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Horny Devils was renamed to Succubi And Incubi, and Hot As Hell was retooled into being about attractive and seductive demons
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* {{Squick}}: There are moments of this in some chapters. For example, [[BigBad Azechral]] uses the Blessings of [[HornyDevils Slaanesh]] to drive a [[IncorruptiblePurePureness paladin]] insane with lust, causing him to be lost in a sea of ecstasy that drives him to basically have sex with the mutated, inhuman, and mindless remains of his Mage girlfriend who has been mutated by the Powers of Tzeentch.
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* {{Squick}}: There are moments of this in some chapters. For example, [[BigBad Azechral]] uses the Blessings of [[HornyDevils [[HotAsHell Slaanesh]] to drive a [[IncorruptiblePurePureness paladin]] insane with lust, causing him to be lost in a sea of ecstasy that drives him to basically have sex with the mutated, inhuman, and mindless remains of his Mage girlfriend who has been mutated by the Powers of Tzeentch.
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* ArcFatigue: The later parts of the story suffer from this.
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* TearJerker: The story of the God Emperor. And everyone in the Scarlet Crusade cries at ''this''.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: There's a few of them.
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: Runs on this trope.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Runs on this trope.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Runs on this trope.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartWarming:SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: There's a few of them.them.
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* TearJerker: The story of the God Emperor. And everyone in the Scarlet Crusade cries at ''this''.
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* TearJerker: The story of the God Emperor. And everyone in the Scarlet Crusade cries at ''this''.''this''.
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* LoveItOrHateIt: Warhammer fans find this fic amusing were as Warcraft fans are decidedly tepid in their reaction towards it.
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* BaseBreaker: Warhammer fans find this fic amusing were as Warcraft fans are decidedly tepid in their reaction towards it. See CurbStompBattle on the main page.
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* BaseBreaker: LoveItOrHateIt: Warhammer fans find this fic amusing were as Warcraft fans are decidedly tepid in their reaction towards it. See CurbStompBattle on the main page.
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* JerkSue: Let's recap: a ridiculously xenophobic SpaceMarine finds himself on a planet inhabited by numerous non-human species. He proceeds to effortlessly curbstomp everything that gets in his way, insult everyone around him for being either a heretic, a traitor, or a filthy xeno, gains the attention of nearly every faction leader in both the Horde and the Alliance, and gives them the same shitty treatment that he gives everyone else with no negative repercussions whatsoever. Yet despite all this, and despite the fact that he makes it ''very clear'' that he regards non-humans as being lower than dirt, he has somehow picked up an UnwantedHarem made up mostly of non-humans. Is it any wonder he fits in so well with [[CorruptChurch the]] [[ChurchMilitant Scarlet]] [[LawfulStupid Crusade?]]
** Yes, actually, because by all accounts they're far too soft for his tastes.
** Avarian is no more xenophobic than is absolutely obligatory for humanity in 40K. You want really unreasoning hatred? See the Black Templars.
** Yes, actually, because by all accounts they're far too soft for his tastes.
** Avarian is no more xenophobic than is absolutely obligatory for humanity in 40K. You want really unreasoning hatred? See the Black Templars.
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* MemeticSexGod: The ladies really want Avarian.
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*AudienceAlienatingPremise: If you are a Warcraft fan, the sheer bias towards Warhammer will be far too much to stomach this fic. The author pretending that any Space marine would have a better grasp of realistic tactics than a warcraft army is a good indication. Hell, read the way some people talk about Warcraft on thus work's main page.
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** Avarian is no more xenophobic than is absolutely obligatory for humanity in 40K. You want really unreasoning hatred? See the Black Templars.
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* {{Squick}}: There are moments of this in some chapters. For example, [[BigBad Azechral]] uses the Blessings of [[HornyDevils Slaanesh]] to drive a [[IncorruptiblePurePureness paladin]] insane with lust, causing him to be lost in a sea of ecstasy that drives him to basically have sex with the mutated, inhuman, and mindless remains of his Mage girlfriend who has been mutated by the Powers of Tzeentch.
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* MemeticSexGod: The ladies really want Avarian, even the Eldar.
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* MemeticSexGod: The ladies really want Avarian, even the Eldar.Avarian.
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** Yes, actually, because by all accounts they're far too soft for his tastes.
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* JerkSue: Let's recap: a ridiculously xenophobic SpaceMarine finds himself on a planet inhabited by numerous non-human species. He proceeds to effortlessly curbstomp everything that gets in his way, insult everyone around him for being either a heretic, a traitor, or a filthy xeno, gains the attention of nearly every faction leader in both the Horde and the Alliance, and gives them the same shitty treatment that he gives everyone else with no negative repercussions whatsoever. Yet despite all this, and despite the fact that he makes it ''very clear'' that he regards non-humans as being lower than dirt, he has somehow picked up an UnwantedHarem made up mostly of non-humans. Is it any wonder he fits in so well with [[CorruptChurch the]] [[ChurchMilitant Scarlet]] [[LawfulStupid Crusade?]]
