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* ''Fanfic/KwamiMagiHomuraMagica'': Chapter 1 and 2 are pretty clear on certain things. Even with the help of [[WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug Ladybug and Cat Noir]], [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Homura]] hasn't been able to kill Walpurgisnacht. While Cat Noir does have the power to do so with Catalcysm, its never been successfully done and the Lucky Charms keep telling her to go back, meaning the only solution to get rid of Walpurgisnacht is to use the Miraculous wish. Its only when a space-time accident lets Ladybug and her team talk to past timeline versions of the involved heroes that it becomes apparent the Lucky Charms telling Homura to keep going back ''aren't'' about defeat Walpurgisnacht at all.
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* ''Fanfic/KwamiMagiHomuraMagica'': Chapter 1 and 2 are pretty clear on certain things. Even with the help of [[WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug Ladybug and Cat Noir]], [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Homura]] hasn't been able to kill Walpurgisnacht. While Cat Noir does have the power to do so with Catalcysm, its never been successfully done and the Lucky Charms keep telling her to go back, meaning the only solution to get rid of Walpurgisnacht is to use the Miraculous wish. Its It's only when a space-time accident lets Ladybug and her team talk to past timeline versions of the involved heroes that it becomes apparent the Lucky Charms telling Homura to keep going back ''aren't'' about defeat Walpurgisnacht at all.
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* ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/lord-doom-alt-power-tinker-taylor-complete.799819/page-71#post-65813304 Lord Doom]]'': The epilogue has Coil thinking over how his weeks long battle of wits against Lord Doom was finally coming to an end. About all the different universes Coil created and closed off after he failed. But he was finally about to win due to a powerful new precog that would let him sidestep all of Doom's countermeasures.
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* ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/lord-doom-alt-power-tinker-taylor-complete.799819/page-71#post-65813304 Lord Doom]]'': ''Fanfic/LordDoom'': The epilogue has Coil thinking over how his weeks long battle of wits against Lord Doom was finally coming to an end. About all the different universes Coil created and closed off after he failed. But he was finally about to win due to a powerful new precog that would let him sidestep all of Doom's countermeasures.
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* ''Fanfic/KwamiMagiHomuraMagica'': Chapter 1 and 2 are pretty clear on certain things. Even with the help of [[WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug Ladybug and Cat Noir]], [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Homura]] hasn't been able to kill Walpurgisnacht. While Cat Noir does have the power to do so with Catalcysm, its never been successfully done and the Lucky Charms keep telling her to go back, meaning the only solution to get rid of Walpurgisnacht is to use the Miraculous wish. Its only when a space-time accident lets Ladybug and her team talk to past timeline versions of the involved heroes that it becomes apparent the Lucky Charms telling Homura to keep going back ''aren't'' about defeat Walpurgisnacht at all.
-->'''Kyoko of the 53rd timeline:'' Because Spots over here got the same Lucky Charm, seconds before Fluffles over there hit the witch with Cataclysm.
-->'''Kyoko of the 53rd timeline:'' Because Spots over here got the same Lucky Charm, seconds before Fluffles over there hit the witch with Cataclysm.
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* ''FanFic/OhYouDontHaveToDoThatCommunication'': After Lila's threat of making her life hell if she calls her out on her life, Marinette talks to Tikki and hears a gasp outside the bathroom, [[SecretSecretKepper though they vanish before she could find out]]. During the climax, Max says this line to Marinette that sheds light on who was it that saw her with Tikki.
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* ''FanFic/OhYouDontHaveToDoThatCommunication'': After Lila's threat of making her life hell if she calls her out on her life, Marinette talks to Tikki and hears a gasp outside the bathroom, [[SecretSecretKepper [[SecretSecretKeeper though they vanish before she could find out]]. During the climax, Max says this line to Marinette that sheds light on who was it that saw her with Tikki.
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%%* [[Creator/UltamiteNineball ultamite nineball]]'s fic ''Fanfic/SoullessShell'':
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%%* [[Creator/UltamiteNineball ultamite nineball]]'s fic ''Fanfic/SoullessShell'':''Fanfic/SoullessShellRedwall'':
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---->'''Yu Narukami *shrugs*''': We had to find out somehow. I want to know what happened last Christmas eve.\\
'''Yosuke *Meets his friend's eyes and shrugs*''': Another god messing things up, right? 'Course, had to make the world all creepy and red.\\
'''Naoto (bluntly)''': The world fused with the other world. We were able to summon our Personas again, at least until it was all over... and yet no one remembers a thing except for us, [[VideoGame/Persona3 the Shadow Ops]], the Phantom Thieves, Yu's uncle, and Nanako. We need answers.
