated counts as well, especially [[spoiler: Spike's]] reaction.
* TheWoobie: Silver Spoon, especially during the campingchallenge.
challenge and the endings of chapters 10 and 11.
** [[spoiler: Trixie]] may be this, if herimplied DarkAndTroubledPast is anything to go on.
* TheWoobie: Silver Spoon, especially during the camping
** [[spoiler: Trixie]] may be this, if her
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* AccidentalAesop: Can be both good or bad; Gilda and Diamond Tiara were sent home because of their attitude and bullying, seemingly providing the aesop that [[CaptainObvious bullying is bad]]. However, Sweetie Belle is sent home for making one mistake that ''anypony'' could have made and wasn't even entirely her fault, which may be telling readers that you have to do everything perfectly, or everyone will hate you.
** The fact that the unicorns are treated as useless due to not having their magic, pegasus wings, or earth pony power seems like saying if you lose whatever you're good at, you will become completely useless to everybody around you.
** The fact that the unicorns are treated as useless due to not having their magic, pegasus wings, or earth pony power seems like saying if you lose whatever you're good at, you will become completely useless to everybody around you.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: This series builds on several amounts of it from the original show, such as Trixie being a JerkWithAHeartOfGold, or Applejack and Rainbow Dash's bickering being attributed to crushing on each other.
* BetterThanItSounds
* CompleteMonster: The only even ''remotely'' nice thing Gilda does is reluctantly congratulate Apple Bloom for pulling their team to victory in one challenge. Every other moment, she acts just as bad as in her own episode in the show, if not more so.
* CrazyAwesome: Pinkie Pie, like in the series, is insane but awesome.
* LauncherOfAThousandShips: Seems like just about every ship out there is going to get referenced in this fic, so it's not surprising that several characters are/will become this.
* BetterThanItSounds
* CompleteMonster: The only even ''remotely'' nice thing Gilda does is reluctantly congratulate Apple Bloom for pulling their team to victory in one challenge. Every other moment, she acts just as bad as in her own episode in the show, if not more so.
* CrazyAwesome: Pinkie Pie, like in the series, is insane but awesome.
* LauncherOfAThousandShips: Seems like just about every ship out there is going to get referenced in this fic, so it's not surprising that several characters are/will become this.
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** [[spoiler: Apple Bloom]] being voted off without a reason, as part of [[spoiler: Trixie]]'s plan to stay safe.safe.
* TheWoobie: Silver Spoon, especially during the camping challenge.
** [[spoiler: Trixie]] may be this, if her implied DarkAndTroubledPast is anything to go on.
* TheWoobie: Silver Spoon, especially during the camping challenge.
** [[spoiler: Trixie]] may be this, if her implied DarkAndTroubledPast is anything to go on.