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* ''A Protector's Pride'': Ichigo is called out by Yamamoto for [[spoiler: trying to go to Hell to save the soul of his mother and sisters]] saying he's placing 3 people over the safety of the world.world.
** Only for Ichigo to fire back and point out that they can be saved but Yamamoto is too LawfulStupid to see it and that the above happened on his watch.
** Only for Ichigo to fire back and point out that they can be saved but Yamamoto is too LawfulStupid to see it and that the above happened on his watch.
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* ''A Protector's Pride'': Ichigo is called out by Yamamoto for [[spoiler: trying to go to Hell to save the soul of his mother and sisters]] saying he's placing 3 people over the safety of the world.
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* In ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8180681/1/Mad-World Mad World]]'', Trick uses his [[RealityWarper powers]] to write that the [[{{BigBad}} Garuda]] will be defeated by a champion (who turns out to be Bo). The Garuda is aware of this, and knows that Lauren will be involved. So it and [[TheDragon Thane]] [[TraumaCongaLine utterly destroy her life]] trying to prevent it. Thane murders 19 of her colleagues/friends, murders her, she is then brought back by the Fae, forced into slavery to them, and then Thane returns and subjects her to MindRape and [[ColdBloodedTorture horrific torture]]. She is distinctly unamused when Trick confesses his role in it, and calls him on it in the sequel.
-->'''Lauren:''' What right did you have to play God?
-->'''Trick:''' Lauren...
-->'''Lauren:''' I am so...sick of explanations of the greater good. I get it from the Ash, from the Morrigan, from you. Everything that happened is for the greater good. I am tired of my life being nothing more than a trivial after thought to you people. I had a life, a good life before it was taken from me. I died and was resurrected because that would help the Fae. I have lived the last five years at the mercy of the Light Fae while most of them [[FantasticRacism treat animals]] [[PunyHumans better than they treat me.]] So, to answer your question Trick, I'm not alright. I haven't been alright for five years and now I'm just sick of putting up with it.
-->'''Trick:''' Lauren, I'm sorry.
-->'''Lauren:''' Keep your apologies. If you want to help me, you'll write a new Fae future that I'm not a part of.
** There's also a failed one. Lauren finally kills Thane (after said torture), Amara while happy Thane is dead is deeply upset that Lauren killed him. She feels that Fae who sacrificed himself to resurrect Lauren (who was also her brother) was of a pure and superior fae, and that Lauren has destroyed said purity by killing someone. It comes off as petty and arrogant given everything that has happened, which was likely intentional.
* In ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8180681/1/Mad-World Mad World]]'', Trick uses his [[RealityWarper powers]] to write that the [[{{BigBad}} Garuda]] will be defeated by a champion (who turns out to be Bo). The Garuda is aware of this, and knows that Lauren will be involved. So it and [[TheDragon Thane]] [[TraumaCongaLine utterly destroy her life]] trying to prevent it. Thane murders 19 of her colleagues/friends, murders her, she is then brought back by the Fae, forced into slavery to them, and then Thane returns and subjects her to MindRape and [[ColdBloodedTorture horrific torture]]. She is distinctly unamused when Trick confesses his role in it, and calls him on it in the sequel.
-->'''Lauren:''' What right did you have to play God?
-->'''Trick:''' Lauren...
-->'''Lauren:''' I am so...sick of explanations of the greater good. I get it from the Ash, from the Morrigan, from you. Everything that happened is for the greater good. I am tired of my life being nothing more than a trivial after thought to you people. I had a life, a good life before it was taken from me. I died and was resurrected because that would help the Fae. I have lived the last five years at the mercy of the Light Fae while most of them [[FantasticRacism treat animals]] [[PunyHumans better than they treat me.]] So, to answer your question Trick, I'm not alright. I haven't been alright for five years and now I'm just sick of putting up with it.
-->'''Trick:''' Lauren, I'm sorry.
-->'''Lauren:''' Keep your apologies. If you want to help me, you'll write a new Fae future that I'm not a part of.
** There's also a failed one. Lauren finally kills Thane (after said torture), Amara while happy Thane is dead is deeply upset that Lauren killed him. She feels that Fae who sacrificed himself to resurrect Lauren (who was also her brother) was of a pure and superior fae, and that Lauren has destroyed said purity by killing someone. It comes off as petty and arrogant given everything that has happened, which was likely intentional.
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* In ''Fanfic/{{Jericho}}'', the eponymous main character, [[FirstPersonSmartass Jericho]] has this happen to him when he gets attacked by an angry townspony. In a [[CurbStompBattle blink-and-you'll-miss-it fight]], Jericho knocks the guy out, only to have the guy's wife and little daughter both rush to his aide. They yell at him, and then he has a WhatTheHellHero moment on himself.
--> [[DeadpanSnarker Jericho]]: “Oh, you mean the side-neck chop? That’s just a martial arts move. I mean, yeah, if I’d done it wrong, it would have killed him via cardiac arrest, and so, in hindsight, that was highly irresponsible of me to do but... I’m not helping my case any, am I?”
--> [[DeadpanSnarker Jericho]]: “Oh, you mean the side-neck chop? That’s just a martial arts move. I mean, yeah, if I’d done it wrong, it would have killed him via cardiac arrest, and so, in hindsight, that was highly irresponsible of me to do but... I’m not helping my case any, am I?”