'''Yosuke *Meets his friend's eyes and shrugs*''': Another god messing things up, right? 'Course, had to make the world all creepy and red.\\
'''Naoto (bluntly)''': The world fused with the other world. We were able to summon our Personas again, at least until it was all over... and yet no one remembers a thing except for us, [[VideoGame/Persona3 the Shadow Ops]], the Phantom Thieves, Yu's uncle, and Nanako. We need answers.
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---->'''Yu Narukami *shrugs*''': Narukami''' ''shrugs'': We had to find out somehow. I want to know what happened last Christmas eve.\\
'''Yosuke *Meets '''Yosuke''' ''Meets his friend's eyes and shrugs*''': shrugs'': Another god messing things up, right? 'Course, had to make the world all creepy and red.\\
'''Naoto (bluntly)''': '''Naoto''' ''(bluntly)'': The world fused with the other world. We were able to summon our Personas again, at least until it was all over... and yet no one remembers a thing except for us, [[VideoGame/Persona3 the Shadow Ops]], the Phantom Thieves, Yu's uncle, and Nanako. We need answers.
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---->'''Anon #1''': Here, have a picture of Joker's ultimate Persona: (Attached: UltimatePersona.png)\\
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---->'''Anon #1''': Here, have a picture of Joker's ultimate Persona: (Attached: UltimatePersona.png)\\[=UltimatePersona.png=])\\
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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/39824898/chapters/99708426 this is the road to ruin and we're starting at the end]]'' is a RecursiveFanfiction of ''VideoGame/PokemonInsurgence'' that plays out like a relatively straight re-telling of the game's plot. As such, it initially looks like the Sonata Hills sub-plot is going to play out the same, with Damian getting kidnapped by a newly-hybridized Malde...until the last lines of chapter 27 reveal otherwise.
-->''"Suddenly, he shot towards Harmony, making an inhuman noise. Before she could do anything, he wrapped his tentacles around her, causing her to scream in terror."''\\
''[...]''\\
''"Malde snarled, and the lights started flashing again. When they went back to normal, it was obvious he’d disappeared...and that he’d taken Harmony with him."''
-->''"Suddenly, he shot towards Harmony, making an inhuman noise. Before she could do anything, he wrapped his tentacles around her, causing her to scream in terror."''\\
''[...]''\\
''"Malde snarled, and the lights started flashing again. When they went back to normal, it was obvious he’d disappeared...and that he’d taken Harmony with him."''
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* ''Fanfic/AvengersInfiniteWars'' :
** Odin to Celeste Morne and Bucky Barnes on the Muur Talisman in chapter 51:
--->"Ghastly individuals who know not of their own doomed path. The Sith never learned from their mistakes, did they?"
** Ancient One to Celeste Morne on true nature of the Force in chapter 52:
--->"You call it the Force." ... "The rest of the universe calls it the Power Cosmic."
** The end of 104th chapter:
--->"This is Shaak Ti of the Jedi Order, Ultron is attacking Kamino. I repeat; Ultron is attacking Kamino!"
** Odin to Celeste Morne and Bucky Barnes on the Muur Talisman in chapter 51:
--->"Ghastly individuals who know not of their own doomed path. The Sith never learned from their mistakes, did they?"
** Ancient One to Celeste Morne on true nature of the Force in chapter 52:
--->"You call it the Force." ... "The rest of the universe calls it the Power Cosmic."
** The end of 104th chapter:
--->"This is Shaak Ti of the Jedi Order, Ultron is attacking Kamino. I repeat; Ultron is attacking Kamino!"
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--> '''Libby:''' That doesn’t mean anything. What you considered flirty looks or comments, she could’ve interpreted as friendly glances or banter. Plus, if she rejected you then things might’ve become awkward between you two and it would’ve ruined your friendship. You took a pretty big risk just assuming that she shared the same feelings as you.\\
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--> '''Libby:''' That doesn’t mean anything. [[PoorCommunicationKills What you considered flirty looks or comments, she could’ve interpreted as friendly glances or banter. banter.]] Plus, [[IDontWantToRuinOurFriendship if she rejected you then things might’ve become awkward between you two and it would’ve ruined your friendship. friendship.]] You took a pretty big risk just assuming that she shared the same feelings as you.\\
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''But it was more than just the evening for Lizzy’s coming-of-age ceremony; it was the night she would finally ask out her best friend and crush, ''Polly [=McLean.=]''
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* ''Fanfic/TeachersOutsideTheClassroom'', Libby interview Mrs. Roop for the class paper. When she asks about how she asked out her wife, Libby reveals her true intentions.
