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Small typo, which, I think, can be fixed without needing to consult the CM thread. Hit me up if otherwise.
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* CompleteMonster: [[CreepyGymCoach The coach]] is a [[BitchInSheepsClothing seeming friend]] to all children, but in reality is a despicable [[SerialRapist pedophile]] who uses his position to [[WouldHurtAChild molest boys]] in his care. The coach has subjected many boys to his depraved actions, brainwashing young Neil and forcing him to lure in other boys and engage in sexual activity with Coach. [[PosthumousCharacter Though The coach has since disappeared from the lives of the boys he abused]], his vile actions tainted and tormented them all for life.
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* CompleteMonster: [[CreepyGymCoach The coach]] is a [[BitchInSheepsClothing seeming friend]] to all children, but in reality is a despicable [[SerialRapist pedophile]] who uses his position to [[WouldHurtAChild molest boys]] in his care. The coach has subjected many boys to his depraved actions, brainwashing young Neil and forcing him to lure in other boys and engage in sexual activity with Coach. [[PosthumousCharacter Though The the coach has since disappeared from the lives of the boys he abused]], his vile actions tainted and tormented them all for life.
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* NightmareFuel: [[spoiler:The coach is made of this. Neil's rape at the hands of one of his clients also counts.]]
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* NightmareFuel: [[spoiler:The coach is made of this. Made extra scary by the fact that he never seems to be held accountable for his actions. Neil's rape at the hands of one of his clients also counts.]]
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* DiagnosedByTheAudience: Whilst some of it may be explained by his childhood experiences, Brian is notably quite awkward in a social sense and generally odd. He may have some form of autism spectrum disorder.
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* CompleteMonster: [[CreepyGymCoach The Coach]] is a [[BitchInSheepsClothing seeming friend]] to all children, but in reality is a despicable [[SerialRapist pedophile]] who uses his position to [[WouldHurtAChild molest boys]] in his care. Coach has subjected many boys to his depraved actions, brainwashing young Neil and forcing him to lure in other boys and engage in sexual activity with Coach. [[PosthumousCharacter Though Coach has since disappeared from the lives of the boys he abused]], his vile actions tainted and tormented them all for life.
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* CompleteMonster: [[CreepyGymCoach The Coach]] coach]] is a [[BitchInSheepsClothing seeming friend]] to all children, but in reality is a despicable [[SerialRapist pedophile]] who uses his position to [[WouldHurtAChild molest boys]] in his care. Coach The coach has subjected many boys to his depraved actions, brainwashing young Neil and forcing him to lure in other boys and engage in sexual activity with Coach. [[PosthumousCharacter Though Coach The coach has since disappeared from the lives of the boys he abused]], his vile actions tainted and tormented them all for life.
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* CompleteMonster: [[CreepyGymCoach The Coach]] is a [[BitchInSheepsClothing seeming friend]] to all children, but in reality is a despicable [[SerialRapist pedophile]] who uses his position to molest boys in his care. Coach has subjected many boys to his depraved actions, brainwashing young Neil and forcing him to lure in other boys and engage in sexual activity with Coach. [[PosthumousCharacter Though Coach has since disappeared from the lives of the boys he abused]], his vile actions tainted and tormented them all for life.
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* CompleteMonster: [[CreepyGymCoach The Coach]] is a [[BitchInSheepsClothing seeming friend]] to all children, but in reality is a despicable [[SerialRapist pedophile]] who uses his position to [[WouldHurtAChild molest boys boys]] in his care. Coach has subjected many boys to his depraved actions, brainwashing young Neil and forcing him to lure in other boys and engage in sexual activity with Coach. [[PosthumousCharacter Though Coach has since disappeared from the lives of the boys he abused]], his vile actions tainted and tormented them all for life.
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* CompleteMonster: [[CreepyGymCoach The Coach]] is a [[BitchInSheepsClothing seeming friend]] to all children, but in reality is a despicable [[SerialRapist pedophile]] who uses his position to molest boys in his care. Coach has subjected many boys to his depraved actions, brainwashing young Neil and forcing him to lure in other boys and engage in sexual activity with Coach. [[PosthumousCharacter Though Coach has since disappeared from the lives of the boys he abused]], his vile actions tainted and tormented them all for life.
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* TearJerker: The final scene where Neil sits on the couch with Brian sobbing hysterically on his lap. It doubles as a ''very'' bittersweet ending.
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* TearJerker: TearJerker:
** The final scene where Neil sits on the couch with Brian sobbing hysterically on his lap. It doubles as a ''very'' bittersweet ending.
** The final scene where Neil sits on the couch with Brian sobbing hysterically on his lap. It doubles as a ''very'' bittersweet ending.
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* NarmCharm: [[spoiler:The conversation between the leads at the end regarding the coach's sexual abuse of them recount exceptionally over the top sex acts, like him asking them to insert their arms in his rectum. That said, it does help highlight how unappealing and disgusting the whole thing was, if the fact that they were children wasn't enough.]]
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* NightmareFuel: The coach is made of this. Neil's rape at the hands of one of his clients also counts.
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* NightmareFuel: The [[spoiler:The coach is made of this. Neil's rape at the hands of one of his clients also counts.]]
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* TearJerker: The final scene where Neil sits on the couch with Brian sobbing hysterically on his lap. It doubles as a '''very''' bittersweet ending.