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* In the ''SonicTheHedgehog'' and ''SailorMoon'' crossover [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4167708/1/Chaos_Infinity ChaosInfinity]] the Sailor Scouts force Sonic and his friends to fight them after they accuse them of the mess going on in Tokyo. (It's Eggman's doing, obviously.) After the showdown, Sonic holds nothing back as he berates them - just when he thought that they could look past animalistic looks. His words hit close to home:
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* In the ''SonicTheHedgehog'' and ''SailorMoon'' crossover [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4167708/1/Chaos_Infinity ChaosInfinity]] Chaos Infinity]] the Sailor Scouts force Sonic and his friends to fight them after they accuse them of the mess going on in Tokyo. (It's Eggman's doing, obviously.) After the showdown, Sonic holds nothing back as he berates them - just when he thought that they could look past animalistic looks. His words hit close to home:
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* ''[[Fanfic/AFutureOfFriendshipAHistoryOfHate A Future of Friendship, A History of Hate]]'': Rainbow Dash gets chewed out several times in Episode 3 for putting herself in danger — first, when breaking up a thunderstorm in TheTeaser with a dangerous technique, then with her insistence on fighting [[ArchEnemy Fury Cross]] alone.
** Rainbow Dash herself rips Rarity a new one in Episode 4 for blowing off her friends to spend time with [[BitchInSheepsClothing Regal Rule]]. Rarity brushes her off, which makes her feel even worse when she has her MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment later on and realizes Rainbow Dash was completely right.
** Rainbow Dash herself rips Rarity a new one in Episode 4 for blowing off her friends to spend time with [[BitchInSheepsClothing Regal Rule]]. Rarity brushes her off, which makes her feel even worse when she has her MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment later on and realizes Rainbow Dash was completely right.
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* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8988902/1/Reconciliator-of-Empire-City Reconciliator of Empire City]]'', [[VideoGame/inFamous Cole [=MacGrath=]]] calls out [[ComicBook/XMen Kitty Pryde]] for her attempt in killing Emma Frost in ''Astonish X-Men # 18''.
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* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8988902/1/Reconciliator-of-Empire-City Reconciliator of Empire City]]'', [[VideoGame/inFamous [[VideoGame/{{inFamous}} Cole [=MacGrath=]]] calls out [[ComicBook/XMen Kitty Pryde]] for her attempt in killing Emma Frost in ''Astonish X-Men # 18''.
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* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8988902/1/Reconciliator-of-Empire-City Reconciliator of Empire City]]'', [[VideoGame/inFamous Cole [=MacGrath=]]] calls out [[ComicBook/XMen Kitty Pryde]] for her attempt in killing Emma Frost in ''Astonish X-Men # 18''.
-->'''Cole [=MacGrath=]''': What were you thinking? Were you really going to kill her, Kitty? You really got to watch that sense of distrust you have. That gun you pulled at her, it's not something you aim at a teammate. When are you finally going to grow up, Kitty?
-->'''Cole [=MacGrath=]''': What were you thinking? Were you really going to kill her, Kitty? You really got to watch that sense of distrust you have. That gun you pulled at her, it's not something you aim at a teammate. When are you finally going to grow up, Kitty?
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* ''Moonlit Path: Disloyal Hearts'': Moonpaw can be ''quite'' a jerk, especially later in the story. Her friend Paleflower is usually the one to point this out to her, though Twigpelt also does so.
-->'''Paleflower''': Are you saying that you're upset that the medicine cat doesn't respect you?
-->'''Moonpaw''': That's exactly what I'm saying!
-->'''Paleflower''': Look, Moonpaw, I hate to break it to you, but there are only two other cats in the ''Clan'' who are less experienced than you. You can't expect to be revered from the very start.
** A more extreme example from when Moonpaw [[spoiler:abandoned Paleflower in battle]]:
-->'''Paleflower''': Well, maybe sometime you should stop and think about helping the Clan. Sometime when you're not too busy being scared of getting hurt. I'm your ''friend'', Moonpaw. And you turned your back on me.
* ''Moonlit Path: Disloyal Hearts'': Moonpaw can be ''quite'' a jerk, especially later in the story. Her friend Paleflower is usually the one to point this out to her, though Twigpelt also does so.
-->'''Paleflower''': Are you saying that you're upset that the medicine cat doesn't respect you?
-->'''Moonpaw''': That's exactly what I'm saying!
-->'''Paleflower''': Look, Moonpaw, I hate to break it to you, but there are only two other cats in the ''Clan'' who are less experienced than you. You can't expect to be revered from the very start.
** A more extreme example from when Moonpaw [[spoiler:abandoned Paleflower in battle]]:
-->'''Paleflower''': Well, maybe sometime you should stop and think about helping the Clan. Sometime when you're not too busy being scared of getting hurt. I'm your ''friend'', Moonpaw. And you turned your back on me.
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* ''Fanfic/TheNorthRemembers'': When Jaime Lannister is sent into a trap set up by the Brotherhood without Banners [[spoiler:after being led there unwillingly by Brienne]], he is given the standard KangarooCourt before setting out to hang him. Like Sandor Clegane before him, he calls them out on this behavior, specifically to Lem Lemoncloak.
-->'''Jaime''': ''“You smell marginally less bad, you potentially have better table manners, and you're more likely to be mistaken for the hind end of an aurochs rather than a goat, but for the life of me I can't see how you're different from the Bloody Mummers. At least they only had the decency to take my hand, but you won't be satisfied with anything less than my soul. Haven't you thundering imbeciles worked out by now that there's nothing there to give? Kill the Kingslayer, very well. Then you'll be a hero. Will that make you immortal, or set to rights the wrongs you're supposedly avenging, or do anything besides make you just as much a murderer as me? I don't care what god you pray to or what high-and-mighty purpose you claim. You still think you're the only ones to lose something in this war, and that makes you at least as blind as my sweet sister. Drop those breeches, Pisscloak, grace us all with the delightful aroma of your shit."''