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* ''Fanfic/TeachersOutsideTheClassroom'', ''Fanfic/TeachersOutsideOfTheClassroom'', Libby interview Mrs. Roop for the class paper. When she asks about how she asked out her wife, Libby reveals her true intentions.
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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/35089465?view_full_work=true The Write Stuff]]'', Libby asks Molly to proofreads some stories. Later on Molly and Scratch find a story titled ''Mazel Tov, Lizzy''. Which opens with the following lines.
--> ''It was the night that Elizabeth “Lizzy” Steinburg had been waiting for, the night of her bat mitzvah. After months of studying Hebrew and practicing her Torah portion, the night had finally arrived when she would cross the threshold into womanhood.''\\
''But it was more than just the evening for Lizzy’s coming-of-age ceremony; it was the night she would finally ask out her best friend and crush,'' '''''Polly [=McLean.=]'''''
--> ''It was the night that Elizabeth “Lizzy” Steinburg had been waiting for, the night of her bat mitzvah. After months of studying Hebrew and practicing her Torah portion, the night had finally arrived when she would cross the threshold into womanhood.''\\
''But it was more than just the evening for Lizzy’s coming-of-age ceremony; it was the night she would finally ask out her best friend and crush,'' '''''Polly [=McLean.=]'''''
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* ''Fanfic/TeachersOutsideTheClassroom'', Libby interview Mrs. Roop for the class paper. When she asks about how she asked out her wife, Libby reveals her true intentions.
--> '''Libby:''' That doesn’t mean anything. What you considered flirty looks or comments, she could’ve interpreted as friendly glances or banter. Plus, if she rejected you then things might’ve become awkward between you two and it would’ve ruined your friendship. You took a pretty big risk just assuming that she shared the same feelings as you.\\
'''Mrs. Roop:''' Perhaps, but hey, what’s a romantic endeavor without a little risk?\\
'''Libby:''' [[SayingTooMuch But I don’t like taking risks!]]
* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/35089465?view_full_work=true The Write Stuff]]'', Libby asks Molly toproofreads proofread some stories. Later on on, Molly and Scratch find a story titled ''Mazel Tov, Lizzy''. Which opens with the following lines.
-->''It It was the night that Elizabeth “Lizzy” Steinburg had been waiting for, the night of her bat mitzvah. After months of studying Hebrew and practicing her Torah portion, the night had finally arrived when she would cross the threshold into womanhood.''\\
\\
''But it was more than just the evening for Lizzy’s coming-of-age ceremony; it was the night she would finally ask out her best friend andcrush,'' '''''Polly crush, ''Polly [=McLean.=]'''''=]''
--> '''Libby:''' That doesn’t mean anything. What you considered flirty looks or comments, she could’ve interpreted as friendly glances or banter. Plus, if she rejected you then things might’ve become awkward between you two and it would’ve ruined your friendship. You took a pretty big risk just assuming that she shared the same feelings as you.\\
'''Mrs. Roop:''' Perhaps, but hey, what’s a romantic endeavor without a little risk?\\
'''Libby:''' [[SayingTooMuch But I don’t like taking risks!]]
* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/35089465?view_full_work=true The Write Stuff]]'', Libby asks Molly to
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''But it was more than just the evening for Lizzy’s coming-of-age ceremony; it was the night she would finally ask out her best friend and
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* In ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/41164092 An Unpleasant Surprise]]'', Molly video chats with her old friend Ashley from Dayton. As they catch up, Molly tells her she's dating Libby. Instead of being happy for her, Ashley solemnly says the following.
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* In ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/41164092 An Unpleasant Surprise]]'', ''Fanfic/AnUnpleasantSurprise'', Molly video chats with her old friend Ashley from Dayton. As they catch up, Molly tells her she's dating Libby. Instead of being happy for her, Ashley solemnly says the following.