** The aftermath of Neil's bathtub attack, where he's lying outside at night. He utters the single word 'mom'.
** The aftermath of Neil's bathtub attack, where he's lying outside at night. He utters the single word 'mom'.
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* NightmareFuel: The coach is made of this. Neil's rape at the hands of one of his clients also counts.
* TearJerker: The final scene where Neil sits on the couch with Brian sobbing hysterically on his lap. It doubles as a'''very''' ''very'' bittersweet ending.
** The aftermath of Neil's bathtub attack, where he's lying outside at night. He utters the single word'mom'. "mom."
* TearJerker: The final scene where Neil sits on the couch with Brian sobbing hysterically on his lap. It doubles as a
** The aftermath of Neil's bathtub attack, where he's lying outside at night. He utters the single word
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** The aftermath of Neil's bathtub attack, where he's lying outside at night. He utters the single word 'mom'.
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* TheWoobie: Both Neil and Brian, due to [[spoiler: both of them being raped and sexually abused as children by their baseball coach.]]
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* TheWoobie: Both Neil and Brian, due to [[spoiler: both of them being raped and sexually abused as children by their baseball coach.]]]] Neil is more of JerkassWoobie, though the Woobie part outweights the Jerkass part mostly.
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Straight up says it isn't an example
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* {{Narm}}: Not exactly this trope per se, but the ending can come off as this, what with [[spoiler:the long and detailed description Neil gives to what happened to him and Brian]]. It’s so long and detailed and [[spoiler:the general idea of what happened was already made abundantly clear beforehand]], so it can feel somewhat over-the-top and forced when [[spoiler:the specifics are delved into]], but you’d be very, very lucky to feel this way instead of being emotionally crushed by it.
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Actual gay characters dont get ho yay.
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* HoYay: Neil and Brian clearly have chemistry, although their shared past keeps it from going anywhere.
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* CrowningMusicOfAwesome: The heavily {{Shoegazing}}- and DreamPop-focused soundtrack (a given since the music was co-composed by [[Music/CocteauTwins Robin Guthrie]]), since Araki is a huge fan of the two genres.
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* CrowningMusicOfAwesome: SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic: The heavily {{Shoegazing}}- and DreamPop-focused soundtrack (a given since the music was co-composed by [[Music/CocteauTwins Robin Guthrie]]), since Araki is a huge fan of the two genres.
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* TheWoobie: Both Neil and Brian, due to [[spoiler: both of them being raped and sexually abused as children by their baseball coach.]]
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* TheWoobie: Both Neil and Brian, due to [[spoiler: both of them being raped and sexually abused as children by their baseball coach.]]]]
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* CrowningMusicOfAwesome: The heavily {{Shoegazing}}- and DreamPop-focused soundtrack, since Araki is a huge fan of the two genres.
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* CrowningMusicOfAwesome: The heavily {{Shoegazing}}- and DreamPop-focused soundtrack, soundtrack (a given since the music was co-composed by [[Music/CocteauTwins Robin Guthrie]]), since Araki is a huge fan of the two genres.
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* TearJerker: The final scene where Neil sits on the couch with Brian sobbing hysterically on his lap. It doubles as a '''very''' bittersweet ending.
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* TearJerker: The final scene where Neil sits on the couch with Brian sobbing hysterically on his lap. It doubles as a '''very''' bittersweet ending.ending.
* TheWoobie: Both Neil and Brian, due to [[spoiler: both of them being raped and sexually abused as children by their baseball coach.]]
* TheWoobie: Both Neil and Brian, due to [[spoiler: both of them being raped and sexually abused as children by their baseball coach.]]
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* {{Narm}}: Not exactly this trope per se, but the ending can come off as this, what with [[spoiler:the long and detailed description Neil gives to what happened to him and Brian]]. It’s so long and detailed it can feel somewhat over-the-top and forced, but you’d be very, very lucky to feel this way instead of being emotionally crushed by it.
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* {{Narm}}: Not exactly this trope per se, but the ending can come off as this, what with [[spoiler:the long and detailed description Neil gives to what happened to him and Brian]]. It’s so long and detailed and [[spoiler:the general idea of what happened was already made abundantly clear beforehand]], so it can feel somewhat over-the-top and forced, forced when [[spoiler:the specifics are delved into]], but you’d be very, very lucky to feel this way instead of being emotionally crushed by it.
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* {{Narm}}: Not exactly this trope per se, but the ending can come off as this, what with [[spoiler:the long and detailed description Neil gives to what happened to him and Brian]]. It’s so long and detailed it can feel somewhat over-the-top and forced, but you’d be very, very lucky to feel this way instead of being emotionally crushed by it.
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* HoYay: Neil and Brian.
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* HoYay: Neil and Brian.Brian clearly have chemistry, although their shared past keeps it from going anywhere.
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* CrowningMusicOfAwesome: The heavily {{Shoegazing}}- and DreamPop-focused soundtrack, since Araki is a huge fan of the two genres.
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* CrowningMusicOfAwesome: The heavily {{Shoegazing}}- and DreamPop-focused soundtrack, since Araki is a huge fan of the two genres.genres.
* HoYay: Neil and Brian.
* TearJerker: The final scene where Neil sits on the couch with Brian sobbing hysterically on his lap. It doubles as a '''very''' bittersweet ending.
* HoYay: Neil and Brian.
* TearJerker: The final scene where Neil sits on the couch with Brian sobbing hysterically on his lap. It doubles as a '''very''' bittersweet ending.