* ''Fanfic/TheNorthRemembers'': When Jaime Lannister is sent into a trap set up by the Brotherhood without Banners [[spoiler:after being led there unwillingly by Brienne]], he is given the standard KangarooCourt before setting out to hang him. Like Sandor Clegane before him, he calls them out on this behavior, specifically to Lem Lemoncloak.
-->'''Jaime''': ''“You smell marginally less bad, you potentially have better table manners, and you're more likely to be mistaken for the hind end of an aurochs rather than a goat, but for the life of me I can't see how you're different from the Bloody Mummers. At least they only had the decency to take my hand, but you won't be satisfied with anything less than my soul. Haven't you thundering imbeciles worked out by now that there's nothing there to give? Kill the Kingslayer, very well. Then you'll be a hero. Will that make you immortal, or set to rights the wrongs you're supposedly avenging, or do anything besides make you just as much a murderer as me? I don't care what god you pray to or what high-and-mighty purpose you claim. You still think you're the only ones to lose something in this war, and that makes you at least as blind as my sweet sister. Drop those breeches, Pisscloak, grace us all with the delightful aroma of your shit."''
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* In ''The Lost Son'', after it's revealed to the team that McGee has been working on a secret project for the government and will be sent to Afghanistan to field test it, [[ButtMonkey McGee]] delivers one to Gibbs, Tony, and Abby, along with Director Vance.
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* In ''The Lost Son'', after it's revealed to the team that McGee [=McGee=] has been working on a secret project for the government and will be sent to Afghanistan to field test it, [[ButtMonkey McGee]] delivers one to Gibbs, Tony, and Abby, along with Director Vance.
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* In ''The Lost Son'', after it's revealed to the team that McGee has been working on a secret project for the government and will be sent to Afghanistan to field test it, [[ButtMonkey McGee]] delivers one to Gibbs, Tony, and Abby, along with Director Vance.
* In ''The Lost Son'', after it's revealed to the team that McGee has been working on a secret project for the government and will be sent to Afghanistan to field test it, [[ButtMonkey McGee]] delivers one to Gibbs, Tony, and Abby, along with Director Vance.
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* ''FanFic/{{Hivefled}}'': Gamzee's SpiritAdvisor duo, Laneen and Sennir, chew him out both for allowing himself to slip into his ancestor's evil ways and for beating himself up for not being able to escape sooner.
* ''FanFic/{{Hivefled}}'': Gamzee's SpiritAdvisor duo, Laneen and Sennir, chew him out both for allowing himself to slip into his ancestor's evil ways and for beating himself up for not being able to escape sooner.
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-->'''Lightning Bolt''': How could you be so harsh toward Rainbow Dash? She’s going through personal hell! We should be helping her... but you keep berating her instead!
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-->'''Lightning Bolt''': Firefly, we need to talk! How could you be so harsh toward Rainbow Dash? She’s going through personal hell! We should be helping her... but you only keep berating yelling at her and everypony else instead!
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* The dwarven noble gets some of these in DragonAgeTheCrownOfThorns. One of them leaves him with broken ribs and a snapped jaw. He expected it and let it happen, but it still hurt because healing magic didn't work on him until recently. And even now it's not a given.
* The dwarven noble gets some of these in DragonAgeTheCrownOfThorns. One of them leaves him with broken ribs and a snapped jaw. He expected it and let it happen, but it still hurt because healing magic didn't work on him until recently. And even now it's not a given.
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* In {{Fanfic/Reconciliation}} it is revealed that Lilly was angry with Hisao for disregarding her advice about Hanako, checking on her when she didn't want to see anyone, [[spoiler:triggering the Bad Ending (in which Hanako angrily decclares that she hates Hisao and Lilly)]] and leading to Hanako distancing herself from Hisao and Lilly for eight years out of guilt. Averted when Hanako expects to receive a response like this from Lilly, but does not.
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* Littlefoot of ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4044080/1/Land_Before_Time_Twilight_Valley Twilight Valley]]'' gets called out by Pterano for assaulting Ms. Maia who is the leader of a a guard division. [[spoiler: Ms. Maia later turns traitor]].
* In {{Fanfic/Reconciliation}} it is revealed that Lilly was angry with Hisao for disregarding her advice about Hanako, checking on her when she didn't want to see anyone, [[spoiler:triggering the Bad Ending (in which Hanako angrily decclares that she hates Hisao and Lilly)]] and leading to Hanako distancing herself from Hisao and Lilly for eight years out of guilt. Averted when Hanako expects to receive a response like this from Lilly, but does not.
[[AC: ''The Land Before Time'']]
* Littlefoot of ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4044080/1/Land_Before_Time_Twilight_Valley Twilight Valley]]'' gets called out by Pterano for assaulting Ms. Maia who is the leader of a a guard division. [[spoiler: Ms. Maia later turns traitor]].
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* Littlefoot of ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4044080/1/Land_Before_Time_Twilight_Valley Twilight Valley]]'' gets called out by Pterano for assaulting Ms. Maia who is the leader of a a guard division. [[spoiler: Ms. Maia later turns traitor]].
* The dwarven noble gets some of these in DragonAgeTheCrownOfThorns. One of them leaves him with broken ribs and a snapped jaw. He expected it and let it happen, but it still hurt because healing magic didn't work on him until recently. And even now it's not a given.