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* ''FanFic/OhYouDontHaveToDoThatCommunication'': After Lila's threat of making her life hell if she calls her out on her life, Marinette talks to Tikki and hears a gasp outside the bathroom, [[SecretSecretKepper though they vanish before she could find out]]. During the climax, Max says this line to Marinette that sheds light on who was it that saw her with Tikki.
-->'''Max''': Uh, so if you’re trying to convince me to leave to warn our friends so you can find a place to transform… It’s not going to work, and it would be difficult to explain how Ladybug arrived long before the Akuma Alert is sent out.
-->'''Max''': Uh, so if you’re trying to convince me to leave to warn our friends so you can find a place to transform… It’s not going to work, and it would be difficult to explain how Ladybug arrived long before the Akuma Alert is sent out.
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* In ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/41164092 An Unpleasant Surprise]]'', Molly video chats with her old friend Ashley from Dayton. As they catch up, Molly tells her she's dating Libby. Instead of being happy for her, Ashley solemly says the following.
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* In ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/41164092 An Unpleasant Surprise]]'', Molly video chats with her old friend Ashley from Dayton. As they catch up, Molly tells her she's dating Libby. Instead of being happy for her, Ashley solemly solemnly says the following.
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* ''Fanfic/EyesOnMe'':
** The first fanfic in the series has this conversation between Sapphire and her mom in Chapter 8, which itself is a [[WhamEpisode turning point]] due to its [[CerebusSyndrome tone]]:
-->'''Sapphire''': I know you're trying to help, Mom, but I'm not in the mood for a motivational speech right now. Why don't you just go home?\\
'''Yoko''': I can't. Well, ''we'' can't. Your father kicked us out.\\
'''Sapphire''': Wait, you mean we're ''homeless?!''
** In Chapter 4 of the prequel spinoff ''Maya and Sorcha'', the latter drops a bombshell [[FamilyRelationshipSwitcheroo regarding her relationship with her cousin]].
--->'''Sorcha''': Can you write a letter for me, Maya?\\
'''Maya''': What for?\\
'''Sorcha''': There's something Roisin needs to know before I die...\\
'''Maya''': What is it?\\
'''Sorcha''': Well... I haven't been entirely truthful with you or your family. See... Roisin isn't actually my cousin. She's my daughter.
** In Chapter 14 of ''Cry For Help'', as Bitsy is dying from being run over by an ambulance, she decides now is the time to confess to Helen how she really feels through sign language:
---> '''Bitsy:''' Helen, you were the best thing to happen to me, and I regret not telling you this until I was on my deathbed. Thank you for being there for me when no one else would. [[DyingDeclarationOfLove I love you]].
** The first fanfic in the series has this conversation between Sapphire and her mom in Chapter 8, which itself is a [[WhamEpisode turning point]] due to its [[CerebusSyndrome tone]]:
-->'''Sapphire''': I know you're trying to help, Mom, but I'm not in the mood for a motivational speech right now. Why don't you just go home?\\
'''Yoko''': I can't. Well, ''we'' can't. Your father kicked us out.\\
'''Sapphire''': Wait, you mean we're ''homeless?!''
** In Chapter 4 of the prequel spinoff ''Maya and Sorcha'', the latter drops a bombshell [[FamilyRelationshipSwitcheroo regarding her relationship with her cousin]].
--->'''Sorcha''': Can you write a letter for me, Maya?\\
'''Maya''': What for?\\
'''Sorcha''': There's something Roisin needs to know before I die...\\
'''Maya''': What is it?\\
'''Sorcha''': Well... I haven't been entirely truthful with you or your family. See... Roisin isn't actually my cousin. She's my daughter.
** In Chapter 14 of ''Cry For Help'', as Bitsy is dying from being run over by an ambulance, she decides now is the time to confess to Helen how she really feels through sign language:
---> '''Bitsy:''' Helen, you were the best thing to happen to me, and I regret not telling you this until I was on my deathbed. Thank you for being there for me when no one else would. [[DyingDeclarationOfLove I love you]].
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* ''Fanfic/EyesOnMe'':
** The first fanfic in the series has this conversation between Sapphire and her mom in Chapter 8, which itself is a [[WhamEpisode turning point]] due to its [[CerebusSyndrome tone]]:
-->'''Sapphire''': I know you're trying to help, Mom, but I'm not in the mood for a motivational speech right now. Why don't you just go home?\\
'''Yoko''': I can't. Well, ''we'' can't. Your father kicked us out.\\
'''Sapphire''': Wait, you mean we're ''homeless?!''