* In {{Fanfic/Reconciliation}} it is revealed that Lilly was angry with Hisao for disregarding her advice about Hanako, checking on her when she didn't want to see anyone, [[spoiler:triggering the Bad Ending (in which Hanako angrily decclares that she hates Hisao and Lilly)]] and leading to Hanako distancing herself from Hisao and Lilly for eight years out of guilt. Averted when Hanako expects to receive a response like this from Lilly, but does not.
* Littlefoot of ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4044080/1/Land_Before_Time_Twilight_Valley Twilight Valley]]'' gets called out by Pterano for assaulting Ms. Maia who is the leader of a a guard division. [[spoiler: Ms. Maia later turns traitor]].
* The dwarven noble gets some of these in DragonAgeTheCrownOfThorns. One of them leaves him with broken ribs and a snapped jaw. He expected it and let it happen, but it still hurt because healing magic didn't work on him until recently. And even now it's not a given.
* In {{Fanfic/Reconciliation}} it is revealed that Lilly was angry with Hisao for disregarding her advice about Hanako, checking on her when she didn't want to see anyone, [[spoiler:triggering the Bad Ending (in which Hanako angrily decclares that she hates Hisao and Lilly)]] and leading to Hanako distancing herself from Hisao and Lilly for eight years out of guilt. Averted when Hanako expects to receive a response like this from Lilly, but does not.
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* In ''FanFic/{{An Entry with a Bang}}!'', public opinion turns against the anti-mercenary protestors after they injure one of the child dependents of the Buron Cavalry.
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* In [[Fanfic/{{Downfall}} Downfall]] we see this from both sides of the Seireitei/Hueco Mundo war- and BOTH sides have called the other out on it at one point or another.
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* In [[Fanfic/{{Downfall}} Downfall]] ''[[Fanfic/{{Downfall}} Downfall]]'' we see this from both sides of the Seireitei/Hueco Mundo war- and BOTH sides have called the other out on it at one point or another.
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* In ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/53317/No%2C-I-Am-NOT-A-Brony%2C-GET-ME-OUTTA-EQUESTRIA!!! No, I am Not a Brony, GET ME OUTTA EQUESTRIA!!!]]'', TD epically calls out the Mane Six sans Fluttershy for how they've treated him over the last couple of days: Pinkie punished him for breaking a Pinkie Promise - ''after'' he'd apologised - by setting him on (harmless) fire; Rarity cast a freezing spell on him to keep him from running out of the boutique when he thought she was going to make him something ridiculous - then used him as a mannequin - rather than simply explain that she would show him her deisgns and get his approval before making anything; and Twilight, Applejack and Rainbow Dash attempted to beat the crap out of him less than an hour after he'd woken up in hospital - admittedly, he had just punched Celestia in the face for accidentally bringing him here, but as he points out, their actions were completely [[DisproportionateRetribution disproportionate]] to any damage he could have done to an immortal sun goddess.
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* In ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/53317/No%2C-I-Am-NOT-A-Brony%2C-GET-ME-OUTTA-EQUESTRIA!!! ''[[Fanfic/{{TheNon-Bronyverse}} No, I am Not a Brony, GET ME OUTTA EQUESTRIA!!!]]'', TD epically calls out the Mane Six sans Fluttershy for how they've treated him over the last couple of days: Pinkie punished him for breaking a Pinkie Promise - ''after'' he'd apologised - by setting him on (harmless) fire; Rarity cast a freezing spell on him to keep him from running out of the boutique when he thought she was going to make him something ridiculous - then used him as a mannequin - rather than simply explain that she would show him her deisgns and get his approval before making anything; and Twilight, Applejack and Rainbow Dash attempted to beat the crap out of him less than an hour after he'd woken up in hospital - admittedly, he had just punched Celestia in the face for accidentally bringing him here, but as he points out, their actions were completely [[DisproportionateRetribution disproportionate]] to any damage he could have done to an immortal sun goddess.
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* In ''Fanfic/WithStringsAttached'', the four (specifically George) decide to abandon Jim Hunter to his mind-sucking {{BFS}} because they don't want to risk their lives trying to get it away from him. They feel guilty, but they do it anyway. Luckily for both him and them, the ruthless ploy results in Jim's being able to release the sword, so he thinks it was just a brilliant maneuver on George's part. No one is in any hurry to tell him differently.
** Also, they refuse to rescue or even contact Lyndess after they deliver the Vasyn, pretty much saying that she can go fuck herself... despite her having saved their lives at the end of the First Movement.
* In ''Fanfic/WithStringsAttached'', the four (specifically George) decide to abandon Jim Hunter to his mind-sucking {{BFS}} because they don't want to risk their lives trying to get it away from him. They feel guilty, but they do it anyway. Luckily for both him and them, the ruthless ploy results in Jim's being able to release the sword, so he thinks it was just a brilliant maneuver on George's part. No one is in any hurry to tell him differently.
** Also, they refuse to rescue or even contact Lyndess after they deliver the Vasyn, pretty much saying that she can go fuck herself... despite her having saved their lives at the end of the First Movement.
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* In ''Fanfic/WithStringsAttached'', the four (specifically George) decide to abandon Jim Hunter to his mind-sucking {{BFS}} because they don't want to risk their lives trying to get it away from him. They feel guilty, but they do it anyway. Luckily for both him and them, the ruthless ploy results in Jim's being able to release the sword, so he thinks it was just a brilliant maneuver on George's part. No one is in any hurry to tell him differently.
** Also, they refuse to rescue or even contact Lyndess after they deliver the Vasyn, pretty much saying that she can go fuck herself... despite her having saved their lives at the end of the First Movement.
** Also, they refuse to rescue or even contact Lyndess after they deliver the Vasyn, pretty much saying that she can go fuck herself... despite her having saved their lives at the end of the First Movement.
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* In ''PokeWars: The Subsistence'', Tracy gets yelled at by the entire cast after he tries to assault Jessie, James and Meowth after their HeelFaceTurn.
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* In ''PokeWars: ''Fanfic/PokeWars: The Subsistence'', Tracy gets yelled at by the entire cast after he tries to assault Jessie, James and Meowth after their HeelFaceTurn.
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* [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Twilight Sparkle]], and most likely the viewers, have this reaction when [[AceAttorney Phoenix Wright]] [[spoiler: accuses Fluttershy of murder to buy more time]] in ''FanFic/TurnaboutStorm''.
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* [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Twilight Sparkle]], and most likely the viewers, have this reaction when [[AceAttorney Phoenix Wright]] [[spoiler: accuses Fluttershy of murder to buy more time]] in ''FanFic/TurnaboutStorm''.
''FanFic/TurnaboutStorm''. To be fair, Phoenix [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone feels the same way]].
** Part 4 has a double example: Rainbow Dash gives a ''scathing'' one to [[spoiler:Fluttershy for testifying against her, telling her she never wants to see her again]]. When [[spoiler:Fluttershy runs off in tears]], Phoenix admonishes Rainbow, telling her she went ''way'' too far.
** Part 4 has a double example: Rainbow Dash gives a ''scathing'' one to [[spoiler:Fluttershy for testifying against her, telling her she never wants to see her again]]. When [[spoiler:Fluttershy runs off in tears]], Phoenix admonishes Rainbow, telling her she went ''way'' too far.
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* While [[AntiHero L]] has elicted a few of these reactions from other characters in the ''[[Manga/DeathNote Death Note]]'' canon, in another fanfic, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5590180/27/Story_Of_The_Century Story of the Century]]'', the [[OriginalCharacter Original Character insert]] and FirstPersonPeripheralNarrator, [[BreakTheCutie Erin,]] delivers a particularly long, nasty and tearful [[WhatTheHellHero "What the hell?" speech]] near the end of the story that doubles as a [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech "This is why you suck" speech]], after [[spoiler: [[AlasPoorVillain Light]], [[LoveMartyr Rem]] and [[CoolOldGuy Wat]][[ParentalSubstitute ari]] die, and L, among other transgressions, [[ShooTheDog insists on being left alone]] [[DyingAlone to die,]] [[HeroicSacrifice having written his own name in the notebook prior,]] which helped to precipitate the three aforementioned deaths. You would think that being L, he would try to [[IDidWhatIHadToDo justify the actions he took,]] but [[BreakTheHaughty not this time.]] His response could [[TearJerker prick a few readers' eyelids.]] ]]
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* While [[AntiHero L]] has elicted a few of these reactions from other characters in the ''[[Manga/DeathNote Death Note]]'' canon, in another fanfic, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5590180/27/Story_Of_The_Century Story of the Century]]'', ''Fanfic/StoryOfTheCentury'', the [[OriginalCharacter Original Character insert]] and FirstPersonPeripheralNarrator, [[BreakTheCutie Erin,]] delivers a particularly long, nasty and tearful [[WhatTheHellHero "What the hell?" speech]] near the end of the story that doubles as a [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech "This is why you suck" speech]], after [[spoiler: [[AlasPoorVillain Light]], [[LoveMartyr Rem]] and [[CoolOldGuy Wat]][[ParentalSubstitute ari]] die, and L, among other transgressions, [[ShooTheDog insists on being left alone]] [[DyingAlone to die,]] [[HeroicSacrifice having written his own name in the notebook prior,]] which helped to precipitate the three aforementioned deaths. You would think that being L, he would try to [[IDidWhatIHadToDo justify the actions he took,]] but [[BreakTheHaughty not this time.]] His response could [[TearJerker prick a few readers' eyelids.]] ]]
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* ''[[{{Fanfic/AceCombatTheEquestrianWar}} Ace Combat: The Equestrian War]]'' has Firefly ''slapping'' and berating Fluttershy for refusing to fight the griffins in chapter 3. Luckily, by the end, the issue is done with.
-->'''Firefly''': Wake up, you moron! Didn’t you hear what they said?! They planned to kidnap little fillies! Those kinds of actions outright prove how evil they are! And yet, you still think they are ''not''?!
** In chapter 12, Firefly gets such moment from Lightning Bolt, who calls out on her after she yells at Rainbow Dash while she's suffering from a HeroicBSOD. Brief, but powerful:
-->'''Lightning Bolt''': How could you be so harsh toward Rainbow Dash? She’s going through personal hell! We should be helping her... but you keep berating her instead!
-->'''Firefly''': Wake up, you moron! Didn’t you hear what they said?! They planned to kidnap little fillies! Those kinds of actions outright prove how evil they are! And yet, you still think they are ''not''?!
** In chapter 12, Firefly gets such moment from Lightning Bolt, who calls out on her after she yells at Rainbow Dash while she's suffering from a HeroicBSOD. Brief, but powerful:
-->'''Lightning Bolt''': How could you be so harsh toward Rainbow Dash? She’s going through personal hell! We should be helping her... but you keep berating her instead!
* [[WesternAnimation/SherlockHolmesInTheTwentySecondCentury Beth's]] reaction to [[Literature/SherlockHolmes dark!Holmes]] in the finale of ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfTime'':
-->'''Beth:''' "What. The. ''[[PrecisionFStrike Hell]]'', Sherlock. You... Who ''are'' you, [[TearJerker and what have you done with my Sherlock Holmes?]]"