** In Chapter 4 of the prequel spinoff ''Maya and Sorcha'', the latter drops a bombshell [[FamilyRelationshipSwitcheroo regarding her relationship with her cousin]].
--->'''Sorcha''': Can you write a letter for me, Maya?\\
'''Maya''': What for?\\
'''Sorcha''': There's something Roisin needs to know before I die...\\
'''Maya''': What is it?\\
'''Sorcha''': Well... I haven't been entirely truthful with you or your family. See... Roisin isn't actually my cousin. She's my daughter.
** The first fanfic in the series has this conversation between Sapphire and her mom in Chapter 8, which itself is a [[WhamEpisode turning point]] due to its [[CerebusSyndrome tone]]:
-->'''Sapphire''': I know you're trying to help, Mom, but I'm not in the mood for a motivational speech right now. Why don't you just go home?\\
'''Yoko''': I can't. Well, ''we'' can't. Your father kicked us out.\\
'''Sapphire''': Wait, you mean we're ''homeless?!''
** In Chapter 4 of the prequel spinoff ''Maya and Sorcha'', the latter drops a bombshell [[FamilyRelationshipSwitcheroo regarding her relationship with her cousin]].
--->'''Sorcha''': Can you write a letter for me, Maya?\\
'''Maya''': What for?\\
'''Sorcha''': There's something Roisin needs to know before I die...\\
'''Maya''': What is it?\\
'''Sorcha''': Well... I haven't been entirely truthful with you or your family. See... Roisin isn't actually my cousin. She's my daughter.
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* In ''Fanfic/NeverBeenBothered'', the protagonist finds a revealing photo of his neighbors as kids. It reveals that Anna and Elsa are not only married, but they are [[BrotherSisterIncest also sisters]]:
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* In ''Fanfic/NeverBeenBothered'', the protagonist finds a revealing photo of his neighbors as kids. It reveals that Anna and Elsa are not only married, but they are [[BrotherSisterIncest [[SiblingIncest also sisters]]:
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** Near the end of Chapter 3, Skoodge finds a collar that fell off the mutant creature Zim's team just fought, that reads "[[spoiler: Property of Coathanger Electronics]]", suddenly implying that a seemingly throwaway conversation between Dib and Gaz in the previous chapter about [[spoiler: that company's CEO moving to The City]] is going to be quite important to the story going forward.
** At the end of Chapter 7, Dib tries to call his father for help after [[spoiler: Aldrich's scheme nearly killed Gaz]], only for an unfamiliar voice to talk to him over the phone, telling Dib that it's cut off all communications into and out of The City to prevent interference with the speaker's own plans.
** At the end of Chapter 7, Dib tries to call his father for help after [[spoiler: Aldrich's scheme nearly killed Gaz]], only for an unfamiliar voice to talk to him over the phone, telling Dib that it's cut off all communications into and out of The City to prevent interference with the speaker's own plans.
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** Near the end of Chapter 3, Skoodge finds a collar that fell off the mutant creature Zim's team just fought, that reads "[[spoiler: Property "Property of Coathanger Electronics]]", Electronics", suddenly implying that a seemingly throwaway conversation between Dib and Gaz in the previous chapter about [[spoiler: that company's CEO moving to The City]] City is going to be quite important to the story going forward.
** At the end of Chapter 7, Dib tries to call his father for help after[[spoiler: Aldrich's scheme nearly killed Gaz]], Gaz, only for an unfamiliar voice to talk to him over the phone, telling Dib that it's cut off all communications into and out of The City to prevent interference with the speaker's own plans.
** At the end of Chapter 7, Dib tries to call his father for help after
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* ''Fanfic/InvaderZimABadThingNeverEnds'':
** Near the end of Chapter 3, Skoodge finds a collar that fell off the mutant creature Zim's team just fought, that reads "[[spoiler: Property of Coathanger Electronics]]", suddenly implying that a seemingly throwaway conversation between Dib and Gaz in the previous chapter about [[spoiler: that company's CEO moving to The City]] is going to be quite important to the story going forward.
** At the end of Chapter 7, Dib tries to call his father for help after [[spoiler: Aldrich's scheme nearly killed Gaz]], only for an unfamiliar voice to talk to him over the phone, telling Dib that it's cut off all communications into and out of The City to prevent interference with the speaker's own plans.
* ''Fanfic/InvaderZimABadThingNeverEnds'':
** Near the end of Chapter 3, Skoodge finds a collar that fell off the mutant creature Zim's team just fought, that reads "[[spoiler: Property of Coathanger Electronics]]", suddenly implying that a seemingly throwaway conversation between Dib and Gaz in the previous chapter about [[spoiler: that company's CEO moving to The City]] is going to be quite important to the story going forward.
** At the end of Chapter 7, Dib tries to call his father for help after [[spoiler: Aldrich's scheme nearly killed Gaz]], only for an unfamiliar voice to talk to him over the phone, telling Dib that it's cut off all communications into and out of The City to prevent interference with the speaker's own plans.
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--> '''Mistress''': I-I'm pregnant...
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--> '''Mistress''': [[SurprisePregnancy I-I'm pregnant...]]
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--->'''Paylor:''' We are going to have a revote. A continuation of Coin’s proposal. Should there be a Hunger Games with Capitol children?
* ''Fanfic/TheEndOfTheWorld'': ''House of Cards'' reveals that Caesar Flickerman was born in District Five and received Capitol citizenship later in life. This is shocking enough, but the real wham line is a TwoAliasesOneCharacter reveal as he talks abut his efforts to shed his AllOfTheOtherReindeer status when he was a teenager.
--> '''Caesar:''' And I guess I thought, at the time, that I'd really made it. That they really believed I was one of them. I believed that right up until they voted me into the Quarter Quell arena.
* ''Fanfic/TheVictorsProject'': [[WhamLine/TheVictorsProject Has its own page.]]
* ''Fanfic/TheEndOfTheWorld'': ''House of Cards'' reveals that Caesar Flickerman was born in District Five and received Capitol citizenship later in life. This is shocking enough, but the real wham line is a TwoAliasesOneCharacter reveal as he talks abut his efforts to shed his AllOfTheOtherReindeer status when he was a teenager.
--> '''Caesar:''' And I guess I thought, at the time, that I'd really made it. That they really believed I was one of them. I believed that right up until they voted me into the Quarter Quell arena.
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--->'''Paylor:''' We are going to have a revote. A continuation of Coin’s Coin's proposal. Should there be a Hunger Games with Capitol children?
*''Fanfic/TheEndOfTheWorld'': ''House ''Fanfic/{{The End of Cards'' the World|FernWithy}}'': "House of Cards" reveals that Caesar Flickerman was born in District Five and received Capitol citizenship later in life. This is shocking enough, but the real wham line is a TwoAliasesOneCharacter reveal as he talks abut his efforts to shed his AllOfTheOtherReindeer status when he was a teenager.
--> '''Caesar:''' -->'''Caesar:''' And I guess I thought, at the time, that I'd really made it. That they really believed I was one of them. I believed that right up until they voted me into the Quarter Quell arena.
* ''Fanfic/TheVictorsProject'': [[WhamLine/TheVictorsProject Has its ownpage.]]page]].
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* ''Fanfic/TheVictorsProject'': [[WhamLine/TheVictorsProject Has its own
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** From ''You Mean I Look Like Broccoli?''
--->'''Joy''': Hopes and ''dreams''! That’s ''it''! Sadness, you’re a ''genius''!
--->'''Joy''': Hopes and ''dreams''! That’s ''it''! Sadness, you’re a ''genius''!
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** From ''You Mean I Look Like Broccoli?''
--->'''Joy''':Broccoli?'':
--->'''Joy:''' Hopes and ''dreams''!That’s That's ''it''! Sadness, you’re you're a ''genius''!
--->'''Joy''':
--->'''Joy:''' Hopes and ''dreams''!
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--->'''Riley''': Um, guys? What does white mean?
** From ''Technicalities''
--->'''Ann''': Who's Disgust?
** From ''Access Denied''
---> "The console wasn't turning a bright, comforting yellow as normal. In fact, it wasn't doing a thing. That is, until it turned white."
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--->'''Ann''': Who's Disgust?
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---> "The console wasn't turning a bright, comforting yellow as normal. In fact, it wasn't doing a thing. That is, until it turned white."
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--->'''Ann:''' Who's Disgust?