-->'''Beth:''' "What. The. ''[[PrecisionFStrike Hell]]'', Sherlock. You... Who ''are'' you, [[TearJerker and what have you done with my Sherlock Holmes?]]"
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* In ''Fanfic/{{Light and Dark the Adventures of Dark Yagami}}'', Soichiro is outraged when L tests the Death Note on his wife, having her to tell Dark to meet him at the warehouse while claiming to know that he is Kira, but L uses a Life Note on her after she dies, [[DeathIsCheap reviving her]].
* While [[AntiHero L]] has elicted a few of these reactions from other characters in the ''[[Manga/DeathNote Death Note]]'' canon, in another fanfic, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5590180/27/Story_Of_The_Century Story of the Century]]'', the [[OriginalCharacter Original Character insert]] and FirstPersonPeripheralNarrator, [[BreakTheCutie Erin,]] delivers a particularly long, nasty and tearful [[WhatTheHellHero "What the hell?" speech]] near the end of the story that doubles as a [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech "This is why you suck" speech]], after [[spoiler: [[AlasPoorVillain Light]], [[LoveMartyr Rem]] and [[CoolOldGuy Wat]][[ParentalSubstitute ari]] die, and L, among other transgressions, [[ShooTheDog insists on being left alone]] [[DyingAlone to die,]] [[HeroicSacrifice having written his own name in the notebook prior,]] which helped to precipitate the three aforementioned deaths. You would think that being L, he would try to [[IDidWhatIHadToDo justify the actions he took,]] but [[BreakTheHaughty not this time.]] His response could [[TearJerker prick a few readers' eyelids.]] ]]
* [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Twilight Sparkle]], and most likely the viewers, have this reaction when [[AceAttorney Phoenix Wright]] [[spoiler: accuses Fluttershy of murder to buy more time]] in ''FanFic/TurnaboutStorm''.
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* In ''Fanfic/{{Light and Dark the Adventures of Dark Yagami}}'', Soichiro is outraged when L tests the Death Note on his wife, having her to tell Dark to meet him at the warehouse while claiming to know that he is Kira, but L uses a Life Note on her after she dies, [[DeathIsCheap reviving her]].
* While [[AntiHero L]] has elicted a few of these reactions from other characters in the ''[[Manga/DeathNote Death Note]]'' canon, in another fanfic, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5590180/27/Story_Of_The_Century Story of the Century]]'', the [[OriginalCharacter Original Character insert]] and FirstPersonPeripheralNarrator, [[BreakTheCutie Erin,]] delivers a particularly long, nasty and tearful [[WhatTheHellHero "What the hell?" speech]] near the end of the story that doubles as a [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech "This is why you suck" speech]], after [[spoiler: [[AlasPoorVillain Light]], [[LoveMartyr Rem]] and [[CoolOldGuy Wat]][[ParentalSubstitute ari]] die, and L, among other transgressions, [[ShooTheDog insists on being left alone]] [[DyingAlone to die,]] [[HeroicSacrifice having written his own name in the notebook prior,]] which helped to precipitate the three aforementioned deaths. You would think that being L, he would try to [[IDidWhatIHadToDo justify the actions he took,]] but [[BreakTheHaughty not this time.]] His response could [[TearJerker prick a few readers' eyelids.]] ]]
* While [[AntiHero L]] has elicted a few of these reactions from other characters in the ''[[Manga/DeathNote Death Note]]'' canon, in another fanfic, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5590180/27/Story_Of_The_Century Story of the Century]]'', the [[OriginalCharacter Original Character insert]] and FirstPersonPeripheralNarrator, [[BreakTheCutie Erin,]] delivers a particularly long, nasty and tearful [[WhatTheHellHero "What the hell?" speech]] near the end of the story that doubles as a [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech "This is why you suck" speech]], after [[spoiler: [[AlasPoorVillain Light]], [[LoveMartyr Rem]] and [[CoolOldGuy Wat]][[ParentalSubstitute ari]] die, and L, among other transgressions, [[ShooTheDog insists on being left alone]] [[DyingAlone to die,]] [[HeroicSacrifice having written his own name in the notebook prior,]] which helped to precipitate the three aforementioned deaths. You would think that being L, he would try to [[IDidWhatIHadToDo justify the actions he took,]] but [[BreakTheHaughty not this time.]] His response could [[TearJerker prick a few readers' eyelids.]] ]]
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* [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Twilight Sparkle]], and most likely the viewers, have this reaction when [[AceAttorney Phoenix Wright]] [[spoiler: accuses Fluttershy of murder to buy more time]] in ''FanFic/TurnaboutStorm''.
* ''[[{{Fanfic/AceCombatTheEquestrianWar}} Ace Combat: The Equestrian War]]'' has Firefly ''slapping'' and berating Fluttershy for refusing to fight the griffins in chapter 3. Luckily, by the end, the issue is done with.
-->'''Firefly''': Wake up, you moron! Didn’t you hear what they said?! They planned to kidnap little fillies! Those kinds of actions outright prove how evil they are! And yet, you still think they are ''not''?!
** In chapter 12, Firefly gets such moment from Lightning Bolt, who calls out on her after she yells at Rainbow Dash while she's suffering from a HeroicBSOD. Brief, but powerful:
-->'''Lightning Bolt''': How could you be so harsh toward Rainbow Dash? She’s going through personal hell! We should be helping her... but you keep berating her instead!
* ''FanFic/{{Whispers}}'': Nightmare Moon tries this in the form of an ArmorPiercingQuestion when Celestia is about to seal her with the Elements of Harmony. [[ShutUpHannibal Celestia doesn't buy it.]]