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10264509/396/Tales-of-Fairies More Horrible Truths]]'' is a one-shot that follows after TheReveal in chapter 465 of the manga[[note]]which has since been outdated by canon[[/note]] where Natsu shares to the Fairy Tail guild and the other natural Dragon Slayers that he, Gajeel, Wendy, Sting, and Rogue came from 400 years in the past through the Eclipse gate because of [[BigBad Zeref]]. When Rogue wonders how could they come from the past if they remember learning about recent history back in x777 when they supposedly arrived. An unexpected answer reveals that the Fairy Tail guild was more involved than they thought.
-->'''Wakaba''': Well. it's rather obvious, ain't it? We taught you everything and [[FakeMemories then manipulated your memories]].
** After learning that Makarov and a few other Fairy Tail mages came to welcome the time-travelers following Mavis's promise to Zeref, then had Mest suppress all their memories of the event, Gajeel remarks that he should have Mest arrested for manipulating the minds of five children. Then Mest says something that sets up an even bigger reveal: the involvement of another child during the incident besides the Dragon Slayers.
--->'''Mest''': Six. I manipulated the memories of ''six'' children.
* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10264509/396/Tales-of-Fairies More Horrible Truths]]'' is a one-shot that follows after TheReveal in chapter 465 of the manga[[note]]which has since been outdated by canon[[/note]] where Natsu shares to the Fairy Tail guild and the other natural Dragon Slayers that he, Gajeel, Wendy, Sting, and Rogue came from 400 years in the past through the Eclipse gate because of [[BigBad Zeref]]. When Rogue wonders how could they come from the past if they remember learning about recent history back in x777 when they supposedly arrived. An unexpected answer reveals that the Fairy Tail guild was more involved than they thought.
-->'''Wakaba''': Well. it's rather obvious, ain't it? We taught you everything and [[FakeMemories then manipulated your memories]].
** After learning that Makarov and a few other Fairy Tail mages came to welcome the time-travelers following Mavis's promise to Zeref, then had Mest suppress all their memories of the event, Gajeel remarks that he should have Mest arrested for manipulating the minds of five children. Then Mest says something that sets up an even bigger reveal: the involvement of another child during the incident besides the Dragon Slayers.
--->'''Mest''': Six. I manipulated the memories of ''six'' children.
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** In ''Dream Team'', Chapter 17, [[VideoGame/SuperMarioBros Kamek]] spends his entire fight with [[Franchise/TouhouProject Reimu and Marisa]] insulting the characters from Nan's Kingdom Hearts-verse and after the two girls finish him off, a portal opens and a ''very'' unhappy Samus emerges:
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** In ''Dream Team'', Chapter 17, [[VideoGame/SuperMarioBros [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Kamek]] spends his entire fight with [[Franchise/TouhouProject Reimu and Marisa]] insulting the characters from Nan's Kingdom Hearts-verse and after the two girls finish him off, a portal opens and a ''very'' unhappy Samus emerges:
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* Chapter 17 of ''Fanfic/TheSeasonsMyReason''; just when it seems like the conflict has been resolved and [[Anime/DeliciousPartyPrettyCure Yui]] can go home, we get the final line, both in terms of the line itself and who says it:
--> ''Listen, you might not know who I am, or where I come from. But my name is [[WesternAnimation/{{Encanto}} Bruno Madrigal]]. And your quest isn’t over yet.''
--> ''Listen, you might not know who I am, or where I come from. But my name is [[WesternAnimation/{{Encanto}} Bruno Madrigal]]. And your quest isn’t over yet.''
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** The sequel / spin-off has a wham ''word''. Wisp, a Changeling, has just had their actual form revealed, but the narration uses GenderNeutralWriting, until..
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* In [[https://moringmark.tumblr.com/post/653612652337250304 this]] Creator/{{Moringmark}} comic, Luz is showing her mom pictures of her friends at Hexside. Camila mentions wanting to invite Amity over for dinner. But asks her a question that reveals it all to be a trick by Emperor Belos.
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* In [[https://moringmark.tumblr.com/post/653612652337250304 this]] Creator/{{Moringmark}} ''[[Webcomic/MoringMarkTOHComics Moringmark]]'' comic, Luz is showing her mom pictures of her friends at Hexside. Camila mentions wanting to invite Amity over for dinner. But asks her a question that reveals it all to be a trick by Emperor Belos.
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'''Luz''': ''[{{Beat}}]'' "[[ExplainExplainOhCrap She didn't drink it...]]"
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'''Luz''': ''[{{Beat}}]'' "[[ExplainExplainOhCrap "[[NotBrainwashed She didn't drink it...]]"