* ''[[{{Fanfic/AceCombatTheEquestrianWar}} Ace Combat: The Equestrian War]]'' has Firefly ''slapping'' and berating Fluttershy for refusing to fight the griffins in chapter 3. Luckily, by the end, the issue is done with.
-->'''Firefly''': Wake up, you moron! Didn’t you hear what they said?! They planned to kidnap little fillies! Those kinds of actions outright prove how evil they are! And yet, you still think they are ''not''?!
** In chapter 12, Firefly gets such moment from Lightning Bolt, who calls out on her after she yells at Rainbow Dash while she's suffering from a HeroicBSOD. Brief, but powerful:
-->'''Lightning Bolt''': How could you be so harsh toward Rainbow Dash? She’s going through personal hell! We should be helping her... but you keep berating her instead!
* ''FanFic/{{Whispers}}'': Nightmare Moon tries this in the form of an ArmorPiercingQuestion when Celestia is about to seal her with the Elements of Harmony. [[ShutUpHannibal Celestia doesn't buy it.]]
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* ''FanFic/{{Whispers}}'': Nightmare Moon tries this in the form of an ArmorPiercingQuestion when Celestia is about to seal her with the Elements of Harmony. [[ShutUpHannibal Celestia doesn't buy it.]]
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* ''TransformersVictory:'' Leozack, of all characters, complains to Victory Leo when he's willing to leave Holi and Jean for dead.
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* ''TransformersVictory:'' Leozack, of all characters, complains to Victory Leo when he's willing to leave Holi and Jean for dead.
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* [[WesternAnimation/SherlockHolmesInTheTwentySecondCentury Beth's]] reaction to [[Literature/SherlockHolmes dark!Holmes]] in the finale of ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfTime'':
-->'''Beth:''' “What. The. ''[[PrecisionFStrike Hell]]'', Sherlock. You… Who ''are'' you, [[TearJerker and what have you done with my Sherlock Holmes?]]”
-->'''Beth:''' “What. The. ''[[PrecisionFStrike Hell]]'', Sherlock. You… Who ''are'' you, [[TearJerker and what have you done with my Sherlock Holmes?]]”
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-->'''Beth:''' “What. The. ''[[PrecisionFStrike Hell]]'', Sherlock. You… Who ''are'' you, [[TearJerker and what have you done with my Sherlock Holmes?]]”
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* ''[[Fanfic/WeightlessMassEffect Weightless]]'': Garrus chewed Shepard out for rejecting him after he had abandoned everything for her while she had led him to believe that she did feel something for him (she did, but didn't want to admit it to him). They snapped, ended up fighting and she decided to kick him out after they've done with Saren.
** Thane called Garrus out for keep shutting himself off to wallow in the past and ignored Shepard after he(Garrus) had promised to never leave her side again.
** Thane called Garrus out for keep shutting himself off to wallow in the past and ignored Shepard after he(Garrus) had promised to never leave her side again.
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* ''[[Fanfic/WeightlessMassEffect Weightless]]'': Garrus chewed Shepard out for rejecting him after he had abandoned everything for her while she had led him to believe that she did feel something for him (she did, but didn't want to admit it to him). They snapped, ended up fighting and she decided to kick him out after they've done with Saren. \n
** Later, Thane called Garrus out for keep shutting himself off to wallow in the past and ignored Shepard after he(Garrus) had promised to never leave her side again.
** Later, Thane called Garrus out for keep shutting himself off to wallow in the past and ignored Shepard after he(Garrus) had promised to never leave her side again.
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* ''[[Fanfic/WeightlessMassEffect Weightless]]'': Garrus chewed Shepard out for rejecting him after he had abandoned everything for her while she had led him to believe that she did feel something for him (she did, but didn't want to admit it to him). They snapped, ended up fighting and she decided to kick him out after they've done with Saren.
** Thane called Garrus out for keep shutting himself off to wallow in the past and ignored Shepard after he(Garrus) had promised to never leave her side again.
** Thane called Garrus out for keep shutting himself off to wallow in the past and ignored Shepard after he(Garrus) had promised to never leave her side again.
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* In ''FanFic/StargateEquestria'', O'Neill rips Rainbow Dash a new one for going off alone when he instructed her to take a partner.
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* In ''FanFic/TheLegendOfSpyroANewDawn'', ''[[PluckyComicRelief Sparx]]'' of all people calls Cyril out on him saying that rescuing the kidnapped eggs wasn't worth putting the rest at risk by dividing their forces...right in front of Cynder who was in a HeroicBSOD over the fact her adopted egg was among them.
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* Hayate attempts to pull this on Takashi in ''[[FanFic/DevaSeries Academy Blues]]'' for [[spoiler:killing all the Lords of the Circles]], but rescinds it once she realises [[MoralEventHorizon what the "victims" were planning on doing to her and hers]].
** [[spoiler:Natalia's grandmother gives her one for her betrayal.]]
* In ''FanFic/TheLegendOfSpyroANewDawn'', ''[[PluckyComicRelief Sparx]]'' of all people calls Cyril out on him saying that rescuing the kidnapped eggs wasn't worth putting the rest at risk by dividing their forces...right in front of Cynder who was in a HeroicBSOD over the fact her adopted egg was among them.
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* Hayate attempts to pull this on Takashi in ''[[FanFic/DevaSeries Academy Blues]]'' for [[spoiler:killing all the Lords of the Circles]], but rescinds it once she realises [[MoralEventHorizon what the "victims" were planning on doing to her and hers]].
** [[spoiler:Natalia's grandmother gives her one for her betrayal.]]
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* Hayate attempts to pull this on Takashi in ''[[FanFic/DevaSeries Academy Blues]]'' for [[spoiler:killing all the Lords of the Circles]], but rescinds it once she realises [[MoralEventHorizon what the "victims" were planning on doing to her and hers]].
** [[spoiler:Natalia's grandmother gives her one for her betrayal.]]
** [[spoiler:Natalia's grandmother gives her one for her betrayal.]]
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* In ''FanFic/TheLegendOfSpyroANewDawn'', ''[[PluckyComicRelief Sparx]]'' of all people calls Cyril out on him saying that rescuing the kidnapped eggs wasn't worth putting the rest at risk by dividing their forces...right in front of Cynder who was in a HeroicBSOD over the fact her adopted egg was among them.
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* In the ''SonicTheHedgehog'' and ''SailorMoon'' crossover [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4167708/1/Chaos_Infinity ChaosInfinity]] the Sailor Scouts force Sonic and his friends to fight them after they accuse them of the mess going on in Tokyo. (It's Eggman's doing, obviously.) After the showdown, Sonic holds nothing back as he berates them - just when he thought that they could look past animalistic looks. His words hit close to home:
-->'''Sonic:''' Ya know, when I first met these girls, the Sailor Scouts, I thought for sure that there were humans out there that weren't as vile and disgusting as Eggman… [[NotSoDifferent but I guess I was wrong for once]].
* In the ''SonicTheHedgehog'' and ''SailorMoon'' crossover [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4167708/1/Chaos_Infinity ChaosInfinity]] the Sailor Scouts force Sonic and his friends to fight them after they accuse them of the mess going on in Tokyo. (It's Eggman's doing, obviously.) After the showdown, Sonic holds nothing back as he berates them - just when he thought that they could look past animalistic looks. His words hit close to home:
-->'''Sonic:''' Ya know, when I first met these girls, the Sailor Scouts, I thought for sure that there were humans out there that weren't as vile and disgusting as Eggman… [[NotSoDifferent but I guess I was wrong for once]].
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* ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheSeries'': After three seasons' worth of progressing from LovableCoward to DirtyCoward, [[spoiler:Hobbes ''finally'' gets called out on it by Calvin in [[SeasonFinale "Thunderstorm"]], thus making more of an effort in later seasons.]]
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* In the ''SonicTheHedgehog'' and ''SailorMoon'' crossover [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4167708/1/Chaos_Infinity ChaosInfinity]] the Sailor Scouts force Sonic and his friends to fight them after they accuse them of the mess going on in Tokyo. (It's Eggman's doing, obviously.) After the showdown, Sonic holds nothing back as he berates them - just when he thought that they could look past animalistic looks. His words hit close to home:
-->'''Sonic:''' Ya know, when I first met these girls, the Sailor Scouts, I thought for sure that there were humans out there that weren't as vile and disgusting as Eggman… [[NotSoDifferent but I guess I was wrong for once]].
* In ''FanFic/NoHoper'': [[EvenEvilHasStandards Neferet]] calls out the human scientists for experimenting on and killing children in their search for a vampyre cure.
* ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheSeries'': After three seasons' worth of progressing from LovableCoward to DirtyCoward, [[spoiler:Hobbes ''finally'' gets called out on it by Calvin in [[SeasonFinale "Thunderstorm"]], thus making more of an effort in later seasons.]]
[[AC: Crossover]]
* In the ''SonicTheHedgehog'' and ''SailorMoon'' crossover [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4167708/1/Chaos_Infinity ChaosInfinity]] the Sailor Scouts force Sonic and his friends to fight them after they accuse them of the mess going on in Tokyo. (It's Eggman's doing, obviously.) After the showdown, Sonic holds nothing back as he berates them - just when he thought that they could look past animalistic looks. His words hit close to home:
-->'''Sonic:''' Ya know, when I first met these girls, the Sailor Scouts, I thought for sure that there were humans out there that weren't as vile and disgusting as Eggman… [[NotSoDifferent but I guess I was wrong for once]].
* In ''FanFic/NoHoper'': [[EvenEvilHasStandards Neferet]] calls out the human scientists for experimenting on and killing children in their search for a vampyre cure.
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* ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheSeries'': After three seasons' worth of progressing from LovableCoward to DirtyCoward, [[spoiler:Hobbes ''finally'' gets called out on it by Calvin in [[SeasonFinale "Thunderstorm"]], thus making more of an effort in later seasons.]]
* In ''FanFic/NoHoper'': [[EvenEvilHasStandards Neferet]] calls out the human scientists for experimenting on and killing children in their search for a vampyre cure.
* In ''FanFic/NoHoper'': [[EvenEvilHasStandards Neferet]] calls out the human scientists for experimenting on and killing children in their search for a vampyre cure.
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* In ''Fanfic/TheVinylScratchTapes'', Vinyl gets one from Princess Luna when Vinyl not only insults Prince Blueblood (who may be a jerk, but by that point Vinyl's campaign to get back at him was so successful he's turned to drinking to help deal with the fact that ponies send death threats to him on a regular basis) in front of her, but also reveals she's the one who humiliated Princess Celestia by guilt-tripping her for banishing Luna during her Nightmare Moon phase, causing Vinyl to enter a HeroicBSOD. Later, Luna is forced to apologize for the latter (but refuses for the former). However, Trixie then busts out of a trash can (ItMakesSenseInContext) and accuses all the assembled ponies who gathered to make Vinyl feel better that they are all hypocrites for treating Blueblood like a pariah for being a jerk, but pretending Vinyl's own jackassery is charming (especially since this jackassery involves hiring a known criminal and a slaver and bringing him into the heart of Canterlot).